New FF: Ek Paal Ch6&7 pg20 Mar 1

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hena

@mayur-tasha

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#91

xcellent continue.......👍🏼

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raziya56

@raziya56

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#92

really gd jaz....i lyk it. finally tasha are meeting-cant wait for the next part update soon. 👏 👏

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#93

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Lets see Jazzie ....wat u hav in store 4 us in this part ...😉

Baahon k darmiyan ,,,Ooohh wat a romantic song ....I just luv it ...❤️
But the Baahon k darmiyan period between TaSha waz too short ..me want more ..☺️
Poor Nasha ,,,me glad that Dutta waz there to comfort her ...but why didn't he follow her ,,didn't he hav a car ...instead he went bak to work ..

Nw who is this ...Mr SUHA ..Nice nick Jazzie ...🤣
Is he the new character that we r supposed to like ...😕
U think we care to like anyone else besides Dutta ..😍

Wow ,,,TaSha meet again ..but u had to leave it at a cliff hanger ...hai na ..
U not also goin to sudharfao ..😆

Over all a rocking update as usual ...👏👏
Nw update soon ....other wise me not gonna stop 4rm bugging u ..!😆

Edited by Dew-drop - 15 years ago

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skavitha08

@skavitha08

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#94

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me loved it jaz 🤗 u were right to call it a roller coaster of emotions 😳
but u again stopped it at such an important point....m dying to read the next part already
hope u update soon provided u have the perfect song n not to mention fivr's comment too 😆
this time as well the song was so perfect khamoshi the musical n ajja nachle gr8 loved it
as i said ur ff is amazing n u r fab 👏

Edited by skavitha08 - 15 years ago

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sana

@sana786a

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

finally u updated phew i was waitingggggg 4 agessss😆🤗ummmm lol u sooo knw wat im gnna say well i hooked on ur ff as i was scrolling dwn da page i was waiting 4 dis part 2 finsh and it was really lng which is soo gud of u 2 write dis part kinda a page lng i loved da scene of the beach of dutta and naku it was soooo emotinal and honestly its like reading a book da way u describe everyones emotions da surroundings its damn gud but plzzz update really soon dis time if u can im dying 2 read mre😃

Edited by sana786a - 15 years ago

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meriyaar

@meriyaar

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#96

keep up the fab work 😃 thanks for the pm, can't express how good that was 😊 loved it o bits. xx 👏

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@IrikaLovesKMH

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#97

finally u updated....it was awesoem....love the part..

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#98

jaz............awesome part........it reminds me scenes of some romantic novels..........continue soon..........i m in love with ur FF..................