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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey you guys, you probably don't know me but my name is kinno. A few mounths ago i made a account here and i really love all your FF and thoughts on this serial. I've read alot of you guys FF and i'm really interested i'm more interested in the stories that are made on this forum then the actual serial😆.

so you guys give this a story a thought
, naku and dutta are still in the jungle and jagtap is try to help them.
naku and dutta are in his house, dutta sees a picture on the wall; for some reason he feels that he seen this person before, some kind of mistake he made in his past that caused him to make terrible decisions. Dutta tries remembering but he can't so he brushes it off.
so i'm not exactly sure how but somehow this new character Jagtap is suppose to reunite dutta and naku, but imagine if there's a twist(not a twist in there lovestory but in this character) so i was wondering what if this character is someone else. Read on and you'll see what i'm talking about.
The jagtap guy is really rich but he lives in the jungle to get away from everyone meaning his family, society and ect..(he also has a big family, his wife isn't dead, he has three more kids but his oldest son died and he can't live with the guilt he has in his heart that his wife accused him that his sone died becase of him( the reason for this is because he's also a don that has alot to do with mafia stuff. His son used to work with him but because of an false identity someone shot is son think it was him)so he lives in the jungle to get away from his problems.
he knows that dutta doesn't trust him(like thats a shocker😆) but he hates dutta because somehow the picture that he has in his house was a picture of his son that dutta killed, so dutta recognizes the picture but doesn't say anything because he thinks that he's one of Anna's men trying to kill him so he's really aware of his actions, the jagtap guy is really fond of naku and he sees her as a daughter, when she was at the riverside washing her color off jagtap saw her true face but keeps it a secret think that there probably a reason why she putting the color on, so basically dutta finds it strange how a man lives out here in the jungle but keeps his comments to himself, naku and jagtap go and find leaves to make tea while there doing that jagtap tells him about his life and how's a don too and how he lost his son, he also tells her that he's seen her by the riverside without her color off at first she's really shocked and scared but then tells him everying and how she got married to dutta after she finish her story asks her why she doesn't just tell him the truth and let god handle everything else but then she tells him how she's afraid how he might just accuse of deciving him again then she begins to cry jagtap tries to console he but then he just hugs her, dutta sees this, how there talking and bonding so well which makes him jealous but doesn't say anything but he's really aware of them, back at the search party baji and his people are really close but there unaware of the fact that Anna's people are right behind him and basically leading them the way to fight, baji and his people find naku and dutta, there really happy and stuff but dutta feels that there people watching them so out of no ware he pulls out one of baji's guns and looks around the jungle. Anna's people start shooting and so does dutta's people. While there shooting and everything naku and jagtap spilt apart and take cover, dutta sees naku and how afraid she is, on the other hand he also sees jagtap pick up a gun and points it at dutta then naku sees him to( she thinks he gonna shoot him because of the pain dutta caused her but then realizes there's Anna's men behind him and he's aiming it at them not at dutta) dutta gets really alert so he takes his gun and shoots at jagtap, naku sees this and gets in the middle of dutta and jagtap, dutta is shell shocked about what just happened, the people behind him die but then jagtap runs quickly to naku and catches her before she hits the ground, everyone of anna's men are dead. Baji turns around and sees naku on the ground bleading and dutta in aiming position just frozen then he quickly runs up to dutta seeing that he's in shock he doesn't know what to do but then he orders his men to bring the car as soon as possible he goes and starts to shake dutta and gets out of his dilemma he sees naku and runs up to her, jugtap on the other hand is fuming with anger and is yelling at dutta but all he does is stare at naku and holds her hand, next thing you know everyone is in the cars driving like maniacs. Naku is in dutta's arms and all he can say is "don't leave me" "please forgive me" there soon at the hospital, datta is screaming at the doctors to attend to naku. As the nurses and doctors tend to her dutta warns the doctors that nothing should happen to her. A they rush naku to the ICU all dutta could think about is how he shot naku. As the doctor comes rushing out the first person he sees in dutta approaching him he doesn't know what to say to him but all he could say is " I think you should come with me" at first he doesn't understand whats going on but then walks in the room where there preparing naku for surgery, as he walks in he sees the nurse cleaning naku's face with a cloth and color starts to come off then all of the sudden jagtap walks in and tells him that is the reason why you brought this fool in here then everyone looks at him he tells him that I know about naku's true face and he tells the doctor if he's done investigating this poor girl and start saving her life. The doctors ask them to leave and dutta is in more shock. As soon as they take out the bullet and sedate her they leave her to rest, the doctor goes outside and tells dutta that she's out of danger and he could go see her ina little while. Datta has no reaction but then baji goes on his side as asks him to go and see naku, but all he could say is how I will face her. But then jagtap says "what do you mean how you will face her, she's your wife isn't she." Then he starts to walk towards naku's room as he walks in he doesn't see naku in her bed he looks around but no sight of naku just a letter on the bed with the chain that he put around naku saying this is a manglesutre.
sooo what do you guys think, please leave some comments or share ideas of what you think should happen. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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aw wow thats brilliant. i actually thought once before if dutta SHOOTS nakky by mistake it will be brilliant twist to the tale
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Cool idea dear..Nakku leaving him will knock all the more sense in his brains😆 Well written..pls. do continue....would love to know how mr dutta bhau will reacts if nakku leaves him😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Its awsum dear......bt if all dis hav to happen in d show it wud take months😆..........cont soon yar
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exellent dear !!! plz continue... nakku leavin dutta, for once he'll hve to go behind her. GUD GUD
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow!!!amazing!! excellent..
u can start an FF kinno..
we all know u dear..u have been part of the discussions yaar!!😆..
great thoughts kinno!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you all for your reading this and your support. Actually this was my first thoughts on LTL, so I thoughts what would happen if there were to be twist and please if anyone has any story or thoughts on what should happen please do share.😊😊😊😊

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As he walked to the bed he held the chain in his hand and began to read the letter. "saab I know by the time your reading this letter I won't be here, don't worry I won't try to get a part of your life. You said as soon as were out of the jungle you go your way and I go my ways so don't worry I'm going my way. I know you said you didn't love me and don't believe in this marriage so I swear I won't ever ask for any rights. I know you probably saw my real face already, I apologize that I didn't tell you earlier but you never gave me a chance I know you probably don't believe anything I say so I'm leaving don't worry I won't look back at my past, I'll forget that we were friends, I'll forget we were husband and wife and I'll forget that I loved you; i suggest you do the same."

-NAKU

As he looked read the letter a tear fell out of his eye and fell on the letter. When he looked that the chain he thought about all the horrible things he did to naku, all the stuff he said to her, all the pain he caused her. As jagtap and baji walked into the room they saw dutta sitting on the bed reading a letter and holding a chain. At first they were shocked to see him in this condition but then jagtap asked "where's naku" he didn't get a reply then he looked at baji, he went near dutta then he answered "she's gone" at first jagtap was taken by the tone in his voice then he said "what do you mean she's gone" as dutta looked him in the eyes he could see that he'd been crying then he said "I mean she left" then he handed him the letter to read to himself. As he read the letter jagtap said "Aren't you gonna look for her, she couldn't have gone far" as he looked at dutta again he looked as if he didn't want to do anything. "dutta" as he turned around he said " there's no point in looking for her, she left on her own" "are you crazy" baji yelled "how could you say that, how could you forget she saved your life more than once and your saying this." "There's no point in talking with him" said japtap. "But what about naku, anna's people are still out there, she could be in danger right now, they could KILL HER" yelled baji. As baji said that dutta suddenly looked up and he knew he was right naku could be in danger he didn't what to waste anymore time so he took his people and started to look for naku. When naku fled out of the hospital she knew that she had to get away from this place, she knew that she had to start a fresh life, but also knew that she had to meet her mom, and tell her that she's ok. As she went to Patel Nivas she knew that she would have to be careful. As she walked into PN she went straight to the servant corners, she saw her mom and she was very worried about her daughter, she was also happy that she wasn't in her color. Naku explained everything that happened in the jungle and the hospital; she also told her that she can't live like this anymore she had to start a new life, a better life. At first her mom was really emotional but she knew what her daughter was saying was true she did have to leave this life because there was nothing left then pain and misery and she didn't want her daughter hurt anymore. As she gave naku her her blessings she also gave her some money and clothes. Before leaving naku made her swear that she couldn't tell anyone that she came here and that she had to hate her. At first babi was shocked she didn't understand why her daughter was asking this but then she understood that her hating her would not let any guilt haunt or hurt her. As she left the PN she notices that some men were following her then she realized that it was Anna's people…

Thanks for reading and please do comment, or share some ideas😊😊😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: misssmily

exellent dear !!! plz continue... nakku leavin dutta, for once he'll hve to go behind her. GUD GUD


thanks for reading please continue the next part too.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghaparti

Cool idea dear..Nakku leaving him will knock all the more sense in his brains😆 Well written..pls. do continue....would love to know how mr dutta bhau will reacts if nakku leaves him😆


thanks for reading what do you think should happen.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: betty123

Its awsum dear......bt if all dis hav to happen in d show it wud take months😆..........cont soon yar


i know but i was hoping that the CVS people would show LTL Mon-sat so that the story would move faster but i doubt they'll ever do that.😆

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