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Posted: 14 years ago
The thing that I like about update version of Dutta and Naku , Dutta is being dutta no chg in him .
abt your latest update.


Just then Nakku comes downstairs to see if everything is going well and Dutta sees her coming down the stairs. He gives her a look as if he's saying "y cant she just stay in one place????". Baaji looks up as well and sees Nakku coming down. Dutta walks towards Nakku.
Dutta: What are you doing here? Your ment to be resting! Common lets go back upstairs.
It shows his love , concern and he cares a bang abt who is looking or what they thinking . All that matters is Naku and only Naku .

every1 turns towards TaSha when they heard ( Thank you at least in your story they only watching them unlinke CV … Man out there Kabab meain Hadhi everywhere . ) 👏 👏


Dutta: who said you have to stay there for a whole day? You have to stay there for 8 months! Until the pregnancy is over!
(He wants her to stay in bed for the entire pregnancy term .. Love u for this one … Cannot explain why.. But just love it )



Dutta goes to the bed near Nakku and pulls her up and holds her in his arm opening her dhori's at the back while she's still asleep. He takes off her blouse and puts another one on and tie the dhori's. And then he put another petticoat on her and left her saree's pallu on the bed as he cannot wrap it around her as she's sleeping. He makes her lay down again and covers her. He kisses her eyes and goes to the bathroom for shower.. (Awl ! That was such a sweet thought … But Gadha darling did not relise that he might not be able to tie pallu before he started or he just want to feel her again .. But I do not think he that kind of Guy that will touch and do things to Naku while she sleeps.)


Dutta: dont lie to mee.. tell me the truth.. if you do then i can speak to nakku and she can speak to nisha. But now that your saying you dont den i dnt have to speak to nakku..
Baaji: Areee nahin nahin.. speak to nakku.. Haan passan hai!


( Baji toh gaya … Hahha .. )
🤣 🤣


Nakku feels sick and she runs to the bathroom to throw up, Dutta gets scared and worried but nisha tells him to calm down as it's just a symptom of pregnancy and thats normal. She also tells him to bring nakku with him tomorrow at her clinic in the after, she will do a few check ups.

( I guess he will be following everywhere now )
Edited by scorpio10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow tanx 4 the update sunshine what an awesome writimg ur imagination is amazing u know when u made naku pregnant i am happy not against it at all bcoz i want to c dutta how he will b but 4 some reason while i read i had a bad feeling the happiness might not last i felt like the scene in chori chori chupke chupke salu & rani's movie, but pls let them have complications whatever but no more sad story like losing the baby 4 tasha i can't bear it 😔😒 and dutta been protective so dutta i love it. and also it is good that u chose nisha 4 baji i like (icha) she is my fav. in uttran i always wanted s/one with innocent looking face 4 baji not roops so good one girl i like basha so suitable. pls more tasha romance don't b mean like the CV's lots of romance tike tanx a lot ji.😳👏😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey im so sorry i missed ur earlier part so had to read both bfore commenting
commendable peice a writing 👏
loved it👏
continue soon👏
n pls page 14 ke update mein ek blooper hein
6 in the afternoon nahi woh shayad 6 in the evning hogiy😳😉 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
its awesome as usual........loved it......yeh promo kya hai.........no plz dnt kill the child........Dutta deserves a football team........btw jaldi se BaSha ka romance start kardo..........update soon.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb updates sunshine
love the new girl for Baaji
:p
loved how multi tasking Dutta has become ,
kaam ik taraf aur an expert in changing clothes

love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi i'm new 2 LTL forum. But i read all ur updates at 1 go. And trust me u r simply superb. Luvd each and every part of it. And i hav a small request. Can u add me 2 u r pm list. I wud b grateful 2 u. Thanx.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: isatb

Hi i'm new 2 LTL forum. But i read all ur updates at 1 go. And trust me u r simply superb. Luvd each and every part of it. And i hav a small request. Can u add me 2 u r pm list. I wud b grateful 2 u. Thanx.

Heyyy Welcome to the forummm😳
Thank you sooo muchh,,, I will update later on.. n i will surely PM you😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Uiiii houuuuiiii yaar you are writing a exellent job...i have no words...i loved it dear..pls upload asap....bohat mazah araha hai :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it dear--update more soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Heya People thank you sooooooo much for reading and appreciating my work, Im glad you all liked it... and i have to say there will be lots of twist n turns.. But im not CV so i won't drag or do anything that you all will be heartbroken.

I wil make sure everything goes fine and i hope all of you are happy with the story line..

TaSha = Dutta + Nakusha

BaSha = Baaji + Nisha

AS i sed earlier my new promo is that ; Kala decides to kill TaSha's baby, and nakku falls down the stairs during her 7th months of her pregnancy! (voice over says:)

Kya sanjog bacha(save) payega nakku aur dutta ka baccha(baby)? Ya phir bikhar jayenga nakku ki khushiyaan???

The story continues...

Its morning time and PN seems empty. Every1 in there room sleeping after such a long night. With tired eyes and soul they all slept right after the party.

Baaji is at the table eating breakfast and Nisha is serving him. He holds her hands while she is serving and pulls her towards him. Baaji drops on the floor from the bed and realise he was dreaming. (Loool sorry had to do this!! Baaji to gayaaa)

Baaji smiles and tap his head thinking "I'm such a budhoo". He can't be boverd to walk so he goes back to sleep on the bed with a big smile on his face.

Scene Shifts....

TaSha sleeping very close to each other. Nakku's back to dutta and his left hand on her waist. The sun shines through the window and Dutta wakes up. He looks around and then checks the time. It was still 10 o'clock, too early to wake Nakku up he thought. But just then Nakku wakes up as well and looks at dutta. Dutta smiles at her and tells her to sleep. Nakku gets up and says she's hungry and wants to eat chocolate. Dutta smiles.

Dutta: okay, in the evening when we are going to Nisha for your check up then we will go buy chocolates

Nakku: Noooo i want chocolate now. Please saab, get me chocolates. I need to eat them now

Dutta: your very stubborn. Chocolate is not good for you, eat fruits

Nakku: Nooo i want chocolate i said, if you cant get it, i will go get it

Dutta gets up quicky : Noo I will go get it, you rest and i will go get it now.

Nakku: Okay thank you

Dutta runs to the bathroom to wash his face and comes out to change. He then runs out to get chocolate for Nakku. Meanwhile Nakku is pacing around the room waiting for her chocolate. She then goes downstairs and sits in the living room or hall. Babi and AS comes there.

AS: Nakku what happened?

Nakku: saab went to get chocolate for me, and he isn't back yet

AS: don't worry, he will come. Oh you want chocolate

Nakku: yes i want lots of chocolate, i've been craving for them since last night.

AS: Okay you can eat your chocolate when dutta comes but now drink this juice.

Babi gives Nakku her juice and Nakku drinks it happily. (She was hungry lol)

They all sit there with Nakku and talking and Dutta walks in (bilkul hero style). Dutta comes in with lots of chocolates and gives them to Nakku.

Nakku: I don't want them anymore

Dutta: What?

Nakku: i don't want chocolates anymore. I'm not hungry

Dutta: Nakku, you made me get up and told me to get you chocolates and now you don't want them.

Nakku: I don't feel like eating them anymore

AS: Dutta, that's how it is in pregnancy, you want to eat something and then you don't. Its okay. Give the chocolates to the kids.

Dutta: okay

He looks at Nakku and thinks "Areee Yaar.. 8 months to go like dis.. Main to gaya kaam se"

Dutta goes to give the kids the chocolates he brought and brings fruits for Nakku who was still sitting in the hall with AS and Babi. Nakku takes it and eat all of it. Dutta is happy that Nakku ate all and takes the empty plate from her. Babi and AS are impressed with Dutta. They both go away from there to do some work. Dutta sits next to Nakku.

Dutta: Ermm Nakku, i need to tell you something

Nakku: haan saab bolo na.

Dutta: Nakku woh woh ermm woh baaji na

Nakku: Baaji? Baaji ko kya hua?

Dutta: Pyar

Nakku: huh

Dutta: Baaji ko Nisha se pyar hua hai

Nakku *SMILES*: Whattt??? That's greatttt.. im sooo happy

Dutta: yes but maybe you should talk to Nisha about this.

Nakku: ofcourse i will.. I will do it today itself

Dutta: Noo Find the right time then you do..

Nakku: Okay saab, whatever you say.

Dutta smiles and kisses her forehead and goes to wake baaji up..

Scene shifts...

Dutta walks into baaji's room and finds him sleeping still but smiling in his sleep.. (he looks sooo cutee, with his dimples)

Dutta nudge him, but instead of waking up, baaji holds dutta's hand and puts it under his cheeks in sleep. He smiles and says "Nisha, tum aagaye"

Dutta smiles and Nudge him with his other hand, baaji jumps up shouting "NISHA" and looks at dutta who is next to him. He's embarrassed and looks down. Dutta smiles and tells him to get ready as they are going shopping then to Nisha's clinic for Nakku's check up.

Baaji gives his million dollars smile and dutta leaves the room smiling as well. He goes back to the living where Nakku is sitting with AS. Dutta comes and tells them that they are going shopping then to the clinic. Nakku stands up but Dutta picks her up in his arms infront of AS. AS smiles. Dutta takes Nakku upstairs (he doesn't want her to go up n down the stairs as she might slip...protective husband hayeee).

Scene shifts...

TaSha in their bedroom. Dutta puts Nakku on the bed, takes a saree out for her and a flat shoes. He tells her to get ready while he goes to freshen up. He goes to the bathroom and when he comes out Nakku is ready (superwoman got ready fast). Dutta is also ready and takes Nakku downstairs IN HIS ARMS OFCOURSE!

He puts her down in the hall and they wait for baaji who comes out wearing black jeans a plain white shirt (IMAGINE..IMAGINE.. HE LOOKS GORJUSSS!).

TaSha turns and finds baaji in a totally different outfit looking rather dashing. They look at him shockingly.

Baaji: i thought i would try something new.

Dutta: Nautanki, yh yh whatever, lets go. Btw you look nice

Nakku: Haan baaji this suits you, i think Nisha would like dis too

Baaji gets shock and looks at dutta thinking "how does Nakku know?"

Dutta: i told her and she will talk to Nisha for you.

Baaji gets happy and hugs Dutta and Nakku.

Dutta: be careful, yur vayhini is pregnant.

Baaji: oh sorry

AS comes there and dutta tells her they are going. She blesses them and they all leave PN. They get to the car.

Baaji: Bhao, i will drive, you sit with Nakku at the back

Dutta: Okay (he wnt loose this chance ofcourse lol)

Nakku gets in with dutta's help and dutta sits next to her. Baaji sits on the drivers seat and sings *Tumse Milne ki tamanna hai pyar ka irada hai* (i love dis song man..sorry had to use it)

TaSha at the back enjoying the song and having eyelocks, holding hands, naughty winks...

*Song Finishes* They all get to the mall and starts shopping... BaTaSha walks in and goes to see maternity clothes (loool haaha getting carried away lol). Nakusha opens her eyes wide thinking "y are we here? Its too early to buy these clothes" she looks at dutta who is proper smiling and baaji too.

Nakku stands there and dutta goes and gets some long dresses for her. (they are hugeeee). Baaji gets different flat slippers for her. Both Batta (baaji dutta) teases Nakku but they buy it for her. They all have lunch after that and they leave for the clinic.

At the clinic...

Nisha is in her doctors coat thing lol and she's talking to some man about his reports in the corridor when BaTaSha walks in. Baaji sees Nisha talking to a man and gets jealous. Nakku looks at him and smiles. Dutta looks and him too and they all walk towards Nisha.

Baaji looks at her with a jealous and angry look while TaSha are laughing at him...

The man goes and Nisha sees them, she walks towards them..

Nisha: Hii Nakku *they hug*..Hello Duttaji..Hello Baajirao

Baaji: you can call me baaji

Nisha: okay hello Baaji *turns to Nakku*

Nakku: what's the check up about?

Nisha: don't worry yaar, its a normal routine check up.. it wont even take long.. Come inside..*turns to dutta and baaji* please wait outside, we wont take long.

Nakku goes inside with Nisha but not before looking at Dutta who seems to be worried for no reason. The door closes and dutta sits down outside in the corridor with Baaji...

Inside Nakku lie down and Nisha checks her bp, heart rate and baby's heart.. All is perfectly fine.. Nakku hears the baby's heart beat and feels happy...

Nisha: Maybe Duttaji should here this as well

Nakku: yeah, let me call him

Nisha: no you lay down, i will call him

Nisha walks out and dutta and baaji stands up thinking something is wrong cause Nakku didn't come out. Nisha sees them worried..

Nisha: don't worry, everything is perfectly fine, infact i came to call you

Dutta/Baaji: Why?? (both sed together)

Nisha: We can hear the baby's heartbeat so i thought you would like to listen as well

Dutta gives a BIG smile : YES OFCOURSE.

Baaji: Areee Vaahh..

Dutta and Baaji both comes in. Nisha comes over to Nakku and puts the volume up on the machine.. Dutta stands next to Nakku holding her hand and baaji stands next to Nisha..

They all hear the heartbeat and are very happy... Nisha gives dutta an envelope.

Dutta: what is this?

Nisha: Scan of the baby

Dutta: scan? I can look at my baby?

Nisha: yes but it's not big yet.

Baaji: i will see my nephew...

Nakku: can i get up?

Nisha: ofcourse.. *turns to dutta* :But i have to warn you.. Please be careful... Don't let her do any work, make sure she rest a lot and eat a lot of healthy food. Infact i will give a timetable and give you a list of things that she can't eat. *turns to Nakku who is standing next to her* : did you hear me? Now you're going to put on lots of weight. It's normal. Dont go crazy over your weight when it increases. Wear loose clothes so it doesn't suffocate you or the baby, understand?

Nakku: yes Ma'am

Nisha: Okay tests are done, when the results come, i will come drop them myself and i will also get to see you

Nakku: you don't need excuses to come see me, come anytime.

Dutta: yes come anytime *looks at baaji*

Baaji: The door is always open (loool ahahaahh that's y people get kidnapped easily).

The all say bye and BaTaSha leave in their car.

The Next Day...

Nisha gets a call from the lab saying the reports are ready, come to collect it...

Nisha gets in her car, gets the report and heads towards PN. On the way she calls Nakku and tells her she's coming and there's good news.

Nakku tells dutta and baaji that Nisha is coming and she said there is good news. Just then Nisha walks in wearing a beautiful red chudidar with heels. She runs towards Nakku and hugs her. (awww cute scene.. best friend forever)

She jumps in excitement and baaji looks at her dreamingly...

Nakku: Areee Kya huaa?

Nisha: You won't believe it!!!!!

Nakku *curiously* : Whattt?? Don't beat around the bush, please tell mee quickly

Dutta: Nisha what happened??

Baaji: Jaldi bata naa!

Nisha: You all are going to be jumping with me when i tell you

Nakku: Jaldii bata.. i can't bear this suspense

Nisha: Nakku ..tu pregnant hai..

Nakku: Haan jaanti hoon..

Dutta: that's not new

Baaji: kya? Haemin tumse pehle pata tha

Nisha: Areee poori baat to sunleee

Nakku: bata naa

Nisha: Tu pregnant hai lekin ek bache ke nahin Do bacche ka! You're having twins!!!

Nakku: Judwa!!

Dutta: TWINSSSSSS

Baaaji: Haila Twins

Hearing BaTaSha shouting twins, every1 comes to the hall including the sisters, Kishore, subs, Ganpat and sethji.

AS: Kya hua? Why are you shouting?

Babi: anything wrong?

Dutta: Wrong? NOOO nothing wrong, Infact everything is more than okay... Nakku is having twins.

The whole family is shocked!!

Kishore: congratulations

Roops: wooow so cute na.. do bacche hongee

Leela: badayi ho Nakku bhao

Kala: Areee Vah ek tir se do nishana

AS: judwa? Mere dutta ka aansh.. Bappa, tera lakh lakh sukar hai, Nakku jeethi raho meri bacchii

Babi: Nakku, yeh bohut khushi ki baat hai.. main abhi mithai lekar aati hoon, sabka mou mitha karna hai

Babi goes to the kitchen and gets a box of laddoo and distribute to everyone...

She feeds Nakku, then dutta feeds Nakku, then AS feeds Nakku, Nisha feeds Nakku as well then baaji feeds Nakku. Nakku was suffocating with laddoos lool.

And they all fed dutta as well. (without him pregnancy is not possible lol)

Some time later....

Nakku sitting with Nisha in her room talking about old times. Dutta is outside in the garden with Baaji talking about old times (lool kya timing hai).

Nakku thinks its the right time and she should talk to Nisha but first has to find out if Nisha has any1 in her life..

Nakku: Nishuu it's been a long time since we gt separated, do you have any1 in your life? Boyfriend, fianc or husband?

Nisha: No yaar,, didn't find any1, and if i do then you will be the first one to know

Nakku: what if i tell you i know someone who likes you

Nisha *blushes* : who?

Nakku: don't you kno? Or do you want me to say the name?

Nisha: you tell me

Nakku: Baaji likes you a lot..

Nisha *blushes*: Ermmm okay

Nakku: don't you like him?

Nisha: it's not that i don't like him, he's nice but i don't really know him

Nakku: the get to know him... that's it, you two are going to go out somewhere together and will get to know each other

Nisha: but where?

Nakku: so u don't mind going?

Nisha blushes: No

Nakku: great, i will call you tonight and let you know after talking to baaji, okay?

Nisha: Okay i have to go now. Talk to you tonight! Byeee.

She hugs Nakku and walks out the bedroom and goes downstairs. Just then baaji and dutta comes inside from the garden, Nisha sees them.

Nisha*to dutta*: im going now, take care of Nakku, bye *to baaji: Byee

Baaji and dutta says bye and runs upstairs to Nakku...

Well Well... I hope you liked it... I tried to balance the romance and added baaji as well.. I hope your happy with the twin track lol

Anyways...

CREDIT goes to Scorpio for the twins idea ...

Please Comment and tell me if you liked it,

Dont forget to PM me ur suggestions!!!

Edited by sunshiine21 - 14 years ago

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