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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys this is my first ever FF so sorry in advance if it's bad. the story is in English and the dialogues in Hindi, do mind my Hindi though coz im not very good as im not actually Indian so Hindi is not my mother tongue, im only doing it in Hindi coz I think it sounds better. hope u all like it.

this FF is a one shot and it's after naku's face revelation when Dutta has also confessed his love basically it's just something that I would like to see once they're settled in.

so here goes...


Naku comes out the bathroom wrapped in her towel without realising that Dutta was going to be there, she came out humming a song drying her hair. whilst Dutta was on his desk going through files. the humming had drawn Duttas attention and looked up, to his satisfaction it was none other than his beautiful wife MRS NAKUSHA DUTTA PATEL. his jaws dropped in awe, his eyes were popping out without a single blink and his heart was beating as fast as it could. when an idea cropped up in mind, he got up making sure Naku doesn't spot him, she had her back towards him and so she couldn't see him, Dutta trying to be all romantic was creeping up to her like a lion wanting to catch its prey. He grabbed her by the waist spinning her around aswell as making her scream which scared Dutta so he let her go making her loose her balance almost about to fall, but Dutta had caught her in his arms he help her up and couldn't get his eyes off of her. This made Naku blush and she turned to get away, but Dutta held her back and bought her close to him with her back towards him, he put his arms around her waist and lay his chin on her shoulder; he whispered in her ear.

Dutta: aaj to tum meri ho, main tumhe jane nahi dongi !

Naku: aicha, to yeh baat hai, teek hai aaj main sirf aap ka hoon lekin mujhe kapre to badalne do, varna

Dutta curious about this varna..

Dutta : varna, varna kya

Naku turned around making her wet hair spin and splash into Dutta's face.

Naku: varna, app mujhe hasil nahi kar payenge

With that she ran inside the bathroom and locked the door. Dutta got out a box from his cupboard and headed towards the bathroom door and knocked.

Dutta: Naku darvaza kolo mujhe tumse kuch dena hai.

Naku opened the door slightly to make sure this wasn't one of his tricks, Dutta was sitting on the bed, as soon as she opened the door he got up holding the box.

Dutta: idhar ao

Naku came out wearing a plain blue anarkali suit with her hair out by one side.

Dutta: apne hath do.

Naku followed his instructions and laid her hands out. Dutta gave her the box and asked her to open it. Naku opened the box, and inside was a gorgeous red saree with very little embroidery, it was the simplicity of the saree that caught Dutta's eye which is why he bought it for his simple but ever so beautiful wife.

Dutta: Naku, main chati hoon ki tum aaj yeh pehndo.

He then smiled at her and winked. Naku blushed and went in to the bathroom to change. Meanwhile Dutta was deciding what he should wear, he finally made a decision and took out a all black suit which he saved for a special occasion and was the special occasion.
After a short while Naku came out, she stood by the door, looking down. Her sari was pined up to one side flowing down one arm, her hair was down and all she was wearing was some kajal and eye liner nothing else, this is what Dutta loved about his wife she was so simple yet so beautiful. Dutta walked up to her not being able to get his eyes off her, he held her hand kissed it.

Dutta: tum bohot khoobsurat lagri ho.

With that he embraced her in to his arms.

Naku: aap bhi bohot handsome lagri hi ho.

She started giggling and Dutta joined in. he then lifted her up and headed towards the terrace where a candle light dinner was ready for two, Naku was overjoyed and gave a peck on the cheek to Dutta, this had added more fuel to his 'naughtiness' for the evening. They finished their dinner and were staring at the night sky together. Dutta got up and held Naku up too, so her back was facing him, he put his arms around her and held her tightly.

Dutta: Naku, uper yeh chand dekho, jabhi main chand ko dekta hoon toh mujhe tumhara yaad karti hoon kyunki tum chand se jesa pyara ho.
He then started singing.

Dutta: chandi hai tum, chandini mera, chand se…. errr

Dutta forgot the lines , which made Naku laugh a lot. Just then it started to rain, it got heavier so Naku ran for shelter but Dutta was still getting himself wet, he spread his arms out wide and shook his head taking in all the rain. He turned around signalling Naku to come and join him but she shook her head with a no. he then put his hand out asking for a dance, Naku signalled that there's no music ( this bit is just like kkhh scene where kajol and SRK dance in the rain). Dutta then showed he was playing kkhh on a piano then took out his phone from his pocket where the music was coming from. This made Naku laugh and she went in to join him. Dutta did the same moves as did shahrukh , he held her tightly and ran his fingers through her hair, he turned her round and wrapped his arm round her waist, with the other arm he moved her hair to oneside of her shoulder and kissed her neck, Naku became shy and turned to leave but he held on to her saree and pulled her back towards him and got her to face him, the two were lost in each other . Naku ran her fingers down down his face, Dutta took hold of her hand and kissed it, he leaned towards her and kissed her again but this time on the lips, this made Naku feel a strange tingle in her body and felt butterflies in her stomach. He then lifted her up and headed towards a sheltered area, where mats were laid down, with cushions and blankets. He lay her down and kissed her on the forehead then on the cheeks and finally her lips, their wet lips were locked together where both had entered in to a passionate kiss. Both hands were locked together, with his body over hers and a blanket covering the two.




please comment, i really want to know what you all think. 😊
Edited by meriyaar - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hw romantic....loved it ..loved their dance...can imagine the kkhh music and tasha dancing along...so cute😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dutta ne gaana chalu kiya aur lines hi bhul gaya. .................🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMg very romantic
i love it specially the part where he forget the line s
i love naughty Dutta
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Posted: 14 years ago
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How romantic.........😳.loved it.!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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so romantic n hot too.......loved it.......

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