New Tasha OS...Love Story..HUG ME TIGHT Pg17!!!!!! - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
Oh i c...........aur ussmein u forgot to even reply to my pms!😭.............Koi baat nahiin hope Dutta wins ur interest and heart again.............Love u dear and missued u ...........🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi sheeba

thanks alot, its grt😛😛😛😛😛 waiting 4 more😉😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HEY SHEEBA i just love ur FF.......really it would be nice to see it in show too...hey """amazing""
⭐️⭐️⭐️continue ur other FF too""TU HI TO CHAHIYE NAKKU"""
update this one too......... yaar
both are just awesome!!!!!!!!!!

⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankx Shally.........Glad u liked this one too😊......Next part asap............Hope u enjoy it too dear............😳..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ThankxSneha.........Glad u liked this one too😊......Next part asap............Hope u enjoy it too dear............😳..............

Yaar I know I kept u all waiting lekin next week on august 1 its my birthday isliye I thought tum logon ko grand party doon😉...........everyday from tomorrow I will update the FFs yaa one shot any one thing...........and on Monday I will update PKYD.............theek hai!..............Sorryy to keep u waiting lekin iss week merii tabiyat bhii kharaab thii had fevr abhi bhi hai lekin I am one of those people jo jab tak bistar par naa padh jaayein araam nahiin kartey...............Keep smiling..............😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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sheebu......i am reading OS for the first time and it was absolutely mindblowing.........good job plz keep updating it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oooo Emmmm Giiiii.....................Sheeba..........what is this???

Wow...................I'm totally lost in your writing!!!

I loved the second scene the most!!!

OMG.......................darling kurtaless.............. 😲😲😲

What a scene yaar!!! I loved it!!! Keep rocking girl!!

I am getting all nasty thoughts!!! 😆😆😆

It would be nice na if we get to see that scene in current track? 😳😃

LOVELY!!! Update soon, I'm waiting!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG sheeba thanx for the new OS yaar 🤗 totally mindblowing yaar ..iam speechless...ur amazing writer....i really loved it .....haila kurtaless dutta 😍 ,,,,pls jaldi update karo .....take care and see u around 👏 👍🏼 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok guys here's the next part.............Hope u like this one too..........

Its a scene in the jungle.........inside the cotage.........U see Dutta is still lying unconscious..........

He stirs a little.............slowly he opens his eyes and looks around.....

His heas was spinning hard.........and sitting up he notices he was not wearing his kurta!...........😳😉

Dutta looks around and finds t lying nearby..........

He then notices the lep on his wounds..........Dutta moves his shoulder and found it hurt!..........He winces in pain...............

Dutta recalls how jagtap had walked upto him and hit him.........He remembers how nakku hid behind him...........

Dutta looks aroun worried for nakus wellbeing...........He calls out----Nakku!.............

He quickly gets up inspite of the pain and looks around everywhere to find nakku but in vain..........

Dutta looks aroun to find naku's clothes lying there...........His Heart sinks!!................

hE FRANTICALLY MAKES HIS WAY OUTSIDE to find jagtaap standing there and walking upto him he points the gun at his forhead )iss One shot mein dutta's gun is loaded!...........)..........and says----Kahaan hai Nakusha?!...........😡

Jagtap smiles and says----Bahot chintaa hai usski?!..........

Dutta glares hard at him and says-----Jitnaa poocha hai utnaa bol.............NAKKU KAHAAN HAI?!...............

Jagtaap says-----Baat baat par bandook uthaaney kii bimaari hai tujhey Dutta Patil?!...............😳

Dutta had had enough of jagtap and he says angrily----MAINNEY POOCHA NAKKU KAHAAN HAI?!...........

Jagtaap points to outside in the jungle and says----Woh rahii.........

Dutta turns to look in the direction jagtap had pointed and find nakku dressed in a red salwaar kameez and she was playing around with a small rabbit and lamb!...........amiling and talking to those animals she seemd to b all happy and elated!.............🥳

Dutta turns o face jagtaap again and lowers down the gun..............

Jagtap says----Kya hua Patil saab.............(I can't stop laughing when jagtap calls shonaa Patil saab...........awsomeeeeeeeee.................)..........Lagtaa hai apnii patnii ko iss tarah khush aur yun muskuraatey hue kabhii nahiin dekha?!..............😆

Dutta stares at jagtaap as he recalls nakku always grim and after their marriege he had always seen her sad and crying.............Dutta realised all those tears .....that pai.....the sadness..............the suffering he had given to her.............He lowers his eyes and turns to look at nakku again as she played on with the two new friends she found!.............😳

Jagtaap says----Tu kaisaa aadmii hai dutta!...........Shaadi kar ke..............humsafar aur humraaz laaya hai apnii zindagii mein yaa phir ek ghulaam!............Jissey jab tu jo kehtaa hai woh wahii kartii hai...........

Dutta takes in a deep breath and recalls nakku telling him at the cliff end----jab mann chahaa shaadi kar lii.............aur phir na jaaney kya ehsaas hua........SHAADI KHATAM!................😭

Dutta then recalls how nakku had told him when she came to attend to his wounds saying----Aapki nafrat...aapka gussa...........har sazaa sar aankhon par...............

Nakku turns to see Dutta standing and she says to him showing the bunny-----DEKHO SAAB.........KITNA PYAARA HAi......🤪

Dutta sees nakku run after that rabbit and he calls out to her loudly-----NAKKU DHYAAN SE ...........ZYAADA DURR MATT JAANA!..............😍

Jagtaap smiles as he could sense the concern and worry in dutta's voice.............

He says----Jaa.....yeh jungle bahot kharaab jagah hai...........Durr nikal gayii naa woh.............Toh shaayad phir kabhii nahiin milegii!.............Phir rehnaa apnii akelii duniyaa mein.................akeley...............HUMESHAA KE LIYE!...........Ek baar pyaar kho diyaa..........toh chahey kitnaa hii taakatvar insaan kyun naa ho Patil saab..........woh pyaar...woh pyaar karney waala nahiin lautta................👏

With this jagtaap leaves from there and dutta looks at nakku run after that animal.............Jagtaaps words echo in his head.............and the next instant u see Dutta walks after nakku quickly.................😊

Precap----Dutta and Nakku hug each other...........tears roll down naku's eyes..............Oh sorry.............correction plzzzz kurtaless dutta hugs nakku!.............😳

Kaisa lagaa?.............😊

Jaldii bataao..................😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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sheeba very well written great part 👏 👏 ,nakku playing with rabbits and dutta watching her I am dreaming want same to happen in the show, Thursday when nakuu innocently went to flowers I taught dutta will stare at her ,but our gadha did not recognize it ,hope this time he notices. Update next part soon, please let me know at what time you may update

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