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sangeeta

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

a ver short update but stil enjoy.......n do comment

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Giah

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

great story! keep it up :)

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sangeeta

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

EPI 4

RECAP- Mayank has a deal with LAKSH to go to the club

AB AAGE

AT THE CLUB

LAKSH was not into such things but as he had made a deal with M he had to come to the club which was near the beach….
LAKSH sat at the bar..while M drank and danced with all those girls who had little clothes to drape themselves in.

LAKSH couldn't take the loud music so he decided to take a walk on the beach to find peace….
The air was cool outside and LAKSH felt relived to get out of the club

As he was taking a walk he remembered his mum,he was missing her badly.. he remembered how she had put up with everything in life …He had vowed her mum that he wil find her Eku .. But HOW????

Then he remembered the special song that only the 3 of them knew.. "TAME MARA DEV …..CHO" and he started to hum it... as he walked …

Then he heard a scream.. A men he could see was pulling a girl out of the car ..he seemed to be forcing her(duhhh)
As he started to sun towards them .. the guy was trying to tear the girls top

L ran as fast as he could ….and he held the guys hand tight behind his back .. LAKSH couldn't see the guys face … LAKSH told the girl to run.. and she did.

The men tried to get his hand free and finalli he did … he turned around and punced L in the face b4 LAKSH could see his face .. L got up … he wiped the blood out of his lips abnd looked to the men in front of him…

THE CAMERA WENT ZOOM ON LAKSH"S FACE AND SLOW MOTION AS HE WIPED THE BLOOD…. AS SOON AS HE SAW THE MENS FACE THE SCREEN WENT BLACK N WHITE ON L"S FACE..
AND THEN TADAM TADAM TADAM

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Edited by sangeetarangdal - 18 years ago