FF - Ek Duje Ke Liye, Ch 35, pg47 updt on 15.12 - Page 17

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Dear Friends,
Thank you very much for your appreciation...I normally do not write about extreme anger or extreme hatred so in this FF you might be missing that...at the same time I must admit I love the way Mishal potrays his anger or frustrations. I also think that it is time that the CVs use Madhu, Bhau's other sister as a friend to bring her bhaiya and bhabi close together...after all, all sisters are not bad and they do love their brothers...
Chapter 18

Anna looked at the photographs, smiled and tapped on them then raised his face to look at his assistant…photo laya isiliye bach gaya, nehi toh aaj tereko mai gar deta seedha ei samundar pe…tu log itna baikauf kyu hai re…what was the need of chasing Dutta….theek hai he was without his usual security but that bugger drives a bullet proof vehicle. Ek baath janle Dutta had employed an ex army trainer to train him and his men…he and Bajirao each are equal to 10 of you..so dimag se kam le…jaida harbari nehi karke ka…waisa ich kuch jaida hi sukh raha hai Bagira….

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Dutta walked up and down his room, he was feeling a bit restless, it was Anna no doubt but then he did have few other enemies…with them it was a status quo situation as they were avoiding encroachment onto each other's territory, they were now clearly marked with invisible lines and rules…but was it Anna? Why did he attack me seeing me driving away…he should know he cannot catch me…what was he upto….he look out his kurta and wiped the sweat of his body with it before dropping it in the basket….with a drink of water he took out his shirt then he realized it has been quite sometime that he paid visit to some women…his latest one was quiet fond of him, she doubled up as his informer too …kya nam tha…cannot recollect…he bent to pickup his mobile, Bajirao must be watching his favourite horror movies, chal nikalte hai, nam se kya hoga jab pata pata hai…when his eyes fell on the photograph kept on his bedside table ….Nakusha…he dropped the phone on the bed and picked up the photograph, it seems she was unaware she was being clicked as it was a carefree pose, must be smiling to something her brother had said…….Dutta put up the photograph on the table but face down…switching off the light he lay down….kisne rakha yeh photo….Ayi Sahib ? Why is Ayi Sahib getting so desperate that she is going against her character…

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Ayi Sahib was cleaning Ganeshji's mandap in front of the lobby when Dutta came and showed her the photograph, you kept this photo next to my bedside table….

Ayi Sahib took a look and nodded her head in negation, nehi beta I don't go upto your room nowadays, Nakusha hai na I have told her to take care of your things….

Kyu Ayi Sahib ? Why do I feel you are pushing things a bit too much, you have asked for three months time and I have agreed to it didn't I….

Ayi Sahib looked up at the Ganesh idol briefly…beta what extra am I doing? As your wife she is expected to take care of your things, like your grandmother taught me when I came as a bride to this house…aur mera farz hai ki mai Nakusha ko bhi woh sikhayu….

You are forcing her to sleep in a room alone, Kala Tai was upset and that girl too….

Toh mai kya karu…tu apna kamra me rakhegi nehi usko and now that she is married it is 'apshagun' that she shares the room with her parents…so I deemed it fit to give her, her own room…

Maine aisi baath kabhi nehi suna….

Beta I cannot recollect you arguing with me like this before…there is a first to everything, pehle nehi suna, abh sun liya abh mujhe thora kaam karne de….

Dutta strode away and Leelavati moved behind the pillar….strange it is something she also never heard before…she has been married to one of Dutta's aides and like her elder sister she also stays in this house and till her son was born, she often slept with Ayi for she also did not like to sleep alone whenever Sudarshan happened to be on tour, which he mostly is taking care of Dutta's outstation work….Ayi never told her it was 'apshagun' then….

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Nakusha was changing water of the urns and putting fresh flower in vases when a pair of feet came and stood next to her, she turned her head a wee bit to let him know she is aware of his presence…he held the photograph in front of her and asked…Yeh photo tu ne mere bistar ke pass rakha?

Mera kya mati mari gayi thi…Nakusha promptly answered startling Dutta with her bold reply…..then she pulled the photo from his hand to look at it…waise yeh khicha kisne, I do not remember posing for one….

He pulled back the photo….tujhe mere se dar nehi lagta…he asked ….

She looked into his eyes and replied…pehle lagta tha abhi nehi….

Why so…he narrowed his eyes, he never knew he was losing some of his aura….

You are not interested in me so why should I be scared of you….she asked….

Mai tera…..

Nakusha…Nakusha ..Ayi Sahib was calling out for her….

Ji Ayi Sahib she jumped up to go upto the door leading to the hall…..

Go and call Dutta, tell him Sarpanchji alongwith some Panchayat Members have come to meet him….

Nakusha turned and looked at him…..He had heard his mother alright, putting the photo in his pocket he walked past her inside the hall…

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Baaji Rao watched Nakusha sitting on the steps with her hands on her knees, looking into the horizon…Bajirao liked the girl, looks to be honest inspite of having a joker like father, who is often found stealing bottles from the house bar…., her mother is ever grieving trying to control her husband, the sister ran away with the tutor and then sold to the flesh traders by the same tutor….not that Dutta Bhau does not know all these things but then when it comes to women except for his immediate family Dutta avoids getting attached emotionally….Bajirao could not blame Dutta…

Kyu re Vehini, kya baath, udas kyu baithi hai, Bajirao asked her….

Nakusha smiled at Bajirao…bus yuhi, nothing new …..

Bajirao felt a bit uneasy then gave her a return smile….dekh dil ka bura nehi hai, it is only he is a bit tough guy…

Nakusha nodded her head…..

He will come around don't worry….Baji added…Nakusha put fresh water in the urns…..I hope so Baji Bhau…see I am not worried for me, mera kya I never wanted to get married but think about my parents, Ayi's dreams will be shattered once again…

Oh lets not think too much…as Ayi Sahib says have trust in Bappa…Baji Rao turned to leave….

Baji Bhau, can I make you a request, Nakusha called out…

Bol Vehini…..

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Dutta looked at his mother….

Sarpanchji, please don't mind, Pandit said the date was auspicious and Dutta's stars were at the right position for marriage, I did not delay…sorry we could not invite you over….

Ayi Sahib we understand but then we want to celebrate as Bhau at last has got married so please allow us to organize what we have planned….

Abh…Ayi Sahib looked at Dutta….

Well Sarpanchji I do have some work here…let me get a few things organized….then me and…Na…I mean me and my wife will come and visit the village…

No no Bhau we have already organized certain things at the village, you are our pride, our protector, your ancestors belonged to our village, very few people remember their village when they grow big in the city, you have done so much for us, we understand Ayi Sahib's logic, shubh kam me deri nehi hona chahiye so we are sure you can spend a couple of days with us….

Ha Dutta I think they are being reasonable, idhar ka keya hai, chaltei hi rahega, it is not everyday you get married and the people of the village have the right to celebrate your marriage….

Dutta narrowed his eyes, he thought his mother spoke those words too hurriedly….

Sarpanchji we will go, I will take Dutta and Bahu, you arrange whatever you want to arrange…

Dutta opened his mouth and then closed it, Ayi did not wait for his decision…

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Posted: 14 years ago

👏👏👏god tin ah luv AS in ur FF she totali rox!!😆😆 sooo finali tasha gna b alne 4sum dayz wvowt eny of da ET cumn der way 😉😛😳 lol awhh baaji strtn 2 lyk naku (in a frndly way obvio😆) hmm wonda waw she gna ask im enwyz continue soon cnt wait nw rli xitd 😃 .xx

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awesome awesome update! hope to see some epic romance in the village😳 or at least a change of heart for Dutta 😆

can't wait till the next update!

Cheers!
~Naina
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Im 1000% sure that AS put that pic in Dutta's room loool😆
Woow she's doing her best 😉 .. He went to give it bak but kept it in his pocket lol😆
Aww Baaji is so sweeet, i wonder what Nakku will ask him..😕
Yaaay so if they go village for a while, they will have to share one room😉
Ab ayega Mazaa... 😆
Great... Continue soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
So Ayi saheb is sending Tasha for honeymoon to the village..........
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a place !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There Tasha will be fully dependent on each other..............
Luved the updt..........
Waiting for the nxt one..................
Plz hurry................
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update,i m loving dutta nakku interactin n nakku is so straight foward,way to go girl..........................😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

very nice update .... please update soon

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great update
waiting for next part 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.....so Dutta is pissed as Naku is not interested in him.....he's so stubborn.......Baaji was really cute......so TaSha going to village.....update soon......
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By this time I usually finish a story, but in this still now I could not bring the hero-heroine together, whats wrong with me grrrrrrrrrrr...

Chapter 19

Dutta opened his mouth and then closed it, Ayi did not wait for his decision…

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Anna and his men were sitting and drinking with all the photographs of Nakusha, Sethji, Baji rao on the beach scattered on the table…Anna was studying them over and over again, making comments on which his men were rolling with laughter…

Eyebrows, lagta hai bechari ke locality me beauty parlour nehi tha…aajkal aisa eyebrow , paisa ki kami..bechari who would also like to sleep with a girl like this….

Isiliye Dutta has got married to her, humlog nazaar na dale us par..Anna broke into a laughter enjoying his own joke…very funny …abh usse yeh pata nehi hona chahiye that we are eyeing his not to beautiful wife nevertheless….followed by another round of laughter…they came across a photograph of Dutta leaning against bonnet….

Dekh Dekh no change even after marriage….hmm…maybe he still cannot bring himself to make love to his 'beautiphool wife'…bechara still looks sex starved….His men laughed dutifully on his joke once again….

The mobile rang, Anna frowned the no. was unknown and that too on his unlisted no…it stopped and started ringing once again…

Abeh kaun? Anna answered the third time…

Listen I am calling from a telephone Booth, Bagira is going to his village with his newly married wife and family to take part in his marriage celebration…mai kehta hu, this is the opportunity as he will let his guards down thinking that is his secured territory, udhar uska kya hoga….

Kab nikal rahe hai….

Bagira does not disclose his plans in detail but soon it seems as all the cars etc are being checked and overhauled…

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Kalavati stormed out of her mother's room….aisa kya baath hai Ayi that you are indulging in the whims of the villagers, areh Bhau is yet to accept that woman as his wife and now you want us to go to the village and take part in celebration…kuch jaida hi nehi ho rahe hai…

Kala yeh ghar ka baath hai….why should I tell them this….

And what explanations will you give when she goes away after three months….

Ayi Sahib narrowed her eyes…are you wanting her to go away, Ayi Sahib said a bit sternly…

Kala was taken aback for a moment….don't you know Bhau….

Like always Dutta has agreed to adhere to his mother…..Ayi Sahib replied firmly…

Kala stormed out…

Ayi Sahib flopped on the chair….tears rolled down her eyes….hey Bappa yeh kaisa karishma hai tera…how many tests do you want me to undergo….mai thak chuki hu…..when will Kala learn to appreciate and accept…Ayi Sahib closed her eyes to see in front of the eyes of her and her children, her husband, their father being pushed to death….she knows Kala being the eldest was hit the most….

Kala was unable to accept the change of their lifestyle, she refused to face the reality…Ayi Sahib was too busy making a living then to pay too much attention to Kala….Dutta being the next one, understood his mother's grieve and from a very young age he acted as the man of the house, trying to earn more and be very protective about his sisters…Kala was still not happy…Leela did what Kala asked her to do only Roop who at times tried to understand her mother if she was not too much misled by her elder sisters…

Now it is too late, Ayi Sahib can see Kishore is suffering…at times she had mildly suggested to Kishore that earlier I could not take her to psychologist, utna paisa nehi tha….do you think we should get some help for her….Kishore replied, I doubt if she will go now Ayi Sahib and now she should change…what more can a woman want, a loving mother, caring brother, obedient sisters, beautiful daughter…she has everything, she should now only learn how to accept and love…ek dhakka chahiye jo uski dimag thikane pe laga dega….

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Dutta watched Bajirao running up and down supervising the loading of the cars, his whole family would be travelling including his sisters and their husbands except for Nakusha's parents and brother, they would stay back looking after the house ….what will they do in the village of their son-in-law. Dutta asked Bajirao to lock the Bar up and take the keys with him, nehi toh wapis akar pura khali milega….

Listen everybody, we will be travelling all together and nobody will stop the car and divert to some other route on their own….humlog ek saath chalenge, ek saath rukenge….you all will follow my car…..Bajirao shouted his instructions when Dutta looked at his watch…they should start now, it is a long journey ahead…

Roops see what is keeping Ayi Sahib and that girl…I mean Nakusha…he turned to his sister…when he noticed his Ayi & Nakusha coming….Nakusha wearing a sari alright but nauvari, the traditional way, with a nath and flowers around her hair, some traditional jewelleries…

Yeh aisa clown bankar kaha ja rahi hai Ayi Sahib….Dutta frowned asking his mother…

Beta this is our tradition, respect it, infact when I went first to the village with your father I was also dressed like this….Ayi Sahib replied brightly…

Dutta raised his eyes, tabh aur abh…

Tradition is tradition lekin ek baath mujhe achhi lagi that you are noticing her….Ayi Sahib whispered at Dutta….Dutta looked away…his sisters were giggling amongst themselves…he stood looking displeased

Roop tu hamare saath aja…Ayi called out…her sisters wanted to prevent her but knowing Roop she will miss a chance to travel with Baji….Roop jumped to sit in the front seat ….

Areh mai kya peechhe baithunga…..Datta asked….

Ha ha Dutta baith ja …ageh change kar lena, lamba safar hai….Ayi Sahib got in at the back seat followed by Nakusha…

Nakusha was looking behind, trying to control her tears as the car drove out of the gates of Patil Niwas, watching her family waving to her, she was waving them back….

Yeh abhi theek se baith, samne dekh, waise bhi they cannot see you through the dark glass Dutta informed her irritatedly…she made a face and leaned towards Ayi Sahib's window to tap to her brother who was running with the car, be good I will be back soon…

Did you check her birth certificate …Dutta asked his mother softly….she behaves like a kid …..Ayi Sahib concealed her smile and turned her face away… Dutta turned to watch the city outside….as they drove he watched the city waking up, standing in the queue to use the public toilet…Dutta sighed yes he too rose from here, many do but most of them get misled and fall down once again…because of Ayi, he has been able to able to hold himself…

He felt a weight on his shoulder, turning he saw Nakusha fallen asleep, he looked at his Ayi, she too was sitting with her eyes closed…Nakusha's head was wobbling a bit, he watched her with hooded eyes and then raised his arm a bit so that her head could be steady…he looked out once again they will hit the highway any moment….

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Bagira has left his den…..

Anna smiled, don't worry, the lion has reached and already marking his territory…I will welcome him with full honour….

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Bhau..Bhau Bajirao called out…Dutta opened his eyes blinked a couple of times to get back his orientation and then saw Nakusha snuggled in his chest, sleeping to her heart's content….areh uth, kya kumbkarn ki tara sowti rehti hai…..Dutta shook her….

Areh rehne de…bechari raath ko theek se nehi sowti hai na…Ayi sahib commented….

Uff Ayi….my arm has gone cramped…..Nakusha opened her eyes as Dutta shoved her, getting down swinging his arm …they were at a tea stall, Bajirao ordered tea for all, Nakusha watched Dutta walking up and down the road, his eyes sharp and scanning….

What is he looking out for, Nakusha asked ….

Enemies, escape routes….Ayi Sahib replied….

Nakusha remembered the beach incident….Can't he ever sit still….

Ayi Sahib sighed….she watched everybody relaxing chatting, drinking tea but her son standing watching, observing…..protecting his family….

He came and leaned against the car…the boy came with tea and served them, he picked up a glass, holding it watching it….Nakusha held hers, she looked around, everybody was having except him, her throat was dry..she looked towards Ayi Sahib….kya huwa pi…Ayi Sahib urged…

Naku lowered her gaze, swallowing ….

Tujhe toh chai bahut pasand hai….Ayi Sahib continued….Naku looked towards Dutta….Ayi Sahib's gaze followed hers….

Dutta take a sip please otherwise Nakusha cannot take her tea….

Dutta turned looking a bit taken aback then he took a sip….with the corner of his eyes, he saw Nakusha following him…inspite of not wanting he finished the whole glass…the tea was good he thought….

He did not object when Roops went to sit in the front…as they took their respective seat, he stared at Nakusha, she held his gaze for few seconds and lowered her eyes, he put his arm behind her back over the seat like before looked outside….after sometime he felt the familiar weight on his arm….

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He has arrived with his whole family…yes his wife could not be seen but there was somebody sitting inside the car as they were serving tea and snacks, a hand with green glass bangles were also seen accepting the tea….

Anna disconnected the phone…poor man with an ugly wife, chhupa ke rakhna parta hai….is it a good plan to kidnap his wife?? What if he attacks Dutta directly…Anna asked himself again but …Dutta is very possessive about his family, he has been ditched twice and it is his weak spot and while Dutta's family member are generally cautious as they know what entails living with him, the new bride may not be…..thora tarpana parega, he chased me out of Mumbai, I had to start from scratch once again…itna jaldi usko kyu chhor du??

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A man was sitting and drinking tea in a dhaba outside the village, he saw the cars zooming past, yeh kaun minister a rahe hai he asked the dhaba owner casually….

Minister nehi bhau…hamare bhau a rahe hai, Dutta Bhau, he is bringing his newly married wife to be introduced to us and take blessings from the village temple…..The man sat still, so the news was correct…he finished the tea quickly, got up keeping a note next to the glass, not bothering to wait for the change…

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