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pratham mittal:handsome guy of 26 years....very reserved by nature
and hardly has friends...he has just 2 friends in his life-vicky
with whom he shares his apatment and yash who is friend since
childhood....
gauri aggarwal:very beautiful girl of 22 years...very sweet and
bubbly and very very romantic by nature...she falls madly in love
with pratham but doesnt get response from his side...she often
wonders why he is so reserved and hardly speaks....
now lets get on with the story....
gauri was walking on the road with 2 heavy bags each in her
hand.....
g:(muttering)uff! kaisi shehar hai??..ek taxi bhi nahi milti!kya
saari auto aur taxi aaj hi strike pe gayi hai??..ab itni door paidal
chalna padega! ...o god!plz help me...
just then...zoooooom...a bike went beside her and splash!her dress
was drenched with muddy water..the bike had gone over the pit filled
with muddy water.....gauri was enraged...
g:(shouting)are oye!dikhayi nahi deta kya???
the bike suddenly screeched to a halt.....the guy removed his helmet
and looked back towards gauri....
g:(thinking)wow!he is soooo handsome!...chooo cute!...are
gauri!control karo apne aap ko....show that ur angry....dont stare
at him like that....
the guy was walking towards her...he was none other than our hero
pratham .....
g:(thinking)omg! he is coming towards me!..ooooo...kitna handsome
haI!...
by now pratham had walked upto her...
p:sorry maam...sorry abt that..
g:(dreamily)its ok
p:(taken aback coz he expected her to be angry) ji??
g:(quickly composed herself and trying to act angry) sorry...sorry
se kya mera dress theek ho jaayega???ab main aise kaise
jaaon??raaste pe log kya samjhenge???
p:i said na i am sorry...what can i do now??/
g:what do u mean??/ab tumhe mujhe lift dena hoga...
p:what! no way...main aapko paise deta hoon..koi taxi pakad
lijiye...
g:aye mister! tumhe kya lagta hai mere paas paise nahi hai???aaj
shayad strike hai...isliye koi taxi nahi mil rahi hai..ab tumhi
mujhe lift doge...
p:magar...
g:agar magar kuch nahi....chalo(pulled his arm and took him to his
bike)
pratham was taken aback..he dint know how to react...
p:dekhiye...
g:ab dekhne ke liye kuch nahi hai...tumne mera dress kharab kiya aur
tumhari sazaa yehi hai ki tum mujhe lift doge...
pratham dint know what to say and sat on his bike...gauri
immediately sat behind and gave him her address...gauri enjoyed the
whole ride to her apartment...
g:(thinking)wow! he is so good na??/agar yeh mujhse shaadi karega to
kaisa lagega???...gauri! put a hold on ur imagination...abhi abhi to
mile ho...agar shaadi ki baat karogi to bhaag jaayega....
and she laughed aloud...pratham was getting irritated and turned
around
g:sorry!...and smiled to herself..."khadoos!"
they reached the address and gauri alighted...she smiled at
him...but he did not smile back at her...
g:thanks! thanks a lot!....aapka naam???
p:pratham...pratham mittal...
g:ok pratham!nice meeting you...ok bye!....
she took her bacgs and went in and stood waiting for the lift....she
casually turned around and found pratham walikng towards her with a
scorn on his face...
g:(thinking)are! yeh yaha kya kar raha hai??...lagta hai usse bahut
gussa aaya hai...maine itna irritate jo kiya...shit ya!maine aisa
kyun kiya??....
she put on a sheepish smile and said slowly "thanks once again
pratham"....he remained unmoved and just stared at her with a
scorn....
g:(thinking)baap re!itna gussa...chal gauri....jaldi se nikal..
shr took her bags and started walking up using the steps....one
moment she turned back and was shocked to see him following
her....gauri was frightened.....
g:arre!yeh to mujhe follow kar raha hai...shayad...shayad goonda
hoga...omg! ab main kya karoon?....pagli kahi ki...kya zaroorat thi
yeh sab karne ke liye??...ab bhukto....
she increased her pace and went up the steps...but still he was
following her....by the time she reached the 3rd floor she was
sweating-due to fear and exhaustion....she went and stood before the
dppr and rang the bell...pratham was coming towards her.....she rang
the bell hurriedly again....pratham was nearer....gauri
(thinking)"omg! he is here too! anitha...jaldi se darwaza
khol...plzzzz...."...he came nearer.....gauri quickly closed her
eyes and was about to shout for help when she heard 'click'....she
opened her eyes to find pratham opening the door....gauri was
shocked!...she stared at him openmouthed...he went inside and giving
her a long look shut the door on her face...gauri was at loss of
words!she just stared at the door still open mouthed when she heard
"arre gauri!tu kab aayi aur waha kya kar rahi hai???"...
gauri turned around and found her best friend anitha standing at the
oposite door...then realization hit her...she had been standing by
the wrong apartment..pratham's apartment!....she immediately burst
into laughter...anitha looked at her surprised and strangely...
a:kya hua??!!!
g:still laughing) batati hoon....
she picked her bags and went inside the house still laughing ...
a:arre batana!kya hua???
gauri told her everything and both girls laughed hard...
a:gauri! i cant believe it! tumne pratham se lift liya???omg!
g:kyun ??aisi kyun keh rahi hai???
a:he is strange yaar...woh kisi se zyaada baat hi nahi karta....he
doesnt mingle with everyone..aur ladkiyon se to door bhagta hai...
g:kyun??
a:pata nahi....
g:phir bhi yaar kitna handsome hai na???(dreamily)kitna cute hai!
a:oye!rani sahiba!...apne dreamland se wapas aao....
g:huh!
a:(seeing her)gauriiii...ab yeh mat batana ki tujhe isse bhi pyaar
hogaya....
both girls laughed aloud...
g:waise idea bura nahi hai!(and winked at her)
a:haan haan pata hai...najaane kitne ladkon ko dhekkar tumne aisa
kaha hai....
g:accha accha theek hai...now dont go into the history..par
yaar...yeh alag hai....he seems to be good...different from
others....
a:ok ok...now freshen up and we will have breakfast....ab jao....
g:ok!
so how was it???did u like it???plz let me know whether i should
continue or not...send in ur valuable comments..i shall be waiting
for them eagerly...
take care
shruthi
pratham mittal:handsome guy of 26 years....very reserved by nature
and hardly has friends...he has just 2 friends in his life-vicky
with whom he shares his apatment and yash who is friend since
childhood....
gauri aggarwal:very beautiful girl of 22 years...very sweet and
bubbly and very very romantic by nature...she falls madly in love
with pratham but doesnt get response from his side...she often
wonders why he is so reserved and hardly speaks....
now lets get on with the story....
gauri was walking on the road with 2 heavy bags each in her
hand.....
g:(muttering)uff! kaisi shehar hai??..ek taxi bhi nahi milti!kya
saari auto aur taxi aaj hi strike pe gayi hai??..ab itni door paidal
chalna padega! ...o god!plz help me...
just then...zoooooom...a bike went beside her and splash!her dress
was drenched with muddy water..the bike had gone over the pit filled
with muddy water.....gauri was enraged...
g:(shouting)are oye!dikhayi nahi deta kya???
the bike suddenly screeched to a halt.....the guy removed his helmet
and looked back towards gauri....
g:(thinking)wow!he is soooo handsome!...chooo cute!...are
gauri!control karo apne aap ko....show that ur angry....dont stare
at him like that....
the guy was walking towards her...he was none other than our hero
pratham .....
g:(thinking)omg! he is coming towards me!..ooooo...kitna handsome
haI!...
by now pratham had walked upto her...
p:sorry maam...sorry abt that..
g:(dreamily)its ok
p:(taken aback coz he expected her to be angry) ji??
g:(quickly composed herself and trying to act angry) sorry...sorry
se kya mera dress theek ho jaayega???ab main aise kaise
jaaon??raaste pe log kya samjhenge???
p:i said na i am sorry...what can i do now??/
g:what do u mean??/ab tumhe mujhe lift dena hoga...
p:what! no way...main aapko paise deta hoon..koi taxi pakad
lijiye...
g:aye mister! tumhe kya lagta hai mere paas paise nahi hai???aaj
shayad strike hai...isliye koi taxi nahi mil rahi hai..ab tumhi
mujhe lift doge...
p:magar...
g:agar magar kuch nahi....chalo(pulled his arm and took him to his
bike)
pratham was taken aback..he dint know how to react...
p:dekhiye...
g:ab dekhne ke liye kuch nahi hai...tumne mera dress kharab kiya aur
tumhari sazaa yehi hai ki tum mujhe lift doge...
pratham dint know what to say and sat on his bike...gauri
immediately sat behind and gave him her address...gauri enjoyed the
whole ride to her apartment...
g:(thinking)wow! he is so good na??/agar yeh mujhse shaadi karega to
kaisa lagega???...gauri! put a hold on ur imagination...abhi abhi to
mile ho...agar shaadi ki baat karogi to bhaag jaayega....
and she laughed aloud...pratham was getting irritated and turned
around
g:sorry!...and smiled to herself..."khadoos!"
they reached the address and gauri alighted...she smiled at
him...but he did not smile back at her...
g:thanks! thanks a lot!....aapka naam???
p:pratham...pratham mittal...
g:ok pratham!nice meeting you...ok bye!....
she took her bacgs and went in and stood waiting for the lift....she
casually turned around and found pratham walikng towards her with a
scorn on his face...
g:(thinking)are! yeh yaha kya kar raha hai??...lagta hai usse bahut
gussa aaya hai...maine itna irritate jo kiya...shit ya!maine aisa
kyun kiya??....
she put on a sheepish smile and said slowly "thanks once again
pratham"....he remained unmoved and just stared at her with a
scorn....
g:(thinking)baap re!itna gussa...chal gauri....jaldi se nikal..
shr took her bags and started walking up using the steps....one
moment she turned back and was shocked to see him following
her....gauri was frightened.....
g:arre!yeh to mujhe follow kar raha hai...shayad...shayad goonda
hoga...omg! ab main kya karoon?....pagli kahi ki...kya zaroorat thi
yeh sab karne ke liye??...ab bhukto....
she increased her pace and went up the steps...but still he was
following her....by the time she reached the 3rd floor she was
sweating-due to fear and exhaustion....she went and stood before the
dppr and rang the bell...pratham was coming towards her.....she rang
the bell hurriedly again....pratham was nearer....gauri
(thinking)"omg! he is here too! anitha...jaldi se darwaza
khol...plzzzz...."...he came nearer.....gauri quickly closed her
eyes and was about to shout for help when she heard 'click'....she
opened her eyes to find pratham opening the door....gauri was
shocked!...she stared at him openmouthed...he went inside and giving
her a long look shut the door on her face...gauri was at loss of
words!she just stared at the door still open mouthed when she heard
"arre gauri!tu kab aayi aur waha kya kar rahi hai???"...
gauri turned around and found her best friend anitha standing at the
oposite door...then realization hit her...she had been standing by
the wrong apartment..pratham's apartment!....she immediately burst
into laughter...anitha looked at her surprised and strangely...
a:kya hua??!!!
g:still laughing) batati hoon....
she picked her bags and went inside the house still laughing ...
a:arre batana!kya hua???
gauri told her everything and both girls laughed hard...
a:gauri! i cant believe it! tumne pratham se lift liya???omg!
g:kyun ??aisi kyun keh rahi hai???
a:he is strange yaar...woh kisi se zyaada baat hi nahi karta....he
doesnt mingle with everyone..aur ladkiyon se to door bhagta hai...
g:kyun??
a:pata nahi....
g:phir bhi yaar kitna handsome hai na???(dreamily)kitna cute hai!
a:oye!rani sahiba!...apne dreamland se wapas aao....
g:huh!
a:(seeing her)gauriiii...ab yeh mat batana ki tujhe isse bhi pyaar
hogaya....
both girls laughed aloud...
g:waise idea bura nahi hai!(and winked at her)
a:haan haan pata hai...najaane kitne ladkon ko dhekkar tumne aisa
kaha hai....
g:accha accha theek hai...now dont go into the history..par
yaar...yeh alag hai....he seems to be good...different from
others....
a:ok ok...now freshen up and we will have breakfast....ab jao....
g:ok!
so how was it???did u like it???plz let me know whether i should
continue or not...send in ur valuable comments..i shall be waiting
for them eagerly...
take care
shruthi
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