New FF: The Reality of Dreams Ch8 pg31 Jan 9

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Haila babe.... me again!!!! well.... i have to be.... becuz im the babe!!!! yay well u got out of that laziness and finally decided to give us an update!! its a good thing u did becuz ur intro was too short!!

U know wat i hate about FFs...... its the villians... dude couldnt they just jump off the cliff or something car accident would be just fine too... !! arent i nice?😆😆😆 i always want best for these people!!!😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 !

Haila... the hero is here!! woohoo... and then u had to freakin end it!!😡😡😡 and why are ur updates soo short? where are ur 16 pagers?! i dont see them!! cuz i can tell.... i read them in an instant!!!

hopefully something good happens here and Naku is out of her misery!! bechari... i feel for her!!!... having rotten family members... not a good thing!!!!!

plz cont soon babe ji....

p.s. hopefully we can do universal studios this friday!!!😳😭😕

Edited by *Guli* - 15 years ago

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

this was sooooooooooooooooo short!

writeee a loingerrr partt naaaaaa u villaiin!!!

:D:D

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TheRager

@TheRager

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Jaz...a cinderella story with supriya as one of the step sisters. I wonder if it will be love at first sight for naku. and i hope kala makes an appearance as datta's own sister.

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Madhia

@-Madzy-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

VERY GOOD CANT WAIT:::AREY HERO AGAYA:::!😍

Jaldi update...!👏

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-SilverFlames-

@-SilverFlames-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Jaz, what can i say.. Its just brilliant.. Seeing Babi in this new light was awesome..
But hey.. Hero is here to the rescue..!!👏

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shonapinky

@shonapinky

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

awesum yar👏really enjoyd reding it...awaiting ur next update...!

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Awesum yaar ....
luved it ......
par ye kya...😲😲..u made Babi evil ....
nw Naku has no one share her feelings wid ...
Oooooh.. the hero is here already ....😍

Btw ..i luv the Cinderella story ....!😃

Update soon ..!😉

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hena

@mayur-tasha

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

hey jnawaz
its awesome ......😃😃
its a very emotional story n very gud too😳
cant wait 4 next update...gr8 update...👏👏👏
plz update fast....

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sana

@sana786a

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

thnks 4 da pm jaz 😃 seriously amazing story 👏👏👏👏u did justice in writing dis da wait was worth it i loved da fact da story was like cinderella wid a twist in it dat babi's friend cum wid her sons cant wait 4 u 2 write part 2 👏