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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: vikaluvsmish
Suvi so glad she escaped.. no no chapals at u.thank you. I know she will meet her saab soon, besides u can't let her have the baby by herself.. her saab has to be there.......umm i don't know....... awesome update! thanx for the PM:) thanks and ur welcome😊

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15
nice update thanks
hw sweet of leela bai 2 help her escape

hpe they anna's men dnt run after her! no they won't

she shud rest n hpe thm ashram ppl r genuine they are

plz reunite tasha soon n b4 the baby is born hmmm...maybe

tc😊

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: suhana19
Hey Suvi thanx for the wonderful update and PM🤗ur welcome😳Wow naku finally escaped with help of leela bai....Awww she got shelter in ashram...btw where is dutta ?...he better have good explanation for not coming yet .he does!....i want him near naku when baby is born,,,ok fine ,pls let tasha meet soon ....pls jaldi update karna... u take care and see u around 👍🏼👏🤗

Thanks and tc🤗

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mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#264

suvi hun awsum update..thnx 4 pm..continu soon n plz reunitz tasha soooon..misin im.xx

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557451

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

Originally posted by iluvltsl

that was nice suvi thnx but im throwing chappals at u i thought they were gonna meet so how long will it take till she finalu=y meets him plz tell him nd thnx again

good one, suvi ko chappal saroorat hai, lol 😆 jkes suv, we love u, i too want them to meet soon...

i know right i think we should do it together throwing chappals at her lol jkes suvi u know i was kidding

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Posted: 14 years ago

#266

@Jess, Sani

Thank you so much

and Sani you know why I cant write a long one...but the short one today means another one tomorrow, ok

ok suvi thnx thats awesome

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#267

@Missy

thanks

@Sani

Get the chappals ready lol I think that u'll throw them at me after next part😆

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#268

Lost Love Part 19

Sorry for the delay. I was going to end this ff differently, with a lambi judai of about two years😆 Actually, Baji was going to be in coma for really long, and Suds was meant to have proved that Naku was dead. Dutta was supposed to leave dongiri, and open a humble business along with Baji and Madhu. Naku was going to PN after the birth of her daughter, but she met Kala who told her that Dutta had married Seema as he presumed she was dead and was living happy life, and that her meeting him would wreck his life. After two years she accidentally meets Dutta and finds out Kala had been lying and TaSha live happily ever after...

But now I have changed the story...made it shorter...and this is the last part of Lost Love...Enjoy!

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She had never expected the birth of her child to be like this. She had thought that Dutta would be beside her, holding her hand, comforting her but instead she got the reassurance of Sunaina, the girl in the hut next to hers. As the child first cries came out, Naku tried to banish thoughts of Dutta and concentrate on this new bundle of joy that she was responsible for. She lifted her hands, and took the child from the nurse. "Its a girl!" she said, cradling the angel in her arms.

"Nakusha..." a familiar but unexpected voice called.

Naku gave the baby to the nurse and struggled to get up, so that she could see the source of the voice.

"Naku, don't get up" he said.

"Saab?" Naku couldn't stop the tears from falling out of her eyes.

"Nakusha!" Dutta came up to her and embraced her, "Tum kahaan thi?"

"I was here, at the ashram...."

"Why didn't you call me?"

"I did, every day, but then some girl would pick up and say wrong number"

"Naku...I missed you so much"

Naku sobbed in his chest, holding him tightly as if he would disappear into thin air.

"When I went home, Anna's men tried to attack everyone at the mandir again. Baji got shot..."Dutta sighed, looking down, dissapointed by himself that he couldn't take care of his best friend.

"What?"

"He is fine now, but at that time he was in a critical condition, he went in coma for two weeks. Naku, I was broken, I lost you and I thought I was going to lose Baji as well. I told Suds to continue searching for you but he found nothing. Then one day, he found a corpse, the face was disfigured but the girl had the same small figure like you, and was wearing that bracelet that you were wearing the day that we went to Shimla."

"Huh...oh yes, that bracelet got stolen when I was at the factory"

"Nakusha, when Baji's friend told me he had spotted you here, you can't imagine how I felt....I thought that a void in me was going to be filled."

"Shh...saab...forget old matters, you found me now. And looke, its a baby girl, you wanted a girl na?"

"What shall we name her?"

"Hmm Divya kaise rahega?"

"Nahi, I like Naina"

"Mmm...Ashita?"

"Yes...Ashita is a nice name"

"Ghar jaake we will tell AS and organise the naam karan ceremony"

"I miss everyone so much, Madhu, Baji, AS. Waise Baji abhi puri tarah se theek....."

"The wound is still there, but he has gained conciousness, bolna band hi nahi karta hai ab"

"Pehle kab karta tha jo ab karega?" Naku chuckled.

The nurse came back with Ashita wrapped in a pink blanket. "Poochie woochie jao mummy ke paas" The nurse kissed Ashita on the cheek and handed her over to Naku. Naku lovingly caressed Ashita's soft skin.

"Kitni choti hai" Dutta whispered.

"Do you want to hold her?"

"Me?"

"Yes, afterall you are the father"

Dutta hesitantly held Ashita, awed by her cute smile. Ashita gurgled something in baby language and tightened her hold on Dutta's thumb.

"Dekho, she is holding my hand!"

Naku laughed and leaned on Dutta's shoulder.

"Bhaoo! The car is ready, Vahini ko lekar chalein?" the driver yelled from outside the room.

"Can you go? Or should we wait for a while until you can travel?"

"No, I cant wait a single moment to go back home"

"Ok fine, chalo" Dutta helped Naku to her feet and placed Ashita in her arms. They walked hand in hand, to their home. This time there would be no separations and no tears, well only ones of happiness. It would be a fresh start, to a new life, together.

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A big thanks to all the people🤗, silent readers included, who read, commented, and wasted their time reading my bakwaas😆

Sorry that around the last few parts, I haven't written very well, because I have kind of been getting bored of this story😆

BTW I am thinking about writing a new ff, but I don't know whether to write a Baji one or a TaSha one...

Love,

Suvi🤗

Edited by Suvi7884 - 14 years ago

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Sophia Khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#269

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Finally you updated... To the update... Hailaa lambi judai of 2 years, you're lucky u didnt write that overwise my danda was ready to find u.. ARGH, Kala telling Nakku about Dutta and Seema.. Eww no way.. Ahh Suvi ur indeed lucku u didnt take the story dat way ...

Now to the original update .... Haiiiiii... a baby girl... achhoochi pouchhii *pulls cheeks* haila its a new born init my bad lol... Wait.. Wait.. Dutta It's DUTTA Its really him He Cameeeeee ... OMG Finally, awwwww the Milan was so emotional <-- Khushi ki aansoo.. Awww .. Hailaaa my baaji got shot? *Sophia shoots the person who shot baaji* How dare they shoot my jaan?... Oh so baaji's friend saw nakku... Baaji's friend ki Jai Ho... Ashita... Acha naam hain.. .. Sigh..the way he held his bby girl for the first time n she held his finger... So emotional... Im happy he came on the same day the bby is born... ... He didnt miss anything... Finally a happy ending with a happy family. ...

this was the last part na? Me sad now ... So ur thinkin to start a new ff.. hmmm i think u sud do both TaSha romance n Baaji with someone romance.. bechara needs someone as well na? So u can put a new character for him

N ur update aint bakwas... chup .. Anyway thanks for a wonderful FF and the pm..

Sorry Essay bangaya lool... Start your new one soon n don't forget to update Rollercoaster lol ... Take care

Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: Sophia21
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Finally you updated... To the update... Hailaa lambi judai of 2 years, you're lucky u didnt write that overwise my danda was ready to find u.. I am glad I didn't take the story that way too....bachgayi tere dande se😆ARGH, Kala telling Nakku about Dutta and Seema.. Eww no way.. Ahh Suvi ur indeed lucku u didnt take the story dat way ...

Now to the original update .... Haiiiiii... a baby girl... achhoochi pouchhii *pulls cheeks* haila its a new born init my bad lol... Wait.. Wait.. Dutta It's DUTTA Its really him He Cameeeeee he had to, warna I would get ur chappals and danda😆... OMG Finally, awwwww they Milan was so emotional <-- Khushi ki aansoo.. Awww .. Hailaaa my baaji got shot? *Sophia shoots the person who shot baaji* lol can I join you in shooting that person? How dare they shoot my jaan?... Oh so baaji's friend saw nakku... Baaji's friend ki Jai Ho... Ashita... Acha naam hain.. thanks.. Sigh..the way he held his bby girl for the first time n she held his finger... So emotional... Im happy he came on the same day the bby is born... ... He didnt miss anything ... Finally a happy ending with a happy family. ...

this was the last part na? Me sad now ... So ur thinkin to start a new ff.. hmmm i think u sud do both TaSha romance n Baaji with someone romance.. bechara needs someone as well na? So u can put a new character for him mm I will do that for Rollercoaster, but the idea I have, Baji isn't included in the ff and for the Baji one..its not really an ff, its just Baji scenes

N ur update aint bakwas... chup .aww thanks. Anyway thanks for a wonderful FF and the pm..ur welcome

Sorry Essay bangaya lool.koi baat nahi..I appreciate long comments😆.. Start your new one soon n don't forget to update Rollercoaster lol .of course.. Take care

Thanks Sophia, for reading and commenting

take care🤗

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