FF-FIRST LOVE UPDT PG18..21st JUNE - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey guys..m so happy with the comments I got for the prev part..glad u liked it..being first attempt on that scene..glad it came out ok..so further delay here is the new part..

Part 12

Nakusha left the room to join the engagement party going on..she walked gracefully down the stairs..unaware of the stir her presence caused..unknown admired by most of the men there..her thoughts were still on dutta..the places where dutta kissed her she felt she was on fire..suddenly she felt a strong gaze on her and she turned her face sideways and as if connected to him in the entire crowd her eyes connected to his..holding his gaze she reached down..as if in trance she began to walk towards him

Dutta could not even think of breaking their gaze..she drew him to her like a moth to flame..when she came down the stairs..he couldn't help but admire how beautiful she was looking down..he could see all the other men observing her and all he wanted to do was beat them to pulp and whisk her away from here and take her where only both of them were'he saw her walking towards him and smiled but before she could reach where he stood she were dragged to the circle where remaining of her friends were
Dutta was suddenly rudely interrupted while he was admiring naku when he saw someone clinging to him'standing there was malika..he cursed his stars for bringing her there..she was a beautiful curvy girl..everything about her was stunning'maybe that is why like a fool he dated her for two months but realized what a shallow b***h she actually was'time and again he told her that they are not together but it didn't seem as if it entered her thick skull..now with naku in his life he didn't want any complications..so he looked around seeing the coast clear'took her by the hand and led her to his gardens
Naku saw a beautiful woman suddenly cling to her dutta..she never in her life felt so angry on see that woman..maybe more seeing that dutta was not even discouraging her. who is she?..she asked in general.one of the girl standing beside her said.oh that's malika..she and dutta were an on off item..dont they look good together..looks like now that she is back he might renew his relation with her..heard they were very compatible..and she winked and smiled slyly u know which way..naku felt her heart squeeze at the thought of him with anyone'no she tried to console herself it is nothing but the past..our kiss had meant something to both of us..she looked up trying to catch his eyes but as if her worst fears were being confirmed she saw him dragging that malika ou towards the garden..fortifying herself she decided to follow them

Dutta took malika to gardens what the hell are you doing here..malika looked at him oh come-on dutta its kala wedding do u think I am going to miss it..dutta couldn't help but smile..malika continued I know we are not together anymore but does it mean u have to cut me so completely..i wanted to see u for the last time before going to US..guess what I have gotten engaged..and will settle there..i really will miss you..dutta said I will miss you too and gathered her in his arms and said goodbye

Naku could feel her eyes watering when she saw dutta and malika hugging each other and she went from there..ofcourse what was she thinking..why would he choose a normal girl like her when he can have that gorgeous malika..how could she think that a single kiss would mean something to him'she walked in the party and began to feel claustrophobia'she went up towards the terrace'she loved the night time..the moon so gentle as if soothing her..for sometime she stood over there basking in the moonlight..through the French doors she could here the music drifting upwards

Suddenly she noticed that she was no longer alone and there was also a young man that had followed her up there.he was holding a couple of glasses of champagne and handed her one of the glasses..i noticed you coming out here I hope you don't mind that I joined you..of course not naku replied taking the glass from him and drank the drink in one go..kala has a lovely house..yes..she replied and took his glass too and gulped it in one go..my you really enjoy champagne don't you..naku smiled..i don't drink but I am actually enjoying the taste of this..she was starting to feel light-hearted and happy..she began to let go of her inhibitions.

The slow music was gently coming from the hall and she stood there and listened to it. would you like to dance he suddenly asked her removing her from the daze..uhh sure she replied..

The young man moved in front of her and slid one hand around her waist pulled her closer and her other hand that was still holding the glass to his chest..naku laughed and didn't push him away..she began to sway to the music..you are wasted on dutta..he is too stiff for a person like you..i love him she replied..even though at the moment she could barely cope with.

She tuened her fuzzy head against her shoulder and smiled a stunning smile into her companions captivated face

That was how dutta came upon her..he froze in his tracks..Enjoying youselves?..his deep voice harshly intruded.

Whatsay

Precap: He didn't answer,but his body language did,he pulled her behind hin down the front step towards his car to take her to her home. He was blisteringly,furiously angry.

Edited by jess_dutta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
very well written especially where datta wanted to hit the other men admiring naku's beauty was so good.waiting for the next part. 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
Beautiful update ....
I m loving this jealous Dutta...
update soon ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
fit fab awsum update nxt part soon 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it yaar....jaldi upload karna.....👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
u have written it beautifully jess..i loved it...well i sum how feel it was too foolish of dutta to still hang around with malika..no matter what it is..that was his past..hope he aint being a flirt..

neway..the last part was actually critical..me eagerly waiting to knw the rest of the story..plzz updade soon..
Edited by nazia.icycool - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
jealous dutta...yay!!
btw who was the guy? baji rao? lol
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Irika95

great update...continue soon

thanks irika..will try to update soon😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aarathikb

very well written especially where datta wanted to hit the other men admiring naku's beauty was so good.waiting for the next part. 👍🏼

glad u enjoyed this part aarathi...will try to update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Beautiful update ....
I m loving this jealous Dutta...
update soon ...

glad u enjoying jealous dutta..more to come😉
will try to update soon

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