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Part 17

Luthra house

"Shrishti get up please" Preeta tries to wake her up patting her face

Doctor checks Shrishti inside. Preeta smartly sends outside of room to avoid any drama.

Kritika ; Preeta are you also having same thinking as mine (comes to her)

Preeta : i hope this is just my illusion, I trust my sister she won't do same mistaks as Sherlyn

Doctor ; you are her sister right?

Preeta ; yes, how is she? she is okay

Doctor : she is fine it happens in early stage, she should not take this much stress

Preeta : early stage?

Doctor : yes she is 2 months pregnant

Kritika and Preeta are blown seeing their worst fear coming true

Preeta : you were right Kritika, today she has to answer my question

Kritika : wait a second what are you doing? not here talk at your house there are many guests down they already have questions

Preeta : doctor please if anybody asks you don't say anything you know it is happy occasion all will get tensed

Doctor : don't worry but just make sure to get her all tests done and her are some medicine

Preeta : thank you doctor

Disha sees Preeta talking to doctor from far

"What is she talking to doctor, I hope there is no problem" she wonders

Disha starts walking upstairs when she bumps into Rishab and is about to fall.

"Oouch" she shouts softly

Both are lost in each other's eyes. Rishab holds her up unknowingly to him more

Rishab (makes her stand up) : you are okay ?

Disha : yea I am fine if I ask you something will you tell me honestly

Rishab : what is it?
Disha : are you all really happy with this alliance see this is matter of two lives
Rishab feels guilty hiding truth from her

Disha: if there is something please tell me I can help you all and make Akruti understand before it gets too late

Rishab : there is nothing like that

Somebody calls Disha.
Disha : coming, rishab ji at least I can expect truth from you
Rishab is about to say something but she starts to leave when her duppatta get stuck on his watch. Rishab removes her duppatta gently getting lost in her beauty while she leaves

Sarla : Preeta what happened? what did doctor say Shrishti is alright na

Preeta : yes mom she is fine don't worry because of stress she got unconscious

Sameer's concern for Shrishti makes Akruti very surprised but ignores it thinking them as friends.

Sameer : Preeta di how is Shrishti? please tell me

Preeta looks at him with mixed emotions of anger and concern.

"You don't have to worry she is fine go down its your roka today" she stays sternly

Sameer is quite shocked to know seeing her behavior but goes down

Preeta : I can't believe this, Kritika what did this two do but its my fault

Kritika ; not its not stop blaming yourself

Preeta : I just went there so both does not get carried away but they did what they wanted to

Kritika : there is point in blaming yourself

Preeta ; what will I tell ma? I could not stop them doing mistake

Later all guests leaves after ceremony. Shrishti regains consciousness and finds Karan Preeta staring at her. They calls Sameer as well who is equally shocked to hear about Shrishti's pregnancy

"Shrishti you are pregnant" Sameer hugs her emotionally

Shrishti ; di, Karan Sir why are you both staring at us like this I am getting scared

Preeta : then what should we do? praise you both that what a fabulous job you have done

Sameer : Karan bhai, di at least listen to us

Karan keeps pacing around in room

Preeta ; Shrishti how many times I told you don't make any rash decisions, pregnant? are you serious

Shrishti ; I am sorry di but we both didn't realize how it happened

Preeta ; that (Sees Karan quiet) why are you quiet say something, she is your best fan right you always praise her

Karan : you are getting jealous or happy, by the way Sammy congratulations

Sameer ; what are you saying bhai?

"I mean you are getting promotion so early me and Rishab are not even engaged and you became father' Karan teases him

Preeta : oye bajarbattu, this is not time to joke no wonder you both fan and celebrity get along, Karan before them families will make our corpse

Karan : Preeta please don't scare me, I am already nervous, you know i feel that Haryana jailor has started doubting if she finds out about this she will kill all of us

Preeta : oh god forget about Disha, think about our family, Rakhi aunty sent them on our trust

"Shrishti Sameer, I didn't expect this from you, I mean do you both have any brains, our graves will be dig with you both" Karan says fearful voice

Preeta : Shrishti have you ever thought what will mom go through

Shrishti ; di please do something, I don't want to get slapped from mom

Sameer : Karan bhai you are my savior now, before others I think first hand would be Rishab bhai's on my cheek

"You are lucky you didn't have to feel his hand till today but one is must you can also feel what is brother's hand made of" Karan cracks joke

Sameer : are you my brother or foe

Preeta : shut up Karan (says with anger) you are cracking jokes, can't you see situation seriousness, Shrishti is pregnant without marriage do you know what that means

Karan ; sorry, but Preeta we have to tell this to families for how long we can hide this

"Preeta Shrishti, lets go" Sarla calls them

Preeta gets very disturbed but Karan consoles her

"Don't worry i am with you, just go home right now I will think something" Karan cups her face

She nods with faint smile

"And you come home then I will show you" Preeta drags her away

Sameer : bhai roka is done, now they are getting date of other rituals too

Karan : calm down let me think, I am with you (hugs him)

In evening Kritika goes to meet Vihaan at his house.

Vihaan : you here?

Kritika ; why? can I not come to meet you

Vihaan : I didn't mean that (Stammers)

She slaps him hardly clutching his collar

"Vihaan why did you do this? I kept waiting for you for 5 years and now after coming you are giving me this great news" Kritika breaks into heavy tears

Vihaan : you are also getting married

"I am because you did not came back, I could not tell my family what should I have said, the guy I love is nowhere he left me" she keeps holding him tightly

Vihaan : just consider i was bound by duty

Kritika : you are marrying Disha, please Vihaan break this marriage

Vihaan : I am sorry Kritika but I cannot back out

"And me, do I not need you, Vihaan I have craved so much to meet you please don't do this" she hugs him tearfully

"Kritika you go from here, you are getting married in few weeks its not good for us to meet like this" Vihaan turns around leaving her

Kritika ; really? then say this looking in my eyes, I know you are lying

Vihaan : I am marrying Disha with whole heart

Kritika ; I promise if you call me till last phera I will come to you leaving everything (leaves)

Vihaan : I am really sorry Kritika but you are right I am bound by duty I cannot leave my best friend's hand but my love will always be for you

Arora house

Shrishti ; di please don't avoid me like this, you know i cannot handle your anger

Preeta keeps organizing room ignoring her

"Di listen to me you can hit me, slap me please do whatever you want" Shrishti stops her

"What are you doing? stop" Preeta hugs her stopping in midway

Both sisters share tearful hug

Preeta ; yes I want to hit you badly like I did when you were kid but now you are grown up na then why should I hit you

Shrishti ; I will always remain small for you

"You don't know I am so much worried for you right now, my heart is feeling restless about this, you are my princess how can i see your pain" Preeta wipes her tears

Shrishti : when you are with me why should I be scared didi

Preeta ; you don't take too much stress okay me and Karan will handle this

Shrishti ; we both troubled you a lot na

"Yea a lot but what are elder sibling for to take care of their younger sibling" Preeta kiss her forehead hugging her

She makes Shrishti rest for a while


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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Interesting update👏
Shristi is pregnant😲
Let's see how Preran will solve this
Disha & Rishabh are getting closer😊
Feeling sad for Vihaan & Kritika😭
Waiting for next
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Part 18

Luthra house

Rishab keeps pacing in his room recalling Disha's words to him

"Why did I lose that chance to tell her, I could have told her whole thing, we cannot delay anymore first I will talk to Karan and Sameer and inform Disha" Rishab makes his mind

House

Disha ; this people are definitely hiding something from me, I will find out with my own way now, first I have to ask politely then I will use my way if they don't say

Both recalls their previous meetings feeling very strange

Arora house

Shrishti gets restless at night not able to sleep but does not wake her sister. She goes on terrace to feel fresh air and feels somebody behind her

"Stop its me" Sameer puts hands on her mouth

She raises her eyebrows

Sameer : don't shout, sorry to come like this but my heart was not ready to listen (removes his hands) you are okay?

"Sammy" she hugs him

"You got emotional" he breaks hug

Shrishti ; you have no idea how much pain I was feeling when I saw you with that girl

Sameer : I told you million times but you didn't listen to me see even god does not want us to separate he gave us reason

"Sameer I am very nervous, nobody will understand us but we also broke their trust I cannot face mom, dadi, I hurt my di" Shrishti breaks into tears

Sameer (makes her sit) : please calm down, you cannot take so much stress, and I am always with you, we will tell Akruti everything soon

Shrishti : will she understand? we have played big joke with her

Sameer : I know we have done mistake and we have to rectify it a lot but I want a promise that you will take care of yourself and our baby please

Shrishti puts hands on his. Sameer softly kisses her belly and starts leaving. She does not let him go away

Sameer : just for a while then I will make you mine for lifetime (kiss her forehead)

Shrishti goes back to her room. Preeta calls Karan who is in deep sleep wakes up

"Preeta you?" he asks softly

"sorry I disturbed you" she says

Karan : no its okay, everything alright

Preeta : I want to meet you, don't know I felt like talking with you if its okay to you

Karan : yea don't worry I am coming to pick you

Preeta : please come behind house I will meet you there

Karan : okay (hangs up) I hope you are okay

Preeta covers Shrishti with duvet and gets ready to meet Karan.

Both goes to Karan's practice ground for a while sharing awkward moment.

Karan : you wanted to talk something?

Preeta : whatever happened today is scaring me we are doing big blunder

Karan : you know Preeta today first time I felt true love really has power, thats why god sent small gift to not let this two separate

Preeta : Karan, remember I told you that day few things are not in our hands, some emotions are go out of control

Karan ; Sorry Preeta you were right other day, we are also responsible for what happened

Preeta ; my heart is restless thinking about Akruti and her family we had played with their emotions

Karan : I don't know why I feel Disha has started doubting us, the way she was observing everybody in ceremony

Preeta : you only feel but I have full trust she will reach truth she has her eyes everywhere

"If that happens before family she will dig our grave and in her prison" Karan gets scared

Preeta : why are you always scared of her? she is not that bad

Karan : baby doll I know you are dumbo in knowing people but don't show off, she is not bad but yaar did you ever saw the way she talks, sees like she is doing encounter with eyes to other person

Preeta : Karan do you always come here when you are upset

Karan : of course this is only place who have witnessed my every victory or lose, every part of this stadium echoes of cheering, this is another important part of my life

Preeta : thank you for making me part of it and bringing me here

Karan : you are not part of my life

She pouts

Karan : dumbo you are part of this place (puts her hand on his heart)

Both shares tearful eye lock hugging each other tightly

Ranjhna naino ke teer chal gaye

Saajna saanson se dil sil gaye

Palkon mein chupa loon, tera sajda karoon

Seenay mein samaa loon, din rehan karoon

Palkon mein chupa loon, seenay mein samaa loon

Tere ang ang rang mera bole

Ab jaan lutt jaaye, ye jahaan chhut jaaye

Sang pyaar rahe, main rahun na rahun

Sajda tera sajda, din rehan taru na hi chain karoon

Sajda tera sajda, lakvaar karun meri jaan lutt doon

Karan : do you want to spend night here or want to go home

She chuckles and starts walking with him.

After few days

Rishab starts shouting for Karan surprising everybody. Preeta and Shrishti comes there at same time

Karan : bhai whats wrong?

"You are asking me, how can you do this? like really I feel you don't love your brother, nor you need him, and hiding things have became part of your life" Rishab scolds him

Shrishti : di, I think he have found out

Preeta : dont be scared okay

Karan : bhai at least listen to me, situation was such I had to

Rakhi : Rishab why are you shouting at him? what happened

Rishab : no mom today this is between two brothers nobody will interfere

Karan : I am sorry (tries to hug him but gets pushed away)

Rishab :don't show so much love

Karan : sorry bhai but this Sammy he put into trouble this time

"bhai why are you blaming me" Sammy pouts

Rishab ; Sameer you also? both are useless brothers

Mahesh : Rishab I agree with you, this two are very grown up now

Dadi ; can somebody tell me what is going on?

Rishab : I will tell you dadi

Shrishti : di (holds her hands) please save me

Rishab : our Karan has become from hero to superhero (turns on TV)

"Today's latest headlines, BPL star player Karan Luthra and his cricket team is selected to play for international in South Africa, we congratulate Karan luthra and his team wish you all the best" Reporter says

Rakhi : oh my god I can't, Karan (gets emotional)

Karan : you were talking about this from long time and making me sentimental

Rishab ; of course what did you think?

"Congratulations bhai" Sameer hugs him happily

Preeta and Shrishti too gets very happy.

Mahesh ; god bless you

"Congrats bhai I am so excited" Roo says

Karan : thank you

Rishab : you will leave in few days I will miss you, I am very proud of you

Karan : only because of you bhai, I promise this time I will make your dream come true

"Love you my paglu" Rishab hugs him

Later in room all four again meets

Preeta : Karan you will go in few days, but don't worry about here just focus on your match

Sameer : I am sorry bhai because of us you could not enjoy your success

Shrishti : sorry karan sir

Karan ; shut up both, this match is important for due to Rishab and you both are mine and Preeta's responsibility

Shrishti : you got this chance after lot of effort Sir don't waste it for our mistake

Karan : fine but please for god sake you both don't put yourself in another problem unit I return and yes don't bother my baby doll (Says teasingly)

Preeta blushes hearing him

Shrishti : haww Karan sir, in this condition you should say this two should not bother me

Karan : let it be Shrishti, I think I have to take away the tag of no 1 fan from you

"No no please Karan sir don't" she shouts

Preeta : shut up, you are becoming mother but your childlessness is not going

Sameer : I feel she will spoil our child also

Rishab overhears their conversation getting him shocked as well

Karan : bhai you here?

Rishab ; what were you all talking about?

Karan ; nothing at all

Rishab ; don't even think of lying to me, Preetaji you say I don't have hopes from them

She remains quiet

"I am sorry Rishab ji, but whatever happened was our fault as well" Preeta reveals to him

Rishab starts moving to Sameer

"Bhai please don't hit hardly you know na I am very delicate, karan bhai why are you quiet" Sameer keeps moving back

Rishab (hits Sameer lightly) : what should I do? praise you that Sammy wow great job, how can you be so careless and Karan Preetaji you both are supporting them

Karan : bhai we also found out recently, and we had given them good dose right Preeta?

She hides her sarcastic laugh

Rishab ; really? you gave them dose from any side I didn't feel like that

Karan : I swear I did

Rishab ; shut up and Sameer Shrishti did you both ever thought about families, how will they react and leave all that, Shrishti do you realize how much society will mock you

Karan : but bhai first we have to solve this marriage issue

Rishab : Sameer your roka is done, now this is about three families

"That" Rishab turns around shockingly

Preeta, Shrishti and Sameer also sees

Karan : why did you all became quiet as if that Haryana jailor is here

"She is" trio says looking at Disha standing at door crossing arms

Karan ; bhai at least you don't scare me, I feel she will eat us alive, no no she is jailor, she will chop us in pieces and feed to animals

Everybody rubs their head with his deeds.

Karan : why are you all moving your neck like this, is it paining

"Karan turn around your neck too, it is good exercise" Preeta makes him turn back

He shouts in fear

Disha : shut up, I don't believe this aren't you all ashamed of playing with somebody's emotion

Preeta ; please listen to us

Disha : in few days my sister's hand will be of Mehndi and then haldi, what should I tell her?

and Rishabji I didn't expect this from you

Sameer : what?

Disha : I thought you are sensible but you also cheated on us

Shrishti : but he just got to know right now

"But everybody knows about love na they why did you all increase Akruti's hopes" she shouts

Shrishti ; they all wanted to tell truth but I stopped them I did not wanted her heart to break (cries)

Disha : now whatever has to be done I will do, tell truth to Akruti but don't worry she won't know about pregnancy I promise and sorry for shouting I don't want to give you any stress in this condition

Preeta : thank you Disha

Disha leaves. Nikhil on other hand bribes a mechanic to fail Karan's car break

Nikhil : karan luthra until you are alive, my Preeta won't come to me easily just wait and watch the fun

Precap : Akruti fights with Disha for breaking her engagement. Karan's accident


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 19

Mumbai

House

Disha : Akruti I want to talk something important

Akruti : what is it didi?

"I told this before but you didn't listen today I have reason, Sameer does not love you, he loves Shrishti do you get my point, so this marriage won't happen" Disha tells her

Akruti remains numb at her words and refuses to believe at any cost

Akruti ; if he really loved Shrishti why would he do roka with me, nobody forced him right

Disha : listen to me (shakes her shoulder) this marriage won't happen, you will never stay happy with Sameer, three lives would be spoiled please try to understand

"I don't know want to understand anything di, I love Sameer from childhood and who knows maybe after marriage he will forget Shrishti" Akruti says

Disha (slaps her hardly) : shut up, enough have you lost your mind love is not sale to be sold, why don't you understand I will find much better guy for you promise

"No I only want Sameer he is only mine, and you see he will marry me too, di I don't understand you should be happy for me then why this reaction " Akruti questions her

Sarita ; now this marriage won't happen

Disha sighs relief hearing about her mom

Sarita : did you hear me Akruti? your sister is right this marriage is baseless but they have to answer my questions first

Disha ; mom let it be na why you want to extent things further

Sarita : no we have right to question them, people will mock at us and degrade Akruti

"I am not going to let this happen, you both are thinking about yourself but world will make fun of me not you, mom I thought you would understand me' she says

Sarita : I am your mom I know what is good and bad for you get ready we are going to Luthra house

Luthra house

Aroras and Luthras finds out about Sameer and Shrishti's relationship.

Noise of slap echoing

"I can't believe you did this Sameer, this is what we taught you, I know I did wrong by not accepting both of your relation but you repaid like this of my love" Vanita slaps him

Sameer : I am sorry mami please forgive me

"No Sameer today I should be sorry that I could not become good mother for you, at least you should have thought about this family who raised you like son" Vanita breaks into tears

Sarla too blasts Shrishti for her deed

"Did you not feel ashamed? I was so proud of my daughters thinking they have my upbringing they won't ever do wrong then why" Sarla keeps shaking her

Preeta : ma please stop it (comes in between and hugs Shrishti) at least think about her condition she is already scared

Sarla ; you move away from her, she has to answer my question

Shrishti (keeps sobbing in her sister's arm) : I am sorry ma

Rakhi : Sameer did we lack any upbringing, did we not give you enough love

Sameer : please don't say that, I have always considered this family as mine, we know we both did mistake but whatever happened was not in our hands

Rishab : mom, aunty we can deal with them later first please lets talk with Akruti and her family they have also right to know

Sarla sits on sofa thinking about her daughter's future and society

"Sarla aunty, I know you all are very angry at us and you should be but at least listen to me first, I have loved Shrishti more than my life, my jaan is resides in her and now one more came, I don't want our kid to be raised like me and Shrishti had grown up without one parent, please aunty just give me one chance to rectify this mistake and take responsibility of this child, I promise I won't ever let any tear come from Shrishti's eyes and our baby, always stand with her in bad times " Sameer sits on his knees holding her hands tearfully

Everybody gets teary eyes hearing his words. They hear noise of clapping

Vanita : Sarita ji you all here?

"I must say you all play game very well, and Vanita ji I cannot complain this people but you were aware of everything then why did you give us false hopes, how will my daughter face everybody now" Sarita blames them

Rakhi : we are really embarrassed for whatever happened but our motive was not to hurt you

Sarita : Rakhi ji please you don't say anything, I want answer from Vanita ji and Sameer, you are my Akruti's friend right but still you cheated her

Akruti ; mom don't say anything to Sameer, it is this girl's fault (goes to Shrishti) you snatched away my Sameer from me how dare you

"Akruti stop it" Disha tries to pull her apart from Shrishti but she goes out of control

"Stop it Akruti, she is pregnant dammit" Sameer blurts out the truth

Akruti and her mother are stunned to hear it

Sameer : you can blame me as much as you want but don't say anything to Shrishti, this girl was thinking about your happiness whole time

Akruti : pregnant? (says softly)

Sarita : Vanitaji this relation is over, whatever left is finished now, lets go Akruti, DIsha

Vanita : please at least listen to us once

Sarita : its very late now, whatever this children did rectify that, Akruti come one

Akruti : one second mom, Sameer how could you do this to me (holds his collar)

Shrishti : I am sorry Akruti but you will also get somebody who can love you truly

Akruti : I only want to hear from Sameer, why did you play with my emotions, you made my joke in front of whole world

"I am ready for punishment" Sameer looks down saying

Disha : Akruti, lets go from here don't waste your tears come on (drags her away)

Outside Disha's scarf get stuck on gate lock surprising her. She tries hard to remove it when Rishab helps her

Disha : thanks (turns to go)

"Thank you for everything Disha and congratulations for engagement" Rishab hesitates to put hand on her shoulder for comfort but she leaves instead

Later Rakhi and Sarla calls Panditji for Sameer and Shrishti's marriage, they decide to do on same day Akshay and Kritika

Kareena : bhabhi then lets hold all ceremonies together for both couples

Rakhi : okay didi, what do you say Sarlaji?

Sarla : whatever you are fine with, haldi and Mehndi at our house

Karan : mom lets have sangeet at our house it will be double fun but please wrap this before I leave or after I come

Rakhi : don't worry dear marriage has some time its next month till then you will come back with victory

Mahesh : but Sameer Shrishti you both have to be really careful and prepare yourself, this is very big responsibility we have given to your condition but don't do anything to feel regret

Both nods

Preeta : mom I was thinking, can we go out for few days Shrishti also needs good change

Karan : why don't you join with me to South Africa then it will be fun

Preeta : but what will we do there

Rishab : Actually its a good idea, Preetaji I just got call from Karan's coach they need a physio for match as replacement

Karan (in mind) : yes thank you bhai yaar

Rishab : if its okay with you

Karan : bhai what are you asking? it is part of her job consider it done

Rishab : are you Preetaji?

He nods no

Rishab : then stay quiet

Preeta ; its okay I will go, and Sameer Shrishti?

Mahesh : both can go with you but make sure to get doctor's permission if she can travel

Sameer : yea chachu don't worry

Monisha calls Rishab. He excuses himself

Rishab : yes, sorry I could not call you from few days I was bit busy

Monisha : oh Mr luthra is sorry okay then your punishment is (stays silent smiling)

Rishab : why did you stop

Monisha ; nothing just like that, I am leaving tonight for Paris

Rishab : yes I remember I have to drop you at airport don't worry

Monisha :; okay but before that can I ask you for dinner tonight at my house

Rishab hesitates but agrees for her sake

Monisha : great, I will see you then bye

In room Shrishti and Sameer hugs their sibling excitedly for everything. Shrishti still blames herself for Akruti's condition

Karan : Shrishti it's all over now just don't worry you have to think about you and baby, oh no I forgot something bhai will kill me yaar

Preeta : really? (laughs)

Karan ; look kareli don't laugh I have to go at cricket ground see you all later bye

Sameer : bye bro go safely

Karan unaware of his car breaks starts heading to his field. On way Preeta calls him

Preeta : Karan?

"I know my name baby doll say something I don't know" he laughs

Preeta : thank you and tell coach I will join you all to South Africa

Karan : of course anything else

"yes but only when you come home" she says

Karan : no please tell me I can't handle suspense

"No means no" Preeta says

Karan sees truck approaching to him with full speed and turns around quickly. He is not able to push the brakes and car rolls down in bushes

"Hello Karan, are you there" Preeta keeps asking him

Karan's head and hands get injured badly.

"Pre..Preeta" he says with pain

"Rakhi aunty, mahesh uncle, Sameer" Preeta comes out yelling their names

Sameer : di whats wrong

"Ka...Karan" she breathes heavily

Rakhi : whats happened to my Karan

Rishab ; mom whats wrong

"I was talking to him on phone and suddenly there was noise of crash I think he have" Preeta is not able to complete and breaks into tears

House

Vihaan : whatever happened was for good, she found out within right time or else god knows

Disha : Akruti please open the door

She keeps crying loudly and asks everybody to leave her alone

Sarita : let her be alone dear, you both start shopping for your engagement

"No worries when Kunal is here" Kunal makes entry happily

Vihaan : which big task you have done

Kunal ; yaar bhai don't jinx anything, its your engagement whole world will see

Vihaan : first you get yourself checked, go and pacify your spicy chilly Akruti

Kunal : this is my right hand game just see how I go and bring her out

Vihaan : so its final there will another world war in this house


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Part 20

Mumbai


Hospital


Family rushes to hospital after knowing Karan's accident.

"Nurse where is Karan Luthra's room Preeta asks her


Nurse : on this side


Preeta and Rishab rushes to Karan's OT room. Both are tearful seeing him around wires and monitors with doctors around him


Rishab ; doctor how is my brother? he is out of danger right


Preeta : please tell us how is he


Shrishti : di if you both let him speak


Doctor ; his condition is little critical due to blood loss and injury in head


Sameer : Rishab bhai, Karan bhai's car air bags are always open still it happened


Doctor : thats why Karan was saved from major injury or else we would have lost him


Preeta : nothing can happen to my Karan do you understand (starts shouting) he cannot leave me alone


Everybody is shocked to hear Preeta's behavior. She goes out of control as well as Rishab seeing Karan's condition. Mahesh consoles Rakhi at home as children didn't let them come


"Karan wake up, see I am here please, I am sorry I know it happened because of me you can give me any punishment Preeta holds his hands shivering in fear of losing him


Shrishti : di please control yourself, it was not your fault


Preeta : Shrishti I was talking on phone with him and then he lost balance to car, see I am holding my ears come on don't show so much attitude


"Karan open your eyes see your brother is here, you know I cannot see you like this get up Rishab taps his face


Preeta : Karan are you getting up or not? you know I hate this kind of jokes please wake up


Karan does not respond to their queries


"What do you think of yourself? you are some kind of hero, here i am pleading your brother is shedding tears but you want to enjoy your sleep, from when you became so mean, we don't mean anything to you na, Karan Luthra you are just a zero do you hear me you are good for nothing, I hate you Preeta clutches his clothes with tears and anger emerging from her heart putting head on him


Shrishti hugs Sameer seeing her sister break down


"Karan you are my jaan, why do you like to trouble me so much? you remember when you were kid, you wanted to buy new bat and dad refused you always came to me like drama king, saying bhai please get me new bat, you promised me you won't ever leave me, what will I do now please come back at least for mom and dadi Rishab holds hands


Monisha (hugs him) : please calm down


Preeta : no use of telling him Rishab ji he is hearing everything but he enjoys in bothering us


Kritika : Preeta please control yourself, bhai needs rest right now


"Oye loser luthra did you have memory loss, while ago you got news for going to South Africa and now you are being lazy, come on get up you have lot of work to do, I promise I will make you tired with all exercises on field Preeta's tone changes from angry to vulnerable


Everybody looks on


"Karan please, if you don't wake up who will make me smile with all stupid jokes when I am sad, who will give me new names please get up, Karan Luthra don't you understand I love you a lot Preeta scrams out loud


Monitor starts beeping.


Doctor : everybody move, nurse


"Doctor he is losing it, pulse is going slow Nurse asks all to go out


Rishab : I won't go anywhere leaving my brother


"Karan I know you can hear me please open your eyes now, see bhai is here with you Rishab tells him innocently


"I love you bajarbattu, I cannot live without you Preeta cries loudly holding his hands


Both Rishab and Preeta's gestures bring Karan back to normal.


Kritika : his finger is moving


Doctor ; yes his heartbeat is getting normal


"Bhai Karan murmurs softly


Rishab (Caresses his heir) : yes i am here


"Tell this kareli her hands are very heavy he says with closed eyes


Preeta have tears of happiness seeing his humor even after facing death


Monisha : you scared everybody Mr luthra


Karan : this is Karan luthra yaar I have my own style (praises himself)


Rishab : how many times I have told you drive safely but no you only care for yourself, bhai does not matter to you na (starts hitting him)


"I am getting hurt violence on small kid Karan says innocently


Rishab (hugs him) : shut up do you even know what I went though, if something happened to you


"I am your jaan how can I leave you easily I love you bhai Karan hugs him but shares eye lock with Preeta who is grinning at him


Shrishti coughs fakely


Sameer : is your throat hurting ? lets get checked up we are in hospital only


Shrishti : oh god is your brain fully empty? you are becoming father now


Karan ; Rishab this is not fair, we both are single and this Sammy got promotion already very bad


Rishab : I thought you also got one not promotion but bonus right Preetaji


She blushes seeing Karan. Everybody leaves them alone in room


Karan : don't stare at me like that I feel embarrassed (teases her)


"Shut up here I was getting worried, shouting my throat started to hurt but no cricketer is busy annoying me making jokes do you have an idea how much scared I was Preeta starts hitting him with pillows


Karan : baby doll I got into accident but it seems your brain got hurt


Preeta starts to leave but he pulls her back


"You know if I knew such a wonderful gift I would get in this place I would come here everyday, you finally confessed Karan pushes her hair back cupping her face


Preeta : I would have died without you, I am sorry I hurt you so much (hugs him tearfully)


Karan : hey baby doll see I am fine nothing happen to me I am safe (caresses her hair)


"I love you too bajarbattu Preeta says


Karan leans to kiss her slowly. Both kisses each other passionately when suddenly Kritika and Monisha comes


Kritika : oh my god this too are doing romance in hospital


Monisha : I expected this from Karan but Preeta is getting influenced


Shrishti : you both came to call them or (sees love birds's romance)


Karan and Preeta departs seeing them


Shrishti : di you can save some romance for trip there nobody will stop you


Preeta : you better not say anything, Karan needs rest everybody go


Kritika : aha he is our brother but you are very worried were you not disturbing him


"No I was not, now out out Preeta drags them


Shrishti : areey no world of decency


Preeta : no its not now go


Karan laughs at her antics. Later Karan gets discharge from hospital but is advised to rest for few days.



House


Disha comes to console Akruti who is very much broken down


"Why did it happen to me didi, I also loved him truly na then why Akruti hugs her


Disha : look here, maybe you were not destined with him, you will also get a true love who can love you as you are


Kunal : what a line bhabhi, no wonder you are cop and she is mice, yaar stop crying I feel a ghost is screaming


Akruti : jiju tell your brother to talk with me decently I am just quiet because of you


Vihaan : all yours go ahead


"Thank you, jijs, you fool whole time you blabber nonsense and make fun of me Akruti runs behind him throwing things


Disha wipes her tears seeing them


Vihaan ; she will be okay


"What about you? you are going to be okay Disha asks him


Vihaan : why are you asking that


Disha : because you are hiding something from me, I can clearly see it


Vihaan : stop your detective game with me yaar play with criminals


Disha : I don't need to because you are important for me not them


Vihaan : stop it yaar (leaves annoyingly)


Disha gets into deep thinking



In evening Monisha decides to cook dinner by herself for Rishab. She burns her hand little in process but keeps making food


Suman :wow what a aroma, in all this years you never made something for us but now for Rishab


"I will make grand feast for you promise now you go to your party I have lot of work bye mom Monisha asks her mother to go out


Suman : I am going, you will come to mom soon


Monisha ; of course mother I know but for right now I am very busy


Suman : take care my love and best of luck


Monisha : thank you (goes into kitchen)


Rishab arrives to her house and rings bell


"Oh god he is here, god ji please help me today Monisha panics hearing bell ring and opens


Rishab : hi


Monisha : come


Rishab : wow what an aroma, I guess this could give competition to hotel food


Monisha ; of course and today's dinner is made my chef Monisha Sharma


Rishab coughs


Monisha : whats wrong?


Rishab : no actually you don't look like those type who step into kitchen


Monisha : but now I do, actually once I tried to make something for Rithwik but it did not came out great as I wanted


Rishab : I am sure you Rithwik had not mind it


Monisha ; no he did not, he was very cute (gets sad recalling him but avoids topic) now come on I am very hungry tell me quickly how is food


Rishab (Stops her) : don't try to hide your pain I know you are very strong but it is life one has to move on (wipes her tears)


Monisha touches his palm getting lost in his concern


Tu jo mila toh yun hua

Ho gayi poori adhoori si duaa

Tu jo gaya, toh le gaya

Sang tere mere jeene ki har wajah

Ho jaaye jahaan tu jaaye

Paaye mujhe hi paaye

Saaye yeh mere hain tujh mein samaaye

Saiyaara main saiyaara

Saiyaara tu saiyaara

Sitaaron ke jahaan mein milenge ab yaara

Saiyaara main saiyaara

Saiyaara tu saiyaara

Sitaaron ke jahaan mein milenge ab yaara


Both shares romantic eye lock leaning closer to each other. Duo departs feeling little awkward


Rishab : sorry I


Monisha : its okay now try this quickly


Rishab : wow amazing, I must say you cook very delicious


Monisha : thank you, it is always said if you make food with love it always turns good (bits her tongue) sorry


Rishab laughs at her instead. Both sits on terrace leaning on edge


Rishab : what are you looking?


Monisha ; those stars, my papa always say the one who leave us become star and see us


Rishab : I know I can't ever take place of your love but at least become friend to you


Monisha hugs him shedding tears tightening her fingers around his neck. Rishab hesitates to reciprocate her hug but later holds her


Both breaks hug but shares little intimate moment


Rishab (steps back) : we are getting late come lets go I will put luggage in car


Duo starts heading to airport.


Monisha (in mind) : why every time I become weak in front of Rishab, just like I don't want to go away from him and want to be around him, is this really love or something else


Rishab (in mind) : what is happening to me? with Monisha I want to see her smile as friend but then when I meet Disha my heart always want to heal the pain she is hiding inside and she always runs away from me I have to find out




Arora house


Preeta's phone rings. She thought it to be Karan without seeing the name


"Karan, were you also missing me she starts asking him


Silence


Preeta ; why are you quiet say something


She hears noise of whistling similar what Rahul always did


Voice sings


Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi

Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi

Mera Tujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi

Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi

Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na

Maane Tu Ya Maane Na

Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi

Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi


Preeta starts sweating in fear hearing it


"Preeta baby, I am so happy you recognized it by the way how was my surprise, your Karan Luthra got saved today it was his luck but not for long, very soon we both will meet I promise, till then spend how much time you want with him after that you are mine he says


Preeta : no please don't do anything to him


"Oho don't cry you know I cannot see you cry, but he has to die for both us to unite bye my love see you soon Nikhil hangs up


Preeta throws phone in anger and fear.


"Karan no I won't let anything happen to him again because of me Preeta runs to Luthra house fearing about his safety


Precap : Rishab decides to help Vihaan and Kritika unite ; Sameer Shrishti marriage ritual starts


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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
Interesting updates👏
Finally Shishsameer & Preran united😊
Rishabh has some feelings for both Disha & Monishsa, let's see who are destained to be together
Nikhil is troubling Preeta
Waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
Part 21

Airport


Rishab hands Monisha her boarding pass and passport


Monisha : I don't feel like going


Rishab : you know in childhood when I get confused mom always said one thing close your eyes and think about something you want to do


Monisha closes her eyes only to find Rishab's smiling face and caring nature. Soon her flight is announced


Rishab : take care


Monisha hugs him before leaving. Both shares emotional departure.


Rishab heads to his house. In flight Monisha looks at the locket Ritwik gifted her


Monisha ; Rithwik even after you left, I still feel you left something precious for me, if you had not met Rishab maybe today I would be alone


She decides to confess her love when she comes back from trip.



Luthra house


Karan is looking at Preeta's picture in his phone


"Baby doll why are you so cute yaar? now when you are not around I feel so lonely Karan talks to himself


Suddenly he hears his name yelling


Karan ; did she really came? no no I am just dreaming this girl makes me crazy


"Karan Preeta barges in his room hugging him tightly


Karan ; baby doll whats wrong? you seriously came yaar (tries to break hug)


She does not let him depart but he manages to break their hug.


"Preeta why are you crying like this, sit here Karan pats her shoulder and gives water


"Don't ask me anything, just let me stay like this she lays her head on his chest


Preeta calms down after a while


Karan : tell me whats wrong


"I am very feeling scared, I don't want to lose you please promise me you will not go away from me, I cannot live without you Preeta keeps holding his hands


Karan : nothing happened to me, I am right here tell me whats wrong


Preeta clutches his t shirt recalling her horrific past years before


Flashback


After Preeta leaves Delhi due to Rahul she returns to Nasik. She does not tell this to Shrishti and her father.


One day she is coming back from her work when somebody from car pulls her inside. They take her to a house blindfolded


Preeta : where did you bring me?


She is shocked to see Rahul in front of her and moves back


Preeta ; don't come close to me please leave me alone


"Preeta you are forcing me to do all this, you thought changing city would take you away from me, you know how much I love you Rahul touches her face


Preeta ; but I hate you, just go away you have cheated on me


"It was mistake please trust me I have changed I really start to love you please trust me Rahul starts to force her


Preeta pushes him away but Rahul drags her into room. In scuffle her sleeves get torn


After long struggle Preeta manages to run away but Rahul follows her in heavy rain. She keeps running in fear but nobody is on road who can help her out.


Rahul : Preeta where are you running?


Preeta hides in bushes but gets caught by him again. This time a car is coming in full speed on road pushing both of them apart. Preeta rolls in bushes while Rahul's face is damaged. The boy driving the car turns out to be Karan who came in town for visit


Karan : oh my god I have to take him to hospital


Later Rahul is hospitalized and then taken to America for treatment by his parents. He decided to come back and make Preeta his own with new face. He wanted revenge from Karan as well whom he lost during cricket match once in college


Preeta could not forgot the horrific night of her life.


Flashback ends


Preeta lifts her sleeves up which had marks left during scuffle. Karan recalls something similar happening years ago


Preeta : if that night that car had not come he would have (hugs him tearfully)


Karan : it was my car


She looks up shockingly


Karan : I came to Nasik 4 years ago for some work and that night I was driving from road hitting a guy and then his parents took him to America


"Karan you saved your baby doll unknowingly thank you Preeta's tear does not stop


Karan : whoever did this I promise he will get his punishment for sure the day I find him


Preeta : Karan he is back


"What he asks


Preeta tells him about accident which was planned recently. She starts fearing about his safety and is not willing to leave him alone


Karan : Preeta listen to me, nothing will happen you are with me, our love is strong enough okay


Preeta ; please let me stay with you for tonight here I promise I won't bother you (says innocently)


Karan : okay fine you go sleep on bed, I will sleep on couch here


She nods faintly. Both shares eye lock while sleeping and dozes off.


In room Kritika holds Vihaan's picture weeping near window. He too recalls their college days


Flashback


Kritika gets upset as girls surround Vihaan after his performance


Vihaan : yaar stop being grumpy all the time


Kritika ; go with your wild cats, I am nothing to you na


Vihaan : who said it? I never did


"But hear it now she shouts out loud


Vihaan : I would become deaf in young age, tell me honestly you were jealous (teases her


Kritika : what difference does it make? you would still flirt around


"I don't want to get beaten up, and yes only person I can flirt is you my love Vihaan puts hands around her arms


Kritika : really? (blushes)


Vihaan : actually there is one more nakchadi like you in Haryana, Disha this time she will hold sword in front of me to welcome


Kritika : its good she knows you better, tell me something you never fell in love with her


"Please love and her is like banging head on wall both of us could never get that feelings and she is still dreaming about her man god knows when she would find one Vihaan says


Kritika : when you found me, she would also get one soon


Vihaan : aha so easy to say na, she is not innocent like me, she is sword


Kritika : innocent? oh my god when did that miracle happen


Vihaan : Kritu my love you are very luck that I can handle your craziness


Kritika : you called me crazy, so mean don't know how Disha handles you


Vihaan : its other way around


Kritika ; okay now listen up, year is ending you remember your promise right


Vihaan : yes my highness talk to your family let me also talk to my family and then see we would come with so much fun to your house


Both hugs each other. Vihaan returns to his hometown only to find everything was not same as it was before. His family got killed in fire accident and Disha too went missing


Flashback ends


Vihaan : I am sorry Kritika, but my friend needs me more than you today, if I left her today she will break into pieces


Kritika : why did you cheat me? what helpless you had to leave me like this


Teri Khata Hai Mere Jiya

Teri Khata Hai Mere Jiya

Unnpe Bharosa Kyun Tune Kiya

Sab Jhoothe Jhoothe Waade The Unke

Chal Peechhe Peechhe Aaya Tu Jinke

Woh Piya Aaye Na...Woh..Piya Aaye Na

Piya Aaye Na Woh... Piya Aaye Na

Ab Sabhi Unn Khwaabon Ki Tu Dagar Chhod De

Ab Sabhi Unn Khwaabon Ko Tu Khud Hi Tod De

Woh Piya Aaye Na...Woh..Piya Aaye Na

Piya Aaye Na Woh... Piya Aaye Na

Teri Khata Hai Mere Jiya

Teri Khata Hai Mere Jiya


Vihaan : all i can do is pray so she can get somebody to fill colors in her life and I can come back to you


Rishab overhears Kritika sobbing in tears and sees Vihaan's picture


Rishab ; what is this?


"Bhai actually she stammers


Rishab : I asked what is this? you know you are getting married right in few weeks


She nods wiping her tears


Rishab : you love him? does he also


Kritika : he does bhaiyaa but I don't know why he is marrying Disha


Rishab gets worried thinking if Disha too have any feelings for Vihaan


Kritika : he promised me bhai after our holidays to come and meet mom but he didn't came and then you know Akshay's alliance I could not say no


Rishab ; why didn't you tell this earlier? what is meaning of all this now


Kritika : what should I have said that I love somebody who is nowhere here, I waited 5 years for him bhai but now he came back and gave me this news


"See I am telling you again tell everything to bua and don't take any drastic step this matters for your whole life, if you say I will talk to her Rishab asks her


Kritika : no bhai I will only wait till last round of marriage for Vihaan if he does not call me then I would consider we were never made for each other


Rishab decides to do something for his sister and her happiness. Unaware to both Roo had heard entire conversation. She had seen how her sister is never happy around Akshay and often had misbehaved with her


Roo : I promise you didi, this sister of yours would return your love (says with determination) even if I have to do anything


She sneaks into Kritika's room while she is sleeping to find Vihaan's picture.


Roo ; now see my game didi, if I don't make you marry your love then change my name



Next day families get in preparation of both couples marriage rituals. Preeta sees Karan sleeping peacefully on couch


Preeta (caresses him) : thank you Karan for coming in my life


Karan moves with her gesture : were you taking advantage of me


Preeta : excuse me , its my right I am your would be wife okay now let me go


"Aha yesterday you were craving to stay with me here now what happened Karan pulls her down


Preeta : let me go I have to leave for work


Karan : first give me morning kiss, whole night I was worried for you at least I deserve it


Preeta : close your eyes first


"Babydoll he says with huff but closes


Preeta moves closer but starts tickling him and rushes in washroom.


Karan ; baby doll this is not fair yaar, never mind I will take all pending kiss in South africa be ready then


"We will see my baajarbattu she giggles from inside at his antics



Arora house


Sameer sees Shrishti trying to grab something from kitchen


Sameer ; lambu I think I am ruined now


Shrishti : what happened?


"Aunty you tell me how will I handle two kids at same time he says


Shrishti : you already know we have twins


All rubs their head


Sameer : aunty see she proved me right, lambu are you less than kid


" Ma see how he is bothering me she frowns


Sameer : what should I say? you were climbing up high in this condition, move let met grab it


Shrishti gets irritated hearing him and leaves


Sameer : here you go (does not see her) where did she vanished


Preeta : in room, Sameer you be ready to bear my silly sister's tantrums


Sameer : at least give me good tips to handle her


Preeta : you figure out you know her better by now more than me bye


Sameer sees Shrishti standing near window


"Sorry he holds her from back


Shrishti : Sameer I did not feel bad for your words but one thing is scaring me


Sameer : what?


Shrishti : this child is our symbol but will I be able to take this responsibility, you only said I am still childish what if I fail in this


"Don't ever say this again, I am with you what else do you need, and I know you would take care of this child more better than me yea its different story you would spoil him more Sameer lifts her up


Shrishti : put me down your hands would pain and yes I will of course spoil him its my right


Sameer : I have to keep practice na after 9 months you would be like big potato


"Sammy you called me potato Shrishti starts hitting him


Both ends up hugging happily.


Precap : Disha gets her marriage date closer to Akshay and Kritika. South Africa trip romance



Posted: 6 years ago
#38
I am close to finishing reading this story till the latest chapter.
I dont know what you have in mind but I really want to see Rishab and Monisha get together. Please please!!
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Part 22

Mumbai


House


Sarita calls Panditji for auspicious marriage day


Akruti : pandit get date closer my sister is very eager to marry right di


Disha : shut up duffer


Kunal : correct name, I will not it down


"Listen I am in very good mood today for god sake don't spoil it Akruti says while hitting him


Vihaan : Akruti do me a favor


Akruti : yes jijs


"Get married to Kunal and stay with your sister in same house what say Vihaan teases her


Akruti : actually jijs thing is I would have said yes if it was somebody like you but not this guy, I would feel like I am tied in chain whole life


Kunal : aha and you think I would get heaven marrying you, please bhai save me whole life I will stay in terror even Ram gopal varma's movies are not scary like she is


"Shut up and you are no less than that witch spirit in horror movies Akruti gets angry


Sarita : stop it both of you here some serious matter is going on, Panditji you say


Vihaan : aunty you get the dates done we all will go out for a while, you both come get ready come on we have to go for shopping


All four leaves


Pandit : most auspicious day is after 3 months but there is problem


Sarita : problem?


"Disha's horoscope has some problem, her stars are not in proper place right now until their effect does not reduce this marriage can't happen Pandit forecast something bad for her


Sarita : what are you saying? there could be way to reduce this right any prayer


Priest : you can try prayer but nobody can change the destiny, Disha has to go tough phase soon, she have to fight long battler for her happiness


Sarita starts to get worried for both her daughters. One whose engagement has broken recently while

other is soon going to face bad.



All siblings and Arora sisters head to mall for marriage shopping together. Vihaan, Disha, Akruti and Kunal also heads to same place


Kunal : oye Akruti be careful this is bhai's marriage not yours


Akruti : is it necessary to taunt me


Kunal ; I thought it was


"Stupid she stamps on his feet


All four goes to jewelry shop first to buy engagement ring.


Akruti : wait di look at this (shows her diamond ring with stud)


Disha chooses very simple ring


Akruti : but di this is so simple, its your engagement don't think about money


Kunal : oye ms foreigner, my bhabhi is simple her heart is simple you see even ring would shine


Vihaan : did somebody hit rod on your head?


Kunal : bhai even if he did you think I would spare that person, for right now lets choose ring for you both okay


Vihaan : you tell me how would your dream girl be


"Should I say honestly? just like Disha bhabhi, the one who can find happiness in everything Kunal talks while Roo is standing behind in same shop


Vihaan : then let it be there will be two swords in same house imagine


Kunal : nah you can control her I will also learn


Akruti : I hope it does not happen opposite someday she would make you dance on her tunes


"Oye shortage of brain, you think about yours, my dream girl would be very sweet and simple, from any angle you don't look like bhabhi's sister Kunal makes fun of her


Akruti : if you keep this attitude no girl would ask your hand


Kunal : seeing you I feel you would stay single, which guy would pick your tantrums


While walking behind Kunal collides with Roo and saves her from falling down. She closes her eyes but does not feel pain


"I am saved Roo says with relief


Kunal gives her annoying reaction and makes her stand up


Roo : you? finally you came behind me here


Kunal rubs his ears properly and asks again


Akruti ; don't find he has lot of problems from childhood he is defective piece


Kunal : old ancestors have said, one has to become one to treat doctor has to be patient


"Shut up both girls shout


Kunal puts hands on his ears hearing their scream.


Vihaan (laughs) ; you know what get used of this who knows in your destiny there will be dealing with two guns


Kunal : bhai (frowns) don't scare me I would rather stay bachelors


Roo smiles at Vihaan


"What di, you are leaving such a gem and marrying that worthless Roo wonders


Vihaan : who is she?


Kunal ;nothing bhai she is crazy girl, from shimla she is behind me


Vihaan : I don't think so, it is opposite


Akruti ; correct


Vihaan ; yaar you both are so stupid my fianc is shopping alone (goes to Disha)


Kunal : because of you my bhabhi got alone


Akruti : she is my sister okay idiot


Luthra arora siblings comes at same place.


Karan ; Vihaan?


Kritika and Vihaan shares painful eye lock. Rishab and Roo sees them


Preeta : hi Disha


She smiles little. Roo tells to Rishab about her meeting with Kunal in Shimla


Shrishti ; you all also came for shopping?


Vihaan : yea for our engagement, I thought, you guys are coming na ?


Preeta : of course, next week is Shrishti and Sameer engagement


Vihaan : oh congratulations


"Di lets go see that side Akruti takes Disha to another store after buying ring


Shrishti : sorry Vihaan actually


Vihaan : no actually she is just upset, and you know Disha she will be fine


Karan : yea we very well know Disha (says with fearful voice)


Kunal : no my bhabhi is very sweet and innocent don't be scared of her


Sameer : please those two words are not for her


Shrishti ; excuse me we are here for shopping leave poor girl alone


Karan sees beautiful ring for Preeta. He buys it for her but does not show her.


Karan : baby doll not right now


"Please let me see na she pouts


Karan ; sorry not going to work, now I will give you this only on special occasion


Preeta : fine I am going with Shrishti to buy mangalsutra


Roo : Rishab bhai are you also seeing same thing (sees Vihaan Kritika sharing glances)


Rishab : of course but in such case your mind works like Karan


Roo : I have great idea, lets tell Disha everything she would back out by herself


Rishab : is that your great idea? what if she knows already


"Bhai you don't worry let me tackle this, if you distract her I am sure she would easily back off Roo tells him to go close to Disha


Rishab : Roo if you say one more word I would send you back from here


Roo : please at least appreciate my intelligence


Akruti : di look at this mangalstura


Disha holds it when somebody collides with her. The chain is about to fall on floor but Rishab holds her mangalsutra on time. He forwards her hands and gives her


Disha : thanks


She goes in front of mirror to try but could not lock the chain. Everybody else gets busy in their shopping.


Disha : now what happened to this chain? (gets tired)


Rishab pushes her hair forward to lock the chain. She feels thunderbolt with his touch. Both shares eye lock in front of mirror


Jo tere sang laagi preet mohe

Rooh baar baar tera naam le

Ke Rab se hai maangi yehi duaa

Tu haathon ki laqeerien thaam le


Chup hain baatein

Dil kaise bayaan main karoon

Tu hi keh de

Woh jo baat main keh na sakoon


Ki sang tere paniyon sa, paniyon sa

Paniyon sa behta rahoon

Tu sunti rahe main kahaniyaan si kehta rahoon

Ki sang tere baadalon sa, baadalon sa


Akruti feels irritated with their closeness.


Kunal ; oye what are you staring?


Akruti : see what is going on there? Kunal I won't let this people repeat same thing to my di


Kunal : stop it yaar, just get over from it and you know disha bhabhi more than me, she is much more sensible to understand her good and bad


Karan ses Preeta staring at simple design mangalstura


Preeta : Karan you know this means a lot to me, after marriage this is our wives precious gift


Karan : but what about the one I already brought for you (shows her mangalsutra with their initials PK pendal)


"This is so gorgeous but when did you brought it " Preeta gets overwhelmed


Karan : anything for my baby doll


Suddenly few goons enters the mall to rob the store from back side


Precap : Fight in mall


PS : Sorry guys you have to wait little while for SA track.




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Part 23

Mumbai


Mall


Karan takes Preeta to clothing store.


Preeta : where did you bring me?


Karan selects bridal beautiful red and green lehanga for her


Preeta : wow not bad, the Karan Luthra's choice is not that bad


"how would I chose you if it was bad he says


Preeta : leave me, people are watching


"Then let them, I am romancing with my would be wife not any other girl Karan pulls her closer


Preeta : now let me go try this wait here


"I will come help you he says with naughty smile


Preeta : stupid bajarbattu, have some shame


Karan rubs his head. Preeta tries the wedding lehenga looking herself in mirror.


"Baby doll how much more time yaar, you would take forever on wedding day I think he knocks outside but sees door unlocked


Karan could not take his eyes off from her elegant and simplicity look. She keeps fixing her duppatta


"Karan I am looking good na she asks softly


"This is not my Preeta, she is some angel who has come from sky just for me Karan covers her head with red duppatta


"Karan nobody loved me like this before, I just had my papa he left us alone and now Shrishti, please don't leave me again Preeta leans her head on his shoulder sobbing softly


"Even if you want I won't ever leave you, in my life only bhai and you are most important before anybody else Karan kisses her forehead


Preeta : you don't know how much this relation means to me, we will tell everybody when we come back from trip I don't want to be away from you


"I promise as soon as we come back I will tell mom everything and come to take you as my bride he cups her face wiping her tears


Karan kiss her tears rolling from her eyes slowly. Both leans towards each other but stops in midway. Preeta closes her eyes getting flashes of fateful night and clutches his collars


Karan : don't think about it, I am right here with you (caresses her hair)


"I cannot forget that night every time I recall my heart shivers she says


Karan consoles her and goes out with her


Jewellery shop


Disha and Rishab shares little intimate moment but breaks apart hearing noise


Rishab (holds her hands) : Disha wait, I want to thank you for everything


Disha : for what?


Rishab : just for being handling things sensibly and sorry that day I could not tell you truth when you asked me


"I know you did not do on purpose thats why I forgive all of you Disha leaves to changing room


Rishab ; Vihaan can I ask you something


Vihaan : I know you would ask about Disha, just don't mind she is fighting with herself not others, there was a time when whole Haryana echoed with her voice but it is said na time is also enemy


Rishab ; but why? is everything okay


Vihaan is about to tell him something but gets interrupted


Suddenly all hears noise of gunshot


Goon 1 : nobody moves, hey Raghu make sure nobody goes out from here


Girls gets scared


Roo ; who are they?


Kunal : from face I think they are your relatives go ask blessings


Roo : shut up (holds his hands tightly)


Goon 2: we won't harm anybody just do as we say and we will leave after our work is done


Shrishti : sameer what is going on?


Sameer : people like you also get scared wow thank god you told me


Shrishti hits him.


Raghu : no whispering okay, what are you seeing? take all of them to one place


All the customers are are captured together in jewelry shop except Disha, Karan and Preeta


Vihaan : Rishab, I only have hope if Karan can make call to police so we can go from here


Rishab : but for that he has to be here, god knows where did he go


"Kunal you are expert in detective stuff go show some action " Akruti tells him


Kunal : oye empty brain I am not tube light, you are also going to be doctor give them some good medicine na


Akruti : I don't carry pharmacy with me okay (she shouts irritatedly)


Everybody looks on confusingly


Kunal : neither I carry guns like this goons so stop chewing my brains


Akruti ; only if you had one, all you know is talking stupid things


"At least I don't do pe pe pe like others Kunal looks at Roo who gives him push


Kunal ; see here is another one


Roo : such a mean guy you are


"Aha mean, that day I broke my hips carrying you in arms in forest and you are so thankless Kunal scolds her



Vihaan : yaar were this two less now your sister has joined them, Kritika stop her


Kritika : could you stop your brother?


Vihaan : where did this Disha go?


"Hey shut up with your bickering or else I will blow your brains right now Goon points at gun


Kunal : uncle thank you but please save me from this two see how they are making me ball, one is hitting from one side and other from that side


Karan and Preeta looks for everybody.


"Why is mall empty what is going on he asks


Preeta : I don't know lets go back to jewelry shop


"Wait wait Karan makes her duck down at door


Preeta : what is going on? they have captured everybody


Karan ; last time remember we had so much fun but climax was too bad janki aunty got shot


Preeta : you are cracking jokes seriously go and do something


Karan : go to another side and call police don't come here back hide at safe place


Preeta : you are forgetting Disha is here also


Karan : but she don't have back up just do as I say


Somebody taps his shoulder but keeps jerking it. Karan turns around shockingly to see goon


Preeta : what? (she turns back)


"Karan luthra my favorite star sir one selfie please goon tells him


Karan gives widen smile at Preeta who is raging at him angrily


Karan ; what? I cannot help it if people are my fan


Preeta : what was need to be so popular? in this place we have to get selfie with goon


Karan ; hey listen na please let her go, you can take me inside my siblings are there


Goon : sir I respect you of course, but for business I have to tie your hands. dont' worry it won't be tight promise


Preeta goes to another side to find Disha.


Vihaan ; you all are not doing right, I am telling you go back right now


Goon ; are you eager to die before getting married


Raghu : sir how do you know?


Goon : seeing his face don't you think so or else his wife would have came in front by now


Kunal : uncle you are right but you know his would be wife is very dangerous its good she is not here


Sameer : is this guy crazy?


Akruti : you are talking about my sister okay shut up your mouth


Roo : Akruti god forgot to put senses in such people


"Aha look who is saying this, Raghu uncle please save me from this two, take them or capture me it would be better Kunal goes near him slowly


Sameer : Kunal get back yaar what are you doing


Kunal : see one is half cracked your enemies would run away easily seeing her and other is full cracked (points to Roo) Rishab sir your sister loves to bring trouble for herself


Kritika : what did she do?


Kunal : don't ask me, Roo should I tell them?


"No why you bother I will tell later okay she says


The goons get irritated with their bantering. Other one brings karan inside.


Police force arrives outside and tells all robbers to surrender themselves.


Main Goon (Billa) : oh this is our star Karan Luthra, welcome


Rishab : don't do anything to my brother, you said you will not do any violence


Raghu : of course we said but except your brother when will we get such chance (points gun at him). now we will use him to get out of here


"No please don't Preeta runs inside and comes in front of him


Karan : Preeta move away they are not going to do anything to me they are cowards


Shrishti :please leave my di you can take me if you want (pleads to them)


"What did you say? wait today I will our power today Billa tells his men to beat up Karan


Rishab : noo (goes to saves Karan fighting with goons)


All boys fight with robbers messing up the store. Chaos start when people starts running around. Raghu is about to stab Roo with knife when Kunal holds his hands angrily punching him


Vihaan injures his hands with glass when goon tries to hit Kritika


Billa fires bullet taking Preeta on gunpoint


"Hey you all, enough of action movie now time for climax, I know this girl is your lifeline and now she will be ours to go out of this place Billa keeps moving back


Karan ; don't even think about it, just leave her right now (gets furious)


Rishab stops Karan to become angry to save Preeta


"But your life is in my hands Disha puts gun on Billa's neck from back


All gets happy seeing her


"Tell this mice of yours to drop gun or I will drop you directly to heaven just leave her Disha tells Billa putting gun closer on his neck


Preeta runs to Karan tearfully.


Karan : you are okay?


She nods


Disha : you know I have deal with many Billa's like you nothing new for me next time make sure there is no cops around when you commit crime think million times


Raghu holds rod behind to hit her head when Rishab stops him punching on face.


Kunal ; uncle you were asking why his wife is not here she is the one


Billla : this dangerous lady is bhabhi


"Yes but his not yours she clutches his neck


Karan thrashes Billa badly for targeting Preeta but gets stopped by her and Rishab. Shrishti hits Raghu with rod angrily


"You are fond of robbing things na, now see I get rid of that Shrishti keeps hitting him


Sameer : stop it my lady of arc, he will die yaar


Preeta : Karan stop it


Karan : how dare he touch you (keeps beating him badly)


Disha fires bullet on Karan's feet making him back off from goons


"Ahhh Karan shouts hugging Preeta


He sees Disha holding gun and tells other cops to arrest the goons


Karan : baby doll you all were saying this girl is simple but from which angle


Preeta : it was not me


Disha : sorry but this is my only way to not let people get their hands dirty (goes near him)


"No no I haven't done anything Karan moves back


Sameer : Shrishti lets go from here we have to prepare our engagement come on


Preeta : if you didn't came on time then


Disha ; but I did, Vihaan I am going to headquarters , Commissioner wants to meet me bye (leaves)


Karan and Sameer sighs relief seeing her leave


Sameer : thank god, Vihaan how do you handle her (asks him funnily)


Vihaan : good question but I also don't know, just got used of it now


Akruti : jiju I am going at hospital for work, see you later thanks for shopping


Preeta ; wait I am also going same way lets go together


"No thank you I will manage Akruti says


Kunal ; come I will drop you


Akruti : thats fine I can go by myself bye


Preeta recalls the previous days when Akruti came in beginning sharing good bond with her


Karan : our shopping is also done, lets go tomorrow is engagement


Vihaan : it was nice meeting you all and best of luck Karan for finals


Karan ; thanks buddy


Luthra and Arora siblings leave for their home. In parking lot Preeta feels somebody spying on them


Karan ; whats wrong


Preeta : nothing, I just felt somebody was watching us from behind


Karan : this is mall everybody comes here


Preeta : no Karan I meant maybe somebody was spying on us


Karan ; stop being illusion lets go we are getting late for home


Precap : Sameer Shrishti engagement


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