FF-FIRST LOVE UPDT PG18..21st JUNE - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Naina_Mishal

jaldi update karo na psl.....:D

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hey naina..sorry yaar but have etc work..will try to update by night😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: jess_dutta

hey naina..sorry yaar but have etc work..will try to update by night😃

okaiii no problem lakin try zarror karna 😃
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Edited by Naina_Mishal - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Naina_Mishal

okaiii no problem lakin try zarror karna 😃
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hey naina updating dutta pov now😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Hey guys this is the continuation of chapter 10 with dutta's thoughts

DUTTA POV

Dutta was busy with the preparations with kala wedding'his only blessing was that naku was there with him all the way..sometimes he wondered what he would do without her..he could still remember her as that cute 12 year old who had bumped into her..it was her birthday that day..and he demanded her to give him chocolate and she so innocently opened her bag to do so.10 years have passed since then and they had come a long way..she was still that innocent girl who blushed at the slightest thing'one way she had crawled under his skin in such a way that he could not even remember his life before her.

His mother's voice interrupted his thought process..and she told him to check whether nakusha was ready or not'immediately he bounded up the stairs what his little devil was wearing(I know guys right now he still thinks of her as the small girl..But don't worry not for long 😉😆)'he pushed open the door to call her but stopped in his tracks when he caught sight of her..she was clad in a beautiful pink sari hugging beautifully on her slender frame..her hair was tied in a bun..giving view to her back which was showcased in a low cut blouse..he could not help but notice how much of her skin was visible'when he looked at her in the mirror..he realy felt never before he saw such a beautiful sight.

The sound of her bangles brought him out of his daze..and he saw her struggling with the dori of her blouse..he moved forward and held her hand..minute she looked at him he could not help drowning in her eyes..when immediately she looked down and began her trademark blush..when he saw her blush it took all his strength not to turn her around and kiss her on her pink cheeks..he immediately shook his head to clear the thought and told her..let me help..she released the string and brought her hands down'he walked forward and stood close behind her'when he looked up he saw she had closed her eyes..and he took the time to look at her'and couldn't help but realise how lovely she was..when he finished tying he dori he could not help but lightly trace her back with his fingers..feeling the smooth skin of her back..he felt her hold her breath..and suddenly realised that he was not the only one affected by her..she too to some extent was affected by him..and he couldn't help but smile.

He was going to move away although reluctantly..but as if destiny was at his side..her chain took the chance to fall from her neck..before she bent down..he did and picked up the chain..he looked at her as if asking her permission to allow him to put the chain around her neck'she looked at him and gave the permission to do so 'he placed the chain round her neck..on seeing how the hook was he bent forward to tighten it with his teeth..while doing that he brought his face to the crook of her neck..he breathed in her fragrance of light jasmine..and realised it suited her ..as he bit the hook..his lips touched the nape of her neck..at that instant all he wanted to do was throw out his inhibitions and just kiss her there..marking her as his..but he controlled himself and moved back not before he placed a feather light kiss there(naughty dutta lol😆😆)

Finished he said..on hearing his voice he realised how hoarse he sounded..as she turned to look at him..he could not understand why all of the sudden he was becoming aware of her..looking at her he complimented her that she was looking very beautiful..but something was missing..on seeing her confusion he could not help but smile..and he brought his hand near her hair and released it from the bun'seeing his handiwork he smiled and said now you look complete..seeing her surprised he said..i like with your hair left and just as he expected there was the appearance of that endearing blush..

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Edited by jess_dutta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Lovely update jess ...
plzz make it a lil longer next time ....dil nahi bharta ..!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was very nice jess...i enjoy reading it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Lovely update jess ...
plzz make it a lil longer next time ....dil nahi bharta ..!😳

hey shabz..glad u liked it
will try to make it longer next time..Embarrassed
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Irika95

that was very nice jess...i enjoy reading it

thanks irika...glad u r enjoying this😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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love it jess....thanx fpr PMing me....upload soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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totally awesome plz pm me whn u update.
plzzzzzzzzzzzz

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