New FF The Reason..DUTTA DOES CARE...Pg40......... - Page 31

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi sheeba,
so this was the surprise u were talking about,if it is then i really enjoyed reading especilly ab to khushi double ho gayi since MR is staying.
I really liked the angry still carring dutta.
Good he didn't see seema aunty.
Thanks for the update & next part ASAP.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey great updates dear.............
so naku too said lie abt kala infront of dutta😆..............it was sooooooooo cute............
n dutta was still caring for naku na,that was nice..............
n for precap👏...................looking fwd.................

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi sheebu,

It was really nice....Dutta is always protective...and he make sure Nakku is safe...Amazing update...😊
Aapne apna zidd poori karli sahiba....MISHAL IS NOT LEAVING....tabhi humko kuch padnekeliya mila....hMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM.......MISHAL HAI TO STORY HAI KYU????????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
asusual superb update Sheeba.............................. oh GOD poor Bajji again he has too bear Dutta's anger.................
Hailla Bajji said Dutta ka dimag ghoom geya hai.....lolz
ye kya NAkku ko aur kuchh kaam nahi hai kya...................... she never leaves a chance to become Devi....................................... Plz Sheeba i dunno want to see Seema for a long here....................
So plz niptaoify her sooooooon...................................
Thank GOD Nakku bent down & didn't get hurt............................
supreb update dear.............................
update soon......................
Edited by --khushi-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Sheeba thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM🤗
Awww poor baaji got yelled again ....he wa s concerned about naku"s safety...
Omg naku and seema sharing thali....i can"t stand seema...pls kick her out soon 🤢
She is getting too much footage on the show 😡...pls not on FFs as well....
Wow dutta reached on time and saved naku 😍....Good that seema saw Tasha....
Precap was rocking yaar ....GO baaji ...u rock ...👍🏼....
really awesome update ..u rock gal....
can"t wait for the nxt part ....u take care and see ya around.....
👍🏼👏🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Here is next part friend's 😛😛😛😛...............enjoy

Dutta walks down the stairs of the temple with naku and a shell shocked seema looks on????.

She turns to find herself staring at baji who had come there listening the gun shot??????

Seema looks at him stunned????and as the two stare at one another???the whole temple empties????.

Its just the two of them standing face to face and baji recalls how an innocent dutta changed into don dutta all thanks to seema!...........

His expressions harden as he turns to leave giving a disgusted look to seema????.

Seema stops him calling out-----baaji?..meri baat toh sunn???..

Baji turns around and says----aye????tujh jaisi aurat se main koi baat nahiin karma chahtaa????

Tears well up in seema's eyes as she sobs-----Main jaantii hun main bahot burii hoon????aur?aur apni galtii kaa ehsaas mujhey bahot pehley ho gayaa tha baji?????Aur ??kab se main dutta ko dhoond rahii hoon?..ussey maafi maangney ke liye!............

Baji glares hard at seema and says-----SAHI BOLA TUNNEY SEEMA?????..BURI TOH TU HAI!..............TERI WAJAH SE BHAU KYA SE KYA BANN GAYA!.............GALTII KA EHSAAS HUA TUJHEY?.............Aur abb mafii chahiye?wah?!..................ARREY BHAU TOH KYA??KABHI APNEY AAP SE POOCH KE DEKHNA????.KII JO GUNAAH TUNNEY KIYA HAI???KYA WOHH MAAFI KE LAAYAK HAI?!.................

Seema sobs-----haan baji????main??main jaanti hoon main dutta kii maafi ke kaabil nahiin hoon????par????par merii galtii kii sazaa mujhey zindagi ne dey dii hai????..bas ek baar dutta mujhey maaf karde??.toph mera paschyatap poora ho jaayega????.

Baji steps closer to seema and says out sternly-----Tu meri ek baat dhyaan se sunn ley seema?????Main tere ko bhau se milney tak nahiin degaa?????Teraa saaya tak nahiin padney degaa bhau aur naku kii zindagi par????..ISLIYE TERE LIYE YAHII ACHCHA HOGAA KII TU JAHAAN SE AAYI HAI WAHIIN WAPAS LAUT JAA!................

Seema looks on as a determined baji walks away????..

He didn't know???.life had its own way??.and soon dutta would have to face this ghost from his past?????and make few realizations too????

U see dutta and naku r in the jeep,?????dutta had left without baji as he didn't want naku to around anywhere alone?????.and he had left the other driver and kaley for baji to come with????..

Naku sits silently????.she was scared but with dutta by her side she felt safe??????

Dutta keeps on looking at naku in the mirror wondering iff she was fine????

He asks---tu theek hai na naku?...............

Dutta recalls how naku had hid her wound from him when she was shot at chaskar's place????

Naku nods her head and dutta still turns to inspect her arms making sure she was not hurt as he drove too??????..

They reach PN???.

Dutta gets down and helps naku out of the car standing in front of her and offers her his hand???

Naku looks up at dutta and the two gaze at each other as slowy naku gives her had to dutta and as dutta helped naku get down she could feel his grip tighten on her hand??????

The two walk into PN together????and from the balcony kala stood watching this????

She felt a bolt from the blue seeing dutta and naku walk in together!.................

The two made their way to dutta's room and kala just stands watching all this feeling like someone had hit her hard?????.she thinks to herself-----Yeh ladkii apney aap ko samajhtii kya hai???.DEKHTII HOON KAB TAK BHAU KO APNEY BAS MEIN KARKE RAKHTI HAI!................

Naku who had seen kala standing restless seeing her and dutta walk in thinks to herself as dutta and she walk up the stairs together?????.PYAR MEIN EK DOOSREEY PAR KOI BAS NAHIIN CHALTAA KALA TAAYI????.Main jaanti hai????.kii saab mere se pyar kartey hain?.(she steals a glance at dutta and thinks further)?????INTEZAR USS DIN KAA HAI JAB WOHH YEH BAAT MUJHEY KHUDH KAHEINGE!..............

Precap-----Dutta and kala in dutta's room and kala saying to dutta-----Bhau mainey jo kuch teri bhalayi ke liye kiya tha????..Nakusha tujhse jithnaa pyar kartii hai utna koi nahiin kartaa?????(kala says desperately trying to make thing up with dutta??.)????.arre wohhh ladkii toh har baar sahii thii????har baar ussney apni jaan kii parvaah kiye binaa tujhey bachaaya,?????.

Dutta looks up at kala ?????.

There at the doorway naku stood???.wwith dutta haing his back to her?????..naku iss all smiles as she sees kala doing her tareef????.in front of dutta????..

Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Me first ..........
5 days to go.............hope on that day we see Tasha meeting in the serial also..........that would be a real treat to our eyes...............
Superb updt...............liked baaji standing up fr Dutta strongly😛............he is so determined...........a true frnd.............. Dutta really cares a lot fr Nakku😉............Kalas face must hav been worth seeing when she sees Tasha ntering 2gether👏 (would luv to see her stunned👏 when Tasha nter PN 2gether in the serial also😃)...........Precap looks ineresting.........Kala praising Nakku.........again planning looks like...........Kala plan well bcoz ur plans make Tasha cum closer to each other😉.....
Thanx fr giving us things we would like to watch in the serial in ur FF.........atleast we can read it and njoy⭐️......
Edited by ushankitvc - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update....awesome..i read all the parts once again....just to relive the moments.....keep going.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Sheeba.. Wooo ur rockin this FF ;)

Vaaaaaaah.. I Loved Baaji's dialogue.. kya taane maara hain.. Seema deserved it.. n omg looks like Dutta will come face to face with seema soon in ur FF as well..
Ahhhh TaSha.. 😍... Awww he's inspecting her to see if shes hurt.. dats just too sweeet.. im gna get diabetes lool.. bad joke.. lol
hahah.. they walked in hand in hand infront of kala.. now thats a thappar on her face...
Precap- KALA praising Nakku??? Hailaaa lol.. well if she wants her bro to forgive her and trust her,, i guess that was necessary..


Awesomee updateee... Continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW....!! Mindddd blowing as usual.... 👏 .... 👏 .

Dutta inspecting that naku is not hurt, giving his hand for help.... 😍 .... 😍 .... 😍 , how SWEET.... 😍 .... 😍 .... 😍 .

5 days still to go, wondering wat all surprises are there for us.... 😍 .... 😍 .... 😍 .

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