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Posted: 14 years ago
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DD. I m your fan dear.........you write so well...........next dialogue writer....DD............
I wish CVs see this and do something which touches our heart the way your OS does......Its so touching and I could literally feel pain and all the emotions attached with dutta, naku.....Love the way you wrote it..........kuch dimag mere andar bhe daal do............you rock.........Love to read next part............Its Awesome, Fabulous and I really don't have words to express my emotions on this post of yrs.........you are so sincere in writing...............

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great OS DD, 👏👏
Kehna padega ki aap AS ki peeche haath dhoo ke nahin balke naha dho ke padh gayi hain.🤣 🤣 Akhir usse BH bana hi diya!!!!!!
Loved every word of it. It was as if the scenes was taking place right in front of me. The romance between Dutta and Naku was very sweet. Kaash koi CV yahan aake isse pardh le, aur hamein yeh scense sach mein dekhne ko mil jaaye.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was really awesome...so loved it...
it had everything.....great read.....
must say ur amazing....u should consider
continuing it.....do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lol bechari AS 😆
so ur going to braek our hearts 💔😲
chalo koi baat nae hm bardasht karlengay
but ur topic waapis aoge na 😭 jaldi jaldi update karo want to see soch kya rkha hay apnay 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
Mindblowing The dialogues brings tears to my eyes!!! Loved it..
Please continue sooooon!!!
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing OS DD... so emotional... esp dutta n naku scene

m glad naku knws the truth nw
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: MishalLeoSheeba

I am speechless..................DD.............i want to thank u dear for such a masterpiece!............and this part I loved and it made me cry...............😭

Naku goes and sits beside Dutta. She places her hand on his hand. Dutta turns to look at ehr longingly. He stares at her for a long time, their eyes well up seeing each others pain. "Saare chehre ajnabee ho gaye hain Naku...".
He lies down with his head on her laps like a child and closes his eyes. Naku looks at him, tears tickling at the corners of her eyes.
After few silent moments, when naku thought Dutta might have slept, Dutta suddenly asks her, "Tu toh mujhe chod ke nahi jaayegi na? Mere andar ka toofan mein sirf tere ko dikhaa saktaa hoon Naku. Tu mere se rooth jaayegi toh mein bilkool toot jaaongaa!".

Kya boloon main?!...............Thankx dear...........😲

Thanks a lot Sheeba! Master piece? Oh god!! Thanks!! Didnt realize it came out so well!!....
Oh! I loved this part too....I somehow always see Dutta, wanting to cuddle to Naku and sleep off his worries...Take her to a diff world and be happy there.....He just gives me a feeling of "being One" all the time.....
i am glad you could catch that point here!!
Love you!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sonee

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyy DD............... really ur OS is awesome yaar

i'm speechless.................awesome dialouge 👏👏👏................
wow i like each n every dialouge dear............loved it..............
unable to xpress......bhawanaon ko samjho DD....🤗🤗🤗
thnx for pm dear😛😛😛
next asap sweety😊😊😊

😆😆😆
Okie...Bhawnaaein transmitted 100%.....😆😆😆
yes, will post my next Part today or tomorrow!!!......pakka! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rama_2010

Thanks DD for the PM

Have gone thru your Os and loved it... Waiting for you to complete the OS..
Hope to see sweet Tasha episodes but till then can drool over your OS.....

Hey rama.....thanks a lot ton!!
My OS has I guess 5 parts this time.....In LTL show, we will soon see more of Tasha, and in my OS, you would only see Tasha and Tasha!!....
Wait for more!! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Thanks for sharing DD ..Its awesome dear..Pls. do continue!

Thanks Megha!! Part 2 would be up soon...In a day or two..pakka!!.....and that woudl be shorter than this....😆😆

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