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princessmithai

@princessmithai

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: niki_2293

exams were just fine.....marie......n thnx 4 askin........i m glad tht u liked my FF 😊

Niki ur due for an update today

its after all Tuesday

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Nikita

@niki_2293

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: princessmithai

</div>Niki ur due for an update today
<div>its after all Tuesday

SRRY........if i m making u wait 4 long........i wud definitely update by today......n srry once more 😭

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saakshi

@--Saaki--

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Nice one Nikki.

Lagta hain,bahut bada twist aane waaala hain.Waiting for your next update.......

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Nikita

@niki_2293

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

thnx @ kateleode...........ur words r inspiring..i will definitely update soon 😊

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Wow nikki awsomeeeee dear abb jaldii update karo!.............awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee loved it to the core..................

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Nikita

@niki_2293

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#66

thnx sheeba........ glad tht u liked it 😛

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Nikita

@niki_2293

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#67

So here is my another short update……hope u like it 😊

(baaji comes to dutta's room)

Baaji: aur bahu……….abh toh shaadi ka din bhi fix ho gaya hai……..ab aapko zyaada intezaar nahi karna padega.

Dutta: baaji……….tujhe aur koi kaam nahi hai kya???

Baaji: bhau ki shaadi pakki ho gayi hai…….isse bada kaam mere liye kya ho sakta hai

Dutta: tera kuchh nahi ho sakta…….baaji

(he goes near his cupboard……..opens it and takes out a file……..n starts studying its pages

Baaji: kya bhau….shaadi mein bas kuchh hi din bache hain aur aapko kaam soojh raha hai?

Dutta: toh tu hi bata ……shadi ke naam par aise hi ghar mein baitha rahoon!!

Baaji: aisa karne ko kisne kaha aapse bhau…..mein toh keh raha tha ki aap kahin bahr jao…..nakku ko lekar…….kahin ghumane le jao use

(dutta ignores him and looks into his file again…….AS enters the room

Dutta: arrey aai aap

AS: dutta……….akhir sahi hi toh keh raha hai baaji……..pehli baar isne koi pate ki baat ki hai

Baaji: kya aai sahib…..aap bhi!!

(AS continues ……

AS: tu nakku ko kahin bahar kyun nahi lekar jaata??

Baaji: arrey woh kya kehte hain……………haan shopping ke liye kyun nahi lekar jaate aap use
Dutta: nahi baaji……..yeh shopping mujhse nahi hoti

AS: toh kahi aur le jaa use…………lekin aaj tujhe use kahi lekar jaana hi padega…akhir teri hone wali biwi hai woh

(dutta blushes a little……n when AS n baaji forces him a lot..he agrees)

(AS asks nakku to get ready as dutta is going to take her out….nakku gets tensed………

Nakku and dutta move out towards the car……dutta opens the door for her as she sits inside……n then he himself gets seated………he speeds up the car as AS n baaji wave to them)

AS : mera dutta hamesha aise hi khush rahe….hey bhagwan uski yeh khushiyaan use chheen naa lena..

Baaji: kuchh nahi hoga bhau ko aai sahib…..jab tak nakku un ke saath hai

In the car dutta keeps staring at nakku…….while she gets tensed and fiddles with her dupatta…..he keeps his hand on hers…..she gets a little worried

Dutta: kya baat hai nakku…….aaj tu badi pareshaan lag rahi hai……….kya hua……kisi ne kuchh kaha tujhse??

Nakku: nahi saab……aisi koi baat nahi hai……woh toh mein …..(thinks)….sethji ke baarein mein soch rahi thi………aajkal kitna shaitaan hogaya hai

Dutta: haan…….par who tumhara ek honhaar bhai hai…….woh tumhe kabhi takleef nahi dega

Nakku: hmmm

(she looks out of the side window……..and is in a deep thought…..she thinks "mein saab se apna sach chhupa rahi hai…….mein achha nahi karr rahi………..mereko darr lagta hai ki kahin yeh sach samne aa gaya to saab ka mujhse bharosa uth jayega"

Suddenly the car comes to a halt. Nakku is pushed forward and she instinctively catches hold of dutta's hand…..he looks at her hand and then gaze shifts to nakku……..nakku quickly withdraws her hands…….and to change the sudden romantic mood ……she says

Nakku: saab……..yeh gaadi ko kya ho gaya hai…..??

Dutta: shayad gaadi kharab ho gayi hai………tu yahin ruk mein dekhta hoon

He comes out of the car and lifts the bonnet…….(I m not going much into car machinery here…)

Dutta: shayad …..gaadi garam ho gayi hai…….jakar gaadi mein se paani le aaa

Nakku searches the car…..

Nakku: saab gaadi mein paani nahi hai

Dutta: (bangs his hand on the car n says…) tu yahin ruk….mein jakar dekhta hoon kahin paani mil jaaye toh…..

Nakku: par saab…iss sunsaan jagah par aap kahan jayenge…………

Dutta: tu fikar mat kar nakku………mein jaldi aa jaoonga……..tu bas gaadi mein hi baithi rahiyo…….

Dutte picks up a can and walks away …….nakku's gaze follows him till he is out of sight…….then she decides to wait in the car………she waits for a long time………he does not return……she steps out of the car and looks around ………dutta is nowhere to be seen

Suddenly she sees a motor-bike approaching towards her…….the man on it looks towards nakku and staring her as he has recognized her……nakku becomes alert and turns her face towards the car…….but the man goes a little forward and then stops……..nakku gets a little scared…then she sees dutta coming ….she runs towards him and hides herself behind him.

Dutta gets confused but then he sees the man on the motorbike who is still staring nakku……..he gives an angry looks to him…….to which he starts his bike and moves ahead……he then consoles nakk and asks her to sit in the car

Scene 3
The man …….seen on the motor bike….goes to a crowded area……..gets down from his bike…….enters a narrow lane…….walks a little ……n then climbs the stairs of a small house…..n reaches a room…….opens the door……n walks inside shutting the door behind him………….the room is very small……..at the back there is a window…..and in the front there is a sort of study table….on it…… sitting is a man who has turned his face in the opposite direction……..some people are already standing there…he suddenly spakes up

Man: saab…..aapko yakeen nahi hoga mein aaj kya dekha…….woh ladki…….

(the man sitting on the study table turns back………..the coverage is taken first from his shoes…….then his shining maroon shirt…….n then his face…………it is the long lost malmal morey

Morey: kaun ladki……theek se bol

Man: wohi jo kala rang laga kar rakhti hai…….jis par aapka dil aa gaya tha….

Morey: nakusha……(he says in joy)……..kya tune nakusha ko dekha

Man: haan saab use hi………par

Morey : par kya

Man: uske saath koi aur bhi tha…….wohi jisne aapko maara tha aur uss ladki ko bachaya tha….

Morey: ohhhh……………abh maza aayega…… ek saath do shikaar karoonga………..uss aadmi se toh mein apne ek ek kharonch ka badla loonga

N then he laughs aloud…………..hahaha

Another short update……was in the middle of sum work…….but I also want to create sum suspense……………………next time I m planning to show dutta in action 😛

Edited by niki_2293 - 15 years ago

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Nikita

@niki_2293

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

hey.....friends.....sorry cud not update more........i was busy actually...but in my next post i will put dutta in action.........hope u like it 😊

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saakshi

@--Saaki--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#69

SUPERBBBBBBBBBb ............Nikki............First of all,Your dialogues very realistic & in the character .Secondly,next part Action........ Thirdly,MOREY........................... ..............You dont believe how I used to crave morey to come back to LTL.You fulfilled my wish dear.......................Love you....................... ......

Awaiting for the next..........Update Asap dear..........................

Excellent job..................................