New FF...Love is Blind.. Part 04 on Pg 06! - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
awwwwww just start reading this FF froom you sheeba...its aweseom....pls upload asap...
like always u made me speechless...:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 04 .......Tu hi tu....

Late that night u see naku is fast asleep………..with her head resting in dutta's lap as he just sits on the bed leaning against the wall behind………….😳

Lovingly he embraces naku's head and looks into emptiness…………..

Silently he wished if only he could get a glimpse of naku…………but the next instant he woul be happy realising at least she was there by his side…………even if not in in his sight……………

Dutta knew he could not hide like this forever………..he had to do something ………..he had to face chaaskar and teach him a lesson for a lifetime for planning to kill him!............and apart from this there was something else in his heart too…………😳

He had to tell naku the woman he was staying with was seema………..and not chandaa as she knew her!..............he couldn't keep the truth from her…………he knew there was nothing between him and seema still he had to telll naku about her before she came to know about it herself……………

All these thoughts keep dutta awake all night………….

Early next day……naku still lays asleep with dutta by her side………….slowly dutta moves naku away from his lap and puts her head on the pillow and makes sure he doesn't wake her up while he does this………….

Dutta takes off his kurta and u see he stands under the shower and puts it on………..he lets the cold water hit his body……………

He recalls all the beautiful moments spent with naku and also some moments spent with seema………..the song plays in BG from the movie dil se……….

Tu hii tu….

Tu hii tu satrangi re……….

Tu hii tu………..

Tu hii tu……….

Manrangii re…………

Dil ka says humsaya satrangi re………..

Manrangi re………….

The song ends and dutta comes out dressed in a brown kurta pyjama……………calls out to naku all set to tell her about seema…………but he hears no reply and realizes naku wasn't there…………

Just then naku walks in dressed in a beautiful green saree given by seema last night and walks in with tea for dutta………….😳

She remains silent and keeping the tray close to where dutta stood she turns to leave when dutta holds her hand and stops her………….

Dutta says to naku---Kuch kehnaa that ere se naku…..

Naku wanted dutta to say something……..as she made tea for him in the kitchen chanda's words had echoed in her head all of a sudden about her finding back her love!.............and with dutta in same house it meant chanda's Love was dutta!..............

And as naku recalled her being sorry for what she did with her love…….when they first met at the temple and became friends…………NAKU ALSO REALISED THAT THIS WOMAN MUST BE SEEMA!...........

The realization hadd left naku shattered and sad……………

Dutta says ----naku wohh………..(dutta's voice breaks the vicious circle of naku's thoughts which had be troubling her since moning…………..…as he says on………..……)…………….NaKU CHANDAA HII SEEMA HAI!...............

Naku turns to face dutta and says stepping closer to her---saab………….(tears well up in her eyes………)……………..main………..aapki khushi mein hii meri khushi hai………aur agar aap……….(naku's taers fall on dutta's hands and he realizes naku was crying as she sobs………….)…………aap unkey saath khush ho toh…………toh main aap donon ke beech kabhi nahiin aayegi…………….

An angry dutta brings naku closer to him with a jerk and naku takes support of dutta by placing her hand on his shoulder as dutta says---CHUP KAR!.............jab dekho bak bak bak karti rehtii hai…………..👏👏😛😳

Dutta holds onto naku's wrist tightly and brings her even more close to her and says sternly----MERI KHUSHI MEIN TERI KHUSHI HAI MAIN JAANTA HAI!..................YEH BAAT BAHOT PEHLEY SAMJH GAYAA THA MAIN…………AUR TERI KHUSHI!............TERI KHUSHI KA KYA NAKUSHA?!.................Aggar aaj main kahega kii haan….main seema ke saath khush hai toh tu…………TU chup chaap CHaLII JAAYEGI MERE KO CHOD KE?!...............HAAN?!..............jawab dey naku!..............

Naku remains silent and dutta says letting go off naku's hand----dekh naku……………mere liye seema koi maayney nahiin rakhtii………..USS AURAT KE LIYE MERE DIL MEIN SIRF NAFRAT Hai aur meri jaan BACHAANEY KAA EHSAAN HAI!.................meri zindagi mein suekey liye koi jagah nahiin hai…………(Dutta steps closer to naku and as he could hear naku sob he moves hias hands and takes naku's face in them and embracing it lovingly…………he says wiping away naku's tears…………..)……………Uss din phone par main tere ko bola thaa naku………….aaj bhi BOLTA HAI…………..MERI NAZREIN HAR TARAF SIR TERE KO DEKHTI HAI NaKU……………Mera dil teri ek jhalak ko taras rahaa hai……………BAHOT MUSHKIL SE KISMET NE………….Bappa net era SAATH LAUTAAYA HAI MERE KO…………AUR ABB MAIN TERE KO KHONA NAHIIN CHAHTAA………………😳

Naku cries…………this time they were tears of joy…………she steps forward and dutta moves his arms around naku and as she leaned her head aginst his chect and hugged him…………she FELT HAPPY AND SAFE…………..while Dutta felt satisfied that he told everything to naku…………….😳

Precap---Kala chaaskar talk just like in show…………and chaaskar sets out to find dutta………..realising chanda.... was betraying him all this while…………..😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
hi sheebs,

nice update dear........

wud love to c how u change ur track in the next update.........

tc
divya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
nice update
aww so naku realised the truth herself, bt didnt say nething...m glad dutta tld her immediately... naku so stupid---she shud realise by nw tht he loves her onli... glad they r 2geva
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
beautiful update sheeba

all confestions done by dutta so no more doubts good

waiting for next
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
A very nice updt............an emotional one.......luved the Tasha convo......... would like to see how the story moves further............. continue sooooooooon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
awww such a lovely emotional update sheebz...it was awsum n am soo glad dutta told her evn tho he didnt realise she already knew..but it jus shows the purity in the relationship n hw he ddnt want to hide anythng from her n wa he sed afta her speech of being hapy in Ds khushi with seema *making sick fce* lol D was soo sweet tho didsgusted at the thought of it...i thought he was gona kiss her wen he held her face..oh wel i ges hav 2 wait 2 everythng els (ooops sory 4 my besharmi lol) continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
really heart touching scene between tasha😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
Hey Sheeba🤗
Thanx alot for the wonderful update 🤗Awww it was really emotional though ...But loved there convo....so now everything is clear......
Precap looks intersting ...pls jaldi update karna.....
Love and hugs
suhana🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
beautiful update !
Sheebu
loved how dutta got angry on her
when she let go of him
oh my god this man is one of its kind !

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