Things I Noticed - 09/07/10 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome TIN ... as usual!! 👏👏👏
I don't think its a junk and I am surprised that inspite of being sleep deprived you wrote the minute details of all the characters so wonderfully!!!!
Thanks dear!! 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fivrz TIN iz Back...!!😛tank u so much fivr....juz loved reading ur thoughtz ...awesum yaar..!! u r a ⭐️...!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Finally reading this and replying now:
I agree Fivr...Kala has a plausible story ready rather than disjointed facts making the accused party seem guilty. she did that during the wedding fiasco and she tried again. and she might have succeeded too if dutta were not so totally in love with naku and be confident of her love for him. thats one thing he lacked during the wedding fiasco ie confidence in naku's friendship and her motives of wanting to wish the best for him.
and i agree...initially dutta was angry for naku but towards the end he was angry at kala's character turn as he saw it. And yes i again agree with u...this time kala didnt want to accept the importance of naku in dutta's life. otherwise the previous kala wud have shut up at the first shut up message dutta gave her. and when she tooks jabs at dutta or AS she was making a desperate attempt to hurt them but i still dont feel she hates either...not even dutta. its just that now he doesnt act as she wants him to act. thats the problem.
coming to kishore...people are wondering what made kishore speak up now. i guess one relevant point here is in one of the very first episodes soon after entry of dutta's family kishore wants to go tell dutta kala's reality. then kala tells him dutta will never believe a word against his sister and instead he wud prolly be thrown out of the house which means he losing contact with his son and leaving the child to kala's mercies.
Now when dutta himself kinda caught kala kishore saw this as an oppty to come clean...expose kala without arousing dutta's wrath upon himself. kishore simply struck when the iron was hot as dutta is looking for answers on naku's strange behavior.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarathikb

very well written.
Finally u started to write.



*blushes*

Yeah, I know.. It was a long break but now that I have some spare time, I felt I could start again and be a bit consistent about it.. 😳😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nali4180

Yaar if this is junk, im scared to know what your like in full energized form!!! I go crazy over your TIN. It's one of the main reasons i joined the forum, getting unique insight of other peoples opinions on our LTL. 😉
Love your dedication, and beta - if you want to read junk imagine me trying to right such a wonderful analysis in your condition (yaar can not be done!!!!).
Can't wait to read more of your TIN (hopefully on todays ep? - okay i will try not to become selfish!!!)
You write in your own time, just know im stalking the forum waiting for an update LOL.
Please forgive me for my stalkerish tendancies 😳



Oh gosh.. ☺️

*turns beetroot red*

I am just going say the only think I can manage in this humbled state - Thank you! Thank you so much for reading and appreciating what I wrote. 😳 And stalk away yaar! I do so much lurking/stalking myself.. 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tina-Saigal2002

@Fivr... No its certainly not a junk... It was very well written and i'm so sorry for not commenting on your previous TIN... I'm so sorry for that.. But I liked both your TINS and I'm so happy that your TINS are back after so many days.. Love your Tins Fivr and am always happy to read them.. I love your observation on every scene.. Hats off to you for writing such nice TIN s..



Arey yaar! No need to apologize!!! I know it gets busy or the forums moves so fast that the thread falls back.. Koi masla nahi. I am glad you liked it. I shall try to keep them more punctual from now on.. 😳😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pardesii

Fivr whether you are sleep deprived or not you write like a pro. It is not possible for anything you write to be considered mediocre.

*melts in a pool of maska* ☺️


Thank you for starting up the TINs despite such a hectic schedule. 🤗 🤗 🤗

If this is your analysis based on pure memory than the critic that comes with re-watching must be more phenomenal.

I don't know about "phenomenal", but that critic is at least more coherent.. 🤣🤣


Kala does have that habit of making everyone part of her show. She is in control but shuts up the on-lookers by making them feel guilty that they are privy to this dispicable display. Baaji, AS and Kishore were growing more uncomfortable with her words each passing second, but they were almost powerless to stop her. The reason being is that Kala is a very strong prosecutor, she should have become a lawyer. She like you said provides 'motive' for the accussations she places on someone. It is easier to get people on side when they begin doubting their own assumptions by giving them a plausible 'story'.

I know right! *sigh* I would have loved to see Kala, NOT Aashka, but Kala as a lawyer. She's rip the opponent into shreds! 😆😆

Fivr, I totally agree with this part: Such an eloquent description of what was protrayed:

"He was enraged at Nakku being disrespect - NO one else has the right to question Nakku. No one! *sigh* If that wasn't a show of his primal male instincts to protect and a show of territorial-ism when it comes to his wife then I don't know what was. HE can say what he wants, when he wants to Nakku - but if anyone else dares to do the same he'll rip their metaphorical head off! *sigh* But then as Kala kept at it (I will get to her below), he finally stopped being angry at her FOR Nakku and started being upset with her for her own lack of character."

He did looked emotionally drained when he came in, but Kala's constant onslaught of insults against his Naku was testing his patience and he finally ripped into her. First it was to stop her disrespecting Naku but after when he saw how relentless she was in her viciousness, he was truly appalled that this is the Tai he has always given so much respect and importance to. How did he not know she was so vindictive!

Because she was just that manipulative. And she wasn't always this vindictive - it's her recent loss of power that has shifted her balance a bit..


The real eye-opener was her disrespecting AS. Comparing her happiness to his, showing the sibling rivalry that he didn't know she harboured within her.

Fivr, when you figure out how to get on Dutta's VIP protection list, tell us too!

LMAO! Of course! One I call dibs on the good spot I'll open the doors to all of you guys.. *innocent muh* 🤣🤣

I agree that Kala shows this vulnerability around Kishore. He is her husband and so he knows her most private thoughts from being with her all these years. She looks at him at times as if to say 'you know why I am like this...you know', she still expects his support at times even though she knows he is a man of integrity. Perhaps, before Naku came to PN and changed the dynamics of the household, Kishu did remain quiet for his wife's sake. As a ditch attempt to believe that she'll eventually reform. That Kala would not stoop too low. But with her attacks on Sups and then this personal vendetta against Naku, he's given up on her.

Lastly, the line you used for Kishore: "a man that fears no loss is one who should be feared deeply" was beautiful.

I got the sense when he said that I'm putting my happiness on the line by saying this, that he had made up his mind that what use is clinging to the idea of 'happiness' (as he is not blissfully married) at the cost of depriving other's of their real happiness. Again, TaSha's true love has converted another soul to be true to themselves and fight for good! It is amazing how many people have sacrificed something in order to unite TaSha ' me thinks Bappa is working in his mysterious ways.

Agree, agree, agree! 😍

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: swati2008

Fivr.......this is not at all a junk.......i loved how described Kala's vulnerability infront of Kishore........she can manipulate anyone n control their mind but not Kishore.......even i noticed she looked pleadingly at Kishore not to say anything.........Kala was always convincing in her approach.........but yesterday she lost it.......she didn't understand Naku's importance about Dutta......Dutta......what should i say about him........how he roared like lion when the women he loves were insulted.......whether its Naku or AS......he could not tolerate anything against them.........n u r right about Baaji.......how he was running to n fro between AS n Babi.......it was really funny........bichara......TaSha khud to chale gaye.......is pe dono mothers ki jimedari chodkar........😆



Dutta's always reminded me of a lion - especially since that one day when he was drunk (after Supriya seemed hesitant of him at their engagement) and he woke up looking like a sleepy lion! *sigh*

LMAO! I know right! TaSha bhag gaye jungle mein mangal karne aur tab sey Baji reh gaya hai Aayi Sahib aur Babi ko sambhalne k liye.. 🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariescott14

i liked it fivr..n i m so glad u rback with ur TIN



Thank you, thank you! 😳

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