FF There Will Be Blood Part 1 pg 3

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Nidhi Chandrakar

@MeetPremeer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

Hi guys

I am new in this forum in field of writing ff but i just fell in love with Dusha after reading all the great fics this site has to offer and had to start my own.

INTRO

Dutta Shriram Patil is the biggest Gangster in South-East Asia, though the youngest and a self made man not like the other hereited dynasty Gangsters. He thought ne has been betrayed in love twice but what he didn't know that it was just physical attraction until he met his better half. He trusted only few people his Ayi Sahib, his right-hand-cum-surrogate-brother Baaji, his younger sister Madhu and his oldest brother-in-law Kishore. He didn't even trust his three sisters or his other brother-in-law.

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So tell me guys if i should continue or not

Part 1 pg3

Edited by MeetPremeer - 14 years ago

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

should continue

wow 4 once dutta didnt trust his sisters

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

Plz continue .........looking frwrd.......... luved it bcoz he is trusting the ones to be trust worthy........... Add me to PM list..........continue soooooon............

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

Ohhh Continue...

For once, he trusts the right people lol.. i guess Dutta aint a gadha here!...

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Shally

@shally_m

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

nice start ..... please continue

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Suraya

@Ruya

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

Plzz do continue
Sounds interesting and for once dutta seems to not b a ghada LOL
Plz do add me to ur PM list

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divya17-7

@divya17-7

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

hi there,

how shd i address u?

kindly add me to the PM list.....

the story sounds interesting as the track seems perfectly clear off any obstructions......... u wud hav to layer them in ur FF, so sounds really interesting......... will look forward to it.......

thnx in advance
tc
divya