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Radhika

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey all, I've seen many fan fic's but they are mostly about lakshya, kt, or manthan so I decided on doing one on someone else..

Part - Page

P1 - Pg 1

p2 - Pg1

p3 - Pg2

P4 - Pg3

P5 - Pg 3

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This one deals with Archita & Aryan falling in love as well as Pari meetin the man of her dreams, Prem.

It was the first day of college, Pari was sleeping. Archita comes into her room

A: Pari, wake up, college ke pehle din late hona hai kya?

P: Kya Archie, kabhi bhi sone nahi deti

A:Thik hai, whatever suits you

Archita leaves & Pari goes back to sleep

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Shobha comes in & yells at Pari to wake up

S: Pari utho, sirf 45 minute baki hai, or else you'll be late.

Pari gets up at the shock of that.

P:Kya, sirf 45 minute, *sobs* mamma, do something, main itne waqt mein kaise tayar hoogi.

S:Don't worry, you go take a shower & I'll get you clothes ironed.

P:Mamma, your the best mamma in the whole world.

S:Haan haan, ab maska marna bandh karo aur jaa ke nahlo

Pari goes in & after 15 min she comes back & finds all her clothes ready. She gets dressed does her make-up & goes downstairs. She's just about to sit down at the table when she sees Lakshya going through the door.

P: Bhaiya, aap itni jaldi mein kaha jaa rahe hai

L:College, mujhe tumhari tara late hone mein koi interest nahi hai.

Pari look at the clock & sees that she only has 20 mins to get to college. She calls for Lakshya but he's already gone.

P:*thinks to herself* aab kya karuu..sab mujhe chor ke chalegaye lekin mein last year 100 meter champ thi..dekhna main kaise 5 mins mein college poch jati hoon.

She grabs her purse & leaves...

I know its not the best one you've ever read but please comment..

Edited by xo-Radhika-ox - 18 years ago

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Radhika

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Posted: 18 years ago

is it tht bad??..no comments???

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navi g.

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Posted: 18 years ago

i like it .. can't wait for the next part

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jessi

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Posted: 18 years ago

love it cant wait for the nextt partt.plz continuueee 😉

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Radhika

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Posted: 18 years ago

thnxx guyz..i was so nervous while writin..i dnt kno how to start it off..i'll post the next part in a while..thnxx agin

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Radhika

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 2

This is the First Archita - Aryan Scene
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Archita gets out of the car at the college campus & tells the driver to pick her up again when college is over. She turns around & bumps into Aryan.
Arc:Oh hey Aryan
Ary:Hey..I need to tell the driver something, brb.
Aryan talks to the driver & turns to see that Archita has already started to walk away. He catches up to her.
Ary:Hey, sorry about that
Arc:Its all good
They go into the college. Archita's ex-best friend sees her with Aryan, she comes by them & walks into Archita & then walks away. Archita drops all her books. She reaches down to get them, Aryan help her. Archita reaches for a book & so does Aryan, both of their heads clash into each other. Since they were both trying to get her books real fast they both hit their heads really hard. Archita screamed really hard & everyone else in the halls stared at them. They both get up, Aryan looks at his watch.
Ary:1/2 hour left until classes start, you doing anything?
Arc: Nope, not til Pari gets here
Ary:Mmm..where is she?
Arc:She didn't get up this morning so I just left, I wasn't interested in being late like her
Ary:*laughs*..umm..I don't know anyone else besides you here & Lakshya isn't here yet, so how about going to the cafe for coffee?
Arc:Sure, I don't see Kt around either so I might as well
They both go to the cafe & find a table to sit at. Aryan orders a black coffee & Archita gets a cold coffee. There was silence for a long time until Archita eventually says something.
Arc:Remember how mamma tried to get us together a while back
Ary:hehe..a while back?..she still is
Arc: True..
Ary:Has she always been like that
Arc:Yea..she's always trying to fix me up with someone
Ary:Why, your not that old..
Arc:Try telling her that
Ary:*looks at his watch*-hmm..why aren't Lakshya, Pari or anyone else here yet?
Arc:Who knows..Lakshya is probably flirting & Pari's probably trying to get here..
Ary:Mmm..what class do you have first?
Arc:Umm..I think Science..ughh..no one I know is in there with me..great
Ary:Yes there is
Arc:Who?
Ary:MOI
Arc:That's nice..you'll regret it..Mrs.Sharma..uff..sarr dard hai
Ary:Dekhte hai..mera detective'ness kab kaam ayega
Arc:hehe
They both leave the cafe & wander off in the halls

Plzz comment & do tell me how to make it better..

Edited by xo-Radhika-ox - 18 years ago

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Radhika

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Posted: 18 years ago

hey all..thnxx..i'll post the nexx one it a few hrs since im going out..

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amrita

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Posted: 18 years ago

wow .. its gr8 😊
plz continue soon 👏

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Radhika

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part Three

In The Last Pari Scene:
P: Bhaiya, aap itni jaldi mein kaha jaa rahe hai
L:College, mujhe tumhari tara late hone mein koi interest nahi hai.
Pari look at the clock & sees that she only has 20 mins to get to college. She calls for Lakshya but he's already gone.
P:*thinks to herself* Hmm..sab mujhe chor ke chalegaye lekin mein last year 100 meter champ thi..dekhna main kese 5 mins mein college poch jati hoon.
She grabs her purse & leaves...
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She runs & runs as fast as she can, she sees a rocky road ahead & tries to slow down but she can't, she was speeding too fast. She worries & almost trips when she feels a muscular hunk against her arms. She was so scared & almost passed out. He stares at her while she screams as loud as she can. He keeps staring & she keeps yelling. He lets her down but still stares. Pari mumbles, "aaj hi ke din heels pehn ni thi."
Pr:Jee, kuch kaha aapne?
Pa:Nahi, kuch bhi nahi.
Pr: Thik hai toh main chalta hoon.
Pa:Where you going, I'm not that scary am I?
Pr:Of course not, your beau...*covers his mouth & suddenly realizes what he was saying*..your, your, your..umm
Pa:What happened, cat got your tongue?
Pr:Hehe..no such luck..anyways, have you realized that we're standing 5in away since the last 5 mins & we don't even no each others name?..
Pa:*sudden shock* WHAT..5 mins..IM GONNA BE LATE..
Pr:Where do you have to go?
Pa:College..only 10 mins left!
Pr:Oh gosh..me too..umm..*blushes*..you wat to come with me on my bike?
Pa:Can I, thanks a million
*they got on his bike*
Pari sits not holding on to anything. He gets on & is as nervous as ever. He tells on to grab him by the waist or else she'll fall off. Pari says that she's fine & Prem rides.
Pr:You still havent answered my question.
Pa:What question?
Pr:What your name?
Pa:Ohh yea..I forgot all about that in the rush..my names Pari
Pr: Prem*tries to pull his arm back for her took shake*
Prem looses control over the bike & slows down as his bike starts to backfire.
Pr: Oh great..how will we get to college now?
Pa:*freaks out & has this worried look on her face*
Pr:You alright..you look like your about drop dead
Pa:No no no..i knew i should have listened to Archie when she told me to get up earlier
Pr:Archie?
Pa:My cousin
Pr:We can't do anything now, you can't even walk any more because of your heel
Pa:ARGG, I had to wear heels didn't I?
Pr:*thinks to himself with a mischeivious grin* I have an idea..

Plzz Comment..

Edited by xo-Radhika-ox - 18 years ago