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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 4 is on

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=591615&T PN=1

parts 1 2 3 are in the ff index

Part 5----------------------------------------------------------- -------------

Neha and Manthan finish their dinner and go upstairs to their rooms. Neha turns off the light, but can't sleep, she keeps having flashbacks of Manthan and keeps thinking of him. Manthan's state is the same.

Next morning----------------

manthan n neha are up, manthan comes into neha's room

manthan: neha, are you free today?

neha: yeh why?

Manthan: i want to ask you something, no, tell you something

neha: ok, tell me

manthan: not now, come to the park at 3 after lunch.

manthan leaves and neha smiles: mujhe patah hai tum kya kehene wale ho!

its 2:50 and neha leaves to go to the park but Nakul stops her

nakul: where are you going?

neha: ummm....to the mandir

nakul: wearing clothes like this? (neha was wearing black top and jeans.

neha: why? whats wrong whit this?

nakul: you can't wear black to the mandir

neha: oh, acctually i am going to be oout side the mandir waiting for my friend.

nakul: ok, ill drop you there

neha could not reffuse and so she went in the car with nakul she called up manthan but making sure nakul did not know who she was talking to.

Neha: hello, tum fiquar mat karo, don't worry, my friend nakul is dropping me to meet you!

manthan understood and said that they'll meet in the hous only.

Neha tells nakul her friend cancelled the meeting and that she would like to go back home

Nakul said since they came come to the mandir, he'll pray to god and then go back.

neha: how sweet! i'll also come with you

neha and nakul go inside the mandir and are about to ring the bell, both their hands touch and they look at each other. neha smiles and removes her hand. after they both pray to god they go back to SN

neha distracts nakul and goes to manthan's room.

manthan: that nakul, he always comes in the way.

neha: nakul is not that bad, why do you hate him?

just then nakul comes in

nakul: i'll tell you why he hates me! infact he hates everyone apart from his mom and sis! because he thinks he has a "class"

manthan: just shut up nakul, Manthan holds nakul's collor

nakul: you always resort to fighting, because you have nothing

manthan: aare you have nothing i have all i want

nakul: no, you don't have the most important thing in life and that's love, only your mother loves you, your father dosen't and your sis is just using you.

manthan starts getting aggressive and starts fighting nakul

neha tries to stop them both

neha: STOP, but no one listenes to her, she gets in the middle of the two and still can't stop the fight. then she drops a vas down on the floor. it makes as sound and immediatly she shouts: stop it both of you, stop fighting!

neha: Nakul, don't behave like thet to manthan, you are older and i expected you to back off. Nakul bows his head down

neha: and manthan , you are no less, who do you think you are huh? at least you could have backed off, but no, both of your egoes come in between. Neha leaves the room. Nakul and manthan follow

nakul: i'm sorry neha

manthan: i'm sorry too.

neah: look, all i want is theat you two don't fight. its OK if you can't be nice to each other but at least don't fight.

manthan and nakul agree never to come in each other's way. Manthan decides not to tell neha what he was going to say. and neha forgets about it

neha come down to the dinner table and still looks angry with both of them. she does not talk to both nakul or manthan. Nakul and manthan feel guilty but they don't say anything. other members worry why neha is so quite as usually she is lively.

tulsi: kya hua neha, tum itne gusse me q ho?

naha: da, baath he kuch aise hai

tulsi : kya hua?

neha: forget it da, you too will get upset.

neha leaves the table and goes in her room to sleep.

meanwhile tulsi says downstairs: kal, neha ka birthday hai, we should hold a surprise for her!

trupti: y? no one every does that for anyone else in this house, then why an outsider.

manthan gets angry: neha is not an outsider and just because we haven't done anything like that for you does not mean you get jeallous about it!

nakul: manthan, pls don't speak to mom like that.

manthan is about to say something but stops as her remembered what he promissed to naha.

tulsi looks astonished, because she thought manthan would say something really nasty but he didn't.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part again. Can't wait for the next one!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 good work but who is neha is she there in Kyunki or is she fictitious 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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neha is fictionous!
and thanks that you all like it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 6-----------------------------------------------
its NEha's b-day the plan is to pretend nobody remembers her birthday and throw a surprise party for her in the evening
Neha wakes up, she seems in a good mood and has clearly forgotten all about last night. She sees a card on her side table. she thinks its a birthday card from manthan. she opens it, but its not a birthday card. its a sorry card.

Manhan wrote: neha i am really sorry for what happened and i promise i will not fight with nakul agian......till the end of the month...
love manthan.

neha: love manthan! neha gets excited and runs downstairs after getting ready. She wishes goodmorning to everyone and expects them to say something back to her, but they don't
neha looks at tulsi, but nothing from her, she looks at karan and tanya but nothing from them, she looks at everybody in the familly but they dontsay a word to her. She sits down and says:
its something special today, can anyone remember?
sahil: maa aaj kuch festival hai kya?
tulsi: nahee, pata nahin kya hai aaj
mihir: so what is it today neha
karan: i know, papa how could you forget, today Virani industries sarts work on its prestigious project from the royal familly of Jaipur.

neha sees all this and gets upset. she goes outside.
neha: sab ko kisse na kisse ke baat yaad aati hai, i mean Karan chachu is more interested about jaipur ki raani than my birthday, everyone forgot, even bhoomi!
where is manthan? i'm sure he'll remember.

neha goes off to find him but can't
then she thinks maybe Manthan went to buy gift for me
its afternoon and manthan is still not back. Neha continues to ask everyone if they seriously dont remember what today is and they all reply with different answers. Neha gets really angry and go to her room
but when she opens the door, she finds her room filled with flowers, cards and gifts!
Neha gets really excited and rushes downstairs and everyone shouts HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
neha is touched and hugs everyone!
neha: manthan aur nakul kaha hai da?
tulsi: they are upstairs i think! afterall, they only did all the preparations for ur birthday!
neha: they acctually worked together? neha said in surprise
tulsi: i dont know how they changed so much and so fast but i know they changed for the good and only you are responsable for it. Thanks Neha, the kaam i could not do for my grandchildren, you did!

neha is very happy and goes upstairs in search of manthan and nakul. She goes to her room and sees manthan waiting in there. she goes up to manthan ....

neha: thanks manthan for doing this for me, you don't know how happy i feel and how special i feel
she touches his hand. Manthan is very happy and he closes her eyes he presents her gift and then tells her to open it. Neha opens it, there are two gifts, one is a dress and the other is in a box.

manthan: if you wear this dress tonight, i'll be very happy.

neha smiles and nods. she opens the second gift, its a beautiful diamond bracelet.
neha: wow, its so beautiful.
neha lightly kisses manthan on the cheek and hugs him. thankyou so much.
manthan is very happy. He takes the bracelet out of its case and puts it on her hand

Nakul enters the room and sees manthan putting the bracelet on neha's hand. Neha also sees nakul. Nakul turns around and is about to leave the room when..

neha: Nakul, mera gift kaha hai, bas yeh decorations nahin chllega, you have to give me something too. neha laughs.

nakul: mujhe tumhe deene ke liya expensive gift nahin hai
neha: buddhu, gift ki keemat usski price tag se decide nahin kiya jaata, deene walle ki neeyat ko dehke jaati hai. (a gift does not have value if its expensive or not, its valuse is decided by the intensions of the person giving it to you)

neha taks the box from nakuls hands, and opens it. in it there is a gold neckless with gems in it. they are birth stones.

nakul: i told you you would not like it, they are not as expensive as diamonds

neha: nakul, in each of these stones i can see your friendship for me, each of these stones have much more value to me than diamonds.
She hugs Nakul and says its very pretty and she will surely wear it when she comes down.

Manthan sees this and his face is red with annoyance.

nakul: this is a dress for you i would like it if you wear it when you come down.

neha smiles but she turns and looks at manthan. Both manthan and nakul go downstairs. Neha is confused on which dress should she wear and who should she please
on one side is love and other is friendship, neha is really confused

neha: Pari, archita, come up.
which dress should i wear, she picks up both and shows it to them.
the dress that nakul gave was a half sleeve, very beautiful red salwaar with cram flower designs on it

what manthan gave was a spaghetti strap sleeve white salwaar with silver sequence.

both dresses were equally beautiful.

pari: the red one
Archita: the white one
neha; oh no, why did you two chose different ones, now which one will i wear?

------------he he he i'll leave it on suspence-----------
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Posted: 18 years ago
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love it i hope she wear the one manthan gift her
i loveeeee manthannnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
manthan 1!!!! plz let it b da manthan 1 cant wait for da rest
gd wrk keep it up!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 i'm gonna play ekta and shock you all
nooo lol jus jokin
ill send part 7 soon
thanks for the comments 😃

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