No Air [VashMay FF] ~ Pt.5 (Pg 6) - Page 6

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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Yukti4

Amazing 👏

The way you describe scenes, movements...its unmatchable 👏

Every scene was crisp and clear...I could imagine in front of eyes.😆

The story is amazing ❤️


Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed it ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Yukti4

I read every chapter😭😭

And would love to read continuation to story..

However if you have decided to close...then its ok🤗


This was meant to be the last chapter, had written it out long back dearie, just did not know whether to post or not, coz forum had become sunsaan ☯️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

Why its the last chapter. Would love to read more 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Amazing...Loved it you have written it so beautifully 👏❤️ thanks a lot for this wonderful story Tannu 🤗😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
#55


Yess VashMay ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: ujwal_v

Why its the last chapter. Would love to read more 😳


Kyunki mujhe inspiration nai hai aur likhne ki dearie ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Aster.99

Amazing...Loved it you have written it so beautifully 👏❤️ thanks a lot for this wonderful story Tannu 🤗😃


Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed it smiley27

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Posted: 4 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Me000w


Added the last part. Noone was reading and I shifted to another forum, so I lost motivation to update.

Dont get disheartened, its because the forum is not active due to the show becoming boring so I guess nobody came across your story😭

Which forum are you on now? Please link me to your new stories

The ending of this was so perfect and I loved VashMays conversation. I could feel all the emotions they were going through

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Posted: 4 years ago
#59

Read all the chapters today. Vashmay’s relationship was described beautifully ❤️

Special mention to the last lines you put in each chapter

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Posted: 4 years ago
#60

This was just the start of something bigger than themselves. This was their beginning.

~ Awesome 👏

I am sad that you "Had" to end it 😒 But when you are unable to take anything forward it's better to end that on a good note so I am glad about this. ❤️ Thank you for giving us the opportunity to enjoy VashmAy through your vision and words 😳 Wonderful experience. Stay blessed.

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