New FF..Yeh Mohabbat..updated..LAST part-pg 57!! - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago
bush.........its very emotional........plz bring back Dutta soon..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oyy Bushy,,,,,Dekh dis tym ,,,,i;m on tym😆,,,,,so much emotional atyachar😭,,,,,D crying n upperse ye rain😭,,,,,it hurts 🥺
Letter wala part toh,,,,heartwrenching tha😭,,,,sachme tissues ki jarurat padegi,,,,,,😭
poor nakku she find hm everywer ,,,,,kahin nahin mila😲.....ohh nice song choice👍🏼,,,,,
Bring D back warna yeri khair nahi,,,,whole family tere piche he,,,,me too join khushi n sophia😈
next updat asap wit Datta😳
Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg bushy rli ddnt expct dat!!! awh poor dutta bles hm n naku man ah rli feel 4 both of dem...plz brng dutta bak by nxt update pretty pweez😳 cnt c dem lyk dis....gr8 choic of song tho n vri emotional...😭
thnx 4 pm hun n plz update sooon n ah hapy 1 dis tym...
btw ah totali luvd duttaz lettr rli had me cryn...wer has he gne...ah rli expctd hm 2 b at da sea side...but no....💔
mwa..xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

omg heartbreaking update!!! 😭

firstly i jus wanna say what a wonderful and heart touching dialogue u included in the letter... loved it:😭😳
tumhare bina nahi jee sakta....lekin tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekh bhi nahi sakta.....tum meri zindagi ho....lekin apni zindagi ko kisi aur ke liye jeete hue nahi dekh sakta....tum meri dhadkan ho....lekin apni dhadkan ko kisi aur ke liye saans lete hue nahi dekh sakta.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
i mean i hav no words 2 express how brilliant it was👏... so sweet...it shows hw much he loves her😳... aww naku was in tears😭 bt trust me she werent the onli one..it was reali emotional...
m sure nw she realises tht she loves him too😳... cnt w8 for thm 2 meet...hpe naku has a cute fight with him crying n hitting him lightly as 2 why he neva tld her b4😆... it wud b cute seeing him manao naku---i dno y i keep picturing the last scene in the movie rangeela... dutta as aamir, naku as urmilla and baji as jackie...lol😆
anyway naku's breakdown was too sad too😭...i reali hpe she finds dutta i thrt she myt find him at tht sea place wer she usually goes and wer dutta broke down... talkin of which is break down in the rain was reali sad too😭😭😭😭... jaldi se misunderstanding duur kar varna acha nahi hoga😈....samjhe bushy....😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
once again wonderful update👏
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very well written . atlast dutta confessed his feelings to nakku. although now he has gone missing but i am sure nakku will find him soon......i hope so. waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dutta tu kahaan he??????? oh I loved the song but I didnt like how Naku broke down...so sad😭 The letter was so romantic but sad and heartfelt...really sweet...great update...and thanks for the PM
Update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nooooo...i can't say anything for the pain...bas unhe milla do jaldi..phir hi koi bada sa comment likhungi...ok...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey everyone......sorry i could not reply to anyone's comment.....really sorry but thank u all for liking it and leaving ur precious comments...they encourage me a lot....😃....the last part was vry touching so here's a happy part...hope u guys like it as well.😳
Part9..
...Yeh Mohabbat...
Next morning....Baji and Riya come to Nakku's house...they ask Babi about Nakku...she tells that she is in her room...they go to her room.....
Nakusha was standing near her window....her eyes were swollen as she was crying the whole night...she was holding Dutta's picture in her hand....
Riya and Baji enter...they look at Nakku and then the room....all the pics of her and Dutta were scattered on the floor........they look at each other and understand the situation...Riya: Nakku...???
Nakku does not respond...
Riya looks at Baji and then goes to her...she puts her hand on Nakku's shoulder which brings her back to senses...she turns in a jerk and looks at Baji...Nakusha: Baji.....Dutta kahan hai....??? woh mila tumhe...??Baji looks down as if saying no...Nakusha again gets depressed....she turns away...Riya tries to console her....Riya: Nakku....tu pareshan mat ho...Dutta jahan bhi hoga aajayega...Nakuhsa: Pareshan mat hoon.....agar Baji tujhe chod kar chala jaata aur main tujhse kehti ki pareshaan mat ho...toh tu kya karti...haan...??? Bol???
Riya: Main jaanti hoon ki tu pareshan hai...Dutta tera dost hai..
aur...(b4 she could complete Nakku gets up and says..Nakku: Riya please....mujhe akela chod do...Riya: Kyun akela chod de tujhe Nakku....tujhe itni takleef kyun ho rahi hai.....woh sirf tera dost hi toh hai.....phir ek dost ke liye itna dard..kyun..???Nakku looks other way...Riya: For god sake Nakku....apne pyar ko pehchaan.....yeh baat maanle ki tu bhi ussey pyar karti hai.....tu bhi uske bina nahi jee sakti...Nakku: Haan..haan...main bhi ussey pyar karti hoon...bohat pyar karti hoon.....abhi se nahi bohat pehle se....lekin sirf uske bolne ka intezaar kar rahi thi....kya pata tha ki who mujhe chod ke chala jaayega...intezaar karne ki itni badi saza dega....main uske bina nahi jee sakti...Mujhe mere Dutta se mila do..plz....(she breaks down...)Baji and Riya gets a bit happy that she has realized her love for him: Aakhir tumne maan liya ke tum ussey pyar karti ho....'
Nakku: Haan....bohat pyar karti hoon main ussey....bohat......Baji mujhe Dutta se milna hai...plz usey wapas lekar aao...plz....
Baji Hugs her:Lekar aaunga....main Bhao ko lekar aaunga...tum pareshan mat ho....They find him everywhere....they try to call Dutta but it was not reachable.....their every attempt goes in vain....they became hopeless...Two days passed and there was no news of Dutta...Riya and Baji could not see Nakku's state..they tried a lot to find Dutta but their every possible way went into drain....There was a function at Riya's house...it was.Riya's parents anniversary...there was pooja in the morning....she convinces Nakku to attend it....she agrees reluctantly....she wears a golden sharara...(lol. we call it by this name....its like the one Nakku wears in her wedding...)..with her hair open.....with beautiful jewelery...she was looking angelic....the only thing which was missing was her stunning smile..and her admirer Dutta......she was lost in Dutta's thoughts....She comes with Babi..Ganpath and Sethji...Riya - Baji look at her....Riya's parents welcome them.....Riya goes to get Nakku....she comes in and puts a fake smile...She asks Baji the same question about Dutta...and got the same answer...No from him....Riya's mother's name was Naina Singh...and her father's name was Kuljeet Singh...
Guyz I want u all to plz listen to the song while reading it coz I have used the music which comes at the ending of the song in a very good sense....plz listen to it and use ur imaginations...The song Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham is played( It was Sophie's wish and I could not say no to it..😳..)
the pooja starts... starts.....and the song is sung by Naina..Naina stands in front the gods idols and sings...Aa aa aa aa aa aa, kabhi khushi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Aa aa aa, aa aa aa, aa aa aa aa
Everyone goes to do the aarthi...in front of the idols....everyone stand in front of the idols with folded hands...
(Meri saanson mein tu hai samaaya
Mera jeevan toh hai tera saaya) 2
Nakku looks at them and joins them.....
Teri pooja karoon main to har dam
she folds her hands and closes her eyes...
Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Babi starts singing...looking at the God...
Meri saanson mein tu hai samaaya
Mera jeevan to hai tera saaya
Everyone stand with folded hands...
Nakku looks at Bai and fakes a smile...
Teri pooja karoon main to har dam
Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham

Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Riya comes and asks Nakku to dance she says no...but she sees Dutta sayign her to dance...she goes and starts dancing...after the dance Dutta winks at her...and in seconds he disappears..

Subh-o-shyaam charno mein diye hum jalaaye
Nakku lights diya near the god idols..
Dutta comes and blows in her ears....she gets startled and looks around...he does not find him..
Dekhe jahan bhi dekhe, tujhko hi paaye
She finds Dutta everywhere she sees....

Riya looks at Baji and sings...
In labon pe tera bas tera naam ho - 2
Pyaar dil se kabhi bhi na ho ka
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She hugs him....
Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Nakku stands in a corner looking at the ladies sing.....she was faking a smile...Dutta comes behind her and kisses her cheeks....she turns to see and finds him...she was about to touch him but he disappears...

Yeh ghar nahin hai, mandir hai tera
Is mein sadaa rahe tera basera

Oh, yeh ghar nahin hai, mandir hai tera
Is mein sadaa rahe tera baseraa
Khushbuon se teri yeh mahekta rahe - 2
Aaye jaaye bhale koi mausam

Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Babi comes to Nakku and sings...Nakku smiles at her....
(Meri saanson mein tu hai samaaya
Mera jeevan to hai tera saaya)2
Outside Riya's house someone gets down from the car...and looks at the house......the person was far from the house and was hesitating to go in...
Nakku stands alone in front of the idol with folded hands...eyes closed and she prays...

Teri pooja karoon main to har dam
Yeh hai tere karam, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Riya comes and whispers something in her ears....Nakku opens her eyes..looks at Riya and then at Baji..as if asking "is it true..??" and Baji also nods in a yes..she looks at God thanks him....she turns...and starts running....she pushes everyone..she wipes her tears..does not care what the people will think...she felt as if the whole world has come in front of her....she runs as if she wanted to reach him within seconds....she comes out of the house.....looks at the person who was looking the other way..his back was at Nakku....she runs to him.....he turns to see her....he was confused....he didn't understand y she was running like that...she runs and stops in front of.....

Aa aa aa aa aa aa, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
She hugs him...tight....Dutta was shocked....he didn't hug her back....he was just thinking....Baji and Riya were looking at them..they hug as well....
Song finishes...
Nakusha breaks the hug....looks at him angrily.....she gets in her car and leaves from there.....while Dutta was still looking confusing......Baji and Riya come there....
Baji: Haila....abhi toh aap aaye thay...aur abhi yeh Nakku chali gayi.......arre yaar yeh ho kya raha hai...abb isey kahan dhoonde hum...????..Bhao....aap itne confuse kyun lag rahe ho..??? She knows everything.....that u love her....but the point is where to find her..???
Dutta: Jaanta hoon ke usey pata hai.....tujhe pareshaan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai...
main jaanta hoon ki woh kahan hogi...(he gets in the car and goes away...
while Baji-Riya looks on...)
Baji: Yeh dono....pata nahi kis mitti ke bane hain...bina bole hi sab kuch samajh jatee hain....
Riya: Kyunki yeh dono ek doosre se pyar karte hain....theek usi tarah jaise hum ek doosre se pyar karte hain..
Baji: Accha....lekin main tumse jitna pyar karta hoon..utna koi kisise nahi kar sakta....
Riya: Oye hoye....apni taareef apne hi zubaan se......acchi nahi lagti....
Baji: Theek hai theek hai...abb andar chalein...kyunki andar sabko batana bhi toh hai..ki Nakku waise kyun bhaagi...
Riya: Oh Haan......jo bhi bolna hai tum bolo.....main kuch nahi bolne waali...
Baji: Jo hukum sarkaar...(they both smile and go inside...)
Nakku is near the sea shore..sitting on the bench...Dutta comes there....he stands behind and just waits for a while....without turning..
Nakku: Kyun aaye ho yahan...???
Dutta was mum....

Nakku: Bolo kyun aaye ho yahan...???
Dutta still doesnot say anything...
Nakku gets annoyed and gets up pointing a finger at him but she does not find him....she looks here and there...then she looks down...she gets a bit shocked....Dutta was on his knees with his head bowed down...
Nakku looks at him and has tears in her eyes...
Dutta looks at her: Jo saza deni hai dedo....mujhe har saza manzoor hai...
Nakku wipes her tears and tries to make and angry look.....she sees other way...to avoid eye contact..
Dutta gets up comes closer to her: Jaanta hoon ki tum hurt ho....aur meri wajah se hurt ho......maine bohat badi galati ki...uss ladki ko hurt kiya jisey main sabse zyada pyar karta hoon....
Nakku had tears in her eyes..she pushed Dutta and starts speaking and crying together: Tum hamesha aise hi karte ho....pehle mujhe hurt karte ho... aur phir aisi stupid si harkath karke mujh manane ki koshish karte ho....aur har baar ki tarah main tumhe maaf kar deti hoon....lekin iss baar I am not gonna forgive u...never....(she starst crying even more...She hits him on his chest with her fist...and says: I hate you..I hate You....I.....(she pauses looks into his eyes and says...): I Love You....I Love You....(she hugs him with her arms around his neck....(Dutta feels very happy as if the whole world is his now...he hugs her back lovingly....his hands moving from her waist to her back..enveloping her in his strong arms...he kisses her on her head....and says): I Love You Too....I Love You Too.....they both had tears in their eyes....they break the hug and Dutta lands a sweet and soft kiss on her lips...Nakku blushes....
Dutta: BTW....U Look stunning in this dress....(Nakku blushes even more..lol...)
Dutta: Oye hoye meri shona blush kar rahi hai....
Nakku: Dutta....stop it now.....lekin agar tumne aisi galti phirse ki toh main tumhe jaan se maar doongi..samjhe...
Dutta holds his ears: I am sorry Shona...
Nakku pecks his cheek: Its ok....
Dutta: Haayeee........main toh mar jaaunga....
Nakku: Bas bas...abb mujhe tumse kuch poochna hai..
Dutta: ahh... Poocho...
Nakku: Tum mujhe chodke gaye kahan thay...???
Dutta: Main London gaya tha.....

Nakku: London..???...Aur tum yahan aaye kaise....tumhe bulaya kisne...???
Dutta: Wahi jispe tumhe bharosa tha....
Nakku: Baji.???
Dutta: Haan Baji....usne mujhe phone kiya aur sab kuch bata diya....aur main sabse pehli flight main yahan aagaya.....
Nakku: Bajiiii...I Love Him.....
Dutta: And I Love You...
They both hug again...when Riya calls....she puts the phone on loudspeaker...
Riya: Hello...
Nakku: Haan bolo Riya...
Riya: Tum dono love birds mil chuke ho toh main tum se kuch keh sakti hoon...
Dutta: Jaldi bol....tu hame disturb kar rahi hai...
Nakku: Dutta stop it..
Riya: Dutta shut up...main tumse nahi Nakku se baat kar rahi hoon...ok...Nakku sun....aaj shaam ko party hai yaad hai na...???
Toh tujhe aana hi hai...agar yeh bandar nahi bhi aaraha hai na tab bhi tujhe aana hi hai...
Dutta: Tuney mujhe badar kaha.....Riya ki bacchi..shaam ko party mein main tujhe chodoonga nahi....
Baji: Bhao.....Riya ko kuch mat karna...
Dutta: Tu bhi hai wahan pe....ro mat....chup kar....kuch nahi karoonga....
Baji: Thanx bhao..
Dutta: Chamcha kahin ka...
Nakku: Oh ho...tum dono ladna band karo..aur Mujhe Riya se baat karne do...(Dutta shuts his mouth...)
Nakku: Riya main aajaungi.....aur kuch..???
Riya: Haan apni sabse important cheez lekar aana..
jo tu subah bhool gayi thi..
Dutta looks at Nakku questioningly...
Nakku: Kaunsi cheez???
Riya: Teri smile...

Dutta's questioning look changes into a smile...
Dutta: Lekar aajayegi...nahi bhoolegi.....
Nakku: Haan..kyunki meri hasne ki wajah jo mere saath hai...
Riya: Accha theek hai main phone rakhti hoon....shaam ko milte hai..bye take crae...
Nakku& Dutta: Bye...take care...
Dutta: Tum mere jaane ke baad hasna hi bhool gayi thi...???
Nakku: Nahi....tumhare jaane ke baad main jeena hi bhool gayi thi...

Dutta kisses her again on her cheeks and they hug sideways....
Hope u guys like it.....😳
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Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

very sweet and touching update ..... 😉😉😉😉😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved ....
Edited;;
Awww the beginning was heart breaking😭 Hailaaa 2 days and Dutta was missing.. How was Nakku living? 😲😭...
OMG OMG... Our Family Song,, *Family Hug* Lol wheres sonee.. pri n khushi? 😆
Thanks for the song😉😳 ... OMG here she's praying and there he comes.. Totally SRK style😆 .. Tu to bohut filmy nikli bush😛... Aww she hugged him and then went lol😆 ... Baaji is ryt, they are confusing😆...
"Tum hamesha aise hi karte ho....pehle mujhe hurt karte ho... aur phir aisi stupid si harkath karke mujh manane ki koshish karte ho....aur har baar ki tarah main tumhe maaf kar deti hoon....lekin iss baar I am not gonna forgive u...never....(she starst crying even more...She hits him on his chest with her fist...and says: I hate you..I hate You....I.....(she pauses looks into his eyes and says...): I Love You....I Love You...."
^^OMG Bush.. This is so Ishq Vishq... And you know it😆 Ahhh i have to say...I LOVE BAAJi.. he called Dutta and told him everything.. dats y i love dat boy so much... he's too good.. The ending was too good.. aww Riya told her not to forget her smile.. How sweet of her..
Amazing update... LOVED the reunion... *Bows down to Bush* 😳
Thanks for the PM... Continue soon😳
Haila sorry for the essay... Just my excitement after reading an amazing update and watchin an amazin epi lol.. *Control sophia control* 😆
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago

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