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Hi guys,

I started a FF on laksh and kt and Maybe I will write up a scene every 2 days

Do leave your comments! Please critisize and tell me where i can improve and i will keep and index here.

    Part 1= 1 page Part 2= 1 page Part 3= 2 page
  • Part 4= 2 page

Love,

Uru

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-1
Kt was in the college and she was working on the art project with laksh. Kt didn't know laksh that well, neither did laksh. They were strangers to each other. Laksh went up to kt and raised his hand and said Mujse dosti karogi?
K: umm.. Sochna padega. Tum jaise ladke se dosti karneke baad ladkiyaan bohot pachtati hai. HMPH!!!
kt stoms off to another class. She was sitting alone thinking about the project and how is she going to get a good grade on it. Laksh comes upto her and sits beside her. Kt took a deep breath. L: kya hua?
K: kuch nahi.
L: toh phir do you ant to come over to my house so that we can work together?
K: sure. [she had no other option to get a good grade except work with him.] L: YES! [he whispered]
K: kya hua? maine sirf haan kaha hai, naa bhi keh sakti hoon. You can never believe me.
L: kuch nahi tum bas mere saath work karna hai. isse zyada aur kuch nahi karna hoga.
K: ok I will be at your house at 7:00
L: itna late!
K: kyun kya hua?
L: after college nahi aa sakti?
K: woh.. woh mai.. laksh mujhe duty pe jaana hai.
L: kisski duty? kaunsi duty? kaise duty?
K: tum sawaal kitne puchte ho. I am a police officer and I have duty anytime sir wants.
L: WOW! Even i am a police officer. But i don't have duty today. I never saw you before.
K: mai toh tumhe roz dekhti hoon. Ladkiyon ke saath.
L: achcha woh sab chodo. 7:00 will be fine for me.
They both went back to whatever they were doing.
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Kt went to laksh's house. She rang the doorbell. Tulsi opens it and kt says namaste etc etc.
K:umm.. mai laksh se milne uhh..
T: achhcha samaj gayi. LAKSH! TUMSE MILNE KOI AAYA HAI!
L: aaya dadi.
Laksh takes kt to his room.
K: nice room. By the way I got you this present.
L: thanks for the compliment, and what present?
Kt gives him a file of important papers that he forgot in the police station yesterday.
L: you call this a present?
K: pata hai agar kissie aur ke haath lag jaate toh samjo tum to mar gaye.
L: ohhh.. haan. yaad aaya. all those documets and things
K: yah yah I find this a present, what about you?
L: thanks kt.
K: you are welcome.
They both started working on their project.
L: vaise kt tumne mujhe nahin bataaya ki tumhare mom and dad kaun hai?
L: maine tumhe apni baare sab bataa diya hai.
Kt takes a deep breath. K: dekho laksh mujhe iss topic pe baat nahi karni and all my friends know that
I don't like talking about them. Tumne mujhse poocha hi hai toh bataa deti hoon. They are not in this world anymore. and from now on i dont want to talk about them.
After saying that last sentence kt couldn't control her tears. She hated to cry in front of anyone. She went away after saying that last sentence.
Laksh felt a bit bad too. He thought that he shouldn't have asked that question to kt.
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Hey peoples,
That was my new part. I don't want ekta to use it because it makes no sense in her show, but i wrote this for fun only. Tell me how it was in the chat club.
Love,
Uru

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats great /,,,<<<awsome..... keep writing!!!!!
Edited by kisnatulsi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww sweet keep going 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part-2
recap:-After saying that last sentence kt couldn't control her tears. She hated to cry in front of anyone. She went away after saying that last sentence.
Laksh felt a bit bad too. He thought that he shouldn't have asked that question to kt.
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next day at the college.
Laksh was looking for kt. Kt thought to herself that she shouldn't have left laksh like this last night. Dhe was ashamed of her behaviour. When she gets to the college, she sees laksh standing there all alone. She maybe said to herself that she should apologise to him.
She goes near laksh.
K: laksh i am really sorry about last night. I knowi shouldn't have reacted like this. and anyways that was my past. we have to live in present.
L: NO NO NO KT! It was my faut that i asked you that stupid quesion. Chalo jo hua usse bhula deke achche dost ki tarah baat karte hai. Mukjse dosti karogi.
Laksh raises his hand to kt.
Kt gives her hand to him and says sure.
L: toh joh past me hua usse bhool kar aaj kya hum project pe work kar sakte hai?
Kt gives him a little smile. Laksh took that as a yes.
L: i hope hamara stupid boss aaj humme police station nahi bulaye ga. I don't think you have duty to cover today. do you?
K: actually tumhari soch bohot hi gandi hai. nahi woh stupid hai aur nahi...
Laksh interupts: ok baba. tum ladkiyaan bhi na.
After they both had a class to go to. They can't sit together in that class because the teacher didn't like a girl and a guy sitting together. The teacher was collecting assignments that she gave them a week ago, and if they didn't do it they have to do it 5 times in 2 days. Laksh looks in his binder but really can't find it. He knew he did it but where did it go? Kt took hers out and was almost going to hand it in but she forgot to name her assignment she said she needs a minute. the teacher went ahead. She looked at laksh with a shock when she found out that he didn't have his work. She knew that it would take a lot of effort to do the work again 5 times in 2 days. She didn't care about herself but she gave her assignment to laksh and says that she did it twice. so that he accepts it. She knew it would be a lie but he was more than a best friend to her. The teacher collected laksh's work that kt gave it to him but when teacher found out that kt was lieing to him he said to do the assignment 6 times in 2 days.
Kt wispered to herself: OH GOD! YEH MAINE KYA KIYA? AB MUJHE 6 BAAR KARNA HOGA. WOH BHI 2 DIM ME!!! i CAN'T BELIEVE IT!
The teacher was a bit strict and she even insulted kt by saying her name in front of the whoe class. Everyone stared at kt.
KT whispered to herself: OH GOD! NOW WHAT DID I DO?
Laksh was shocked too that she lied to him. He was really angry with her. L: why would she do that? For me? For a friend? ya phir... kuch aur???
They both leave the class. The college ended.
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After school kt was in the library.[obviously doing her work] Laksh didn't need to go looking for kt because he knew where she should be. He went straight to the libray and saw kt going crazy with her work.
Lakh takes a deep breath and goes and sits with kt. Kt knew that her friendship will be dead today. because of what she did. She actually LIED! she never lied to her friends before. Why did she do this for her best friend?
Laksh stares at kt with angry eyes which made kt really scared of laksh.
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Bye bye guys.
Love,
Uru
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Posted: 18 years ago
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No one liked my second part? 😭 If i get some comments then sure i will post part 3 soon. 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow urvashi lovely story...... keep it up and high....

do continue...

love
pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow..thats really nice... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3
recap:- Lakh takes a deep breath and goes and sits with kt. Kt knew that her friendship will be dead today. because of what she did. She actually LIED! she never lied to her friends before. Why did she do this for her best friend?
Laksh stares at kt with angry eyes which made kt really scared of laksh.
~*~*~*~*
So i will start from here.
K: L ..L laksh tum mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe... HO?
L: mai tumse aaltu faaltu baat karne nahi aaya hoon.
K: he he he[scared voice] yeh toh mujhe bhi pata hai.
L: [confident voice] mere liye aapna assignment sacrifice kiya. mujhse jhoot bola. mujhse jhoot bola.
Aur sabse badi baat to yeh hai ki mujhse dosti ki.
Kt didn't have any answers for his diplomatic questions.
L: bolo kt yeh sab kyun kiya haan? meh lagta kya hu tumhara? bolo kt bolo.
K: kya jawaab chahte ho tum laksh. laksh noticed that kt wasn't looking in his eyes. Laksh told him not to lie and he even said to look in his eyes.
Whick kt can never lie, because if she is looking in someone else's eyes than there is no chance she can lie.
Kt: laksh woh mai laksh woh main...[thinking to herself that what will she tell him:main isse kya kahun ab?] laksh woh main bas apne dost ki madad kar rahi thi.
L: MADAD? apni izzat ko sacrifice karke?
K: maine aisa kuch nahi kiya.
L: achcha! itni bholi mat bano. woh teacher to hai hi mental peron. aur apna assignment nahi karne se pure class ke saamne tumhara insult kiya. kya yeh izzat ko sacrifice karna nahi hai? K: woh laksh. her eyes went watery and she can't utter a word. Laksh gets up and sits beside kt. He knew that kt needs a friend that she can share her feelings with. He wanted be that person for her. kt's tear fell off from her eye. And another one. K: laksh plz mujhe thodi der akela chood do. mujhe uch time apne aap se bitaana hai.
L: kt.. dekho kt mera kehne ka matlab woh nahi tha. mai toh sirf. Laksh wipes her tear off from her cheek
K: bas maine apne dost ki madad ki iske liye itni badi kimmat chukani hogi kya laksh?
L: meri baat suno. mai tumhe thanks kehne keliye aaya tha. He puts his hand over her shoulder. Kt looks in his eyes. she saw some friendship love in them for her.
L: mai tumhe kuch dena chahta tha.
K: kya? aur phirse kuch galat mat karna.
L: lekin usse pehle ek smile. bas ek smile. Please kt?
Kt smiled for her friend. laksh takes a folder assignment out from his backpack. [i don't know what people in college use!] L: toh abb tumne mujhe smile dekhai hai toh mujhe yeh karna hi pada.
K: kya karna pada?
Laksh gives her the assignment that needed to be done 6 times.
K: lekin laksh itne time mai tumne yeh sab kaise kiya?
L: you know what! you ask too many questions! I am the biggest magician in this college. Kt stares at him with a smile. K: mujhe toh nahi pata tha![jokingly]
L: toh yeh meri problem nahi hai!
Laksh leaves because he has some work at home.
He says bye-bye's to her and leaves.
KT[thinks to herself]: mai jab bhi laksh ke saath hoti hoon toh mere dil ko kuch kuch kyun hota hai? Mera dil aur mera dimaag mujhse kuch kehna chahta hai lekin kuch keh nahi paa raha hai!
LAKSH[thinks to himself]: mai jab bhi kt ke saath hota hoon toh mere dil ko kuch kuch kyun hota hai? Mera dil aur mera dimaag mujhse kuch kehna chahta hai lekin kuch keh nahi paa raha hai!
Well they both were thinking the same thing but can never understand what it was telling them.
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Love,
Uru
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part:4
They both have this wierd feeling that thier hearts are telling them, but they can't understand wat it's saying.
Laksh was in his bedroom and reading some random magazine. Someone calls him. It was one of his flirted college girlfriends. It was sanya.
S: hey laksh
L: HI!!! WHY DID YOU DISTURB ME AT 10:00 AT NIGHT?
S: oh sorry sorry. I didn't know that i disturbed you. But i just wanted to spend some time with you. I want to know more about you laksh.
Laksh takes a deep breath and says that he is busy and maybe they can meet after a month or something.
S: what the heck laksh? main tumse milna chahti hoon aur tum mujhe appointment deh rahe ho? tumse milne ke liye?
L: nahin aise baat nahi hai. but can't we meet after some 2 or 3 days. i really don't have time for myself. You know i was on vacation from my duty and now I need to work overtime.
S: alright then i will meet you after 3 days.
L: ok
They both hangs up. Laksh didn't know why he rejected her but he just didn't want to spend any time with his girlfriends. All he wanted to spend time with was one and only kt!
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next day at the police station.
Kt was in her cabin[iif they have it.] Laksh cecks the register and sees kt present in the police station. He goes to her cabin and sees her working on some case.
Laksh goes and sits in front of her.
Kt didn't bother to look up because she everyday her boss comes and sits in front o her ans starts asking questions that didn't even make sense.
K: sir abb aapko kya kaam hai?
Laksh thinks to himself and he wanted to joke: uhhmm.. krishna kya tum mere liye ek kaam kar sakti ho?
K: haan boliye sir.
L: mujhe aaj shyaam 7:00 baje park me milna. theek hai.
K: lekin kyun sir? she looks up and sees that it was LAKSH!!!
K: TUM! yahan kya kar rahe ho? aur mujhe park me? kya kaam hai? mujhe lagaa sir the. roz tumhari tarah mera ser khaate hai.
L: oiye kt! maine to sirf isliye poocha that kyunki mujhe ek partner chahiye tha. ek case hai jahaan pe drugs sale hote hai. aur tum toh jaanti ek trained partner ki zaroorat hai. merre saath chalogi.
K: lekin ek partner chooe karne se pehle uspe yakeen karna bohot zaroori hai. Do you believe me?
L: more than myself kt!
K: WHAT?
L: nahin nahin kuch nahin. uhh.. yah uhh i believe you.
K: fine laksh i will be there. happy.
L: very happy.
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At the park.
Laksh was waiting for kt. L: arre yeh ladki abhi tak kyun nahin aayi?
Kt comes from the back. Kya hua? kyun chilla rahe ho?
L: kuch nahi meri maa. itna late.
K: excuse me! i am on timeand you were early hen me. and weren't you ever taught that you shouldn't yell at a girl?
L: whatever kt. laksh grabs her hand and starts walking towards the building, where there were 2 more hawaaldar standing there dressed as beggars.
L: ok toh tum yahan pe raho mai uppar jaata hoon
K: hey wait up. mujhe yahan pe kyun bulaya tha? tumhari shakal dekhne keliye?
L: kt uppar bohot hi risk hai. tum nahi aasakti.
K: kyun mai kyun nahi aa sakti? aur iss baat se toh yeh saabi hota hai ki you don't BELIEVE ME LAKSH!
L: kt aise baat nahi hai. agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh.
K: ok jaao uppar aur agar tum mujhe chood kar aise hi chale gaye na toh abhi se humari dosti ka anjaam hoga!
L: what on earth kt! yeh kaise shart hai?
K: bolo! mujhe apnaa dost maante ho toh mujhe bhi uppar aane do.
Laksh had no other option other than taking kt with her. L: ok fine kt.
L: agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh mai tumhari slave nahi banunga ok. chalo abb.
They both go upstairs.
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No comments? 😭 I just need to think about the ending and the next part.
I will type my next scene later.
Love,
uru

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