FF There Will Be Blood Part 1 pg 3 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

38

Views

5.3k

Users

22

Likes

80

Frequent Posters

vikadesigirl thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Def continue it sounds very interesting.. and I guess I am already ur buddy.. so do PM me.. when u update.................I look forward to reading this FF.
Yuvika_15 thumbnail
Hogwarts Championship 2025 Thumbnail Gulaal-e-Jung Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 14 years ago
#12
wow 4 once he duznt trust his sisters..thts gd...pls PM me wen u update n update soon!😃
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
nileshni679 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#13
Excellent seems really interesting especially not trusting the sisters
Yuvika_15 thumbnail
Hogwarts Championship 2025 Thumbnail Gulaal-e-Jung Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 14 years ago
#14
hey i've added ur ff link 2 the media center thread--its up as an announcement in the forum... thts wer al other ffs n vms r so i put it there..so its easier 2 find...check on pg 8...
n pls update soon
MeetPremeer thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

hey i've added ur ff link 2 the media center thread--its up as an announcement in the forum... thts wer al other ffs n vms r so i put it there..so its easier2 find...check on pg 8...

n pls update soon



thank u so much dear
MeetPremeer thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

<font color="#ff00ff">Updt sooooooooooooooon............waiting eagerlyyyyyyyyy.............. </font>



updating in 2-3 hrs dear
MeetPremeer thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Hey guys
I m back with the 1st part of this fic
Btw my name is Nidhi and any suggestion on how to continue the story are more than welcome
But i wont be able to pm anyone as i update my mobile


PART-1


It is night time and raining heavily and the road which take people from Patilwadi to Mumbai are bare. Not even a single person could be seen then suddenly an ear piercing scream is heard. By the voice of it anyone can tell that is of a girl and who is clearly distressed.

" Bachao, plz koi meri madat karo " begged the voice of the girl.

Finally we are able to see what is happening. A girl is lying on the jungle floor struggling hard and some guy is above her trying to take advantage of the girl. The guys throws away the duppata of the girl and starts tearing her clothes. The girl manages to pick up the stone lying close to her amd brings it down with all her might on the fat man's head. It throws the guy of guard and the guys moves from above the girl and holds his head.

The girl takes this oppurtunity to run. She runs like she has never run before. Never looking back because she knows that no matter what that guy will not leave her alone. While she is running she screams all the while for somebody to come and help her. The girl is dead tried from both running and screaming but she didn't stop any of it.

&&&&&

The bare road interconnecting Patilwadi and Mumbai surrounded by jungle was not bare anymore. A black sedan is coming from the direction of Mumbai. As it comes closer we are able to see that it is a Honda-CRV and the vehicle is of none other then Dutta Bhau once know as the Sher of Patilwadi but is now literary the Sher of South-East Asia.

People fear him, respect him and love him, for many he is no less than a God. He is not only the biggest don in south-east asia but is also a self-made man who raised himself from ashes with his best friend, younger brother, partner in crime whatever u call, Bajji.

To government he is a business-man with various businesses like real estate agent, clubs, resturants, casinos, hotels, gym, etc. They also know that he is a don but cannot do anything as there is never any proof.

In the sedan, Dutta himself was seatted and driving back to Patil Niwas with Bajji after finishing some work. Suddenly they heard a girl screaming for help. The voice was coming from jungle. He instantly stopped the car and both of them got down taking thier gun and checking the bullets and taking water proof torches. After checking they hurried towards the jungle from were the screams were still coming but were louder as the got nearer to the person after running for 5 minutes in the direction tje scream was coming suddenly Dutta collided with a girl. She screamed louder and tried to run away but Dutta held on the girl and closed her mouth with his other hand.

" Bajji, tu ja ke dekh ki age kya hai jo ye ladki itni ghabarai hui hai. Idar pe to koi jungli janwar nahi hote phir kya hai " Dutta said as he looked at the frightened eyes of the girl.

" Ha bhau, main abhi dekhta hai tu idar hiruk aur isse... " but Bajji couldn't complete as they got the answer in form of a shout.

" aye ladki kaha tak bhagegi akhir mein thak kar rukna hi hoga, tu meri hai samjhi "

Hearing to this they noticed the girl's duppata was missing and her clothes were toren and muddy. After hearing the voice in distance the girl started struggling. Dutta indicated bajji to take care of tne guy with his eyes and slowly removed his hand from the girl's mouth as bajji went to the guy.

As soon as he removed his hand the girl pleaded with him, " saab mereko jane do, wo adami mera picha kar raha hai mujhe bhagane do" to which Dutta replied " Shhh... Mera bhai gaya hai usko dekhne, tujhe kuch nahi hoga. Tera naam kya hai "

Hearing that the man will not harm her now she believed it because looking in this guy's eyes she felt a connection and replied to his question before darkness surrounded her " main Nakusha, par meri ayi mereko Nakku kehti thi... "

___________________


That's it guys
Plz tell how do u like or critize it throught ur comment
And those who liked it plz click the 'like' button
Ruya thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Cliffhanger Nidhi
So is Nakku in her black avatar or white one who's after her morey ??
Qsts qsts qsts which only u can answer sp plzzzz update d next part soon andd
Yipeeeeee 🥳 I fink dis is d first time I'm first to comment on a ff
ushankitvc thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Reserved .......... superb updt with cliffhanger!!!!
Nakku is beeing chased by sumbody......... Dutta saves her frm him.......... Baaji to deal with that man.........Nakku out in the rain means she is fair, right???? Thanx fr that........... was going to suggest the same........... looking frwrd fr the nxt updt............continue sooooooooon........
Edited by ushankitvc - 14 years ago
Pooja_219 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Nice start,would love to read next update soon

Pooja😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".