New FF - HDDCS last part update page 73 - Page 10

nice update.......TaSha scene was very cute.......but i want a long one.......update soon.........

hey i jus read ur FF prt 2gva so wz rytn my comntz as i wnt alng...ope u dnt mind as itz quite a lng 1 lol

Originally posted by: mIsSy.x

hey i jus read ur FF prt 2gva so wz rytn my comntz as i wnt alng...ope u dnt mind as itz quite a lng 1 lol

1^st prt...omg y is she comitn suicide!! N werz dutt...dat wz naku ryt?? N shez white ere...awh bles ravi seemz lyk a nyc guy bt stil dnt wnt hm 2 cum b.n tasha lol

Part2...aawhh dis dialogue wz eva so sweet 'Dutta ' Nakku main chahta hoo ki tu her saal karwachauth per ye tika pehne. Chahe main tere paas rahoo ya na rahoo. Wada kar mujhse'.' Wa dus dat mean huh?? N y dd AS say tu bhi yeh wrate rakhe bhi? Omg ah ope dutaz or8 ... wer is he?? Unki ankho mein ansu..kyun?? OMG hez nt dead iz he!!

Part3..awhh roopz inluv wv baaji..becharii..baaji soodar ja lol ...awh she kpt fast 4 hm...

Grrr yeh kala bhi 😡 h8 hr....nw am getn evn mor mysterius..omg duta rli is dead!! 😭 noooo dis cnt hapen...he cnt leave naku alne wiv dis churail kala..!!

'Teri ye khubsurti aisa kahar bankar tooti humare ghar per ki sab kuch tabah ho gya' dus dat mean duta ddnt kno bou nakuz real colour on dr 1^st karwachauth??

So dey lost ol luxuries afta dutaz death... imiss him 😔

Wat sapna is ravi tlkn bout?? Dnt tel me itz relatd 2 naku...

Part 4- yeh kala na ah rli wna kil er seriusli grr hw dare she hurt naku 😡

Roo/baaji awhh..e wnt afta hr n uskawrat tora...

Awhh poor naku rli cnt liv wivowt dutta..wel huni dnt blme ya..we cnt eda lol

Prt5+6....naku bechari...lekin yeh ravi ka naku sey kya conection hai...plz dnt let hm tke dutaz plce L hmm raviz bashan lol das nakuz job nrmaly lol hehe

Prt7...kya roop yahan soodar ghi hai?? Omg wen AS sed nakuz dutaz last nishani n stf ...i had tearz in my eyez 😭 n kishorz speach...omg i am literaly cryn nw *wiping my tearz*😭😭😭

Prt8...awhh ravi seemz lyk a sweet guy bt stil no1 cn rlpce dutta!! Lol

Prt9+10...yeh tru der LS is rli diff bt wa acutaly hapnd 2 owa dutta??........itz morey ryt?

Prt11...kisi ne naku ke bare mein nahin pucha...key usne khana kaya he naih...if dutta waz ere dn....

Prt12..awh such a sweet update hun lekin ah kno am nt gna lyk watz gna apen nxt...naku gna loose dutta L

Update soon hun...n plz brng dutta bak...nt jus hiz FB naku rli need hm😳...plz say hez alive bt wz kidnapd o sumthng....thnx 4 pm..continu soon.xxx

Originally posted by: swati2008

nice update.......TaSha scene was very cute.......but i want a long one.......update soon.........

Originally posted by: akkybaby

lovely cute and awesome update pls do continue soon .............

Part 13

(Roop ke bulane per Dutta niche aata hai. kuch der baad Naku bhi aati hai. Dutta Nakku se thoda naraz tha. Nakku muskurate huye aage badh jaati hai. )

Dutta – (to him) are...... koi farak hi nahi para. Mujhe laga tha ki main ise andekha karoonga to ye mujhe manayegi per ise to koi farak hi nahi para. Koi baat nahi. Main bhi DSP hoo. Jab tak manyegi nahi maanunga nahi.

Baji – Bhau aap apne aap se kaya baatein kar rahe ho.

Dutta – are Baji tu kab aaya?

Baji – tab jab aap apne aap se roothne manane ki baatein kar rahe the. Waise Bhau hua kya hai?

Dutta – kuch nahi Nakku se main kisi baat per naraz ho gaya tha per use to jaise koi farak hi nahi parta. Mujhe manana to door ulta aise hasti huyee ja rahi hai?

Baji – hota hai Bhau sabke saath aisa hi hota hai.

Dutta – kaisa hota hai?

Baji – shadi ho jaane ke baad kuch dino me pati ki ehmiyat kum ho jaati hai.

Dutta – accha tujhe bara pta hai....... shadi huyee nahi or shadi ke baad patiyo ka haal bata raha hai.

Baji – shadi nahi huyee to kya hua main sab jaanta hai. ab ghar me hi dekho na apne kishor Bhau Kala tai ke aage unki ek bhi chalti hai kya?

Dutta – Kala tai ki baat alag hai per Nakku aisi nahi hai.

Baji – Bhau chahe wo Nakku ho ya kala tai her patni ek hi jaisi hoti hai.

Dutta – chal.... baat karta hai. tu mujhe meri Nakku ke khilaf bharka raha hai.

Baji – are bharka nahi raha Bhau such bol raha hai agar zara bhi shaq ho to aazma le. Tu kuch der tak Nakku se baat mat kar, use aise dikha jaise tujhe uski parwah hi nahi agar usne tere ko manane ki kosis ki to phir main maan jayega ki teri tere biwi ke uper abhi bhi chalti ahi.

Dutta – aisa kya to phir thik hai abhi dikhata hoo. Nakku ke aage meri kitni chalti hai.

(Dutta Nakku ke paas jaata hai or usase kehta hai.)

Dutta – Nakku mere saath chal mujhe tujhse kuch baat kani hai.

Nakku – kya baat karni hai?

Dutta – kuch zaroori baat karni hai or maine keh diya to keh diya tu abhi chal mere saath.

Nakku – saab, aap dekh rahe hai na parti chal rahi hai aise me main agar aapke saath chalegi to sab kya kahenge.

Dutta – tujhe sabki fikar hai or meri nahi. Tu meri baat manane se inkar kar rahi hai. DSP ki. Mere gusse ko pehchanti hai na. Agar mujhe gussa aa gaya to tere liye accha nahi hoga.

Nakku – saab aap mujhe aise goor kya rahe ho. Mujhe darane ki kosis kar rahe ho. Ab to main aapse saath bilkul nahi jayegi.

Dutta – aise kaise nahi jayegi chal mere saath. (Dutta Nakku ka haanth pakad leta hai.)

Nakku – saab mera haath choro. Choro mera haath.(Nakku apna haanth churane ki kosis karti hai tabhi Aai saheb aa jaati hai.)

AS – Dutta …… tu ye kya kar rah hai. Chod Nakku ka haath.

Dutta – wo AS kuch nahi wo……… main to…….. main to bus

Nakku – main to main to kya laga rakha hai sidhe sidhe kahiye na jo keh rahe hai. AS saab ne mujhe apne saath chalne ko kaha. Ab aap hi bataiye ki main ye party chod ke kaise jaa sakti hai. Maine mana kar diya. Per saab……. Saab mujhe zabardasti apne saath le jaa rahe the.

AS – Dutta ye kya tarika hai.

Dutta – Nahi AS main to bus kuch zaroori baat karna cha raha tha.

Nakku – AS inhone mujhe dhamki bhi di keh rahe the agar inhe gussa aa gaya to mere liye accha nahi hoga.

AS – Dutta ……. Apni patni se koi is tarah se baat karta hai kya? Teri jo bhi zaroori baat hai wo party khatm hone ke baad bhi ho sakti hai. Or tu yaha kya kar raha hi jaa jakar Baji, Sudh, Kishor or baki sabke saath jakar baatein kar. Saara din Nakku ke age piche ghoomta rehta hai.

Dutta – AS main ……….main din bhar Nakku ke aas paas ghoomta rehta hoo.

AS – haan tu……….. jab se tere iske beech sab kuch thik hua hai tab se tujhe iske aage piche goomne se fursat hi nahi milti.

Roop – AS aap aise gooma fira kar kyun keh rahi hai sidhe sidhe boliye na ki Bhau…… Zoru ke gulam ho gaye hai.

Dutta – choti tu bhi…….. tujhe to main.

Roop – Bhau sach bola to lagi na…… or dekho na abhi bhi aap saare mehmano ko chod kar vahini ke hi paas khade hai.

AS – ab khada kha kya kar raha hai ja yaha se.

(Dutta Baji ke paas chala aata hai. Baji hus raha hai. Dutta ye dekh kar irittet ho jaata hai.)

Baji – kyun Bhau pata chal gaya.

Dutta – haa per…….. per main is Nakku ko sabak sikha ke rahoonga.

Baji – Bhau kuch aisa waisa nahi karna warna AS se daat paregi.

Dutta – (with smile) tu dekhta jaa main kya karta hoo.

hi vs,

how shd i address u?

the update is very nice..... i just loved it.......... pls dont give Tasha cliffhangers dear....... everyone do the same thing...........

can u pm next time...........

tc
divya

very nice update ...

poor dutta.... no one is helping him can't wait to see what he'll do now

haha nice update...cnt w8 2 c wt he plans 2 do... m surprised naku tld AS al tht dutta sed...lol..i didnt think she wud