laksh and kt's zindagi..!!~ my first ff.~

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ppl... i m plannin of writin a new fanfic; this will be my first n zinu promised she'll help out.. so hopefully the first part will satisfy u.. 😊


Part 1

One morning at the virani's.. in this story laksh and kt are married and have a baby gal named sabha..who is abt 3 months..

laksh: kttt... where is my jacket and keys.. i cant find them any where!!!

kt: she came running down, pulled laksh's ears and said.. look on the table its right there..:)

laksh: oh i didnt see darling.. thank you..; ok jaan i m leaving now for office.. any last words..

kt: no.. not reallyy.. jus go..

laksh went out the door and came back..

kt: what now.. u forgot more stuf..??

laksh: no no.. i jus want a kiss..

kt: she blushed.. and gave him a kiss on the lipz..
suddenly she hearf sabha cryin so she ran upstairs after shutting the door..

In the afternoon when laksh came home..

kt: you came home jaan??

laksh: yes darling.. i missed u..:)

kt: really? then gave him a kiss..(on the cheek)

laksh: oo.. sassyy.. wt hppened to u.. 😆

kt: nothin i jus want y sweet husband..

laksh: where is sabha??

kt: she left with baa to hardiwar (sorry guys i dunno how to spell..)

laksh: relly so i hv my wife to myself today huh..

kt: yes jaan.. she was blushing..

laksh and kt danced on the song kuch is tara by atif aslam..

kt: laksh i m tired now i want to go to sleep..

laksh: alreadyyy.. 😕 ok fine lets go..

kt: where are u going.. i said for my self.. not u..

laksh:shut up i am coming.. 😃

they slept in each other's arms all night.. 😳




ok guys.. hope u liked the first partt pls comment and giv tips on what to write next.. 😃 😃

u too zinu..:)

love,
Shifaa

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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
Nicely done! do continue! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnkz i will continue later.. only if i receive more comments..!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gud job .... but next time make it more interesting.


:)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice job keep it up 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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first.. thnks fr all de comments.. 😊

Part 2

next morning..

laksh and kt both woke up in each other's arms..

laksh: kt wake up..

kt: sune do laksh..pls..

laksh: ok.. yur choice jaan..
~ gave a kiss~

kt: laksh wht did u do..

Tulsi: gave you a kiss..

kt and laksh got up.. and faced baa..

laksh: baa aap.. yaan kya kare hai..

tulsi: sabha ko danee ayi the.. agar u chata hai to laekar ga hu..

laksh: (in his mind.. i wish).. nahi baa give her to me..

kt: i'll go freshen up..

~ baa left.. laksh took the baby and let her lay on the bed.. talkin to her..~

laksh: tum ganti ho.. tere ma aur me boot maza kiye kal raat tere bina.. 😊
~ baby coos..~
kt: ha ha.. tum bhi na.

laksh: meh kya..

kt: kuch bhi nahi..

laksh turned her arnd and gave her a big hug..

archita: ahmm.. lagta hai meh galat wakt par agai..

laksh: nahi .. u teek waqt peh ayye wannah ye to mere pitai kar te..

kt starts hittin him..

archita stares at them then takes the crying baby out for a walk.. in the garden..

laksh: kt meh ga ra hu..

kt: ga ho.. galde ahna.

laksh: okk.. bye jaan..

kt: bye 😳

down in the kitchen.. kt helps baa make dokla..
then sees archita with sabha goin to go for a walk.. she goes to join them..

kt: archita i am coming with u..

archita: sure bhabhi.. 😳

kt: lets go..

they reach the garden and see a bench they decide to go sit down for a while.. kt sees that the baby has fell asleep.. in the stroller.. so then decides to talk with archita..

kt: which guys do u like nowa dayz.. i havent talked to u in a while now..

archita: yeah u are too buzy with laksh..

kt blushes..

kt: so tell me na..

archita: ok.. there is a guy named ali.. i met him in a hotel while i was out at dinner with pari.. then pari had to leave and so i was all alone.. me and ali started talking with each other and then he said he luvs me. so i said i luv him too.. and yea.

kt: wow what a story i wish i was u..

archita: bhabhi you know what you are saying..

kt: arre i am kidding.. lets go now..

archita and kt reach home and....

to be continuedddd 😛

pls leave commentsssss 😳

i will continue tommorow..

luv,
Shifaaa
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Posted: 17 years ago
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My Shifi, you finallt wrote one! 🤗
Sorry for being late, dear! :)

Lovely 2 Parts, continue soon.. now i'm waiting! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8
thnx zinu!!!.. i will write part 3 tomm. since its sat. tomm. and i need more comments to continue!! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no other comments??!!!! 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i really liked plz continue today

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