My Creation for Karan n Nandini-poem

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Sunaina

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Something I had written before, but suits best for Karan and Nandini, hope you guys like it..and leave your comments..😊😊

Arz Kiya hai....

Lahroin ki taraf, Saahil banke utte hain jo ye kadam tere,
wapas na lena inko sanam, meet ke jo nayan jude..
Aftab ki roshni ki tarah, ik nazar jo tumhein dekhe,
roshni bhi sharma gayi, tum jo khili chandni banke..
Is mahfil mein aaj abhi, chalke hain jaam kayi,
Jhankar banke payal teri, chubne lagi hai dil mein kahin..
Sagar se gar rootha ho saahil,
kya shoba uski badti hai?
Kab chand poora hua hai,
Chandni jab tumne looti hai?

Shukriya!

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Posted: 17 years ago

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VAAH VAAH!! 👏 👏 *eats paan* do another one on LKT!! 😛 😉 😳

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Sunaina

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: desigrl05
VAAH VAAH!! 👏 👏 *eats paan* do another one on LKT!! 😛 😉 😳

Lol!! 😆😆 will do....looks like no one liked other than you😆😆

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babypink<3

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Kya baat hai! Maaza agaya!
omg haha im so weird.
anyway that wus beautiful<333

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babypink<3

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: desigrl05
VAAH VAAH!! 👏 👏 *eats paan* do another one on LKT!! 😛 😉 😳

LMAAAAAAAO .. girl yu always crack me up! hahahaha .

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anonymous

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Posted: 17 years ago

#6

its wonderfull.. gud job 😃

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mangrooves

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Posted: 17 years ago

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woow ...its not in me to write so well but i surely do appreciate something thats good....keep up the good job.

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ght1000

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Woww, u r just hilarious. Keep it up and do sum more!

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cool_time

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Posted: 17 years ago

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gr8 lol!!ur so talented.rite sum more

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Roshni

@ashokagroup

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Posted: 17 years ago

Lovely Shayeri.. You should definetely think abt writting a book! Excellent job

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