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Posted: 14 years ago
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chapter 5
da girls luks at da door dutta has left frm she stays seated 4 a while she luks apphrehensivly at da toast wondering weather 2 eat or nt she takes a small bite and swallows eventually she eats both slices frm da plate afta she is finished she gets up and luks around slowly taking small steps walking around cautiously she didnt knw why but she cudnt help shivering nt dat it was cold dis place had an eerie feeling 2it she cuddled herself wid her arms da sound of her anklet cud be heard as she walked studying everything as she approched a table der was a churidar on it she luked around again b4 picking it up on da side der was a note which sed aap key liya she found it odd as she continued 2 stare at it had he left it 4 her but why she cudnt help but feel uneasy she luked dwn at her clothes and thought 2 change she headed up da stairs luking into every room sum revealed bedrooms one door she had tried opening but it was locked finally she opened da door 2 da bathroom and entered it closing da door behing her
eventually she came out wearing da suit her hair dripping wet she drapped da duppata around her chest and held onto it wat was she 2 do nw she wondered she walked bk dwn da stairs and sat on da floor waiting mrning passed so did afternoon eventually night settled dwn she waited 4 ages 4 sum sign as 2 wat 2 do but nothing she must have dozed off as she woke wid a start wat was dat she thought she gt up and stood listening again it sounded like music she followed da direction it was cuming frm a figure was sat on da piano wid der bk 2 her and was singing playing da piano she listened nt disturbing dem
jeeta ta jis ley liyeh
kis key kiya mar ta ta
jeeta ta jis key liya
jis key liya mar ta ta
ek aisey ladki ti
jisey mein pyaar kar ta
ta ek aisey ladki ti jisey mein
pyaar karta ta
*da figure starts playing da piano 2 da lyrics they have just sung*
da girl moves near da figure cautiously trying 2 see who it is but cant as its dark she carries on listening 2 da pain filled song
ankhoon sey behtey hain aansoon
jab yaad atey hain wohhhh
jab yaad aatey hain wohh
kaisey bataoon jaakey mein usko
kitna satatatey hain wohhhh
kitna satatey hain wohhhh
pareshan hoon mein key miley gi mujhey woh
kahannnnnnn
ek aiseyyy ladkiii ti jisey mein
pyaar karta ta ek aisey ladki ti
jisey mein pyaaaarrrrrrr
*again da piano is heard playing 2 da lyrics which are being sung again*
till silence overcums around da girl cums out of her thoughts and luks bk at da piano she realises tears have dropped out of her eyes she wipes dem away and approches da figure a bottle is shown near da piano as da girl stops near da piano infrnt of da figure who has passed out a dim light i shown on da figure da girl luks in shock and suprise it was dutta who had bin singing and playing da piano da screen freezes on da girls suprised face
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

sana .... so sweet of you for the precap.....👏👏👏👏👏

now i'm even more eager for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sana great part hope now the girl understands dutta and he is good,will be waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: bfunofbb123

AWW sana ur update is awesome i can't tell u aww too many suspense dutta is drinking in the morning but finally he spoke to the girl he is such a sweat heart caring he is offering her breakfast naku MU him. love it sana u r too good by the pre -cap it soundes dutta been devdas lakta hai he lost s/one spsl & too painful 4 him he needs s/one to take him out of the grave who better than our naku. well done girl u keep us in suspense and u don't know how greedy fans u have we want more tanx 4 pm dear eagerly waiting 4 ur update.😉

awww thnk u ur sooo sweet😳😃i dnt mind having greedy fans at all 😆 btw no need 2 thnk me over da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: shallymann

sana .... so sweet of you for the precap.....👏👏👏👏👏

now i'm even more eager for next part

no probs i didnt mind posting it glad u liked it😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: spandana11

sana great part hope now the girl understands dutta and he is good,will be waiting for next part

hey sparkle glad u liked da update😃aghhh but der is mre suspence as usual 2 understand feeling emotions and da story😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
awesum FF Basanti...am totally njoying reading it...😉...
Dutta's all mysterious...😳...
wonder wat the deal is here...😛...
look 4ward 2 nex upd8...😃...mwah...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: jani-yeh

awesum FF Basanti...am totally njoying reading it...😉...

Dutta's all mysterious...😳...
wonder wat the deal is here...😛...
look 4ward 2 nex upd8...😃...mwah...

okkk dharmooo im telling u wat i am doing nw kasam i am laughing my head off🤣arey wah kya baat hain mainey kaha aur tumney manliya😕😆why ff u dharmoo glad u think so i knw he is da deal is chal u gnna have 2 read further but it is differnt 2 all da other ff's even i am luking foward2 da next part i am hooked 2 seriously😆thnk u 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so guys i hope u liked both updates as i surely enjoyed writing and reading dem 2😆so dat was ur double doze 4 da weekend and by weekend i mean da weekend in nearly finshed once again thnk u 4 ur lovely comments nw mein araam kartey hoon till da next update😆😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana786a

okkk dharmooo im telling u wat i am doing nw kasam i am laughing my head off🤣arey wah kya baat hain mainey kaha aur tumney manliya😕😆why ff u dharmoo glad u think so i knw he is da deal is chal u gnna have 2 read further but it is differnt 2 all da other ff's even i am luking foward2 da next part i am hooked 2 seriously😆thnk u 😃

tum kaho aur main na manoo...😲...aisa bhi kabhi ho sakta hain...😆...
vaise...read further huh...😕...i shud b allowed 2 get a few inside facts n a lil of the storyline...after all im dharmoo ryt...😈😆...haan diff tho zaroor hain...no need 4 tnx...😆😆...

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