Fanfic*Archita-Aryan/Pari-Prem*P5*Pg3 - Page 2

umm can you all plzz comment on how to make it better..thnxx in advance

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it's awsome i loved it plzzzzzz continue asap.......
i can't wait to read more... i have never read a fanfic about pari it feels like it's about me cause i'm pari too and i also get late for school not collage and then i have to run....... 😆 .but really it's awsome
continue soonn....
love
pari

hehe..what a coincidence..just wait for the rest..i have some pretty wacky things in mind..

i like this fan fiction and i'm glad u started this on a diff couple, waiting for the next part, great job 👏

0o0 .. i like it . greaat updaate . can't wait til next part.

hey thnxx..im gonna post the next part in a while..im writin it right now..

Part 4

In The Last Aryan - Archita Scene:
Ary:Mmm..what class do you have first?
Arc:Umm..I think Science..ughh..no one I know is in there with me..great
Ary:Yes there is
Arc:Who?
Ary:MOI
Arc:That's nice..you'll regret it..Mrs.Sharma..uff..sarr dard hai
Ary:Dekhte hai..mera detective'ness kab kaam ayega
Arc:hehe
They both leave the cafe & wander off in the halls
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Archita looks around, has went around the entire campus 3 times & still hasn't found Pari..
Arc:*thinks-where is she..she can't be this late*
She keeps walking & bumps into Aryan. She's about to fall back when Aryan drop everything & catches her by the waist. They both gaze into each others eyes. The others in the halls stare & laugh at them. Lakshya comes out of no where.
L:Archie, Aryan..any one home..helloooooooooooo
Archita & Aryan don't hear them.
L:Architaaaaa..Aryannnnnn..are you guys listening..*laughs*..are you two okay..
Lakshya tries to get them back to normal..he thinks he should prank around with them. Suddenly, he messes up Archita's hair. She screams as she's sees everyone around them & gets up. Aryan still gazes at her.
A:Bhaiya, are you crazy..why did you do that
L:*laughs*
A:Ab kya karuu, hair brush bhi Pari ke paas hai aur woh abhi tak ayi nahi
L:Kya woh nahi ayi?..Abhi ghar pe phone karta hoon
While he does that, Archita turns & sees Aryan still staring at her. Archita tries to get him to stop because everyone else around them were still laughing at them.
Arc:Umm..Aryan..
Aryan suddenly comes back. He sees Archita's hair all messed up. He takes the hair of her face & puts it behind her ear. Archita twitches. Then he puts his hand over her head & tries to fix all the bumps & knots in her hair. He lowers his hands so that they are on her cheeks. He moves closer to her. Once again, Lakshya comes in & breaks the romantic scene. He is walking towards them with a worried look.
L:Archita, Aryan, gazab ho gaya
Arc: Kya hua, bohut parishaan dikh rahe hai.
L: No duh, can't yu see the look on my face.
Arc: What happened
L: Pari ko ghar se nikle hue 20 min ho gaya aur woh abhi nahi ayi
Arc:Aur tum aise waqt pe mazakt kar rahe the..bewakuf..aab kya kare..kaha dhunde?
Ary:Main Hoon Naa, shayad aap bhol rahe hain mein ek detective hoon, 2-3 min ki kahaani hai toh kya..mein ek chutki mein slove kardonga
Arc/L:hehe
Arc:Tikh hai..dekhte hai..
Ary:Kya, don't trust me?
Arc:When did I say that?
Ary:Hmm..should I take that as a challenge?
Arc:Ummmmmmm
Lakshya comes in: Challenge it is
Aryan & Lakshya shake hands & walk off
Archita sees KT & goes to her......

greeat update . loved it (:

interesting fanfic.. you should definitely continue...
cant wait till the next part is put up..