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Posted: 19 years ago
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heya guys and girls! i haven't seen any ff's in this section, so i decided to write one myself........please have a read and write some feed back. enjoy😛

Kt and baa are sitting down on the sofa in the main living area, 'baa, please…aap rona band kejiye. I'll find another place to live very soon, don't worry.' Kt tries to console baa and at the same time tries to put on a smiling face.

Karan walks into the living area and gives a quick glance at kt and then walks towards baa, 'baa, I'm sorry. I'm your culprit,please forgive…there must be something wrong in Manthan's upbringing. I have arranged for tulsi and her friends to stay in my part of the house….i will arrange for the guest room to be cleared up'.

'uncle, please….its ok, I will find a place. I remember auntiji saying that the guest room is reserved for some one else, I really don't want to be a burden. I'm really sorry, because of me all this happened' Tulsi looks pleadingly towards karan and shows a some what forced smile.

'haa karan! Yeh ladki teek hi ke rahi hai. You do know shoba will be coming soon….and she is some what more important…' Meera then smirks at tulsi

karan then looks at meera with an angry face, and replies 'our guests are just as important as our family. Infact, maa used to say that guests bhagwaan ke roop hai. But for these girls convenience I will request them to stay in our out house' Karan then shifts his gaze from meera towards KT 'beta, our outhouse is just at the back of the main house….we usually use it for garden parties etc, I would be extremely happy if u and your 2 friends would stay there until u find a place'

kt smiles and walks towards karan 'thank you uncle, in this anjaan city…finding people like u and baa is deeply heartening' tulsi bends down to touch karans feet. Karan smiles and blesses her. Baa also puts her hand on her chest and smiles at the tulsi plant out side. Manthan is standing on the balcony looking down at the whole scene downstairs and thinks to himself 'just you wait tulsi, if I don't make your life a living hell, my name isn't manthan. Dad has just made my job easier'

……………………next scene………………………………………………………

kt and her friends are settling in , in the out house. 'raji, look how beautiful this house is, I never dreamt of such a beautiful house. Wow, look at these flowers….and these white silk curtains..'.

'arre soni! This isn't even the main house, imagine…if this is the out house, how would the main house look!' Raji and soni start giggling and when they look over to Kt they stop ' kt ?! why are you standing over there, come here! Look at the bed. I'm so glad we're out of aunty's flat. She was so horrible' Kt walks towards raji and soni, 'its true, we're very lucky to be staying here, but we left aunty and our now facing a even bigger monster…that manthan. He will do anything to make our lives a misery'. Soni walks over to kt and gives her a tight hug' 'so what! We have kt and she will give that manthan a equal reply'….they all hug each other and start smiling.

'ummm, lagta hai ke main bahut sahee (right) time par aaya hoon' Laksh is standing at the door way , smiling. In his hands he has 3 pillows and a jug of water. KT looks on with an annoyed face…..

TO BE CONTINUED.........ONLY IF U GUYS LIKE IT😃😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww...Laskhya 😳..please continue

BTW..i hope that actually happens in Kyunki... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tooo kool yaar.......continue soon..... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
Please continue
its so kool
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks guys! it will get extrememly interesting....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its good!
make her end up wit manthan
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Plzzzzzzzzzz continue i really loved it. Plzzz Laksh just came. thx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz continue and plz make lakshya and kt together in your fanfic i just love thier jodi its awesome
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 Laksh hamesha time par hi aata hai.
Well done! Plz continue soon. 😊 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hmmm, did i actually write this? lol

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