New FF*Tere Liye*Part 5 Updated..GAME OVER...PG 08 - Page 3

Originally posted by: rubal223

very goog and intersting

Originally posted by: --khushi--

Awesome update Sheebz........................

wow TaSha r sooooooo close but Stupid Suds came..................

Loved the way Dutta killed BGs ..........................

OMG Suds & TaSha confrontation.....................

waiting for next update.......................

update soon................................

Originally posted by: nileshni679

Oh my my it was extremely fabulous.

Cant wait anymore.

Update Soon.⭐️

Originally posted by: neverforget

superb

awesome

can't wait for next update so plz update soon

Originally posted by: sinak

Awesome Sheeba. Plz update the next part soon

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

that was awsome!! lovedhw he heard da payyal n folowd it n hw he recognisd nakus voic instantly...

plz do continue soon..zyada intezaar matt karvana..n plz update ur other ffs...

I am soooooooooooooooo glad u mentione paayal i was thinking of dutta getting it for naku in the show.......he wore white and naku in blue awwwwwwww sooooooooooooooooo pretty they looked together.......................😳😃😛😉

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

awww thank god dutta knws suds is a bad guy nw he'll find out abt kala 2...

love the precap...continue soon

Originally posted by: shallymann

very nice update .... next part seems to be full of action 😃

Originally posted by: dc17-7

hi sheebs,

just one word for ur ff now... awesome.

tc
divya

Part 03......FACING THE TRUTH…

The goons reach suds and seeing naku with them!...............Sudarshan flashes a huge smile and says----namaskaar waheeni!...................KAHAN KAAHAN NAHIIN DHOONDA MAIN AAPKO!................

Dutta felt the ground under his feet give way as the realization dawned onto him!...................Yes…………..ofcourse he knew the voice…………it was SUDARSHAN!..................BUT WHY ON EARTH WAS HE HOLDING NAKU HOSTAGE?!..............

Dutta felt his head spinning………….all the strain was getting a better of him……………..he felt dizzy…………..but he knew he had to FIGHT……………FIGHT FOR NAKU's SAKE AND FOR HER SAFETY!.......................

Taking in a deep breath…………..dutta closes his eyes and tries to relax……………when he hears sudarshan speak and his words hit him……….. like a Bolt from the blue!..................

Suds says----Tere ko kya lagaa nakusha…………tu ghar se bhaag jaayegi dutta ko laaney…………..ussey dhoondkar waapis ratnagiri kaa raja banaaney?!..................Nako…………..aisa bilkul nahiin ho saktaa hai!..............ratnagiri mein dutta kaa raaj khatam!............Aur abb………….abb main yahiin…….issi waqt………….tere ko BHI KHAtAM KAR DEGAA!..................

Suds raises the gun and takes an aim at naku while naku replies----Chalaa dey golii sudarshan……………..main marr gayi toh kya hua?!..............Saab toh zindaa hai naa………………tu unhein toh nahiin dhoond paaya naa abhi tak?!..............ek baar unhein terii kaali karttootein pataa chal gayi………….TOH WOHH Tere ko chodeingey nahiin!..................

Dutta stood shocked wondering what misdeeds of suds naku was referring to?............and he tightens the grip on his gun!................

Suds chuckles saying----achcha?.................Teraa dutta tere ko bachaaney nahiin aa sakaa………….MERE KO SABAK SIKHANEY KYA AAYEGA?!..................(Suds takes a steady aim at naku and says on……………)…………..Bahot ho gayi teri bakwaas nakusha……………abb taiyaar reh………….apney saab ke paas jaaney ke liye!................

Naku closes her eyes……………she recalls all the beautiful moments spent with dutta…………..tears roll down her cheeks as she thinks to herself----saab……….main jaanti hai aap zindaa ho…………aur aapsey milney ko taras rahii hai…………PAR LAGTAA HAi………….AAPKA AUR MERAA SAATH YAHII TAK LIKHA THA……………MAIN MARR GAYI TOH BHI…………MERA PYAR HUMEShAA AAPKI RAKShA KAREGAA!.................

There Dutta comes out into the open……………and stands right behind where naku was………….

He looks at the place where the voice was coming from…………and suds and the other goons stood stunned seeing dutta stand right behind where naku stood………….with her eyes closed and crying……………

Suds could feel his hands tremble as he tried hard to gain grip over the gun……………while naku waited to hear the bullet shot…………….But what she heard left her surprised………….suds as saying----dutta bhau?!.................

Naku opens her eyes and turning around she finds dutta standing there with a gun in his hand…………..pointing at the group of goons and suds as they stood there shell shocked…………….

Relieved and all happy naku runs to reach where dutta was …………….and throwing herself at him……….and her arms around his neck she hugs him tight!..............while dutta just smiles and tears well up in his eyes…………….

Dutta lowers the gun…………….Slowly with his other hand………….he wraps up naku in his arms and hugs her back…………….

He could feel Naku's tears wet his bare chest as she sobbed leaning against it-----Saab………….saab main………..main jaantii thi app theek ho…………main jaantii thi aap aaogey…………….😛

Dutta remains silent and moves his hand across naku's head and just keeps on smiling like he did in the show……………….when tasha hugged recently……………🤗😳

All these days dutta had waited to meet naku………..

All these days he had been craving to get just a glimpse of her…………😍

All these days he had waited for his nakusha to find him………….and now that she was sooo close to him ………..That dutta could hear her breathe heavily………………Dutta wanted the time to stand still…………….and his naku be THAT CLOSE TO HIM FOREVER!................

His voice says in the BG……………as tears roll down naku's face and welled up in dutta's eyes…………….

Kitna maasoom hai yeh pal………..

Kitnaa paak hai yeh pal…………..

Samay kaa yeh pal rukk jaaye yahiin…………

Iss ek LAMHEY mein…………….

Tere saath Guzaarey hue………….

HAR EK Pal KO JEENA HAi…………

BAHOT KUCH KEHNAA HAi………….

BAHOT KUCH SUNNA HAi…………

PAR SHAAYaD…………….

KUCH NAHIIN KEH SAKOONGA!................

Dutta makes naku move away from him…………and holding her arms he makes a crying naku…………stand right behind him…………keeping her out of the goon's and suds view…………..(I hope u got what gesture dutta did………….imagine kar lo………..I am sure u all will love it and smile too………..just like me……………)……………….

Naku holds onto dutta's kurta and cries silently while suds and others were still in shock and couldn't just gather the courage to pull the trigger……………..

There u see kala drove fast and has reached shreeram nagar……………abb she makes her way to dongarwaali and also calls up chaaskar who tells her he was about to reach the place where dutta was…………….

Meanwhile dutta knew he ought to make suds talk………….afterall he couldn't see him and didn't even know how many men he had with him…………..

Dutta says sternly----Tere ko kya lagaa sudarshan…………..MAIN MARR GAYAA?!..................Aur mere marney ke baad………….Patil waadi mein tu meri jagah hathiyaa legaa?!..............

Suds says---Dutta…………

Dutta was glad suds spoke as he made his way closer to where suds was ………….and he whispers to naku----Tu andar jaa naku………….

Dutta knew there was a sleek chance he won't be able to make out alive in this fight…………..and THOUGH HE KNEW HE COULD FIGHT EVEN BEING BLIND…………..HE JUST din't want to put NAKu's LIFE IN DAnGER FOR SURE!.................

When naku resists him dutta says----tere ko meri kasam hai naku…………isi waqt andar jaa aur saarey darwaazey bandh kar le………….GALTII SE BHI BAAHAR MATT AANA!..................

Reluctant naku turns to make her way to the door to the house which was just a few metres away from where she and dutta was…………….and giving a longing stare to dutta she closes the door when she steps onto something in the darkness and picks it up…………….

It was gun of one of the gundaas who lay dead inside……………….

Naku walks away………….and looks at Dutta from a nearby window…………….

There suds who was busy arguing with dutta doesn't care to stop naku and says---- yeh sapnaa meraa hii nahiin…………..Kisi aur kaa bhi tha……………

Dutta stood wondering what suds meant as he moved alittle more close to suds not letting him have even a hint for a second that dutta couldn't see them………….while suds keeps on blabbering out stuff NOT KNOWING HE WAS MAKING THE WORST MISTAKE OF HIS LIFE!.....................

Suds goes on----Tere peechey Patil Niwas mein kya hua tere ko kya pataa?!...............PATILWAADI MEIN DUTTA BHAU KAA RAAJ KHATAM………………….

Dutta almost reached suds as he could clearly listen to him speak on but what he was going to say…………before suds completes his sentence----ABB WAhAAN Par………………..(he is about to says taayi sahib raaj kartii hai……………when an angry dutta hits suds hard with his knee and all hurt suds drops down to the ground as dutta puts the gun on his forehead………….)…………….

Dutta glares hard at suds……………the other goons lower there guns as dutta says to suds sternly and moving his neck to one side in great DSP style-----PATILWADI MEIN…………….RATNAGIRI MEIN………….SIRF DUTTA SHREERAM PATIL KA RAAJ CHALTAA HAi…………..USS JUNGLE KAA SHER SIRF AUR SIRF YEH DUTTA HAI!...................Agggar tu………….leela kaa suhaag nahiin hotaa na sudarshan………….TOH YAHIIN TERE KO GOLI SE UDAA DETAA!..........................

The next instant without even dropping a hint what he was about to do dutta hits suds hard on his head and he fall on the ground unconscious while dutta begins to fight with the other goons as they charged at him one by one……………and dutta fights them all……………..and kills them too……………

Dutta turns around and looks into emptiness while an elated naku smiled at him from the window………….but when she fins dutta not react to her smile…………and didn't even look straight at her………….naku figured out something was wrong!.............BUT WHAT?!...............

Even as dutta stared right where naku was………..why was he not reacting to her presence……………

Worried and her sixth sense telling her dutta's eyes couldn't see………….but her heart not ready to believe what her mind told her……………naku rushes to go out to him when she hears two jeeps come to a halt……………

It was chaaskar and his men……………..

The screen splits and on one side u see chaaskar sitting in the jeep and glaring at dutta……………surprised to see him alive and taken aback to see all the goons and even suds lying on the ground……………..while on the other side u see kala DRIVING her way to dongerwaadi…………..AND IN THE CENTRE DUTTA STOOD WITH A GUN IN HIS HAND AND LOOKS UP TOO SEE FROM WHERE HE HEARD THE JEEPS COME SCREECH TO A HALT!.........................😳