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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
thnkx for awesome comments guys...n sorry for the delay ruby212.
Part 11 (contine)
L:(smiles, comes close to kt, holds her from her shoulders n turns her to face him) ok jaan i m sorry, i knoe keh tum mere college ki ladkio jaise nahi ho, isse liyya toh mein tumke inah pyare kare tha huan.
tears roll down Kt's cheeks, she cums close to him n put her hands around his neck n hugs him tightly. lakshya puts her hand around her waist n hugs her bak even more tightly
The song
"chane ho mere dil ka,
sirf tum, sirf tum,
sirf tum ho
o janna" from the movie "RUN" plays in the bakground

L: KT ek bat poochu
KT: kya
L: ise romantic raat tum rokai (cry) guzarogi kya
KT:(smiles, n continues holding lakshya tightly)haan, tumara kya jaata hai
Lakshya smiles, he touches kt's chin, n pulls it up to face him.
Kt shyly lifts her head n closes her eyes as lakshya cums towards her lips to plant a kiss 😳 😳 😳
"ahhemm aheem" avoice calls from behind
Lakshya turns n kt opens her eyes, they see archita standing there with 2 dishes with yummmy food 😆 😆
A: (gigling) meinai tum donno koh disturb toh nahi kiya nah
Kt shyly lets go of lakshya, n frees herself from his arms n walks towards archita
KT: nahi toh...
lakshya interrupts
L: kya nahi... ofcourse kiya... aaj pehli baar Kt mood mein thi aur tumne sb ruin kar liya...dekha..
kt interrupts lakshya
KT: lakshya.. yeh kya bol rahai ho...mind ur language

srry guys will continue in a while....gotta go sumwhr...urgently!!!! so. m really sorry esp: ruby212 OH ya...after this karvauchaut scene, gimme ideas....

rani 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
great story rani 712! Karvachauth scene wus really good. Sorry i don't have any ideas but do continue soon with the family drama that dosen't know the truth about theses two lovers.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
buy got 2 go see yah all n rani ur da best
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
rani wounderful story i have been reading all the parts of ur story from the begining and let me tell u it's raght u r the best...

love
pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
thnkx for awesome comments guys...n sorry for the delay ruby212.
Part 11 (contine)
L:(smiles, comes close to kt, holds her from her shoulders n turns her to face him) ok jaan i m sorry, i knoe keh tum mere college ki ladkio jaise nahi ho, isse liyya toh mein tumke inah pyare kare tha huan.
tears roll down Kt's cheeks, she cums close to him n put her hands around his neck n hugs him tightly. lakshya puts her hand around her waist n hugs her bak even more tightly
The song
"chane ho mere dil ka,
sirf tum, sirf tum,
sirf tum ho
o janna" from the movie "RUN" plays in the bakground
L: KT ek bat poochu
KT: kya
L: ise romantic raat tum rokai (cry) guzarogi kya
KT:(smiles, n continues holding lakshya tightly)haan, tumara kya jaata hai
Lakshya smiles, he touches kt's chin, n pulls it up to face him.
Kt shyly lifts her head n closes her eyes as lakshya cums towards her lips to plant a kiss
"ahhemm aheem" avoice calls from behind
Lakshya turns n kt opens her eyes, they see archita standing there with 2 dishes with yummmy food
A: (gigling) meinai tum donno koh disturb toh nahi kiya nah
Kt shyly lets go of lakshya, n frees herself from his arms n walks towards archita
KT: nahi toh...
lakshya interrupts
L: kya nahi... ofcourse kiya... aaj pehli baar Kt mood mein thi aur tumne sb ruin kar liya...dekha..
kt interrupts lakshya
KT: lakshya.. yeh kya bol rahai ho...mind ur language
L: wat mind...
archita interrupts him
A: okk lakshya... clam down i m sorry baba, happy 😆
Lakshya n Kt smile
A: yeh raha tumhara khana ...ubh tum dono pyare seh khana theek hai aur..
KT(interrupts archita): lekin archita .. ek plate kyun...(looks at lakshya)kya tumne mere bina khana khaliya kya
L:(smiles) nahi kt... (grabs her waist, n wispers in her ear) aur meinai sunnah hai keh ek plate mein khana khaniseh pyare badhata hai
upon hearing this, kt smiles shly n turns her head to the side while lakshya kisses her ear n her neck. ** THEY SEEM TO FORGET DAT ARCHITA WAZ STILL THERE** 😆 😆 😆
Archita pretends to cough n then covers her eyes n says "censor cut!! dont U guys seem me here"
lakshay n kt suddenly hear her, n kt manages to free herself from lakshya's grip
Lakshay looks at archita angrily
L: abh kya hai...tum abh tak yaha kya kare rahi hoh
A: ok, mein jarehi huan bahiyya...(she pulls kt over to the side n wishers in her ear)"kt, bahiyya neh aaj morning seh kuch bhi nahi khaya...
KT(interrups, n yells): KYa????
Lakshya sees them whispering
L: arre waha kya guse poose hora hai archita
jus in case if u guys dunt get it...it means wats cooking there, archita
A: kuch nahi bahiyya (n coontinues her talk with kt) chilai kyun tum?... toh plz kuch khila dehna aur plz lakshya koh mat batana keh meinai tumhese kaha, varna woh muhje mar dalega plzz.
KT( to archita): lekin muhje agar usko datnah ho toh?
A:(toches her own forehead) arre bhagwan mein jaoon pir datna...ok
they finish their **secret** talk n archita gets ready to leave
A: ok bye guys.. hv a good tyme.(n gives lakshya thumps up👍🏼 )
KT (after shez gone) puts her hand on her hips to say sumthing but lakshya pulls her over n sits her in his lap. but KT gets off of him
L: kya huwa? (confused)
KT: kuch nahi, (she runs bak into her room)
lakshya follows her in
L: kya huwa..naraz ho mujse
KT: (makes a crying face) han
L: kyun???
KT: kyunki tumne sara din kuch nahi khaya..aur on top of dat tumari match thi aaj...aur
lakshya puts his hand over her mouth, n corners her to the wall
kt's heartbeats start to increase, she tries to look around da room, but lakshya strong hands dont let her move.
the room waz dark, the nite waz romantic, with only lakshya n kt inside.kt starts breathing heavyily.
lakshya continues to stare at her, he looks at the scared, nervous kt, n searches for the love she had for him in her eyes.
it dark...n quite, the only thing dat they cud hear were each other's breath. Kt shuts her eyes as lakshya gets closer to her..............



brb guys...hope u liked it@@ plz comment...n gimme advice on improvements

thnkx
rani 😉
L

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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
Wow laksh ne bhi vrat rakha tha! Kya ladka hai! Aaj uski match thi aur usne kuch nahi khaya. kitna paagal hai naa?
Great story rani712!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
lol....ofcourse uru_hershey
PART 11 (cont)
lakshya continues to stare at her, he looks at the scared, nervous kt, n searches for the love she had for him in her eyes.
it dark...n quite, the only thing dat they cud hear were each other's breath. Kt shuts her eyes as lakshya gets closer to her.............. he then whispers in her ear
L:(whispering) tumko hamari itni parva kyun hai, hum apke hai kaun??? (kt shyly looks up..tears cum into kt's eyes.. she tries to control them...but they jus roll down her red cheeks
lakshya cums close to her cheeks n kisses away all the tears.. one of the tear rolls down kt's cheek n then onto her lips..lakshya cums close to kiss it
KT stops him
KT: stop...(kt then pushes lakshya away, wipes her tears, n goes out to the balcony)
Lakshya follows her
L: kya huah??
KT nervous... shly looks up at lakshya
KT: muhje daar lagta hai
L: daar, voh bhi mere sath (**laughs**) kise baat kah?
KT: agar baacha hogaya toh
L:(**laughs loudly, puting a "wat da hell" look on kt's face) kya... baacha, aise thori nah hota hai baacha
KT:(puting a relieve smile on her bright face) toh phir kaise 😆
L:(smiles in embarasment) tum kitni bholi hoh kt...tumhe yeh bhi nahi malum
KT: haan nahi maloom.. tumhe pata hai toh tum baatao
L: (grins, cums close to her ear) voh toh mein tumhe shaadi keh baad dikhaoonga 😆
kt shyly smiles n turns n looks at the navy blue sky
Lakshya looks at kt...he sees worries...he figures dat she iz thinking abt sumthing
L: kt...kya sooch rahi ho
KT:(smies) kuch nahi
L:ok...mein toh bhul hi gaya...kt tumhari eyes bandh karo
KT: kyun??
L: karo!!
KT shuts her eyes, the wind blows her hair n makes it touch lakshya's face
lakshya takes our sumthing from his pocket n puts it on kt's neck
ITS A GOLD NECKLACE 😳 😃
kt opens her eyes in surprise as lakshya kisses her neck
not knoeing wat she waz doin...KT jumps into joy (as soon as she sees the beautiful, golden carved, with astounding designs) hugs lakshya tightly n kisses him on his lips 😳 😳 😳
lakshya in a shock himself, continues to kiss her bak 😳 😳 😳
while they r hving there "ROMANIC MOMENTS" the closed door of kt's room slowly starts to open.... OMG....who do u thing it iz.,..

end of part 11

will lakshya's n kt's secret still b a secret or is it out... who do u thing it waz...will where be destruction into their beatuiiful romantic night. tune in nxt tyme to watch ...i mean READ it!! lol plz give ur comments...n advices on improvements
thnkx

rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
do cont soon
a very nice and romantic update
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
that was really funny. but i think we sould make laksh more stupider than kt. But it's your choice. I don't know why but i want laksh a bit more stupid and wierd than kt. what say?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
That was so great n romantic 👏 👏
Continue soon

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