New FF - Just Another Love Story(Updt Chpt 9 pg22)

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

HEy Mithai
wow so this creative story is from skool days
hmm thats nice
realy liked the beginning
really looking forward 4 next update :)

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

nice start...would love to read a different kind of a love story😊

so leela and roops are nakkus friends...good

waiting for the next part and thanks for the pm

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

mithai.......superb.....u r amazing writer.......yeh bhi koi puchhne ki baat hai.......yes.....i want this FF.......😆

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saakshi

@--Saaki--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

RESERVED..................

Will soon come & comment big.........................

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prettywoman

@prettywoman

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

i want this FF to continue too.. my hubby is from Kolkata and i totally agree about the winter there.. been there only twice during winter as we tend to go during summer as the kids break up from school then.. but awesome city and the best part is the warnth of the people.. one of the safest places for women!!

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princessmithai

@princessmithai

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sonee
before ur PM ......yyyyyyeeeeeeeee

new FF 👍🏼.... mithai too good😊😊😊

omg...kolkata, mithai...superb selection of city....
i just luv dis city...
n what n description of city.....toooo gooood

'nakku tomboyish' ouch*cant digest*.....

i like ur 'LS history'n kya naam hai
"just anothr luv story"👏👏👏

simply superb..... mithai....loved it....
plz jaldi update karna haan....

hey Sonee

thanks for liking the ff

as for Kolkata anything to do with me will have a lil touch of this beautiful wonderful city

i have been born n brought up over here n this city goes with me wherever i go

Naku being tomboyish .... well yeah she is a sherni afterall she can very much be tomboyish n originally she is from the slums whr girls r rather tomboyish 😳

but well the character of my original story was tomboyish

well the story was written in my high school days

n i waasnt matured enuf to give it a propr name

Just Another Love Story was a name that cropped up

in a very matter of fact way

thr were so many love stories that got submitted for the competition

so i cudnt think of a name which wud stand out hence thought to myself its just another love story yaaarrrr ki fark pyenda hein😆

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princessmithai

@princessmithai

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15
yay so u decided to write 1 without me giving u chocolates..lol

nice update hun so leela and roops r naku's friends...wow nice seein thm b positive for a change😆

update soon

Well yuvi I thought one Kala character is more than enuf to pose a big tym problem for TaSha 😆😆

u dont neccessarily need to make Leela n Roops all negative😳

n besides there were two frnds in the original story that i wrote years back so had to keep them there just changed thr names

a lil twist here n a lil turn thr n VA-LA youve got a story running😉

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princessmithai

@princessmithai

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sunshiine21
Ohh Koool!
Nice update

Very different and very nice...

Continue Soon..

Thanks for the PM!

😳😳😳😳 aaawwwwww thanks geeessssss

but i must say the story doesnt have anything mushier than eyelocks LOL

it was written in my high school days

cant give mushy 🤬 stuffs for competition u know😳😆

n besides I am not mushy mushy myself so cant even think of such stuffs to write them down😳

soooowwweeeeeee 😳

my bad😳

but im sure u r gonna enjoy the pure love story

you myt even throw chappals at me at one tym😕

but dont worry im gonna make u pay back too😉

becoz its gonna be full of TaSha😳

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princessmithai

@princessmithai

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Rose_Petal
Nice FF Mithai!

Hard to picture Naku a tomboyish college student but I think you pulled it off. Even the martial arts!😆

Well wait n watch Naku is a maesto in all the arts😆

actually she is an Art student

well actually I dunno know much abt other professions

I have a lineage of Art students n art background in my family so whn i was a kid i used to even day dream art😳

you know the kinda situation for army ppl

I wonder what type of character Dutta will be...😍

dont worry he is stronger than u can imagine

he has to go thru a lot of ordeals falling for Naku isnt easy it has its price n he will pay😳

but thats for much later

u just sit back n enjoy the story

Oh, and it's nice to see people taking care of Naku for a change......and that too by Leela and Roops.....serves them right. 😆

as i said i think one Kala is more than enuf for bad stuffs

dont need two other unnecessary evil doers who does nothing but share pages after pages of a story without a solid rhyme or reason😆