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Posted: 18 years ago
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parts 5 and 6 are on the same page - page 2/3

and link to part 4 is on the same page. parts 1 2 and 3 are in the ff index. soon all the parts will be in the ff index.

part 7----------------------------------------------------------- -------------

neha is confused on which dress to wear, the one nakul gave or the one Manthan gave.

downstairs:

trupti: everybody is here but whre is the maha rani! neha?

tulsi: why do you always taunt her? ussene tumhara kya bigara?

just then the door of neha's room opens she is wearing dangalling earings, a neckless which nakul gave her and............. a red salwaar that nakul gave her. Nakul looks very happy and thinks he will tell Neha what he feels for her tonight.

manthan looks upset and goes but neha holds his hand and smiles. she then brings him downstairs

nakul: thanks neha, that you wore the dress i gave you. neha smiles nakul once again says happy birthday and neha hugs him. everyone settles down. they are all standing around the massive cake that manthan ordered,

everybody sings happy birthday and neha cuts the cake. the first piece she feeds it to Manthan and then to nakul and others. Manthan feeds neha a piece and she bites his fingers.

manthan: ouch,

neha giggles and blows on his finger. tulsi again sees this and she seems very happy. neha gathers everybody to sit on the floor of the hall and says that tonight is a night of fun and acctivities. she says:

we all will play antakshiri but girls vs boys!

everybody is happy and are sitting in a circle. neha is opposite nakul and manthan is next to neha as manthan is the last from boys and neha is last from girls.

daksha dadi starts by singing: dholi taro dhol baage dhole baaghe dhol ke dhum dhum baaje dhol.

nakul from boys team sings: ladki bade anjaani hai from KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI. the song ends in o

its now tulsi's turn to sing with " o" as they are going round the circle. tulsi can't think of any song and no one is allowed to help her. Tulsi gets out and sits on the sofa.

karan sings: o khaike paan bana raaswala khul jaye band akkal ka tala fom DON

tanya sings: Laal dupatta ud gaya re bairi hawa ke jhonke se. Mujhko piya ne dekh liya haai re dhoke se

laksh sings: soniye soniye tere bina mere subah nahin dhanlte tere bina mere shaam nahin dhalti soniye

KT: yama yama yamma yamma yeh khobasurat sama....... kal hum kaha tum kaha

the songs go on and people get out during the songs manthan keeps putting his hand on neha's hand and neha keeps removing it out, she keeps smiling at him. manthan almost keeps moving closer to her, pari and archita see this and they think: daal me kuch kaala hai!

the songs go on and there are only two people left in the game.........

neha and manthan

both sit opposite each other.

manthan starts: hum tum ek kamre me bandh ho aur chaabhi kho jaaye

neha: yaade, beeti yaade yaad aati hai

manthan: humko tumse pyaar hai

neha: hum tumhare hai tumhare sanam

manthan: mehendi laga ke rakhna doli saja ke rakhna lene tujhe o gori aayenge tere sajna.

manthan winks at neha and neha freezes. the clock tics on "n" for neha to sing but neha just looks at manthan.

neha looses the game and manthan is the winner.

neha: no no no, this is not fair, manthan cheated

karan: ok, what did he do?

neha: he ......aammm....ok tell me what is my punishment

manthan: thats like a good girl! you have to sing and dance

neha: what! i can't dance and sing! i wont do it!

neha gets up and walks up the stairs, everyone tries to persuade neha to dance but she goes to her room.

after 10 mins, the door opens again and Neha is wearing white salwaar that manthan gave her, she is also wearing the diamond bracelet manthan gave her. she is wearing white bangals

she sings to manthan:

Sharam Se Keh Rahi Chudiyaan
Aa Sanam Aab Mita Dooriyaan haan,


Hone Laga Hone Laga Hone Laga Hone Laga Hone Laga
Oye Hoy hoy Pyaar Mujhe Hone Laga
Pyaar Mujhe Hone Laga
Oye Hoy hoy Pyaar Mujhe Hone Laga
Pyaar Mujhe Hone Laga
Khone Laga Khone Laga Khone Laga Khone Laga Khone Laga
Oye Hoy hoy Dil Mera Khone Laga
Dil Mera Khone Laga

(this song is from kucch to hai)

neha does a little dance sequence too. manthan smiles as he gets the hint and he too sings a song:

dil mera pooch raha hai tujhse

kya pyaar karoge mujhse?

(this song is also from the film kucch to hai)

other family members join in the fun and ing and dance!

manthan goes into the garden. neha looks around for him and then goes out into the gadren.

manthan meets neha and he holds her hands,

manthan: i have to tell you something neha

--------------------------------------part 8 comming soon!------------------------------

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Posted: 18 years ago
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haaaaaaaaaaa superb part love it cutie neha wear both
but but but cont soon and please abh manthan ko bone do , jabhi bolne lagta hai kebab main hadi a jata hai yaar
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wonderful part. Can't wait till Manthan confesses his love to Neha.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 6 is on the same page as part 5 and search the title manthan n neha part 5 on this forum, you'll find parts 5 and 6 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 8-------------------------------------------------
manthan holds neha's hands and comes closer to her, he has a sweet smile on his face and says:
neha, i have to tell you something. when i close my eyes i see you, when i open my eyes i yearn to see you. mai tumhare bare me shaam aur seher soochta rehta hoon, i have never felt like this before. i dont know why i feel this but i know its for you, in my life i have never cared about anybody except for bhoomi, mom and dad. that too i never showed dad i cared for him, but i ......i care for you. i like you......i really like you neha
......neha....i....love....you....

everything is still neha looks at manthan and stares at his eyes she releases a slight smile on her face and hugs manthan. manthan is overjoyed and he lifts up neha and turns her around. neha seems very happy nad so does manthan. Pari and archita come there, they see the both of them and are shocked at the fact that manthan can love sombody

archita: pari, do you think he is taking neha seriously or is he fooling her?

pari: no archita i;ve seen manthan many times with many girls but i have never seen so much hapiness in his eyes before, he really loves neha.

neha sees pari and archita. manthan stops turning round and goes up to pari and archita.

manthan is about to say something, but pari stops him
pari: i know what you'll tell me, but don't worry i'll not tell anyone that you two love each other.

archita: manthan, i want to tell you something, i don't know what neha has done, but you have changed a lot in these few weeks of neha entering SN infact not only you, but the whole house has changed, everyone seems to be happy with one and other's happiness. this house is finally one. neha, manthan has changed a lot, i think its for the better and for you. always keep him happy.
pari, archita and neha hug.

tulsi comes outside: aare, what are you 4 doing out here? come inside

they all go inside. manthan whispeers to neha, 3 o'clock tommorrow in the park, and this time
"punch nakul if he comes in the way"

neha laughs at this.

the next day at 3 o'clock, neha goes to the park, but manthan is not there, she waits for 30 mins finally manthan arrives, he holds his ears and appologises to neha. neha gives him an angry glance an dgoes away

manthan: neha suno mere baath, i was stuck in office, i had to finish some work

neha: ooohhhh ok so you could have postponed the meeting with me right!
30 mins manthan you could have at least called!

manthan: i'm sorry, i really am
neha: shut up! i dont want your sorries!
neha goes away and sits on a bench

manthan sits next to her. he holds her hands and slaps himself with neha's hands

neah: yeh kya kar rahe ho tum?
manthan: i am hitting my self because i made you angry

neha: dont do that ur hurting your self
manthan puts his hands on neha's shoulders and says: look into my eyes neha, what do you see? there is love for you in these eyes and i cant bear to see you unhappy. i am really sorry.

neha smiles and hugs manthan. she then rests her head on manthans chest.
manthan: jab tum mere bahoon me hoo, toh mujhe lagta hai ke saare zindagi aise he betao.
(when you are in my arms i feel like spending the rest of my life like this with you)

neha: so tell me manthan virani, what do you like about me that made you fall in love with me?

manthan: your eyes, when i look at them i feel like looking at them life long

your laughter, when i hear it, it makes me the happiest person on earth.

and most of all, what you are

neha: so what am i?

manthan:
you know neha, you fight a lot!
you get angry very quickly and shower your anger on the person in front of you if its their fault or not!
but as quickly and as much as you get angry, you show that much love later on! i feel so happy when i am with you. you are very close to my heart neha

neha: i am lucky to have a lover like you manthan!
you know what i love about you?
i'll tell you.
you know manthan, you fight a lot!
you get angry very quickly and shower your anger on the person in front of you if its their fault or not!
but as quickly and as much as you get angry, you show that much love later on!

manthan: hey thats what i just said!
neha: i know, we like each other because we are very alike. the only difference between us is that you only show ur love for the people you care the most, sometims you don't even do that, but i show my love for everyone
you know the best quallity in you is, jo tumhare dil ke sabse kareeb hai, usske liye tum zameen aasman ek karde te ho. you love me a lot right? i love you too!

neha comes close to manthan's face and lightly kisses him on the cheek. manthan smiles and hugs neha.

someone fromt he virani familly sees them like this......

----------he he he leave you all in suspence again!----------------------who is the person, guess----------------- 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow dis is the best ff eva!
luvin it if only dis could really happen il be soo excited! 😃

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