FF-FIRST LOVE UPDT PG18..21st JUNE - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: kritika4eva

Jess!!! whrz ur hand??*kisses*!!❤️❤️ i luved readin dis!update kar jaldi!!! 😃

thanks kri😳😳..glad u enjoyed it..will try to update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Ladioos

AWW!! gud one... i luv that KALA is the gud one 😃 !

plz update soon

hey glad you enjoyed it
will try to update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
hey jess...thoroughly enjoyed readin it!!😃..im even loving the witty conversation tween the two friends..😆😆..welldone ..u write really well!!😳😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: nazia.icycool

hey jess...thoroughly enjoyed readin it!!😃..im even loving the witty conversation tween the two friends..😆😆..welldone ..u write really well!!😳😃

hey nazia...thanks for liking it...😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 10
A 28 year old dutta came barging into the room with his mother on hearing the scream..he thought his sister and naku were in trouble but got real confused when he saw them jumping up and down like some fools..what the hell is going on here he asked them..on seeing dutta and aunty naku said..kishore is coming this evening to ask for kala hand in marriage..dutta got angry on hearing this and said but she is only a kid
KID?the three women were in shock..what do you mean kid dutta's mother asked him..she is becoming 23..when do you want her to get married when she is 32 asks naku..dutta was still confused..i didnt know she was 23..kala looked at him shocked..how old do you think i am then..dutta looks at her honestly i have never thought of your age he answered confused...naku looked at dutta you have lost it dutta patil nakusha officially declared..23 dutta mumbled to himself and went out of the room
aaisaheb smiled as she understood what her son was thinking..she turned towards kala and said for dutta no matter how big you are you will always be his baby sister..so tell me when kishore is coming..immediately both girls began filling her with all the details.
It was decided for kishore and kala's marriage to take place in 2weeks...dutta and naku were busy with the preperations while kala and kishore were busy romancing god knows where😉😆
on sunday the engagaement was a grand ceremony..kala was looking beautiful in her red and gold lehnga and kishore dashing in his black kurta..
naku for the first time was going to wear a sari...she wore a beautiful pink sari with silver embriodery and tied her in a bun...her slender hand were filled with bangles and lovely danglers adorned her ears..she wore a thin chain round her neck..although the chain was really loose and she was fed up of tightening it and she left it as it is..while making last minute arrangements she realised that she forgot to tie her blouse dori..she was stuggling to tie it when suddenly a hand stopped her stuggling...she looked up and from the mirror she saw dutta standing behind her looking so handsome in is blue sherwani..his hair gelled back..and his eyes watching her with such intensity..naku blushed on seeing him and lowered her gaze.
Let me help you dutta said and naku placed her hands in the side..dutta began tying her dori..naku was feeling breathless with his closeness..she shivered as his fingere touched the bare skin of her back while tying it..she felt the time had slown down being alone in the room with him..and wished he would finish fast..but as if something wanted to keep them together her loose chain decided to fall of the minute he finished tying the dori..before naku could pick it dutta had already bent down to pick it up.
He looked at her as if asking permission to put the chain around her neck..she looked at him and noded ok..he placed the chain around her neck..on seeing the hook he knew why it was always falling down...and forward to tighten the hook with his teeth😳...naku felt him close and then realised he was going to tighten the hook with his teeth..she felt daze when she felt his breath hitting the nape of her neck..she felt his lips touching her skin as he bit the hook to tighten it..he was so close to her..his scent filling her nose..and she closed her eyes as if to relish his presence..before he straightened up she thought she felt him kiss her on her back..but then ignored it feeling it might be a dream..finished dutta said in hoarse voice and naku opened her eyes..she saw him just looking at her..she always was proud of her ability to read him but for the first time she could not say what he was thinking.
Then dutta spoke...you are looking very beautiful tonight..naku blushed on hearing this..but there is something missing he continued..as if finding her voice naku turned to face him and asked him what..he smiled and reached out for her bun and with one twist released her hair from the bun..her hair fell in layers framing her face and covering her back..pleased with his work dutta removed his hand and said now its complete..naku looked at him surprised.
Edited by jess_dutta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
loved it yahr.....jaldi upload karoooooo
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Naina_Mishal

loved it yahr.....jaldi upload karoooooo

thanks naina..will do
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
i loved the sari scene- keep it up jess!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: jess_dutta

thanks naina..will do

okay I am waiting 😆😃
Naina
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: raziya56

i loved the sari scene- keep it up jess!

thanks raziya😃

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