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Posted: 15 years ago
Sheeba...
It was excellent ....too good...me khogayi apne sapno me kisike saath.....😉
Edited by geethasingh - 15 years ago
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Dutta and nakku sit quiet after they finish dinner.........

Dutta doesn't know what to say and nakku...........she waietd for him to say something!..............

There is thunder in the sky and it begins to rain...............

Nakku looks around smiling and seeing nakku's elated expressions dutta realises nakku loved rains!.............

The next instant u see nakku getting herself drenched in the rain while dutta just stood admiring her from inside..............

Just then dutta's phone rings and he turns around to talk....its baaji who is all smiles as he says----KYA BHAU?!..............Boley toh merii taiyaarii kaisii lagii?!.............

Dutta smiles and sounding angry he says-----Tu waapas toh baaji.............Main bhii tere liye taiyaari karke baithaa hai.............Terii dhulaayi karney kii taiyaarii!..............

Bajji chuckles and keeps down after telling dutta that outside the hotel a car waited for them to take them back to PN.............. the phone and dutta turns around to see nakku is not there!...........

Dutta looks around and still doesn't see her..............His heart misses a beat..................

He moves out and is relieved o find nakku playing with the waves at the farend of the shore!..............

Worried dutta quickly makes way to where she stood.............

He reaches her and holding her by her arm he brings her closer to himself.............Nakku smiles and seeing a worried dutta look at her her smile vanishes!...............

Dutta finds himself lost in nakuu's beautiful eyes..............he wanted to yell at her for goig away like that.......instead he ends up coming so close to nakku that he could feel her breathe!.............

He ends up gazing at naku's trembling lips curled up in a smile.............and the rain pours harder as dutta slowly trails nakku's lips with his fingre and holding her by her waist he brings her even more clos to himself.............

The song plays in the BG..........

Aakhon ke sagar.........
Hothon ke sagar.............

U see slowly nakku lowers her eyes................and as dutta comes to almost kiss her sh closes them.............

Just then there is strong thunder in the sky and dutta relising what he was about to do..............

The two gaze at each other as the voice in the BG says----- Apney tootey dil mein kya dutta dey paayegaa jagah akusha ko?..........Kya ehsaas hogaa usssey apney pyaar kaa?..............Yaa phir yun hii banii rahegii duriyaan inn do pyaar karney waalon ke darmiyaan?!...............

The screen blacks out!..............

Next u see Dutta is in PN in his room and is standing in front of the mirror.............He looks at himself and recalls how close he had come to almost kiss nakku!...........

Dutta closes his eyes hatefully thinking----YEH KYA HO GAYAA HAI MUJHEY?!.............Naku KO APNEY ITNEY KAREEB PAAKAR KYA HO JAATA HAI MUJHEY?!.............Kyun nahiin rok paata main khud ko?!................KYU?!................

Dutta looks at himself as naku's words echo in his head----Meraa yeh ek tarfaa pyaar hum donon ke iss rishtey ko umr bhar nibhaaney ke liye kaafi hai................

He says to himself----Woh mujhpar kitnaa bharosaa kartii hai.....dost maanti hai mujhey aur main?!................

Dutta takes in a deep breath and closes his eyes...........

Outside u see Nakku sat in front of dutta's room by the pillar looking into emptiness.............

The screen splits and on one side u see Dutta feeling miserable and on the other side a hurt naku!.............

Kaisa lagaa?.........


Jaldi batao.................




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Posted: 15 years ago


...you are awesome......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! welcome back Sheeba...missed you yaar....!!!!!!!!!!!



--Saaki-- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Woowwwwwwwwwwww..............Loved it Sheebu.
All 5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️........................
SUPERB Sheebu.Yaar,tu itni rommantic scenes kaise likhleti ho?Mujhe bhi thodi tips do..................



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Posted: 15 years ago
Thankx lava Yaar me too missed u all soooooooooooooooooo much!......................Yaar u liked it that much?!..............I am soooooooo glad!...................



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Posted: 15 years ago

sheeba.... you're awesome yaar.....👏👏👏👏

keep on ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
sheeba very well written enjoyed every bit you are too good 😳 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG saki...............U liked it that much dear?!.............well bas mishu kaa naam lo aur sheeba shuru!....................I am soooooooooooooo glad u liked it and five stars at last yipeeeeeeeeeeeee......................



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Posted: 15 years ago

welcme back Sheeba
aur wapas aayi bhi tow itna accha ek script update leke
Wonderful
@Saaki arey Sheeba eitna accha keise na likkhey???
akhir woh ultimate Mishal diwani hein
woh apne aap ko Naku ke jaghe raakh kar script sochtiy hein Im sure



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MishalLeoSheeba

OMG saki...............U liked it that much dear?!.............well bas mishu kaa naam lo aur sheeba shuru!....................I am soooooooooooooo glad u liked it and five stars at last yipeeeeeeeeeeeee......................




K dear.Jab mujhe karna hoga meri FF main.MAin bhi aise hi karoongi.........
Thx for the tips yaar.....................



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