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Posted: 14 years ago
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chapter 4
its morning nw birds can be heard singing da girl wakes up wid a start luking around da dull lit room looking around at everything she manages 2 get up and takes a few steps foward an echo of footsteps is heard da girl luks in da direction of da noise seems 2 be cuming frm da stair case she luks as she see's dutta aproching she moves bk a bit wid fear in her eyes and keeps her eyes fixed on him again he is seen in a suit he dsnt pay attention 2 her instead walks over 2 da dining table and sits dwn da girl luks around un easily nt knwing wat 2 do dutta is seen eating sum toast quietly and on da table is another bottle of alchol da girl luks afraid at dis behaviour he seems like a quiet bloke but drink at dis hour as nt gud suddenly fear overcame her again a bloke who drinks at dis hour kaisa hoga as she is thinking all sorts dutta speaks
tum waha karahey rahogey ya kuch kana bhi chahogey da girl cums out of her thoughts and luks at him frozen 2 da spot dutta widout luking at her dwns da glass in one shot saying in a quiet but authority voice suna nahin mainey kaha kuch kanah chogey nahin he luks at her den studying her as he dwns another glass she dsnt move he gets up den making her tremble and walks near her slowly her eyes pop out wide at him he notices he stops near her again like last night she can smell da alchol on his face she tries covering herself wid da duppata and hides her face wid it like last night only her eyes r shown again he luks in dem and sed bhook nahin hain kya he moves 2 da side and signals 2 da table waiting 4 her she luks at him 4 a moment nt knwing wat 2 do she luks around da room which he notices
dutta walks bk 2 da table and pulls out a chair da girl slowly walks near da dining table nt taking her eyes off him she trips at one point and gasps out loud managing 2 grab da table b4 she can fall he can sense her being uneasy he moves away as she slowly sits on da chair he walks over 2 da other side which he was sat on and brings sum toast 4 her in a plate all da while nt taking his eyes off her she gulps in fear and cluthches her duppata tightly he puts da plate dwn whilst saying kana kaisey kao gey agar duppata mo par hain he walks away frm her and sit bk in his chair he watches her wid his hands folded making her uneasy even mre she luks around and den bk again she can feel his eyes on her again he speaks sunah nhain duppata sey apna chehra kyun chupa rahey hoon kana nahin kana hain kya she slowly lets go of da duppata and reaches out 4 da toast her hands trembling he luks at her one mre time bk getting up she luks at him fearfully instead he walks away she watches him go as he leaves da house she lets go of da toast and sighs deeply cuddling herself wid her arms wat was she doing here who is he and why is he behaving so oddly wid her she wondered at thinknig dat she started 2 shake her gaze fixed 2 da door dat he had left through
Edited by sana786a - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

hey...sana awesome part yaar🤗 finally datta😍 open his mouth n sum dialouge😃

wow....hey still cliffhanger not over sweety....😆 wanna more 😆 so update karoooooooo
jaldi😆 ok jking tk ur time n update
thnx 4 pm sweety.....ur FF is damn interesting👍🏼
Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
sana 🤗finished reading all parts awesome ,too good jaldi next part update kare,poor girl make her to come out of tension first
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey great update yaar.............really u maintain the suspense abt dutta.............n he drunk all the while it's not juice 😆 na it's alcohol na.............wat's the reason behind dutta's behavior........ waiting for that.............looking fwd...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
sana very nice FF keep writing and update soon and thanks for the PM and datta is living alone and drinking 24/7😒
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG gal u r genious awsum jst catchd all ur parts meanz u r mind blowing zabardast kya likhti ho *muah* jst luvd every line every part keep updating yaar👏⭐️🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sana..... awesome yaar..... enjoying it .... next part quickly dear can't wait ....

if possible add precap😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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tahreem walakum salaam aww thnks sweetie glad u liked da update and u r nt a silent reader anymre welcum😃
ltlim glad u liked da updates😃zyaada demanding nope u r nt demands karo aur mein abhi samaan band kar baag jaatey hoon one minute😆naaaa im only messing demand all u want i dnt mind
bfunofbb123 aww thnks sweetie glad u think so😃yeh nt gnna introduce dem alll otherwise mein bore ho jaon gi😆
amirkhanfan thnk u 😃
suhana aww thnnks sweetie glad u likeda new ff ur soo sweet🤗
vasantimrao thnks sweetie😃
duttanaku aww thnks sweetie ur my ff frm da b4 ff awww sooo sweet hpe u like da rest updates😃
vaniabi glad u like da ff😃 dutta has nt brought her 2 pn like in da serial no members of da serial except baaji is in dis forum
akkybaby thnk u sweetie😃
sonee aww thnku glad u liked da update🤗yeh left it at a cliffhanger kya karo😆no u can demand me 2 update soon glad u like da ff
sparkleeeeeeeeeee🤗awww thnk u glad u liked da ff😃i will do as soon as i can
vaniabi glad u liked it😃yeh it was alchol😆
sasha1glad u liked da update😃no need 2 thnk me over da pm i knw he is alone and drinking dnt be sad hope u likda da rest 2
sia thnk u 😃
nimmo aww ur 2 sweet u think i am a genious😳😆aww i wish den merey kitabi publish ho jatey i love reading and writing so im glad u think so😃🤗
shallyman thnk u 😃a precap i will see and den add it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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precap
its night time music is heard and a piano is heard playing 2 a song is sung by someone da girl listens in suprise and walks in da direction da music is cuming frm she see's a man sat on a piano his bk 2wards her a song starts
jeeta ta jis key liyeh
jis key liyah marta ta
jeeta ta jis key liyeh
ji key liyah marta ta
ek aise ladki ti jisey
mein pyaar karta ta
ek asiey ladki ti jisey
mein pyar karta ta
ankhoon sey meri
behtey hain aansoon
jab yaad aatey hain
wohhhh jab yaad
aatey hainnn woohh
kaisey bataoon oo
jaakey mein usko
kitnna satatey hainn
wohhh kitnaa satatey
hain woh pareshan
hoon mein key miley
gi mujhe woh kahannn ek
aisey ladki ti jisey mein pyar
karta ta ek aisey ladki
ti jisey meinnnn pyarrrrrrr
da girl approches da figure and is stunned 2 see dutta collapsed on da piano😲wid a bottle which is nw empty beside him
shallyman ur request is dne hope u like it😃
Edited by sana786a - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
AWW sana ur update is awesome i can't tell u aww too many suspense dutta is drinking in the morning but finally he spoke to the girl he is such a sweat heart caring he is offering her breakfast naku MU him. love it sana u r too good by the pre -cap it soundes dutta been devdas lakta hai he lost s/one spsl & too painful 4 him he needs s/one to take him out of the grave who better than our naku. well done girl u keep us in suspense and u don't know how greedy fans u have we want more tanx 4 pm dear eagerly waiting 4 ur update.😉

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