FF: BLOODTIES (Updated Pg 44) - Page 16

Originally posted by: --Saaki--

Jessica...............Sorry for the late 😳 .All the parts are very well written,fetched & tracked...........

Loved the last part the most...............

Looking for more from you..................

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Intezaar ka phal meeta hota hai............

Simply gr8!!!!!!!!!! No words So Dutta accepted his siterr. Their convo and dialogues were simply out of this world.

I think now Madhu will take Dutta and Baaji with some or the other pretext to her hous where Dutta-Nakku-Baaji will cum face to face. Just waiting forthenoxt update. Plzzzzzzzzz do it sooooon jst cant wait...........

Originally posted by: vaniabi

hey really great update dear.......................i enjoyed baji's attitude towards dutta n their frienship too, baji was really a gift for dutta by god n finally.................finally ......................... dutta met madhu................wow!!!!!!!!!!!! superbbbbbbb n madhu😆 bak!!!!!!! bak!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! n dutta reaction for that was really funny.................. am waiting for tasha meeting dear.........................update ASAP........................

Originally posted by: akkybaby

wooooow awesome lovable and cute update .......

loved the bro-sis conversation ..........

and ofcourse baaji reaction over this and his snorting....

loved it a lot .............

pls update next one soon ............

can't wait long for that ........

Originally posted by: isatb

hey Jess......how r u???

Wow the update.....was awesome........

Awww the brother-sister convo was adorable.........

Madhu is such a chatter box.....lol.....she is not even allowing Dutta to speak a word.......

Y is Baji snorting so much......😆

Someone tell him that Madhu is vry dangerous.....she can even pull Baji's nose out....😆

Awwww the hug was also so cute........

Loved this part......only coz of.........the bro-sis convo........

thanx for the pm Jess....

waiting for the nxt part..........

Originally posted by: swati2008

awesome update..........loved it........so Tasha going to meet.........dnt make Naku forgive Dutta so easily............update soon........

Originally posted by: sonee

hiee jessi

baaji is ttoo good man...really true friend...even datta cant stop his smile😊

awesome interaction of madhu n datta...wow luved it

so nice convo... n luv evey bit😆 amazing she is soo bubly type behave in front of her elder bro😃 ohh baaji cant take off his eyes hun😳 n snorting😆 he dont knw who is she 😲 plz tell him she know martial arts😉...aakhir DSP ki sis he😉 ohh so nice sis datta hv ....so she ready to enter in paagal niwas😆

hope tasha meet soon😳

awesome update jessi🤗

hey guys am so happy with the review ull gave in the last chapter ...am really glad you'll enjoyed their convo😳..am updating the next part and i hope you'll enjoy this part too

part6-pg 16

Madhu sat side of dutta while baji sat at the back..dutta turned towards madhu..so where is this place you are staying'madhu gave him the address and dutta started the car..wanting to know more about madhu he asked her who is this friend of yours you are staying with..a beautiful smile bloomed on madhu's face when she said the name atharva.

From that day I and atharva are always together'fifteen years have passed in our friendship..he took my responsibility whenever dad was busy..although now he has gone to delhi..he will be back after two months..he will be so happy to meet you..but be careful he might not be so happy to share..and saying so she giggled.

After a few moments of silence madhu continued..the last 3 months I had made another friend.. a girl..well you could say atharva one day just brought her home..as she was unconscious..dutta looked at madhu and said it is not safe to trust stranger who knows what she is capable of

Dutta tensed up..and madhu unknown to the reactions she was getting (or was she😉) continued..atharva got angry and he and some of his men killed that person along with his goons..atharva brought the girl home while two of our men took that guy to the hospital.

Hearing the name..for a moment he lost control over the wheel and the jeep skid some distance..immediately he applied the breaks and stop the car..oye madhu screamed at him..are you planning to go and meet my father in heaven..be careful yaar.

Madhu continued on her rant..i don't know how but naku just made a place in mine and atharva life..in beginning she was quiet..but then slowly she started opening up..she rarely spoke about her past but I cant blame her considering even I never told her anything about me'after atharva she is my second best friend.

They finally reached atharva's house..and madhu turned to dutta and said I am going to call naku..am warning you in advance be ready for the blasting you will get..because she is not at all happy with you as you had turned your back to me..and giggling madhu stepped out of the car running to call naku.

Dutta saw that in the corner of the room there were photographs displayed..he went over there..most of the photos were of madhu and some guy whom dutta recognised as atharva..his eyes fell on the photo where madhu was eight years and she was on the back of a sixteen year boy..dutta knew that madhu n atharva were real close..then he saw another photo of madhu and atharva grown up..atharva was wearing a suit while madhu was wearing a beautiful Champaign colour gown..both looking a lovely pair'dutta was sure this was the time when they were in London.. suddenly his eyes fell on the photo where his nakusha was.

Dutta smiled at the photos as there were many photos of his sister in most funny positions..and atharva's face looked as if he was hoping he didn't know the girl..suddenly dutta could hear madhu voice heading towards the room telling someone that she wanted her to meet her brother..and as they entered the room finally dutta came face to face with naku.

But naku tried to say..madhu stopped her and said no buts..come now..and she dragged naku with her..arey one minute let me take my dupatta..naku said..naku was wearing that lovely white anarkali dress and her hair was left..she allowed madhu to drag her to the living room and looking up she just stopped as she finally came across the face that came in her dreams the last 3 months..

Dutta could not believe his eyes when he saw his nakusha..she was looking as lovely as an angel in that dress of hers..and the lovely shade of pink on her cheeks made her look even more enchanting to him..all he wanted to do was gather her in his arms and hug her tight to him..so that never anyone could separate her from him..he called her name naku.. awakening her from her trance..when without warning she turned and ran from there..without thinking dutta too ran behind her.

Madhu was also stunned to see both of them running from there and as she turned to go behind them..baji held her arm and stopped her..dont follow them..he said..madhu looked at him confused do they know each other ..baji looked at her and said yes..nakusha is dutta's wife..what madhu exclaimed shocked..baji told her everything what happened 3 months back.

Madhu held baji hand and said you are not weak..no man weapon less can fight against so many men..when atharva attacked them he had weapon and also support of his men..he didn't save you'll alone..you should not blame yourself for things which is out of your hands..why don't you see the good side of everything that happened..my brother has realised the problems nakusha has gone through..never again will he allow her to move away from him..he has realised your importance too.

absolutely speechless i am.. totally stunned after reading how dutta and nakku laid eyes on each other.. loved it loved it loved it😛 i could just visualise nakku in white anarkali, hair loose, dragged in by madhu and getting the shock of her life seeing D there.. at least D was forewarned! but still seeing her after 3 months must have been magical.. and LOVED the way naku fled from there and even better that Dutta follwed her!!