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Posted: 19 years ago
u r killing me with suspense man!....wats gonna happen in de office?????????? 😉 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey guyz sorry for the delay and thank you for the support 😳 😳

--nimmo reaches the office--
Nimmo n the receptionist
R: hello mam, how may i help u?
N: Kunal Sehgal?
R: yes...one sec plzzz
to K on the phone - sir there is someone here to see you, may i send her in?
K: yea send her in
R: mam u can go in - straight, turn right, n last door on the left
N: thank you

N reaches the door n knocks ( 😲 😆 )
K is busy n says: come in
N comes inside n kunal looks up from a file n acts surprised (because dadaji tells him not to let nimmo know that he called and informed him)
K: nimmo? tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?
N: woh...mein..uhh
K is cutely smiling while he has a file up to his face
N: uhhh. woh tum ne lunch kha ya kya?
K: ooo nahi acutally i knda forgot woh aaj bohut busy tha
N: well..uhh.. u can have lunch now...i have food for u
K: really? wow!
N: yea - smiles

N sets the food on the coffee table in kunal's office
K starts working again
N: uh..kunal?
K: huh?
N: khana tayar hain, aa kar kha lo
K: oo yaa

he goes washes his hands n comes to where the food is
N serves him n K starts eating
N walks over to look at the paintings n quotes that were hanging on the wall

K: wow, this is food is really nice
N says i'm sure it is - thinks: man i'm hungry!!!
looks at kunal eating
K looks up n sees nimmo looking at him n remembers that dadaji said that nimmo hadn't eaten her lunch yet either.

K: uuhh..nimmo
N turns around: ha?
K sweetly asks: wo..tum ne khana khaya?
N: uuh actually
K serves food on another plate: ao tum bhi kha lo
N: mein ghar jaa kar kha looing, tum abhi kha lo
K: nimmo its okay, tum ao aur kha lo 😳

N n K both serve each other, eat, n talk:-

N: how do u do it?
K: do what?
N: work so much n make it seem like u do nothing
K: is that what u think?
N: 😳 no its just that u make everything look so easy
K: well working right now gives me time to party after words - which i love to do 😆
N: 😆 😊 😛

While talking to eachother both finish their lunch

K: nimmo..
N: yea?
K: thanks for lunch, it was a lot fun
N: 😳 😊 ur welcome aur muje bhi bohut mazaa aya
K thinks: if my being busy means having lunch with u then i hope i'm busy everyday 😳

N packs up all the dabbas n things n is about to leave

N: bye kunal
K: bye, see u at home
N 😳 is almost out the door
K: nimmo thanks again for a great lunch

N shyly smiles n leaves
K also smiles very cutely

----THE END---

hope y'all liked it!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
very cute 😊 👏 story..keep writing more 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
ha ha its such a sweet story. 😊 orange
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Posted: 19 years ago
yea i think they are really nice you guyz are so creative 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey guys i have a fa-fic its called kya hoga kunal ka...? I'll post a bit of it on IF too. Its actually on Tele-chemitry but we get lot of anonymous ppl vieing the fan-fic there too heres the 1st part
Okay so since everyone is starting a fan fiction I thought I do my own one to , I liked the idea of amnesia that someone mentioned so of my characters will definitely get amnesia at the moment I'm thinkin kunal will get amnesia, that is just a precap for u guys but now from the beginning. , . Okay so the the charcters are all the same and the story continues after kunal and nimmos wedding, we start at the suhag raat:

Nimmo is in the room wiv her sister in laws, shrada and varsha. Her sister in laws tease her about her and kunals pyaar and shaadi,
varsha says:"okay, okay, ab to nimmo ko chor do ab kal apnay bhabi sai baat kar lahni.
All the sis-in-laws and varsha leave. Now there is only shraada and nimmo in the room".
Shraada:" Nimmo mujhe bhi maloom hai kai apna ghaar chor kar aur prayah ghaar jaana kaisa lagta hai. Legin nommo mai tumhai yeh gahna chahti hoi kai mujhe maalum hai kai iss ghaar mai tuha koi log pasand nai kartai hai legin is ghar me mein aur dadaji humisha tumhare saat hai. Ab sai tum meri beti jasi hoi. Aur meh tumhe yeh gangan tehna chati hoi. Jub mai is ghar me ayi ti to mujhe yeh gangan dadaji nai diah tah, aur mai tumhe dah rahi hoi, kunal aur is ghaar ka kiyaal rakna.". With that shraada leaves the room.
Nimmo feels really guilty and looks up out of the window and talks to God " yeh tum mujse kyah kar rahai ho, mein ek nahin do parivaaroh ko joohte bolrahi hoin, pata nahin tum mujse aur kai karaho kai".
Nimmo looks around the room and says to herself ab mein kya karoh, mujhe bhi isse kamrah mein pehna parihga.

Wen kunal comes into the room, its very late and the lights are off, kunal thinking looking around the room, finding his posters gone, the nimmos shaadi ka jora on the table and the room looking more messed around and thinkin ' yeh sub kya hai, nimmo kahah hai' and says to Ocsar who has come into the room wiv him "aab merah kya hoga".

"Jo bhi hoga manzorah kuda hoga" Kantaben says, Huh, kunal thinks and looks around the room and locates the noise to the balcony. Nimmo and kantaben are sat outside with KK and are drinking orange juice.

" Ab kya hua, yeh meeting kis lehaa hai"kunal says sitting on one of the deck chairs outside
KK: "sir, humai apna agla move plan karma hai"
Kantaben confused: " Hai jo bhi us nai kaha,aur yeh kya hai, tum lokoh ko itnai barai kamrah mil rahah hai aur mujhe to murgai kai huda jaisa chota sai kamrah milah hai, aur who bhi mujai doh aur nokranioh kai saat rahna pareh ga, mai jub boli ti kai mein yah bhi rahogi mujhe kya maloom ta kai tumhare itna barah ghaar me mujhe tumhare kudi ke bhi thodi jaga milahgi"
KK getting exasperated: "Kantaben"
K: "hudai kya hota hai"
N: " deha masi apnai kunal ko to pehle si bi aur confused kardi ah" looks at kunal and says " huda meaning"
KB:"meaning teri…"
KK interrupts: "meaning a birds house, sir"
KB: "Ha, ha wohi to mah kahnai ja rahi ti, parkai aya bhaar si aur tumhai to apni subhan bhi nahi aati, mujhe ek barah karma chahi aye, ayi to meh hoon nimmo kay saat magar contract tumhara nimmo kai saat hai…"
KK: "Thank god"
KB: "kyai kaha tumne"
KK:"kuch bhi to nahi"
KB:" To meh karihi ti hai mujhe barah kamrah chahiai varna meh to..."
K: "Tek hai, tek hai. Tumhe kal hi naya kamrah dengay. Bus Kantaben"
KK: " Sir muhe yeh lagta hai kah kal sahi humai nimmo aur dadi ki difference of opinion ghaar key doosrah logo kah samnai lahnihi chahi ah"
K: "hai, hai KK, kitni bhi jaldi ho mujhe divorce chahi ai"
KK: "teek hai, teek hai, ab mujhai sonai bhi dogai. Is jhoote mhoote ki shaadi me mujhe such much ki neende ar rahi hai, meh chali. Aur yaad rakna mujhai kaal ek baraa karma dehna, varna…"
K: " teek hai, teekhai" getting irritated
KB: "Ub KK woh, meh kaha jah rahi ti" forgetting which way to go
KK takes kantaben down to her room and as kantaben exits the room you can hear her with more curses.

All alone K and N still on the balcony looking at each other

Okay that was my 1st attempt, hope u guys like it.

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Posted: 19 years ago
Heres the 2nd part

N and K look at each other, each of them thinkin aab kya. Nimmo gets up and slips over before she knows it shes fallen splat on her face . Kunals face is turned into a smile and he's tring not to laugh out loud but he cant stop it. . He's laughing alot, Nimmo sits up and stares at him with dagger eyes , but Kunal keeps laughing.
N: Baas bhi karo kai ya puri raat hasnai ka erada hai
K: Nai woh...(lol), nimmo tum...(lol). He straightens himself out and finally says without laughing, meinai to socha ta ke kitna uncomfortable hoga shadi kai baad.Nimmo gives him another look
K: Merai matlab hai kai meinai to soccha ta ke awkward hoga, you know contract marriage and etc, magar tum to bilkol naihe badi ho, na tum kabi badalna. Tum aisihi rahna aur meh garentee karta hoi ke humari shaadi jald se jald katum hoi jaiaygi . Muje to lagta hai kai humai dost bana chahiay. Kunnal gets hold nimmos hand and gets her off the floor
K: Kya kehti hoi? Dost?
N: Teek hai dost, magar yaad rakna contract ke mutabik..
K: Hai mujhe patah hai, meinay to sirf dosti mangi hai tumharai dil nai /<!--emo&:)--> <!--endemo-->, wats say?
Nimmo and Kunal shake handand say dost.

They walk through the balcony and into their bedroom, kunal goes to the bathroom to change and wen he comes out nimo is asleep on the sofa. Kunal thinks to himself, yeh ladki kya mujhai octopus samajti hai, i can keep my hand to myself , plus Nimmo no way man shes not my taste . Kunal gets into the bed and falls asleep also

Okay so thats the second part short and sweet. I' ll post the 3rd part soon
pre-cap:
Kunals cousin shakes him 'bayah, bayah, wake up' Kunals sleepy eyed and tosses and goes back to sleep.
'Bayah, woh nimmo bhabhi nai darasal...'
'Nimmo' Hearing the name kunal gets up immediately
' Nimmo nah kya kiya'
'Woh nimmo bhabi nai actually...'

Hope u guys like the precap. If there are enough ppl here at IF i'll post the other parts too
😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
its a very well written story and like the name its 😆
yeh starcity can you start you ff in another topic so it will be easier and so we don't get confused thanks
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Posted: 19 years ago
starsity y dont u start a new topic 4 ur fanfic otherwise it might g8 confusing 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
well done 👏 n continue writing 😊

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