Aankhon mein teri...In your eyes...PreeRan TS

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Seeing PreeRan dressed up like Om and Shanti from Om Shanti Om in Kundali bhagya,I wished to read an OSO based PreeRan FF.Since there is no PreeRan FF on OSO,I decided to write a short story on OSO by giving a happy ending to Om and Shanti's love story which was tragic in the movie.

Special thanks to my dearest friend Reena for making PreeRan edits without which this TS would not have been possible.


Karan got dressed up and told his mother Rakhi:Maa,I am going for the shoot.Sameer will come now.

Rakhi became emotional.

Rakhi:You are only a junior artist.Still how can you be so happy?

Karan:Because in my new film,the heroine is the dream girl Preeta Arora.As you know I am her biggest fan and today my dream to see her is going to happen.

Rakhi:Preeta Arora is such a big star.She won't even look at you.Don't dream of her.

Karan:My love is true Maa.So my dream will also be fulfilled.One day I will become a superstar and I will marry Preeta.

Rakhi:Are you mad?How can a junior artist like you become a superstar?


Karan:I am trying na Maa.There are so many famous actors who started off with small roles and then became big stars.Then why can't I?

Rakhi:But they had luck.That's why some good directors and producers noticed them and gave them bigger roles.

Karan:I will also get that luck Maa.

Rakhi looked at him emotionally.

Rakhi:I hope your wish will come true Karan.

Karan smiled.Sameer who is Karan's best friend came.He is also a junior artiste like Karan.

Karan and Sameer left to the shooting location.


Karan and Sameer reached the sets.Preeta's car reached.

Everyone who was there waited to see Preeta.Preeta got out of the car.



She smiled at her fans.

Karan was lost in her.

Preeta walked looking at both the sides with a smile.

Preeta waved her hand at her fans.


Karan could see only Preeta.

Aankhon mein teri...

Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Ho...

ankhon mein teri...

ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Dil ko bana dein jo patang

Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Sameer called Karan:Karan!

Karan did not respond.

Sameer smiled.

Sameer:Poor boy is in Preeta world now.


He went to his dreamland with his dream girl Preeta.



He imagined romancing Preeta.





Aankhon mein teri...

Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Ho...

ankhon mein teri...

ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Dil ko bana dein jo patang

Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain


Aayi aisi raat hai jo

Bohat khush-naseeb hai

Chaahe jisse door se duniya

Vo mere kareeb hai

Kitna kuch kehna hai

Fir bhi hai dil mein sawaal kaheen

Sapnon mein jo roz kaha hai

wo phir se kahun Ya nahee




Aankhon mein teri

Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Ho...

ankhon mein teri

ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Dil ko bana dein jo patang

Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain


Tere saath saath aisa

Koi noor aaya hai

Chaand teri raushni ka

Halka sa ik sayaa hai

Teri nazron ne dil ka kiya jo hasharr

Asarr ye hua

Ab inmein hi doobke ho jaaun paar

Yehi hai dua


Aankhon mein teri

Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Ho...

ankhon mein teri




ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Dil ko bana dein jo patang

Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain(OSO).



Preeta started shooting her scene.

Preeta put vermilion on her forehead and said:How will you know the value of a pinch of vermilion powder?


For that you should know the heart of the woman.For that you need to have heart.But you don't have a heart.You are heartless.


Then she smiled:A pinch of vermilion powder is the blessing from the God to a woman.


It is the beauty of a married woman.It is the most beautiful and precious forehead accessory of a married woman.Vermilion is the dream of every woman.It is the strength of every woman.


Karan who was watching this was completely into her.



The producer Prithvi came to the sets.

Preeta's face blossomed and walked towards him.But he ignored her and walked away.Preeta became upset.

Karan went near Preeta when she was alone.Preeta looked upset.

Karan:Preetaji..my name is Karan.I am your big fan.I have seen all your films many times.You may not have noticed me.I am one of the junior artists in this movie.

Preeta smiled:Hi Karan!I am glad to meet my fan.

Karan felt goosebumps when Preeta called him by his name.

Karan:I felt on the top of the world when you uttered my name with mouth.

Preeta smiled.

Karan:Can you me your autograph?

Preeta:Sure.

Preeta gave him her autograph.

Karan got excited:Thank you Preetaji..

Preeta smiled and turned back.

Without her knowledge he kissed it.

Karan looked at Preeta.

Karan:You look gloomy.Why?I mean you are a big star..you have everything.Then why are you upset?

Preeta:I am also an ordinary human being like you Karan.The big star image is only a mask.I also have happiness and worries like any other human being.

Karan:But you are getting love from so many people.All over the country there are people who love you like crazy.

Preeta:But sometimes one person's love is enough for us.We long for one special person's love.

Karan looked at her deeply and asked:What if a special person loves you from the bottom of his heart?

Preeta looked at him confusingly.He gave her a dimpled smile and walked away.



Preeta was shooting for a song sequence with her hero.In the song,Karan imagined himself in the hero's place.


Dhoom taanata dhoom ta na na na
Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na
Dhoom taana de na de na (x2)


Kaise nainon se nain milaaun sajna?
Kaise main aise na ghabraaun sajna?
Kaise? Aaye aise mohe laaj sajna
Chhoona na dekho mohe aaj sajna


Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na
Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na
Dhoom taana de na de na

Mrig-naini tu na jaane
Prem kitna mere mann mein hai
Yeh bechaini maangti hai
Roop jo tere yauvan mein hai
Tere phool sa hai ang
Tere ang mein hai rang
Tere rang ke mein sang goriye
Tere rang mein hai roop
Tere roop mein hai dhoop
Teri dhoop hai anoop goriye
Sajna se kaahe aaye laaj sajni
Chhoone de ang mohe aaj sajni

Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na


Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na


Dhoom taana de na de na



Jhalki jhalki phirti hoon
Tharki tharki phirti hoon
Jism yeh mera koi jaam hai jaise
Nazar milaati hoon
Khwaab mein samaa jaati hoon
Dil mein bas jana mera kaam hai jaise
Arre dil mein mere bas ja maine roka kab hai
Lekin kya armaan hai mera
Yeh to samjhaane de..
Sajna se kaahe aaye laaj sajni
Chhoone de ang mohe aaj sajni

Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na
Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na
Dhoom taana de na de na



Kaise banjara mann ki baat mein aaye?
Kaise ek raja ko manmeet banaye?
Kaise pehnoon main pyaar ka yeh taj sajna?
Karte ho tum kyun dil pe raj sajna?



Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na


Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na
Dhoom taana de na de na



Mrig-naini tu na jaane
Prem kitna mere mann mein hai?
Yeh bechaini maangti hai
Roop jo tere yauvan mein hai
Mere meet tere geet
Tere geet mein hai preet
Teri preet meri jeet goriye
Meri jeet mein bhi haar
Meri haar mein hai pyaar
Mere pyaar mein iqraar goriye
Bhool ke saare kaam kaaj sajni
Chhoone de ang mohe aaj sajni
O.. aaye na kaise mohe laaj sajna
Chhoona na dekho mohe aaj sajna

Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na


Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na
Dhoom taana de na de na



Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na
Dhoom taana ta dhoom ta na na na
Dhoom taana de na de na(OSO).

Karan passed by a room from where he could hear some sounds.

There were Prithvi and Preeta in the room.

Preeta:Today you have to speak to me Prithvi.I will not allow you to ignore me again.

Karan:This is Preetaji's voice.

He stood near the door to hear clearly.

Prithvi:Preeta...what is this?

Preeta:We both love each other.But you wanted our relationship to be secret as you fear that ourcareer will be affected if our relationship comes in open.So I kept silent.But these days you are ignoring me.I also heard a rumour that you are getting closer to the new actress Sherlyn.Is that why you are ignoring me Prithvi?

Prithvi:O stop it Preeta.Don't believe any such rumours.I am committed to you.But I am ignoring you because others will doubt us and they will inform the media.Trust me.

Preeta was confused.

Karan who overheard it was broken completely.

Karan:Preetaji loves the producer Prithvi Sir?Preetaji is not mine.She will never be mine.

Karan ran out and cried bitterly.

Main toh jiya na mara

Hai ve das main ki kara


Dil jude bina hi tut gaye hath mile bina hi chhut gaye

Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne

Baar baar rod akhiyan tainu jo na vekh sakiyan

Khole aaye aaj kudrat ne

Kataan main ki ve din teri soth tere bin

Main toh jiya na mara


Chan Se jo tute koi sapna

JAg suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage


Koi rahe na jab apna

JAg suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage

Jag suna suna


Hai to yeh kyun hota hai

Jab yeh dil rota hai

Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein

Jag suna lage


Chan Se jo tute koi sapna

JAg suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage


Koi rahe na jab apna

JAg suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage reeeeeeeee


Suna Lage Reee(OSO).

Prithvi and Sherlyn were talking.

Sherlyn:I am scared whether Preeta will come between us.

Prithvi:You don't worry about that Sherlyn.I told Preeta clearly that we have broken up and I don't love her anymore.

Sherlyn became happy.

Prithvi and Sherlyn danced romantically enjoying a lot.

Unknown to them,Preeta was watching them from behind.




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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice start dear

Loved it 🤗🤗

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🙏💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Congratulations on this new TS


Vibrant Start

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Congrats on the TS

lovely update

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aankhon mein teri...In your eyes...Part 2

Prithvi and Sherlyn were talking.

Sherlyn:I am scared whether Preeta will come between us.

Prithvi:You don't worry about that Sherlyn.I told Preeta clearly that we have broken up and I don't love her anymore.

Sherlyn became happy.

Prithvi and Sherlyn danced romantically enjoying a lot.

Unknown to them,Preeta was watching them.

She was shocked.She was really getting angry.

She entered the room angrily.Prithvi and Sherlyn were shocked.

Prithvi became nervous.

Preeta:I am ashamed of loving a person like you.You cheated me cruelly.

Prithvi:What nonsense are you saying Preeta?

Preeta:Don't try to act innocent Prithvi.

Preeta looked at Sherlyn:He cheated me.He is fooling you also.He will cheat you also.

Preeta left the room.

Sherlyn looked at Prithvi angrily.

Prithvi:Baby..

Sherlyn:I am not a fool to believe you again.It's over.

She walked out angrily.Prithvi was very angry.


Preeta burst into tears thinking of Prithvi's betrayal.

Preeta:I talked about the value of a pinch of vermilion powder in my movie.The coincidence is that the person I loved never knew the value of vermilion in a woman's life.

Roothi rothi sari raatein

Fikhe fikhe sare din

Virani si Virani hai

Tanhai si tanhai hai

Aur ek hum hai pyaar ke bin

Har Palchin


Chan Se jo tute koi sapna

JAg suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage


Koi rahe na jab apna

JAg suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage


Patharo ki is nagari mein

Pathar chehre Pathar dil

Phirta hai mara mara

Kyun rahon mein tu awara

Yahan na hoga Kuch hasil mere dil



Chan Se jo tute koi sapna

JAg suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage


Koi rahe na jab apna

JAg suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage



Hai to yeh kyun hota hai

Jab yeh dil rota hai

Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein

Jag suna lage


Chan Se jo tute koi sapna

JAg suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage


Koi rahe na jab apna

JAg suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage reeeeeeeee(OSO)


Karan saw Preeta crying and went near her.

Preeta wiped her tears.

Karan:What happened Preetaji?

Preeta:When the person we value does'nt value us,it's really causes heart break.

Karan thought:Did Prithvi Sir hurt Preetaji?I can't ask her as I have no right to interfere in her personal life.

Karan:I don't know what you are talking about.But all I can say is if that person does'nt value you,that means he has no value and he is unwanted in your life.You just remove such toxic people from your life.

Karan:Just because one person hurt you,your life is not going to end Preetaji.Life is like movies.If we get whatever we want,then everything will be fine and it will be a happy ending like movies.If we did'nt get what we wanted,then there is no ending and that means there is much more left in our life to get a happy ending like movies.Picture abhi baaki hai Preetaji.

Preeta smiled emotionally:You are right Karan.

Karan nodded.


Unexpectedly Prithvi came to meet Preeta.

Preeta:Why are you here Prithvi?You don't even exist for me.

Prithvi:Because of you,Sherlyn left me.

Preeta:Great.She escaped from a cheater like you.

Prithvi got irritated.

Prithvi:I will destroy your career.

Preeta:I don't care.Infact I will expose you.I will tell the whole world how you cheated me.You will be out of this industry.

Prithvi was shocked.Then he smiled in an evil manner.

Prithvi:For that you need to be alive Preeta.

He took a knife from his pocket.

Preeta was shocked.

Prithvi:I will kill you and put the blame on your new friend..that junior artist Karan.

Preeta was shocked.

Preeta:I never thought that you can stoop so low Prithvi.

Prithvi smirked and moved the knife close to her.

Preeta was scared and was in tears.

Preeta:Please don't kill me Prithvi.Please...

Prithvi:Sorry Preeta.Don't expect any mercy from me.

He tried to attack Preeta with the knife.Suddenly Karan came there.He was shocked.

Karan:Preetaji!

Karan pulled Prithvi from her and hit him.His knife fell down.

Karan held her face softly and asked her:Are you ok Preetaji?

Preeta:Yes Karan.I am alright.

Preeta took the knife and scared Prithvi.

Preeta:You wanted to kill me and trap this poor boy.Right?Before that you will be killed.

Prithvi got scared.

Karan went near the land phone and called the police.

Prithvi:No Preeta.Don't do this to me.

Preeta:I also begged you not to kill me.But you did not listen to me Prithvi.A devil like you does'nt deserve to live.

Karan:Preetaji...no...this devil does'nt even deserve death from you.Infinite number of people consider you as their idol.You should not break their trust.

Preeta burst into tears and put the knife down.

To their shock,Prithvi took the knife from the floor and attacked Preeta again.Karan tried to pull him away from Preeta.But Prithvi hit him and attacked Preeta again,Suddenly Police men came. The inspector shot Prithvi.Prithvi fell down dead.

Karan-Preeta were shocked.

They looked at each other in shock.

Inspector:I hope you are fine Preetaji.

Preeta:Yes.Thank you for saving me.

Inspector:You are the heart throb of our nation.It's my duty to protect you.

Preeta smiled.

Karan-Preeta smiled at each other.

Preeta:Thank you Karan.If you had not come on time,I would have been killed.You saved my life.

Karan:I saved my life.

Preeta got confused.

She remembered Karan telling her "What if a special person loves you from the bottom of his heart?"

Slowly she became emotional.

Preeta thought:Karan loves me?

She looked at him.Karan smiled at her tearfully and walked away.Preeta looked at him go emotionally.


After 3 years...

Preeta was shooting for a romantic song sequence.The hero was none other than Karan.

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon

Kehna Chahoon Bhi To Tumse Kya Kahon

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon

Kehna Chahoon Bhi To Tumse Kya Kahon




Kisi Zabaon Mein Bhi Woh Labaz Hi Nahi

Ki Jeene Mein Tum Ho Kya Tumhein Mein Bata Sakun


Main Aagar Kahoon Tumsa Haseen

Kaynaat Mein Nai Hai Kahin

Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon..


Shokhiyon Mein Dooobi Yeh Aadayein

Chehre Se Jhalki Hui Hain

Zulf Ki Ghani Ghani Ghatayein

Shaan Se Dhalki Hui Hain

Lehrata Aachal Hai Jaise Badal

Bhaahon Mein Bhari Hai Jaise Chandani

Roop Ki Chandani


Main Agar Kahoon Yeh Dilkashi

Hai Nahi Kahin Na Hogi Kabhi

Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon..


Tum Hue Meherbaan

To Hai Yeh Dastan

Hoo Tum Hue Meherbaan



To Hai Yeh Dastan

Abb Tumhara Mera Ek Hai Karwaan

Tum Jahan Mein Wahan






Main Agar Kahoon

Humsafar Meri

Apsara Ho Tum Ya Koi Pari



Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon..

Kehna Chahoon Bhi To Tumse Kya Kahon


Kisi Zabaon Mein Bhi Woh Labaz Hi Nahi

Ki Jeene Mein Tum Ho Kya Tumhein Mein Bata Sakun


Main Aagar Kahoon Tumsa Haseen


Kaynaat Mein Nai Hai Kahin

Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon...(OSO)

Now Karan is a superstar.Through his hard work,he achieved his dream of doing lead roles.Like he wished,he is known as the best romantic hero of Preeta.Karan-Preeta pair have become the most popular pair of Bollywood now.The latest Filmfare magazine cover page has Karan and Preeta on it and it has become the best seller till date.

Karan-Preeta won the best pair award at the Filmfare award function.

Karan-Preeta received awards and their photographs were taken.

Karan:I thank my co-star Preeta because of which I could do romantic scenes very well.

Preeta:I thank Karan for making our chemistry so beautiful onscreen.

Everyone clapped their hands.

Preeta looked at Karan:Karan,there is something I have not told you till now.Now on this stage I want to tell you something.

Karan:What is that?

Preeta:Our fans love us as the best pair.They want us to be a real pair.Can we make their wish true?

Karan was stunned.

Preeta:A few years back itself I realized that you love me.

Karan was shocked.

Preeta:But I kept quiet as I was struggling hard to recover from the pain of betrayal caused by my ex lover.But now my heart is full of love for you Karan.

Karan was stunned.He looked at her in disbelief.

Preeta:I love you Karan.

Preeta embraced him and pecked his cheek.Then she smiled at Karan who was numb because of this sudden surprise.

Then Karan pulled her closer.

Karan:Let us make the dream of our fans true.Because my biggest dream was to marry you Preeta.

She blushed.

The audience clapped their hands.Rakhi and Sameer smiled emotionally.

Rakhi:Finally both your dreams are fulfilled my beta.You became a superstar and became the Prince of your dream girl Preeta.

Sameer:Yes aunty.

The anchor:The newly born pair ...please make the stage on fire with your sizzling dance performance.

Karan-Preeta danced romantically.

Aankhon mein teri...

Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Ho...

ankhon mein teri...

ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Dil ko bana dein jo patang

Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Aankhon mein teri...

Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Ho...

ankhon mein teri...

ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Dil ko bana dein jo patang

Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Aayi aisi raat hai jo

Bohat khush-naseeb hai

Chaahe jisse door se duniya

Vo mere kareeb hai

Kitna kuch kehna hai

Fir bhi hai dil mein sawaal kaheen

Sapnon mein jo roz kaha hai

wo phir se kahun Ya nahee

Aankhon mein teri

Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Ho...

ankhon mein teri

ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Dil ko bana dein jo patang

Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Tere saath saath aisa

Koi noor aaya hai

Chaand teri raushni ka

Halka sa ik sayaa hai

Teri nazron ne dil ka kiya jo hasharr

Asarr ye hua

Ab inmein hi doobke ho jaaun paar

Yehi hai dua

Aankhon mein teri

Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Ho...

ankhon mein teri


ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain

Dil ko bana dein jo patang

Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain(OSO).

Karan-Preeta got married.

They proved to be the most ideal couple of Bollywood through their everlasting love.

The end

Thank u very much readers 4 supporting this TS.Plz write ur favourite scenes,favourite character n y u liked that character the most.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#6

Wonderful part dear

Just loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗😌🙏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for the pm


Fabulous update

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Posted: 3 years ago
#8

Beautiful Ending


I enjoyed this entire TS

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