~AMRIT VEER (AmVeer) DT #4~||Marte Dum tak hum umeed nahi chodhenge|| - Page 67

Originally posted by: ShrustiM

This is sooo amazing @maahi❤️you have written soo beautifully! ❤️ love your edits! And big thanks to you for opening Amveer DT!😳 it was fun to discuss about Amveer with you all! Whatever may be the result, we were still positive and finding humor in each and every scene of this show😆❤️

Indeed the positivity of us kept this DT running❤️🤗

Originally posted by: RAGHVIFAM

It so amazing mahi 🤗 you described the Amveer whole journey so beautifully ❤️👏

And with your incredible edits you left me speechless 👏❤️

Will always cherish this beautiful journey of Amveer and Veer Pratap Singh ❤️

Thank you for this wonderful edits 👏🤗

Originally posted by: indian_beauty

Mahi that was simply beautiful! You’ve penned down AmVeer’s journey so beautifully ❤️ the ups & downs of their relationship, the changes, the development everything ❤️ Thank you for writing such beautiful words for our AmVeer and the collage is just ❤️Gosh I am going to miss these two ❤️

Even in the short time their was so much transition in their relationship,it was never stagnant after all❤️

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

THIS is wonderful Mahi 👏

I don't want to add anything, you have said it all ❤️

But yes may be this tweet 😳

https://twitter.com/AforArpita/status/1408747154802237447?s=19

The post speaks🤗

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

No, this is not my sudden love for him just becoz the character has ended on tragic note. I have always loved his equation with Vashma. This is that one & only bond which I have appreciated since day one of his entry.

Bidding adieu to VEER-VASHMA 💫🌹

Originally posted by: RAGHVIFAM

Veer Pratap Singh whatever i will say about it will not enough because that much i came to love Veer ❤️,he was a broken person who needed love and affection from his mother but not given anything but then his path cross with a beautiful girl with good heart their journey was so beautiful together can't describe with words veer sahab all love and cares he deserves from his biwi sahab and lastly he die for 💔

KJ he was always a good actor and doing such drake gray characters as Veer Pratap Singh he has proved himself one more time that he can do anything 🤗 kj you did give us phenomenal performance as Veer will all remember your this amazing character veer Pratap Singh ❤️🤗

Last i want thank you all the Amveer DT members thank you giving me beautiful memories it was amazing to meet you guys and fun to discussion 😆❤️

Thank you mahi and piu sorry if i take the wrong name for opening this Amveer DT ❤️👏🤗

@Red

I agree that KJ was always a good actor. But I feel he outdid himself this time with performing Veer. At the end if an episode I always felt that KJ is at his best, yet the next day he came with a even more better performance. The kind of love we all have for Veer is due to KJ and his acting skills. He made us feel Veer and this character will always live in our hearts.

@Orange: true, we had some amazing time here in AmVeer DT. This was my happy zone.

Thank you Mahi and Piu for putting all the effort to come up with this AmVeer thread🤗 and I want to thank all the members who added colour to it❤️. I will miss you guys...

THE ALTERNATE END

His ashes are dispersed in river Bahurani. The little leftovers are in this Urn Amrit,can you keep it safely in your cupboard? RM said. Amrit Nodded. Walking through these silent corridors where everyday he used to do drama feels scary now.

The Palace has become quiet, either birds chirping are heard or the footsteps can be heard. Royal People talks in a polite manner and low tone so nothing can be heard from far away. The road to her Room from the dining hall seemed as the biggest journey of her life nowadays. She reached the room and saw Babu kaka cleaning the shelves. He bowed down to show respect to her , she gave a polite smile to him. Then Babu kaka moved towards the gramophone to clean it she stopped him and asked to leave it untouched in it's place.

It was night. Everyone slept till then except one. Amroo wasn't able to sleep so started walking two and fro in the room. Suddenly her eyes went on the Gramophone so she went near it, closed her eyes & brushed her fingers over it with gentle smile. "Biwi Sahab Koi accha sa gaana kyun nahi Bajati Aap" whispered a voice into her ears. She smiled and played it lowering the tone. "Itna Dheere bajaengi to Sunayi kaise dega Amrit!?". Shhhhh!! Agar awaaz badhaenge toh sabko pata chal jaega ki hum jaag rahe hai Kunwar Sahab". She giggled.

"Ajeeb Dastaan hai Yeh...kaha shuru kaha khattam...Ye Manzile hai kaunsi"....

Even she was humming the song. Amrit aankhe kholiye, kholiye na ek baar. He touched her shoulder and out of fear she opened her eyes. She saw him & moved back a bit. You promised me that you won't touch me without mu permission then why did you do this. "Par Amrit aapke aakhon se aasu beh rahe the toh."

"Toh kya hum ro bhi nahi sakte. Humse rone ka haq bhi ab cheena jaega!? Aap chale jaiye aap nhi samjhenge ki hum kaisa mehsus kar rahe." She walked towards the door indicating him to go out. While he was walking away she started saying "Ye Kamra kaat ta hai Hume. Ye Khamoshi Chubhti hai Hume. Ye Ankhein hume Gumrah karta Hai. Vo Hume dikhayi dete hai Randheer. Aur jab aankhein band kar leti hu to Veer kaano mein kuch kehne lagte hai."

"Amriiittt" he was going to say something but she closed the door on his face and marched towards the cupboard. She rubbed her fingers against the cupboard & smiled remembering how Veer himself made this for her. She opened it and saw her dusty & blood stained saree which she wore that day. She picked it up , wrapped it around herself and glanced at herself in mirror.

"Hayeee Itni Khubsurat Lag rahi hai ki Nargis ko bhi Jalan ho jaye Aapse" he complimented her while keeping his hand on her shoulder. He winked in the mirror seeing them. She smiled and said the Party for your brother's return is going to start let's go fast otherwise RM will be upset. They started walking out but suddenly she held Veer's arm "Rukiye aapka collar piche se baitha nahi hai. Hum thik krdete hai." He was looking at her passionately. "Veer aapko darr nahi lag raha agar RM ne aapki baat nhi maani toh?". "Waise vo humari koi baat maanti toh nhi hai aur agar nahi maani humari baat toh humse zyaada khushnaseeb koi iss duniya mein nahi ho sakta. Veer ki Amrit banke aap humesha ke liye reh jaengi." She made a poker face. "Dariye mat Maa Prem se bahut pyaar krti hai maan jaegi. Ab aap ek baar muskura ke iss kamre ko alvida keh dijiye jaha aap 3 mahine se bechari pise jaa rahi thi." She smiled and said "Aisa nahi iss kamre ne hume boht yaadien di hai jise hum kabhi nhi bhulne wale. Aur iss kamre mein aate jate rahenge hum aap konsa kahi bhag rahe hai jo hum aapse milne nhi aaenge Veer Sahab." He gave a confused smile listening to her "Biwi Sahab aap na."

She looked around and remebered how he used to dance all around the room and threw tantrums which kept her busy whole day. Dance. She started remembering about their last dance in the function "Ude Jab Jab Zulfein Teri,Kunwariyon ka dil machle Jind meri." Veer used to look the happiest when he used to dance. She said to herself. Then she remebered that explosion which brought havoc in her life.

Her foot was trapped against a heavy weapon box in the armory with a deep cut over her waist due to which she was unable to move. Veer saw the fire following the route towards the armory so he rushed towards the armory to save her. He entered the room and started pushing the boxes to release her foot. "Veer Aap yaaha kyu aaye. Aapki Jaan chali jaegi. Jaiye yaha se."

"Apni jaan bachane hi aaye yaha. Aapko kuch ho gya toh aise hi hum mar jaenge." She looked at him tenderly with her moist eyes. He then released her leg & in the process her Payal broke down & got scattered in the room. She was shocked but he grinned while scooping her up into his arms , "Aaj humse Azaad ho rahi hai aap harr maino mein Amrit."

They walked out of the room and then suddenly Amroo said Mera Mangalsutra ...wahi gir gya. Veer put her down and rushed towards the room to bring it back. "Nahiiii. Mat Jaiye please rukiye Veer."

He walked out of room & showed her the Mangalsutra from distance then suddenly the blast happened pushing her down on the ground. With some efforts she got up & started searching for him while tears rolled down her cheeks. "Veerrrrr....Veeeerrr...kaha hai Aap!?"

"Biiiiiwi...Saah..." And She looked back. There he was near the tree fully injured , blood stained and burnt. He was gasping with his eyes half shut & fingers moving in air towards her direction. She ran towards him and started brushing her fingers over his half burnt face "Veerrrrr....aap thik hainaa! Rukiye hum madad ke liye bulate hai kisiko. Hum aapko kuch nahi hone denge." He smiled and stopped her from screaming her lungs out asking for help. "Ucchi awaazein hume pasand nahi. Dheere. Ab waise bhi humara waqt aa gya hai. Ab jaane bhi dijiye Amrit." he said in a painful tone "Veer ye kaise bekar baat kar rahe hai aap" she scolded him while holding his face.

"Zara Madad kriye humari baithne mein. Amrit ab aap humari baat suniye. Hume kuch kehna tha." She sushed him and started crying again asking for help from her surroundings. "Shhhh...Ab humara waqt aa gya hai Amrit,Jaane dijiye."

"Aap jhooth bolte hai." He narrowed his eyes. "Aapne kaha tha ki hum aapko agar kabhi chodhke jaenge toh aap khud nhi jaante aap kya kar baithenge toh aaj aap hume chodhke jaane ki baat kyu kar rahe." he smiled and said "Isiliye toh jaa rahe. Prem se boht pyaar krte hai hum par itne bhi shayad dildar nahi hai ki aapko kisi aur ka hota dekhna seh paenge. Dekhiye ab toh bhagwaan bhi hume bula rahe Amrit, Jaane dijiye naa." Veeer ....!

"Hum Aapko ek mauka dene wale the naa toh kya zaroorat thi aapko mera haath apne bhai ke haath mein dene ki."

"Amrit aap humari zindagi mein sach mein Amrit banke aayi. Aapne hume accha insaan wapas banaya hai. Aapne hume sawara hai. Par kya hai naa *Amrit* shayad sirf acchon ko milta hai Jaise Amrit Manthan ke waqt Devtaon ko mila....Aur hum toh hai hi haiwan humare haatho sirf cheenawa huya Amrit aa sakta par vo mil nahi sakta. Aur kya haina ab humare papon ka ghada phutt chuka hai isliye humara aapke saath ka safar yahi khattam hoke chutt jaega."

"Kunwar Veer Pratap Singh kabse harne lage" she said this while looking at his eyes and sobbing. "Kunwar Veer Pratap Singh toh pehle hi apna sab kuch aap par lutake haar chuke hai." Amrit's eyes widened and she hugged him tightly and kept sayingg Veer please don't go. We will be okay. We will make it up. And Suddenly he started singing

" Lag jaa gale ke fir ye haseen raat ho naa hoo...ki shayad fir iss janam mein mulakaat ho naa ho"....It felt like someone has stabbed her right in the middle of heart. Out of fear she tightened her grip over him & started crying even more. He asked her to continue the song with him, she started singing with huge breaks "hum .....Ko... Mili Hai Aaj ye Ghadiya.... Nas...eeb Se, je Bhar Ke De...khh Lee...jiye humko Kar...e..eb Se"

Even He was humming the song's tune with her and suddenly she said "Aapne kaha tha dekhte hi goli mardenge toh aaj apni Jaan kyun Gava rahe humare liye." With a lot of difficulty he said "Aapko bhi mana kiya tha na humare zindagi mein jhakne ke liye toh aap humari zindagi kyun ban gyi." She giggled tightening his grip over him while the tears kept rolling down her eyes. "Aankhon se phir ye pyaar ki barsaat ho naa ho...lag jaaa galee kee" he continued singing in low voice. "Aapne bhi hume uss Amrit se milaya jisme boht taqat hai. Jo kissi se bhi ladd sakti hai aur....aap sun rahe hainaa" hmmmmm he whispered. "Kabhi karte the Zindagi ki tamana,Toh kabhi maut ka karte the intezaar. Vo humare paas hoke bhi kyun door hai pata nahi, jinhe hum aapne zindagi se bhi zyaada chahte the."

Listening this she started bawling for few minutes realizing what he wanted to convey.

"Veer ...hum nahi reh paenge. Suna Aapne...Veer....Veer.. sun rahe naa aap." His silence hit her. She couldn't sense his breath & heartbeat anymore as his head was resting on her shoulder. She closed her eyes, gasped the air around her and pressed her lips harder looking in the opposite direction. Seeing the sun setting she remembered all the moments spent with him & slowly her eyes started closing with the nonstop tears flowing from her eyes.

She looked at his potrait which was hanging over the wall of their room from the bed and hummed "Lag ja gale ...hmmm...mmhmmm....lalala laaaalaa" tune while holding the Sea blue saree tightly and closed her eyes.

❤️❤️

AS PROMISED THIS IS MY VERSION OF THE END. DO READ.❤️

Veer somewhere in heaven to Amrit--- Ek tha Raja ek thi Raani dono marr gaye khatam kahaani, par yeh kahani adhuri hai, isse pura woh Raja aur Raani karte hain! Yeh Raja toh mar gaya, par meri raani abhi zinda hai aur tab tak humari kahani bhi zinda hai.❤️❤️

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

No, this is not my sudden love for him just becoz the character has ended on tragic note. I have always loved his equation with Vashma. This is that one & only bond which I have appreciated since day one of his entry.

Bidding adieu to VEER-VASHMA 💫🌹

This bond was truly very special... ❤️

Originally posted by: gibige

Fun fact is that there is stark difference between both brothers choices. In R's dream A who was then his wife was wearing a bright red saree with green blouse. We have never seen A wearing such colours during fake marriage or the real marriage. She had always worn pastel shades & the dark sarees were very elegant. Those sarees were chosen by Veer. When he picked a saree for mudekhai it was a beautiful yellow.

Also, as the tweet says the dream had a white garland on Veer's picture and A in red saree and in real Veer's picture had a red rose garland with A wearing a white saree. A very symbolic scene.

Also, great observation.