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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankx Aarathi............Glad u liked this one too..........Next part asap............Hope u enjoy it too dear............😳...........Yaar just making the next part updating soon.............enjoy waisey yeh kya mast pic lagaayi hai aisaa lagg rahaa hai Dutta is smiling at me!...........Aur suno haan sahii kahaa...............HUMAARA SHONAA WILL BE BACK SOooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.................🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankx Sumi..........Glad u liked this one too..........Next part asap............Hope u enjoy it too dear............😳.........Shernii..........well wait and watch.............😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankx Salsa..........Glad u liked this one too..........Next part asap............Hope u enjoy it too dear............😳...Ok dear aapka hukm sar aankhon par.........Sounds familiar?............Dimaag lagaao samjh jaaogii..........Hope u enjoy tasha scenes coming up............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankx Jess..........Glad u liked this one too..........Next part asap............Hope u enjoy it too dear............😳...Next part working on it............coming soon Enjoy..............😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankx Shweta..........Glad u liked this one too..........Next part asap............Hope u enjoy it too dear............😳.................OMG............ur comment leaves me speechless.............Yaar plz itni responsibility hai mujh par seeing ur all comments.............I just hope the One shot lives upto it...........I know I hope tasha r back with bang in the show..............🥳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello everyone..........well at atlast monday aa hii gayaa...........Here's the next longgggggggg part.............Hope u all enjoy.................😊

The man raises his arms and points it to Dutta..........

There Dutta stirs...........he tries to move byt his body hurt............He winces in pain……… see he is having flashes of ow he had been in the chopper when it started jerking……..the next thing he knew was that the pilot had pushed him out of the helicopter saying----Bhau main aapko kuch nahiin honney dey saktaa………

Dutta remebered hitting the ground and then he had heard the loud sound……..The chopper had crashed……..

Dutta opens his eyes……..He finds himself staring at that man poiting the gun on him…………

He raises his head and feeling like everything around him was spinning Dutta falls back………..

His eyes closed……….

The wicked man smiles……….

Just as Dutta gathers all strenth to get up and give the goon a nice beating……….U see he is about to pull the trrigger……….

There is a noise……….A gun is fired……….

Dutta opens his eyes to find the man fall down……….

He looks around to find some distance away Nakku stood with the gun in her hand aiming at that gundaa………..

Dutta stares at Nakku longingly……….

Nakku felt her hands tremble as she realised what she had done!..........

She drops the gun to the ground……….

Tears begin to well up in her eyes………..

The next instant u see Dutta is trying to get up and Nakku rushes to her side to help him lekin he glares hard at her…………(Oh Dutta she deserves a thankx and not those kiliing looks………..Donkey dutta bhii naa?...........what say?..............)………..

Nakku doesn't give his expressions any heed and instead she helps him et up inspite of Dutta asking her not to saying----Main theek hoon………….(Toot phoot gaye ho abhii bhi Nakku ko nakhrey dikhaa rahey ho…………)………..

Nakku steps back and Dutta staggers……….his head was still spinning……….

He holds the near by tree for support……….

Nakku steps forward and puts a hand on his shoulder……….

Dutta found himself real close to nakku……….

He could see she was worried…………he could see she was upset……….and crying………Dutta turns away his face……….(Come On Dutta Patil sach kaa samnaa karo…………U love Nakku…………)…………

Dutta takes in a deep breath when he feels someone put a hand on his arm………

He turns to find it was nakku who had torn a piece from her dupatta and was tying it around Dutta's injured arm…………..

Dutta finds himself gazing at Nakku……….

The mouthorgan tune plays in the background and u see…….Nakku ties the cloth around Dutta's bleeding arm……….while Dutta watched her silently………..(Dekhaa uss time kamrey mein itnaa attitude naa dikhayaa hotaa toh yeh sab naa hotaa)…………

U see Dutta turns aroun and he sees one of the other Annas gundaa was standing ringht behind Nakku and pointing the gun to her!...........

In one fluid motion…………Dutta turns Nakku round taaki she comes behind him and kicks the man hard!...........

A scared Nakku closes her eyes…………

Dutta beats the gundaa down and he realised he wasn't alone in that forest………..He turns to look at nakku as she still stood her eyes closed…………

He says to her----Kya zaroorat thi aisey yaahan aaney kii?............Apnii jaan mere liye khetrey mein kyun daal rahii hai tu?..........

Nakku opens her eyes and looks at Dutta silently……….

Dutta got his answer…………it was all evident on nakku's face and in her tears……………..she loved him…………Lekin still Dutta didn't want to accept it………….He turns away from Nakku and picks up the gun which Nakku had dropped down…………and holding her hand the two move away into the jungle…………..😳

Kaisa lagaa?..........

Jaldii bataao...........😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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sheeba kya likh thi ho yaar.
you are too good. 👏 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
Thankx dear Love u...........Mishal will be back soonnnnnnnnnnn mere toh paer zameen par nahiin padh rahey hain..................😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
I loved it. The action, language was so true to their respective characters, e.g. Dutta not able to believe Naku's intentions, Naku taking care of him, silently.

Keep going, and don't forget the love piece... you know they have to spend overnight in the jungle...😆

Looking forward to the next section. Thank you for the lovely story so far.
Edited by gp00 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankx gp00.....Glad u enjoye this one too dear...........Next part asap................😳 .............Yaa I am soooooooooooo glad u mentined all this.........achcha overnight tasha in jungle...........Betaa bahot umeedein hain tumhey toh...........Hope the one shot lives upto ur expectations..........😍

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