FF- Raj Gharana,Ch39, the end, pg76, updtd on 21.2

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divya17-7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: tintiny
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hey jayati.....

yaar, thnx for the update......... it was long n very good.......... n full.............

now im impatient to wait until tomorrow........ i want to c if dutta wil b j of baji n naku or he will find a good friend in baji n end up reaching naku through him with her problems n life n herself...........

quite curious for the next part...........

thnx for such a beautiful n engrossing FF.

tc
divya

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blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

hey nice update dear..............
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dutta stands for naku..............hmm............interesting n somehow i agree with AS abt dutta ,he was choosy abt girls na...........am waiting for tasha scene.........
looking fwd...........

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shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Nice update tin.

Yaar today i won't be telling my views jst can say that it was nice, i vl wait for tomorow's update.

Thnx for update.

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Wanderbug

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

awesome...lets see what dutta has to say about baaji-nakusha comaradie....green would suit him i bet...if you gt my meaning...lol

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suhana19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Hey Tin🤗thanx alot for the wonderful update .....Loved it ....

Wow Dutta is standing up for naku 😉...Omg AS is not stopping naku from leaving coz of dutta"s behaviour towards....But i bet dutta will stop her from leaving ...Baaji and naku bonding is really cute yaar ...i wanna see more tasha scenes....will wait for tomorrow"s update....

U take care and see ya around...Have a wonderful day !

👍🏼👏🤗

Love suhana

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usha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

OMG!!!!! my wish fulfilled...........SP - DP clash .........for AS or fr Nakku ......fr whom he stood upto????? well AS is too confused seeing Duttas bhaviour..........DP is trying to contact N ........ why ???? ....to flirt........ or to giv her sleepless night.........Nakku confides in Bolt.......... Baaji walks in near Nakku...........they r really comfortable with each other........DP sees this ..........looks like DP will be jealous of B ..... nxt part we may see J dutta.............AS could easily shift Nakku to Baajis house as Vipinji might not object........... then we may see a complete possessive and jealous Dutta............ then he may realise that he is not only flirting but is seriously in luv with her.......cant wait fr 2morrows updt.........updt soooooooon......

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Pooja_219

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

thanks for the update.

Already waiting for next part.

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prettywoman

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Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Hi Jayati

Finally know your name.. Thanks to Kavi's post :-)

Good part again.. Gosh usually when my alarm goes on inn the morning, I hate it.. whereas these days I cant wait to get up and read your FF :-)

I am amazed how in one line you have explained so well why Dutta never connected with his mum.. that one line about his childhood gave me as a reader enough to conjure up my own views on why as a child he felt disconnected to his mum for not fitting in well and being 'different' to other mums.. as he grew up the fact that she never fought her corner also played on his mind.. he likes women who are not door mats and can stand up for themselves and AS is just the opposite.. maybe if she had voiced her opinions a bit more, she might have had a son who might have stood up for her.. but seeing an unresponsive mum, he probably never felt the need to stand up for her, though in reality she needed him more then..anyway, it's interesting, to say the least!

And AS is so correct in assuming the worst of her son and why he wants her to stay back.. But I so want him to prove her wrong esp when it came to his flings with other ladies.. she knows he has had several girl friends, but it will be a huge boost to her, if he has never crossed the line with them and proved he was her son in some ways too!!

OMG, when the mobile was unreachable, or a moment, my romantic, dramatics craving heart thought Naku had packed her bags and left and we would have Dutta jumping in his car in hot pursuit of her!!but chalo she was only out in the meadow! I have a feeling that he will not be jealous of her talking to baaji, but jealous/upset of the fact that she is so care free with Baaji and clams up when in front of her..

Sigh.. no tasha today Jayati :-( so kal pls kasar puri kar dena.. I cant wiat for my alarm to wake me up tomorrow!!!

BTW, loved how u incorporated the dosa batter in yesterday's part, forgot to mention that yesterday!

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Azy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#179

V nice update. Enjoyed it to the fullest. Waiting for the next post. Like the baaji charc too. He is so down to earth. V diff from rest of the ppl. Pls add me also to ur PM list.

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bfunofbb123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#180

excellent updateTins i have been missing ur ff wow so finally the mistry of the dress solved ha!

awesome & don't laugh but i don't know may b u explained at the begining & i misssed i thought leela AS daughter i was confused though when she calle roops beta & iwas really angry with her behaviour to blame AS with raja saab but now it makes sense.

how evil of her. she also wants to control D 's life i doubt she will succeed D is the kind of man who does what he pleases she shouldn't give her niece hope as they will b shattered just like hers.

i love how D stood up 4 naku & poor AS is confused whether to b happy or sad as she doesn't trust her son's intention. well i hope D proves his mother wrong by becoming a good doer & finaly fall 4 her & in the process make his mother proud of him! mygod Tins SP patil at this age he is still fooling around & e/one is aware & me like shilpita & vandu in this jorney not only tasha i would like 2 c them come close as well! awesome update as usual & tanx 4 reg. update. omy i am surprised on the length of my comment as i am not feeling well but kya keru can't keep away!

'ek chhota sa dosh' what does it mean Tins!

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