new ff - Story Mein twist updtd epi8 pg6

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi guys …

this is a ff about Tulsi who was weak at 1st bt then she regains her strength …and I have added a little mix of old movie kum ka mela stuff for fun… enjoy

EPI 1

One day a lady named Tulsi was walking around looking for a job..she was poor now that she was alone with the kids… the kids .. 8 year old EKLAVYA and 12 yr old Laksh.

It had been two years since she had been looking after the kids alone…the kids.

Eklavya doesn't even remember his dad at all but laksh has some memories…all of a sudden the kids started to jump around and shout making Tulsi get out of her memories….


T-"kya hua ,kui shor macha rahe ho" E-"mami.. waha dekho .....chalo na!!}

L-"waha mela laga hai ma.. chalo na!"

T-"acha acha .. chalo Tulsi takes them to the mela..

The kids are excited to see all the rides and stalls of toys being sold…

. E-"ma,vo log apne haat mein kya laga rahe hai?

Tulsi looks around to see what E was talking about... and she finds that a person with a tattoo
T-"vo ek nishani hai , beta"
L-"tab ma.. hum bhi bana le?
T-mere paas urtne paise .....

B4 she could complete her sentence..Little cute Eku ran towards the tattoo maker. Laksh ran after him … Tusli followed…

Eku to the tatoomaker –"uncle mujhe bhi taatoo banao"

TM-"kyu nahi beta, kya banao
Eku- um… kya likhu bhaiya

Lak-um...
Tulsi comes and tells the tatoo maker that she doesnt have enough money but the tattoomaker insisted that he would make it for free

Eku-"ma bataao na .. kya.....

Lak-"tame mara??
Tulsi-"yeh kyu beta

Lak- "ma, yeh gana hi hamare parivar ko jod ta hai (YA AS IF ITS A SIGN WHEN TULSI IS GONA KILL SOME!)

Tulsi- thik hai bhaiya Laksh ke haath(arms) mein "TAME MARA"likh dijiye aur Eku ke haath (arms)" DEV NA "

TM-"ji,behnji" The tattoo maker makes the tattoos on both the kids.
Tulsi and the kids thank the TM and start to head off home when all of a sudden one of the rides catches FIRE. And all the people start to panic and run around and in an instant Eku's hold on Tulsi's hand loosens and Eku gets lost in the crowd.

Tulsi screams –"EKLAVYA (LIKE AMITAB IN EKLAVYA THE ROYAL GUARD)


THE CAMERA WILL GO ZOOM ON TULSI FOR ABOUT 3 –4 TIMES EACH FROM EVERY ANGLE ….THEN TADAM TADAM TADAM my EPI WILL END HERE HAHAHAH How did you all like it pliz do tell… 😆 😆 😆
Edited by sangeetarangdal - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Rocking loll keep it up good job 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great so far keep it up! :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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EPI 2

RECAP –LAKSH AND EKU GET A TATOO
- TULSI LOOSES EKU IN THE MELA



AB AAGE

Tulsi desperately looks around her holding Laksh close to her and screams-"EKLAVYA" again and again…. But Eku is nowhere to be seen. Laksh is crying and hugging Tulsi.

After the crowd goes away and the mela is only fullof pple hurt.. Scattered on the ground . Bleeding … tulsi looks around.. Crying and screaming she searches for Eklavya but …..She couldn't find him…. she and Laksh helplessly go home.

At home she looked at the picture of Mihir and EKU together and cried ..!
Tulsi-"Kyu mera Eku …mera eku…."
Lak-"ma…hum dondege eku ko..aap chinta mat karo..

Tulsi-"Pehle mihir mujhse dur hue aur ab Eku...

Still crying she drifted to the past.. 2years ago…………
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(FLASHBACK)IN BLACK N WHITE SCREEN

When her hubi Mihir a well known businessman told Tulsi that he couldn't live with her anymore ....told her that he cant live with Tulsi who always thinks she is right and the tulsi who had killed Mihirs Mother , Savita…. Tulsi had tried to make him understand that it was a mercy death for mukti but Mihir did not understand… and when Mihir asked for divorce Tulsi tore the papers….Mihir loved Tulsi more then she did to him but the loss of his mother had made him aggressive towards her…and after a few weeks he threw her out of the house….tulsi begged him… but still he didn't understand….she wanted her kids … but Mihir wouldn't give them not even let her meet the MIHIR loved eku and laksh esp Eku coz he was just a little boy and MIHIR was fond of him .. One night she crept into the house and took the kids with her and fled the city and went to Devri nadi ke tir.

Then after only few days she had read in the newspaper that Mihir had been Married to his new secretary Mandira…. ALL of a sudden she knew Why Mihir had Changed Mandira was Putting poison between Tulsi and Mihir.. Tulsi had known Mandira from College and was very competitive and jealous of Tulsi..

But Tulsi thought that she had the kids with her and they are her life.she would look after them so well that they wont ask about their dad or miss their dad's love.


(BACK TO THE PRESENT)

Tulsi in tears-"mera Eku…."

The next day she went to the police and made roundsa to them again and gain for days but no Eku…..she thought boldly that she will find Eku no matter how many days, years it takes…
She started to look for a job and found a job as a (no idea what) but she worked hard day and night .. khoon pasina ek kar diya and earned enough money to send Laksh to school.

One day while working , Tulsi met a business women named Parvati…Parvati had a partnership in the company where Tulsi was working …Parvati had often seen Tulsi working from far and admired her dedication, and hardwork …

.Parvati offered Tulsi a good post in Parvati's own company and soon they became great friends and as years went by Tulsi became a Partner in Parvati's firm and Tulsi opend a sister company.

Now Tulsi was rich but still not happy she still thought of Eku …


Laksh was in doing his business study in Australia with Parvati's son and his Best Friend MAYANK aka bhola.

THE SCREEN SHOWS AUSTRALIA.. KANGAROOS HOPPING…KUALA BEARS SCRATCHING PPLE'S FACE AND THE OPERA HOUSE.

THEN TO A UNIVERSITY. …MAYBE STUDIO IN INDIA (HAHHAHAH) ANYHOW…WE HEAR SOMEONE CALLING LAKSH'S NAME AND THE FACE TURNS …IT IS LAKSH (PULKIT). …HANDSOME…YOUNG MEN NOW…

AND THE BACK GROUND SONG """VO KISNA HAI""" GOES ON

THE CAMERA ZOOMS ON HIS LIPS, HIS HAIR, HIS EYES AND THEN HIS FACE.

THEN TDAM TADAM TADAM
MY EPI ENDS HERE




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Posted: 18 years ago
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do continue soon. Your story is waay better than the drama going on in KSBKBT.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u guys ... i will do soon

😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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will post soon.. mayb on thursday

thanks guys 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey nice story u brought tulsi to devri nadi ke tir 😆 ...........truely ur story is different to the original and parvati also there ........update soon...........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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will do ...thks for the comment 😃
Edited by sangeetarangdal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Epi 3

RECAP- Tulsi goes back in time…
- mandira had snatched her hubi from her
- Eku is not found
- Tulsi is a business women
- laksh and bhola are in Australia doin MBA



AB AAGE

Laksh-"Kya hai?'
Bhola (Rahul lohani)(IN A VERY MAYNK AND BHOLA WAY )-Yeh project kab due hai..ha?

Lak-"bhola , yar likha hai na yaha next week due hai.."

Bhola-"to hum aaj yeh project kui kar rahe hai.. agle hafte kui nahe??"

Lak-tu bhi na..

Bhola was very cheeky he was aware of is cute babyface and knew how to make good use of it...

Bhola in a normal way-" aree yar… udar dek vo Tanya aur Samantha kitne ache kapde pehne hai.. dekh toh..

Laksh-"tum hi dekho …unke ghar mein kade katam ho gaye the isliye ye cutpiece pehen kar ghum rahe hai…."

Bhola –"mera nahi tera naam bhola rehna chiye tha.."

Laksh-"bas ...ab betho aur kuch kaam karo finals are in 2 weeks."

Bhola- "2 weeks is a long time in my books"

Lak- " tume sirf masti hi karana ata hai….mujhe meri Ma ka sapna pura karna hai.. ek din ek top businessman baba hai "

Bhola-"I know per, enjoy karna bhi kuch hota hai , get a break"

Lak-"bhola

Bhola-"ok …ok.par ek sharth hai … raat ko mein hum club jayege "

Lak-"bhola…."

Bhola-"lakshhhh
hhhhhhhhhhhh , aur bolu….lakshhhhhhhhhhhhh

Irritated Laksh agrees to go with him.

So bhola and Laksh study and at nite. …They get ready to go to the club

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