No Air [VashMay FF] ~ Pt.5 (Pg 6) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Yukti4

Woww ❤️

Very well fits with all characters.

Liked that randheer saying think about your goals and uday digging his fork...👏

Iss line se i literally imagined uday ka gusse wala expression(uday farooq bet infront of vashma scene) in front of my eyes

Its just awesome work ❤️Would like to see more of these four scenes together

Thank you! Fab 4 will be bonding a lot in my story coz they are precious & inseparable ❤️

"You aren't a nobody"❤️

Loved it Tannu

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

I've always thought of her being fun but knowing where to draw the line, so dont think she is more mature here compared to the show. The next few chapters will showcase it 😆

Randheer is living at their house before the marriage in May; UdHeer are like brothers 😳

Vashma is trying to underplay her feelings in fear of 🥺

It would end up ruining them both💔 It did😭

Tabah ho gaye💘

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

I've always thought of her being fun but knowing where to draw the line, so dont think she is more mature here compared to the show. The next few chapters will showcase it 😆

Randheer is living at their house before the marriage in May; UdHeer are like brothers 😳

Vashma is trying to underplay her feelings in fear of 🥺

Oh! So basic plot is same as the show 😳 Actually when Uday wanted to breakup during that particular phase in my opinion Vashma acted a little bit immature compared to that Vashma in your story is a bit mature... Otherwise Vashma knows where to draw the line but that particular phase was all about her emotions overpowering her sense of practicality...at least I think so 😊 Looking forward to the next chapter ❤️

Originally posted by: ujwal_v

"You aren't a nobody"❤️

Loved it Tannu

Thank You 🤗

This story... ❤️Beautiful 👏👏

is Radha gonna be here? I miss her

I love the way you always end your chapters. The last line leaves a lasting impression

so heartbreaking

Originally posted by: ujwal_v

It would end up ruining them both💔 It did😭

Tabah ho gaye💘

Ishq ke haseen sitam abhi baaki hai mere dost, thoda intezaar kijiye 😆❤️

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Oh! So basic plot is same as the show 😳 Actually when Uday wanted to breakup during that particular phase in my opinion Vashma acted a little bit immature compared to that Vashma in your story is a bit mature... Otherwise Vashma knows where to draw the line but that particular phase was all about her emotions overpowering her sense of practicality...at least I think so 😊 Looking forward to the next chapter ❤️

Basic plot and chracters are same, just changing how they react to the situation. Here Vashma is anticipating that while they can be more, she is also aware that the fire will burn them too ❤️