laksh and kt's zindagi..!!~ my first ff.~ - Page 2

i will.. later today.. i promise.. thnx fr your commentt!! 😳 😳

gud job...u realli took my 'interesting' comment into perspective when u wrote this....at least i hope u did. hehe

anywayz i realli liked the whole cliff-hanger part at the end.

looking forward to reading ur next one.

thnx kewlchick90, and yes i did take yur comment srsly.. i hope you like the thrd part as well..

Part 3

arhita and kt reached home and laksh was standing at the door..

laksh: wow.. bhabhi going for a walk with sabha and archita..

kt: shutup laksh

they all went inside and sat at the table to eat dinner..

tulsi: arre laksh zara kitchen se paani la teh..

laksh: jee dadi

mohini: tulsi jee.. the food here is sooo oilyy.. i dont eat such things like this.. i want pasta.. go prepare some for me..

mohini owns the virani house so everyone has to go what she says.

tulsi: ok mohini i wil go prepare some..

mohini: good..

scene switches to when laksh and kt are in the room putting sabha to sleep..

laksh: go to sleep my sweet daughter..(in a singing voice)

kt: laksh give me the baby now.

laksh gives her her the baby and lays down on the bed.. now sabha is in the middle of her dad and mom... sleeping 😳

laksh: now sabha is sleeping so lets go on a candlelight dinner..

kt: but who will look after sabha while we are gone..

archita: i will.. give her to me and i will look after her in my room..

laksh: thanks archita i owe u.. 😛

kt and laksh are in the car.. laksh turns the wheel and doesnt see the truc coming and hits it..

kt: laksh truckkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!

laksh: kt jump out the carrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kt: i m not going to leave u!!!!!!!!!!!

LAKSH: JUST JUMP FOR GOD'S SAKE..!!!!!!!!!

TO BE CONTINUEDDD!!! 😳 😳

PLS COMMENTTTTT! :)

LUV,
shifaa 😳

thnx kewlchick90, and yes i did take yur comment srsly.. i hope you like the thrd part as well..

Part 3

arhita and kt reached home and laksh was standing at the door..

laksh: wow.. bhabhi going for a walk with sabha and archita..

kt: shutup laksh

they all went inside and sat at the table to eat dinner..

tulsi: arre laksh zara kitchen se paani la teh..

laksh: jee dadi

mohini: tulsi jee.. the food here is sooo oilyy.. i dont eat such things like this.. i want pasta.. go prepare some for me..

mohini owns the virani house so everyone has to go what she says.

tulsi: ok mohini i wil go prepare some..

mohini: good..

scene switches to when laksh and kt are in the room putting sabha to sleep..

laksh: go to sleep my sweet daughter..(in a singing voice)

kt: laksh give me the baby now.

laksh gives her her the baby and lays down on the bed.. now sabha is in the middle of her dad and mom... sleeping 😳

laksh: now sabha is sleeping so lets go on a candlelight dinner..

kt: but who will look after sabha while we are gone..

archita: i will.. give her to me and i will look after her in my room..

laksh: thanks archita i owe u.. 😛

kt and laksh are in the car.. laksh turns the wheel and doesnt see the truc coming and hits it..

kt: laksh truckkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!

laksh: kt jump out the carrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kt: i m not going to leave u!!!!!!!!!!!

LAKSH: JUST JUMP FOR GOD'S SAKE..!!!!!!!!!

TO BE CONTINUEDDD!!! 😳 😳

PLS COMMENTTTTT! :)

LUV,
shifaa 😳

OMG! Suspence in the 3rd part! Dude, man, don't hurt my poor Lakshu or Kt. Or I'll haunt you down! 😈
Continue soon, hon! Great job! :)
..& ask if you need any help!

zinu..thnx fr commenting.. wht is wrng with ppl on india forums .. i hvnt received any other comments.. 😭 😭 it hurts.. nw i will only continue if more ppl comment.. 😊 i hope they do..

luv,
shifa

Don't worry hon! They comment, nothing is wrong with them. Just have patience. :)

luv the 3rd part...:D
awesome suspense....
can't wait for the next part. dont worry everyone will comment in time.

but do continue. :)

mohini the owner...now thats funny. haha

omg!!!omg!! kya hoga age!? plzz continue!! great job so far

thnx fr the comments.. i feel much better now.. i will continue.. later today.. 😊 😊

luv,
SHifa