TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 5

so i finally found my "aaram se" time😃...pehle part toh...you know how i felt about that one...just LOVED it...so different than the show...very cool to see Baji and Dutta as rivals and to see Baji as a strong willed man...wah wah...the part with the glass breaking in his hand😲...omg...so HOT! only Dutta and Baji can manage to make violence hot😆...hey Naku...not fair...dont be so harsh on our Dutta...he's so hot naa?😉 but chalo...gusse mein hi sahi...at least she's thinking about him😛,...see Dutta is a sweet heart...just a bit preoccupied with other things...shabz..jaldi...TaSha ki dusri mulaquat kara doh...so they can clear all ghalat fehmis😳...😲 baji...iss halat mein...what happened to his family? does it have anything to do with Dutta...is that why Baji hates him so much? eeks...jaldi post part 3 i cant wait

JAZ

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

Rejerved 😎

omg! shabz! it was amazing yaaar! whats going on between the pair of them? Nd this was soooo small yaar! i want longer updates!

Thankooozz Cindy ....
Wats goin between them ,,,to knw u hav to read ..
Yeh small tha ,,,😲😲,,,spare me ....itne hi kitni mushkil se likha ..😆
but willl update soon ..!😉

Originally posted by: -Parm-

hey shabz

I read TaSha and thought yeh log kuan hai...ROFL

anyways cool write-up..Duttta feeling guilty ...nice :)

continue asap

Not fair Parm...itni jaldi bhool gayi taSha ko ..😆
Thanx 4 reading & commenting ..😳
will update soon ..!

Originally posted by: swati2008

nice shabz...........dutta feeling guilty........n naku thinking about dutta n baaji...........😃😃..............do dutta n baaji are old friends cum enemies.............update soon.........i m dying of excitement.........

Na na ,,,aisa mat bolo ....
agar tum logon ko kuch ho gaya to mera SS kaun padhega ...😆
😆will update soon & Thanx ..!

Originally posted by: Irika95

nicee...plzz continue soon...want to see a tasha meeting
Thanx Irika ...
TaSha meeting will cum soon ....thoda sa intezaar ..😉
will update soon ..!

Originally posted by: shonapinky

Awesum shabz...so now derz sumthing more to dutta- baji rivalry....tat soundz so interesting ....wonder vat cd b d reason...okk lemme wait for ur updatez😳aww dutta feelz guilty ...tatz so cute....!!awaiting ur nex update...!!👍🏼

Of course there is more to dutta & baaji rivalry ...
ab ye kya hai ,,,4 dat u hav to read ...😆
Will update soon & Thanx Shona ..!

Originally posted by: betty123

shabz.........its very gud.............i m soo happy to gt tooomany FF's...........show mein to no tasha atleast FF mein to we gt dem............update soon⭐️

Yup Betty ur so rite ....
ye FFs hi to hamara sahara hain ....!
& thanx 4 reading ....will update soon ..!😉

Originally posted by: jani-yeh

whoa-k...that was a awesum next part Shabz....👏⭐️...

sooooooo very curious 2 knw wat has happened between Dutta n Baji...😕...

cnt w8 4 the nex part...plz do upd8 soon...😳

Thanx jani ,,,,😳
Ye hi to suspense hai ,,,but u will knw soon ..😉
will update soon ..!

Originally posted by: mayur-tasha

kya baat luv triangle ho gaya......its fun really.......gr8888 going..plz update fast n plz PM me na.......
omg datta-baaji is opponents over here......xcellent!!! datta thinking abt naku bt baaji does not.....😆😳

Yh ...can b a luv triangle ...lets see ..😉
Added in the PM list ..😊
will update soon ...!

Originally posted by: Vedika126

wow shabz. its fab. love it

Thanx vedika ..!😳

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Wow jaan.. kya baat hai.... INTENSE epi dear.... !! ❤️Gr8 job... really intrigued wit this gr8 animosity between Baaji n Dutta n really dying to knw the mystery behind this..😛😛😛

And wow... Naku already smiling remembering Baaji.. i like it like it.. 😳 n well so Dutta boys a toughie wit a heart of gold here as well.. kewlllll.....

Fab epi Shabzi..... 'aapna yeh FF writer wala roop kahan chupa kar rakha tha'??😍 Luv it.. ❤️

Thanx tanu ....
well u hav to read further to knw the mystery ...

Ab itna achcha bhi nahi ,,,,zyada maska mat kar .....waise mujhe to khud bhi pata k main likh sakti hoon ...😳😳...& i still don blieve ..!😆😆

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

shhaaabbzz rani!!!!!

wah wah kya baat kya baat kya baat !!!!!!

loved both the parts re!!!!!!!!!!

Lekhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ...mah krazzie buddy ...🤗
good to see u here ...😃
& thanx a lot 4 reading ....!

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

interesting...there is more to it than business rivalry? like a lady love? naku seems to have a crush on baji. 😉

Thanx Shreya ...
Lady love ,,,,may b ,,,who knws ..😆
read to knw further ..!😉

Originally posted by: jnawaz

so i finally found my "aaram se" time😃...pehle part toh...you know how i felt about that one...just LOVED it...so different than the show...very cool to see Baji and Dutta as rivals and to see Baji as a strong willed man...wah wah...the part with the glass breaking in his hand😲...omg...so HOT! only Dutta and Baji can manage to make violence hot😆...hey Naku...not fair...dont be so harsh on our Dutta...he's so hot naa?😉 but chalo...gusse mein hi sahi...at least she's thinking about him😛,...see Dutta is a sweet heart...just a bit preoccupied with other things...shabz..jaldi...TaSha ki dusri mulaquat kara doh...so they can clear all ghalat fehmis😳...😲 baji...iss halat mein...what happened to his family? does it have anything to do with Dutta...is that why Baji hates him so much? eeks...jaldi post part 3 i cant wait

JAZ

Originally posted by: newbe

this is very intresting shabz😃...keep going it is BOHOT GOOD !!😃🤗
Thanx Mads ...😉
will update soon ...!

Originally posted by: sana786a

omg shabz amazing story loved it👏😃update soon dis was really short cant wait 2 read more

Thankooz Sana ...😳
willl try to make it longer next part ....😆
will update soon ..!

Originally posted by: lovely

Shabz finally caught up with your FF. Baaji and Dutta rivals.. that's interesting. Tota reader ne mujhe Geet ki yaad dila di.😆

And Naku has a crush on Baji. Dutta ki position down????😆

I have stopped watching this crap and only read the updates sometimes.. But I will read ur FF. PM kar dena pls when you post the next part.

Thanx Vaish 4 liking it ...😳
Waise i waz inspired by dat scene 4rm Geet only ..😆😆
dutta ki position not exactly down ..read on further to knw ..😉

Yh ,,,will defo PM u next time ...!