**NEW FF** Pyaar Karti Hain Na Mujhse-PT3 PG10!!

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sajinisingh

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Posted: 15 years ago

ok guys im going to start a new ff and upload first part by end of tonite 😛..pls take it easy on me 😆 and also i need ideas for the name thanks guys luv u all
saj 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

1part here finally 😳 😆

pleeezzz do comment...and help me think of a good name 😃

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sajinisingh

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Posted: 15 years ago

first part--il give u a wrning it doesnt have much action but will towards end and pt 2 onwards i promise n plz do excuse my hindi

ok this starts off at the scene where naku is packing her case and saying bye to family....naku babi and ganpat are talking and BG suddenly appears in room and says 'nakusha, bhau ne tujhe bulaya hai apne kamrey mein' she lokks at her family and everyone is in tears apart frm ganpat who can only see the money and drink flashing before his eyes..babi and naku hug and babi lifts her case and walks with her..

naku looks back at ganpat and sethji with tears in her eyes..she holds on to babis hand and they carry on walking til they reach the bappa statue(is tht wt u call it i dnt knw-sry!) they both fold their hands and say a silent prayer after which they hug and naku lifts her case to walk up the stairs..

as she goes up each step the memories of the time her and dutta come flooding back and she becomes emotional..she remembers the happy times they spent together and how they met (so cute na lol) and she smiles a little..then she remembers wt hapend in the last 24hrs and hw dutta had accused her of being decitful towards him and this hurts her and this thought keeps ringing in her head..and she begins to cry silent tears..

as she approaches duttas room she wipes her tears and straightens her pallu..she knocked on the door and waited for a reply..when she didnt get one she opened the door a crack and peeked inside..she spotted dutta alone and decided to go in..she closed the door behind her and set her suitcase on the floor.. dutta still had his back to her and was sitting hunched over at the bar..he poured himself another drink and drank it down in one gulp..he carried on as if he hadnt noticed naku had come in and was standing behind him..she finally plucked up the courage to say'saab aap ne mereko bulaya tha?'..

suddenly duttas figure tensed up and he swivelled around in his chair before he slowly and sarcastically slurred 'achcha tho datta shreeram patil ki daram patni ponch gae'..he had an evil smile on his face as she continued to taunt naku who stood there silently as he staggered towards her, whisky bottle in hand..suddenly he shouted 'THO KITNI DER LAGDI HAI SIDHEEYAN CHADHNE MEIN'..naku jus looked down and thought hes drunk he doesnt know what hes saying..dutta then comes closer and calmly says 'jab pati kuch poochta hai..tho patni ka farz hota hai jawab dena' he then moves back and suddenly his volume turns up..he shouts..'KIYA SUNAIYE NAHIN DE RAHA HAI TUJHE?!!'..

then he comes right in her face and she fliches as she starts to say 'woh..saab..mein..' before he cuts her off 'MAIN NAHIN SUNNA CHAHTA TUMHARA BAQWAS NAKKU KIYA PATTA HAI KE SACH HAI KE JHOOT..TU NE MUJHE ITNA BARA DHOKA DIYA THA NA' naku cries and shakes her head (saying no)..he then lowered his tone down to a wisper and as he went close to her and said in her ear 'mein pehle tumhari har baat manta tha..aur ab tu ne meri har baat mani ho ghi' as he continued to glare at her and circle her whilst gulping down whisky out the bottle..

he began to shout again 'AAKIR TEREKO MIL GAYA NA TUMHARA PYAAR AUR AB MUJHE MILEGA JO MEIN CHAHTA HOON' then he came to her ear from behind and said'ab tumhara kiya hoga'..this made her jump an she tightly shut her eyes as if to protect herself.. he smiled evily at the sight of scaring her..naku kept her eyes closed as she heard a very loud bang and something smash straight after..she put her hands to her ears and flinched as if she was expecting something to be thrown at her..

when she realised she was unhurt..curious to know what had caused the bang..she slowly opened her eyes and examined herself..yes she was unhurt..she looked around her and spotted dutta lying on the floor..unconscious..naku was shell shocked and continued gawping as she saw blood seep from his mouth and the smashed bottle in peices by his side................

much more action on next one .....😃

kaese laga.......