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Sheeba

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: Rose_Petal
Great update Sheeba! I can't wait for the next one thanks to the precap...Naku is not eating....Dutta has found out...feels guilty...I can't stop my imagination from running...😍

Hope u like when precap scene comes😊............Well let ur imagination run its ok hope u like what sheeba comes up with..................😳

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Sheeba

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: shruti10august
Sheeba, gr8 work. I really enjoyed it.
1 request please add me to ur PM list nd please PM me the next parts that u vl update.

Hey shruti glad to see ur reply in FF welcome to this world of tasha😳...............Sure dear will pm u............lekin u keep replying too..................😆

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Sheeba

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: fairy_naaz
Very nice update sheeba.Precap seems really good.Dutta loves his wife but couldn't show his feelings.He realizes his mistakes thanks to AS who really wants her son's good.AS rocks!!!!

yaa pyar kartaa hai par saath nakhrey dikhataa hai😛...............gadhaa jo thehraa...............AS takes charge of situation which is unlike the show😆............Hope u keep enjoying it dear................😳

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Sheeba

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Posted: 14 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: chitrakshgeet
Hi,

It was really nice...Update soon... madam..waiting...😊

Arre u too started reading my FF.............wow😛.............welcome dear to this world of tasha..................Hope u keep enjoying and commenting too.....................🤗

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Sheeba

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Dutta who had had some work in the near by town..........returns to PN after two days and as he enters the hall.............he finds AS and baji talk to each other..........

AS says----Do din ho gaye..........na naku ne kuch khayaa hai aur naa hii kisi se baat kar rahii hai...........hummein toh usski bahot chinta honney lagii hai baji.................

baji says---Ho aayi saahib............pataa nahiin woh itni chup kyun hai?...........Kisi se apney dil kaa haal bhi toh nahiin boltii kii hum samajh paayein..............

Baji turns around and seeing dutta glaring down at him falls silent.........

AS too notices dutta standing in the dorrway..............and giving an sccusing and disappointed look to her son she walks away..............

Dutta walks upto baji.........and says----JAB MAIN GHAR SE JATAA HOON............TOH ISS GHAR KE HAR SADSYAA KII ZEMDARI TUJH PAR CHOD KE JATAA HOON BAAJI!...................

Baji nods his head as dutta says angrily----PHIR DO DIN SE NAKUU NE KUCH KHAYAA NAHIIN...............YEh JAANTEy HUE BHII ISS BAREY MEIN MUJHEY BATAANA!.............TUNNEY ZAROORI NAHIIN SAMJHAA?!..................Tu jaanta hai kii woh theek nahiin hai..............toh mujhsey bola kyun nahiin..................

Dutta takes a deep breath and turns to leave when baji says from behind.............in a stern and matter of fact manner-----BHAU............(dutta stops to listen to him without tturning around.........).............Naku jeeye yaa marey ussey aapko kya?!................Aaj jo bhi halat hai usski..........aapki wajah se hai............aap hii toh uss akelii sadak par akela chod gaye the ussey................

Dutta turns around and glares hard at baji................he recalls how he had left nakku alone on that road after insulting her..............and without saying a word he leaves from there..............while baji stands there wishing nakku gets her due place in dutta's life soon..............

Its night and after everyone is asleep????u see dutta is still on the terrace and as the cool breeze blows across his face u see he is drinking????..

He recalls how he had snatched away naku's MS????..and wiped off the sindoor?????.(Dutta is in full regretting mode and angry on himself for behaving sooo harsh with naku????..)????..and in all the agitation he breaks the bottle?????..

His hand starts bleeding as he looks up at the moonlit night and recalls ?????.how the other day he had brought food for naku on the terrace to make her break her fast??????

Slowly he makes his way back into the hall????.and staggers into the kitchen his hand still bleeding????..

Inside u see he makes a plate ready with some food with one hand and carries it back into the hall????.up the stairs and into his room????..Jab se he had been back he had not taken a glimpse of naku?????and as he entered the room he finds nakku sitting in a corner of his room?????under the window dressed in a green saree????.leaning against the wall?????.and her head hidden in her arms which were placed across her knees?????..

A slight smile crosses his face and he feels relieved that nakku was there right in front of his eyes???.

Dutta reaches to where naku was and he recalls how she had hidden behind him when the goons fought with him???and after he was done dealing with them how naku had hugged her????

Dutt brings forward the plate and says----Yeh le??..

Naku looks up with a start and dutta is taken aback to see her eyes were swollen and red and still she was crying???seeing dutta there she quickly wipes away her tears and gets up???..

The two stand face to face and dutta notices nakku had no vermillion on and was not wearing the MS too????

Dutta keeps the plate on the near by table and says----Khana khaa ley naku???.beemar ho jaayegi???..

Naku remains silent????.

Dutta turns to leave???.and stops in between to turn and look at naku only to find she was looking out of the window????when all of a sudden the lights go off in the room????..there's a loud noise of breaking glass followed by naku's scream???..

Precap----Dutta holds naku by her shoulders as u see a crying nakku trembling with fear ????.to console her dutta embraces her face with his hands and as he moved his injured hand across her forehead???.the blood from his hand fills up naku's maang????and as naku keeps on crying???..Dutta stares at his blood on naku's forehead!................

Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 14 years ago

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kiran255

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Posted: 14 years ago

#236

Yes Yes yes

Again First one to comment

I was like why not Sheebu is updating The FF and

Bam u just did

SUperb Update

Dutta in angry avatar questioning baaji

and awesome reply from Baaji 😳

and when he recalling everything he feels so regretted 🥱

and taking food to her so sweet :P

and finally superb precap

i was sad that Dutta is bleeding

but now i know sheebu wont hurt Dutta

unless she know the gains

cant wait

update fast and a very happy MIshalicious New year :PPP

Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago

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Sophia Khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

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Hailaaa yeh kiran to bohut fast nikli,,, Im second yippie!

Awwww he comes home to find out nakku didnt eat for 2 days.. Im sooo happy baaji gave him a piece of his mind.. Gadha needed that jhatka... Hailaaaa... He hurt himself Even doe he deserves it, its still hurts to see him gettin hurt na?Awww he took food for her n haila she's been crying for whole 2 days? Ouch he must be feelin GUILTYYYY...

OMG Whats this? Lights off and glass break? is that a gunshot? ..

Precap is amazinggggg So he fills her maang unknowingly Even bappa wants him to accept her n gadha is acting all akdu ...Great update Sheebz... Continue soon

Happy New Year😃

Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago

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Khushi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#238

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Superbbb & very touching update dear........................

He came back home & find out that Nakku didn't eat anything from 2 days..................

Bajji gave him right answer..................... Dutta is regreting for what he did with nakku.............

Oh GOD he hurt his self....................... wow he took food for her & happy to saw her in front of his eyes.................... Oh GOD poor girl crying for 2 days.................. Dutta can see the pain in her eyes.................. He is guilty for his behaviour.......................

Amazing precape dear.......................... Plz update soon................................

Edited by khushi0318 - 14 years ago